How to Read and Write a Poem | Learn English Poetry with Homework

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Hello, students. This is a very special English lesson.
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哈喽,同学们。这是一堂非常特别的英语课。
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I’m going to teach you to read a basic poem.
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我将教你读一首基本的诗。
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Also, I’m going to teach you how to write a basic poem yourself.
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另外,我将教你如何自己写一首基本诗。
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I love teaching poetry.
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我喜欢教诗歌。
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And learning about poetry will help you improve your English speaking and writing abilities.
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学习诗歌将帮助您提高英语口语和写作能力。
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So be sure to stay until the end of the video because I will give you a quiz and some homework.
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所以一定要等到视频结束,因为我会给你一个测验和一些作业。
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Let's get started.
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让我们开始吧。
00:34
So what is a poem?
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那么什么是诗呢?
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It's an arrangement of words written or spoken.
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这是书面或口头单词的排列。
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They usually rhyme.
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它们通常押韵。
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They are a great way to express your experiences, ideas, or emotions, in an artful way.
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它们是巧妙地表达您的经历、想法或情感的好方法。
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So, why do we write poetry?
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那么,我们为什么要写诗呢?
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Because poetry is beautiful and I want to share that beauty with you.
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因为诗歌是美丽的,我想与你分享这种美丽。
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Here is my poem. I wrote it.
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这是我的诗。我写的。
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So let's look at my poem and I’ll read it now.
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那么让我们看看我的诗,我现在就读它。
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“In the morning, when I’m alone, I like to watch the sun rise up.
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“早上,当我一个人的时候,我喜欢看太阳升起。
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I play soft music on my phone, I drink fresh coffee from my cup.
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我在手机上播放轻柔的音乐,从杯子里喝新鲜的咖啡。
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The sun is shining fresh and bright, The sky outside is clear and blue,
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阳光明媚清新,外面的天空晴朗蔚蓝,
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My mind is calm, My heart is light,
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我的头脑平静,我的心轻松,
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Today will be a good day, too.”
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今天也会是美好的一天。”
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So this is a short poem.
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所以这是一首短诗。
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And I want to teach you about rhyme.
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我想教你押韵。
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‘rhyme’ in poetry.
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诗歌中的“韵”。
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So let's look at the last words of each line.
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那么让我们看看每行的最后一个词。
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“alone” “alone”
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“单独” “单独”
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Does it rhyme with the word "up"?
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与“向上”一词押韵吗?
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“alone” “up” No.
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“单独”“向上”不。
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Rhyming words have a similar sound.
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押韵的单词有相似的声音。
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So “alone” and “up” don't rhyme
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所以“alone”和“up”不押韵
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but “alone” and “phone” do rhyme.
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,但“alone”和“phone”押韵。
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“alone” and “phone” have a similar sound.
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“alone”和“phone”发音相似。
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And “up” and “cup” have a similar sound.
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而“up”和“cup”的发音相似。
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So this is the rhyme scheme, or the rhyme pattern of this poem.
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这就是这首诗的韵律或韵律模式。
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This poem has different rhyming words, so we're going to call
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这首诗有不同的押韵词,所以我们将
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“alone” rhyme A
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“单独”称为押韵 A
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and “up” is rhyme B.
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,“向上”是押韵 B。
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And “phone” is A.
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“电话”是 A。
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And...
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而……
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“cup” is B.
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“杯子”是 B。
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“alone” “up” “phone” “cup”
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“单独”“向上” “phone” “cup”
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This is our rhyme pattern or our rhyme scheme.
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这是我们的韵律模式或我们的韵律方案。
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And in the next part, it's very similar.
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在下一部分中,情况非常相似。
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“bright” and “blue” don't rhyme
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“bright”和“blue”不押韵
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but “bright” rhymes with “light”
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,但“bright”与“light”押韵
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and “blue” rhymes with “too”
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,“blue”与“too”押韵
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so...
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,所以……
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these are new words we'll label them
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这些是新词,我们将它们标记为
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C, “bright”
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C、“bright”
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and “blue” is D,
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和“blue” ”是D,
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“light” is C
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“光”是C
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and “too” is D.
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,“太”是D。
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So these are our rhyming patterns for this poem.
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所以这些是这首诗的押韵模式。
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Not all poems have to rhyme.
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并不是所有的诗都必须押韵。
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But it's very nice when they do.
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但当他们这样做的时候真是太好了。
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It's something good to try.
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这是值得尝试的好事情。
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It's traditional.
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这是传统的。
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So this is our rhyme and our rhyming pattern.
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这就是我们的押韵和押韵模式。
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And also, in poems we need a stanza.
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而且,在诗歌中我们需要一个诗节。
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This poem has two stanzas, or two parts.
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这首诗有两节,或者说是两个部分。
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So a stanza is a part of a poem.
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所以一节是一首诗的一部分。
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This is part one. This is part two.
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这是第一部分。这是第二部分。
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Some poems have many many stanzas but this poem has only two.
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有些诗有很多很多节,但这首诗只有两节。
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A stanza can be two lines long.
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一节可以有两行长。
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But my stanzas are four lines.
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但我的诗节是四行。
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And you can write as many as you want.
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而且你想写多少就写多少。
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But a simple poem will be one or two stanzas.
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但一首简单的诗只有一两节。
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Also, in my poem, there are many images, there are many pictures of things.
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而且,在我的诗里,有很多意象,有很多事物的图画。
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When you write a poem you want to add some images.
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当你写一首诗时,你想添加一些图像。
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It says, “I like to watch the sun rise up,”
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它说,“我喜欢看太阳升起”,
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“The sun” is an image.
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“太阳”是一个图像。
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“I play soft music on my phone, ” “The phone” is an image.
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“我在手机上播放轻柔的音乐”,“手机”是一个图像。
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“I drink fresh coffee from my cup, ” “cup” is an image.
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“我用杯子喝新鲜的咖啡”,“杯子”是一个意象。
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So when you write a poem, maybe you can put in some pictures of things.
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所以当你写一首诗的时候,也许你可以放入一些事物的图片。
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Also when you finish adding your images,
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另外,当您完成添加图像后,
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if you want to add some repeating words to your poem.
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如果您想在诗歌中添加一些重复的单词。
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Do you see any repeating words in my poem?
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你看到我的诗中有重复的词吗?
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I think the word ‘I’ repeats.
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我认为“我”这个词重复了。
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“I like to watch” “I play music”
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“我喜欢看”“我播放音乐”
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“I drink fresh coffee” “I... I... I...”
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“我喝新鲜咖啡”“我...我...我...”
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And in other places, too.
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在其他地方也是如此。
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“My mind is calm” “My heart is light”
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“我的心很平静”“我的心很轻”
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So repeating words are also beautiful in a poem.
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所以重复的话在诗中也很美。
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You don't have to repeat words,
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你不必重复单词,
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but they make the poem more lovely.
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但它们使这首诗变得更加可爱。
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So that is our images and our repeating words.
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这就是我们的图像和我们重复的话语。
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So are… uh… so our images were
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所以……呃……所以我们的图像是
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“sun”
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“太阳”
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and “phone”
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、“手机”
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and “cup”.
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和“杯子”。
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And there's one more thing a poem needs that this poem does not have.
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还有一件事是一首诗所需要的,而这首诗却没有。
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A poem needs a title.
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一首诗需要一个标题。
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So, everyone… what do you think?
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那么,大家……你们觉得呢?
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My poem has no title.
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我的诗没有标题。
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What would be a good title for it?
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什么是一个好的标题?
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Please let me know in the comments.
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请在评论中告诉我。
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What is a good title for this poem?
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这首诗起什么名字好呢?
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And I’m very excited to see what you will write.
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我很高兴看到你会写什么。
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So now we've looked at this poem, let's move on.
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现在我们已经读完这首诗了,让我们继续吧。
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Let's learn how to write your own poem.
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让我们学习如何写自己的诗。
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So we have looked at my poem, and now, I want to teach you how to write your own poem.
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我们已经看过我的诗了,现在我想教你如何写自己的诗。
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So when we write a poem, we want to start with the main idea.
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所以当我们写一首诗的时候,我们要从中心思想开始。
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And the main idea can also be our title.
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主要思想也可以是我们的标题。
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So I want to choose an easy main idea for this poem.
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所以我想为这首诗选择一个简单的中心思想。
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Let's go with “Summer”.
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让我们一起来看看“夏天”吧。
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“Summer” is a great title,
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“夏天”是一个很好的标题,
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so I will write the word ‘Summer’ here.
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所以我在这里写下“夏天”这个词。
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So if our title is “Summer,” let's think about some images that go with summer.
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因此,如果我们的标题是“夏天”,让我们考虑一些与夏天相关的图像。
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I think we all think about the sun in summer.
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我想我们都会想到夏天的阳光。
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So what rhymes with “sun,” everybody? “sun” rhymes with “ton”.
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那么大家知道什么与“太阳”押韵吗? “太阳”与“吨”押韵。
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Rhymes with “one”. Rhymes with “run”.
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与“一”押韵。与“跑”押韵。
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But I think I want to choose “fun”.
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但我想我想选择“有趣”。
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“sun” and “fun” can be my rhymes.
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“太阳”和“乐趣”可以是我的押韵。
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But also, when it's hot outside, what do you want?
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但当外面很热时,你想要什么?
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I usually want to drink something cold. I want to drink soda or an icy drink.
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我通常想喝点冷的东西。我想喝苏打水或冰镇饮料。
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So my first line, I think will be about drinking something cold.
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所以我想我的第一句话是喝冷的东西。
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There we go.
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我们开始吧。
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“Cool soda can,”
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“酷汽水罐”,
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‘Cool soda can,’ is my first line.
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“酷汽水罐”是我的第一句话。
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And second line, I want to end on that word “sun”.
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第二行,我想以“太阳”这个词结束。
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“Cool soda can, hot summer sun,”
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“凉爽的汽水罐,炎热的夏日阳光”,
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So we have the cool drink and the hot weather.
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所以我们有凉爽的饮料和炎热的天气。
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But our next rhyming word “can” - and what rhymes with “can”?
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但是我们的下一个押韵词“can”——什么与“can”押韵?
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“tan” and “ran” and “man”
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“tan”、“ran”和“man”
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So let's try the word “plan”.
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那么让我们尝试一下“plan”这个词。
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“Hot summer sun,...
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“炎热的夏日阳光,......
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no special plan,”
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没有特别的计划,”
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“Cool soda can, hot summer sun, no special plan,”
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“凉爽的汽水罐,炎热的夏日阳光,没有特别的计划,”
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But…
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但是......
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but we're having fun.
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但是我们玩得很开心。
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So do you remember the rhyme scheme?
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那么你还记得押韵方案吗?
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“can” and “plan” rhyme
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“can”和“plan”押韵
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and “sun” and “fun” rhyme,
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,“sun”和“fun”押韵,
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so we can mark our rhyme scheme A B A B
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因此我们可以将我们的押韵方案ABAB标记为
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“can,” “plan,”
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“can”、“plan”
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and “sun,” “fun.”
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和“sun”、“fun”。
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And you might notice that at the end of some of my lines, I have commas.
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你可能会注意到,在我的一些行的末尾,我有逗号。
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And at the end of the last line, I have a period.
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在最后一行的末尾,我有一个句号。
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This is because when you write a poem, it's okay to be unstructured.
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这是因为当你写一首诗时,没有结构性是可以的。
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It's okay to change the rules.
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改变规则是可以的。
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So in my poem, I begin with capital letters and I end with commas and a period,
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所以在我的诗中,我以大写字母开头,以逗号和句点结尾,
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but you don't have to.
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但你不必这样做。
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You can break the rules of grammar and the rules of punctuation when you write a poem.
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当你写诗时,你可以打破语法规则和标点符号规则。
09:19
So this is a how many stanzas poem?
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那么这首诗有多少节?
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It's a one stanza poem.
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这是一首单节诗。
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And I think that all of you can definitely write a one stanza poem.
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我想你们一定可以写一首单节诗。
09:31
So let's move on and try it.
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那么让我们继续尝试一下。
09:35
Now, it's time for the homework and quiz.
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现在,是做作业和测验的时候了。
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You can find the quiz in the description of this video.
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您可以在此视频的说明中找到测验。
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And for homework, I want you to try and write a basic poem.
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对于作业,我希望你尝试写一首基本的诗。
09:46
Please post the poem, your homework, in the comments section of this video.
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请在本视频的评论部分发布这首诗,你的作业。
09:51
Good luck and I am eager to read your poems.
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祝你好运,我很想读你的诗。
09:54
See you in the next video.
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下一个视频见。
09:56
Bye.
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再见。
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