5 Tips to Get Band 7 in the IELTS Writing Exam - IELTS Writing Lesson

雅思英语写作 — 得分Band 7.0

Hi, I’m Oli.

嗨，我是Oli。

Welcome to Oxford Online English!

欢迎来到Oxford Online English！

Do you need band seven in IELTS?

您要拿雅思七分吗？

Are you maybe stuck at band six or 6.5?

您可能卡在6分或6.5分吗？

If you’ve taken the IELTS exam many times, and you can’t seem to get higher than six

如果您已经考了雅思很多次， 而您在雅思写作考试里

in the writing exam, this video is for you.

拿不到比6分还高的分数， 这部视屏适合您看。

If you’re stuck at band six, then it’s likely that you have some bad habits and ineffective

如果您卡在六分，那么看起来您在 写作考试里有一些坏习惯

approaches to the writing exam.

和没效率的方式。

These are things that might work well at band six, but they won’t help you to get band

这些东西在拿六分时效果 不错，但是，它们

seven.

不会帮您获得七分。

I’ll show you what these ineffective habits are, and how you can change them.

我会告诉您什么是没效率的 习惯，以及您怎么改变它们。

One point: I’ll be focusing on the academic IELTS exam in this video, because most of

重点一：在这部视屏里，我会把重点 放在学术雅思，因为我遇到的

the students I meet need academic IELTS.

大部分学生要参加学术雅思考试。

If you’re taking general IELTS, most of the advice in this video is still very relevant

如果考一般培训类雅思，在这部 视屏里的大部分建议仍然

for you.

是与您非常有关的。

Also, one more thing: there’s nothing wrong with getting band six!

同样，还有一件事： 获得六分是没任何过错的！

I’m not trying to be rude or discouraging to anyone.

我不是要对某人没礼貌 或是对某人泄气。

When I say that something is a bad habit, or that you need to change something, I mean

当我说某件事是一个坏习惯 或者您需要改变某件事时，

if you want to get band 7.0 in the IELTS writing exam.

我的意思是如果您想在雅思 写作考试拿七分的话。

But first…

但是，首先…

Do you know how IELTS scoring works?

您知道雅思评分怎样进行吗？

You should.

您应该要知道。

Here’s why:

这里是为什么：

The IELTS scoring system is very specific.

雅思评分系统是非常特定的。

The examiners don’t just look at your writing and say, “Hmmm, this feels like a… six!”

考官们不只是看您写的和说的， “Hmmm, this feels like a… six!”

If you get band six in the IELTS writing exam, there are specific reasons why.

如果您在雅思写作考试里拿到六分， 有一个为什么的特定理由。

There are specific things which you did or didn’t do which explain your score.

有一些您做了的或没做的 特定事情解释了您的评分。

Similarly, to get band seven, there are specific things you need to do, and not do!

相似地，要拿到七分，有您要做的 和不去做的特定事情！

Most importantly: these things are very different between bands six and seven.

最重要的是：在六分和七分之间， 这些事情是差异很大的。

If you keep taking IELTS, and you keep getting band six in the writing, then you can’t

如果您继续参加考试，在写作上 您继续拿六分，那么，您不能

keep doing the same things and expect to get a different score.

继续做相同的事情，然后 又期望拿到不同的分数。

You need to change what you do.

您要改变您做的。

The things you need to do to get band seven in your IELTS writing aren’t magic or some

您要去做的在雅思写作里拿 七分的事情不是魔法

kind of dark secret.

或某些暗黑秘密。

They’re publicly available.

它们是公开的。

You can read what they are.

您可以读到它们是什么。

You can do it right now!

您可以马上做！

There’s a link underneath the video.

视频下方有一个链接。

I highly recommend you read the scoring criteria and think about what band seven means.

我极力推荐您读评分标准并 想想七分评分意味着什么。

At the very least, you need to understand that your IELTS writing score is made up of

至少，您需要了解您的雅思 写作成绩由四个不同部分

four different parts: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, lexical resource (which means

组成：任务完成、衔接与 上下文连贯、语汇资源

vocabulary) and grammar.

（意思是词汇）和语法。

Think now: where are you weakest?

现在想像：您在哪方面最弱？

What do you need to work on from these four areas?

这四个方面您需要做些什么工作？

In the rest of this lesson, we’ll talk about each of these four areas.

在本节课的剩余部分，我们会谈谈 这四个方面的每一项。

You’ll see common examples of ‘band six thinking’, and you’ll see how you can

您会看到常见的“band six thinking” 事例，您会看到您怎样能

improve your approach to get a higher IELTS writing score.

改进您的方法来拿一个比较 高的雅思写作评分。

Let’s start with task achievement.

我们从任务完成开始。

Here are the some ideas that are great for getting band six:

这里是一些拿六分的好想法：

“In task one, I need to include every statistic and piece of data.”

“In task one, I need to include every statistic and piece of data.”

“In task two, I just need to write something about the general topic in the question.”

“In task two, I just need to write something about the general topic in the question.”

By the way, to save myself saying ‘task achievement’ again and again, I’m going

另一方面，要自我省略说 “task achievement”一遍又一遍，

to call it ‘TA’.

我会称它为“TA”。

Getting band 7 for TA is both easy and hard.

TA拿七分即是容易也是难的。

Here’s why it’s easy: you just need to do everything which the question asks you

这里是为什么是容易的理由：您只 需要做题目要求您做的每一件事，

to do, and nothing else.

不做任何其他的。

Here’s why it’s hard: most people can’t do that without a lot of practice.

这里是为什么难的理由：大部分的人不做 大量的练习不能做到那个。

TA is also slightly different for task one and task two, so we’ll talk about those

TASK一和TASK二的TA也稍微 有点区别，所以我们

separately.

分开来谈它们。

Let’s start with task one.

我们从TASK一开始。

Here’s a sample question:

这里是问题的一个例子：

The graph below shows the sales of five different food products in the UK between 1980 and 2010.

在下方的图形显示从1980年到2010年间 五种不同食物产品在英国的销售。

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

通过选择和报告主要特点 和在相关地方做比较

where relevant.

来总结资料。

If you want some time to look at the question, pause the video.

如果您想花更多时间 看问题，暂停视屏。

If you’re watching on YouTube, you can see the question on the full version of this lesson

如果您在YouTube上看，您可以在我们 网页上的这节课程的完整

on our website: Oxford Online English dot com.

视屏里看问题： Oxford Online English dot com。

Getting a good TA score depends a lot on what you do before you start writing.

拿一个好的TA评分很大程度上取决于 在开始写作之前您所做的。

You need to analyse the task and make a clear plan.

您需要分析任务并制定清晰的计划。

If you start writing without a clear plan, it’s very hard to get a good TA score.

如果您没有一个清晰的计划就开始 写作，要拿到好的TA评分是很难的。

In task one, it’s important to find connections or trends in the information you’re given.

在TASK一，在您获得的信息里找 关联或趋势是重要的。

For example, in this question, how could you connect the data?

例如，在问题里，您可以 怎样把数据联系起来？

Here’s one idea: you could group the five products into, first, products whose sales

这里有一个观点：您可以把五个产品归类成：一， 在此期间，销售下降的产品

fell over the period (ice cream and frozen burgers), secondly, products whose sales rose

（冰淇淋和冷冻汉堡）； 二，在此期间，销售上升的产品

(tofu and chili sauce) and finally, products whose sales stayed the same (salted peanuts).

（豆腐和辣椒酱）； 最后，在此期间， 销售持平的产品（咸花生）。

Here’s another suggestion: group the five products into big sellers (ice cream, frozen

这里是另一个建议：可以把五个 产品归类成：销售额多的

burgers, and also chili sauce at the end of the period), and small sellers (tofu, salted

（在期间内末期的冰淇淋、冷冻汉堡， 还有辣椒酱），销售额少的

peanuts, chili sauce at the beginning of the period).

（在期间内初期的豆腐和咸花生）。

Which way do you think is better?

您认为哪一种方式最好？

Actually, there isn’t one correct way to do this, but you need to do something.

实际上，没有一个正确的方式去做 这个，但是，您要做些事情。

You can’t just write about each product, one after another.

您不能只是一个接一个地 写每一个产品。

Well, you can, but you’ll probably get band six for TA!

好的，您可以的，但是，您有 可能会在TA得到六分！

Whatever data you’re given, you need to find connections and put the information into

无论您拿到什么数据，您需要 找关联并把信息放到您

groups which you create.

创建的类别里。

These groups will be separate paragraphs in your answer.

这些类别要在您的回答里 分段落。

This is how your answer will have structure, which is also important for your coherence

这就是您的答案会有怎样的结构， 那对您的衔接和上下文

and cohesion score.

连贯评分也是重要的。

What about task two?

那TASK二呢？

Let’s look at a sample question:

我们来看一个问题例子：

The most common problem in task two is leaving something out or not covering something fully.

TASK二最常见的问题是遗漏了某些事情 或没有完全地涵盖某些事情。

To get band 7 for TA, you need to do all of the things the question is asking you to do,

要在TA拿七分，您需要做问题 在要求您做的所有事情，

and only the things the question is asking you to do.

并且只做问题在 要求您做的事情。

What does that mean here?

那在这里意思是什么？

The task says, ‘discuss both of these viewpoints.’

TASK说“discuss both of these viewpoints.”

First, you need to discuss the idea ‘that young people benefit from working while studying

首先，您需要讨论这个想法 “that young people benefit from

at school or university.’

working while studying at school or university.”

One word here is particularly important.

在这里，一个单词特别重要。

Do you know which one?

您知道是哪一个吗？

‘Benefit’ is a key word here.

“Benefit”在这里是一个关键词。

What does ‘benefit’ mean?

“benefit”意思是什么？

How do you understand it in this question?

在这个问题里，您怎样理解它？

Next, you need to discuss the idea, ‘young people will achieve more by focusing on their

接下来，您需要讨论这个想法 “young people will achieve more

studies.’

by focusing on their studies.”

Again, there’s a key phrase here: ‘achieve more’.

同样，在这里有一个关键短语： “achieve more.”

What does this mean?

这个意思是什么？

You need to have answers to these questions.

您要对这些问题有回答。

IELTS tasks often contain abstract, general words like advantages, benefits, problems,

雅思TASKS通常包含抽象的、一般的 单词，像是advantages、

success, etc.

benefits、problems、success等等。

To write a good answer, you need to analyse and interpret these words yourself.

要写一个好的回答，您需要 分析并且自己解释这些单词。

Here, think about ‘achieve more’.

在这，想像“achieve more”。

How do you understand this term in this question?

在这个问题里，您怎样理解这个术语？

Does it mean getting good exam results, learning more knowledge, learning practical skills,

它意思是得到好的考试成绩，学习 更多的知识，学习实用技能，

getting a better job, living a full, satisfying life, or something else?

得到一份比较好的工作，过充实、 满足的生活，或其他事情？

Again, there isn’t one right answer here, but you need to have your own ideas about

同样，在这里没有一个正确的回答， 但是，关于这个，您需要有

this.

您自己的的想法。

Next, the task says, ‘give your own opinion’.

接下来，TASK说，“give your own opinion”。

So, you need to explain which side you agree with.

所以，您需要解释 您赞同哪一边。

Finally, the task tells you to give reasons and include examples.

最后，TASK告诉您给出包含 有事例的理由。

This means that you need to support your ideas.

这意思是您需要支撑您的观点。

You can’t just say something like:

您不能只说某些事情像是：

Young people who focus on their studies will achieve more.

Young people who focus on their studies will achieve more.

If you make a point like this, you need to support it somehow.

如果您提出像这样的观点，您需要 某种方式来支持它。

How will they achieve more?

他们会如何取得更多成就？

What examples can you give to show that this is true?

您可以给出什么事例来 表明这是真的？

Let’s review: for this question, you need to do four things to get a good TA score:

我们复习一下：就这个问题，您需要做 四件事来拿到一个好的TA评分：

1.

1.

Discuss the idea ‘that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university,’

讨论想法“that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university,”

and analyse what ‘benefit’ means.

并分析“benefit”意思是什么。

Discuss the idea that, ‘young people will achieve more by focusing on their studies,’

讨论想法“young people will achieve more by focusing on their studies,”

and analyse what ‘achieve more’ means.

并分析“achieve more”意思是什么。

Give your own opinion and reach a clear conclusion.

给出您自己的观点，并得出一个清晰的归纳。

Support your ideas with reasons or examples.

用理由或事例支持您的观点。

If you can do these four things, you can get band 7 for TA in your IELTS writing exam.

如果您做了这四件事情，您可以在雅思 写作考试里拿到TA七分。

Remember though, it’s not as simple as it looks.

不过请记住，它不像 看起来那么简单。

You will probably need to practise to get this right.

您有可能需要练习来 正确地做好这个。

Next, let’s look at your coherence and cohesion score.

接下来，我们来看看您的 衔接和上下文连贯评分。

I’m going to refer to coherence and cohesion as C&C, to keep things simple.

我会把衔接和上下文连贯 看成C&C，让事情保持简单。

Here are the habits which can limit your C&C score to six:

这里是一些限制了您的C&C 评分到六分的习惯：

“I need to use more linking words to get a higher score.”

“I need to use more linking words to get a higher score.”

“My essay should have an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion.”

“My essay should have an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion.”

Let’s look at each point separately.

我们来分别看看每一点。

Oh, hey, Oli!

哦，嘿，Oli！

How was your IELTS exam?

您的雅思考试怎样？

Amazing!

太美妙了！

I totally nailed it.

我完全搞定了。

I used nevertheless, furthermore, however, in spite of the fact that, AND in addition.

我使用了nevertheless、furthermore、however、 in spite of the fact that、以及in addition。

My band 7 score is GUARANTEED!

我保证拿七分！

No, it doesn’t work like that.

没有，那不是那样做的。

First of all, linking isn’t just about linking words.

首先，连接不仅仅与 连接词有关。

It’s about the logic and flow of your ideas.

它与您的想法的逻辑和通顺有关。

Look at a sentence:

看一个句子：

Air pollution is a serious problem.

Air pollution is a serious problem.

However, food prices are higher than ten years ago.

However, food prices are higher than ten years ago.

Using however here doesn’t magically make these ideas connected.

在这里使用however不会魔法般地 让这些观点连并起来。

These two ideas aren’t connected, and you can’t create a connection by using a word

这两个是不相关联的，您不能 通过使用一个像however

like however.

的单词来创建一个关联。

Next, there’s nothing in the IELTS scoring system which says you get a higher score for

接下来，在雅思评分系统中，没有 任何东西表明您会因为使用

using more linking words.

更多的连接词而获得更高的分数。

It’s more important to make sure you use linking words accurately.

确认您准确地使用了 连接词是更重要的。

Using more linking words won’t get you band seven.

使用更多的连接词不会 让您得到七分。

However, using linking words incorrectly will get you band six.

然而，不正确地使用连接词 会让您得六分。

So, don’t use linking words just to use linking words.

所以，不要仅仅为了使用 连接词而使用连接词。

Use them because they fit your ideas.

要因为它们适用于您的想法 而使用它们。

Don’t think, “I have to use nonetheless to get a high score!”

不要考虑“I have to use nonetheless to get a high score!”

You don’t.

您不要这样。

Next, let’s look at our second point: paragraphing.

接着，我们看看我们的第二点：分段。

Many IELTS candidates use the same structure for everything they write.

很多雅思考生在他们写的每样 东西里都使用相同的结构。

For example, for task two, most people write an introduction, two body paragraphs, and

例如，在TASK二里，大部分的人 写一个介绍段落，两个主段落，

a conclusion.

以及一个结尾段落。

That might be fine.

那可能是没问题的。

However, to get band 7 for C&C, you need to “present a clear central topic within each

然而，要在C&C得到七分，您需要来 “present a clear central topic within each

paragraph.”

paragraph.”

Those aren’t my words.

这些不是我的话。

That’s straight from the IELTS scoring scheme.

那是直接来自于雅思评分方案。

Many students, especially in task two, write paragraphs like this:

很多学生，特别是在TASK二， 写段落像这样：

There are many advantages to … Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …

There are many advantages to … Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …

This kind of writing is likely to get a score of 6 for C&C.

这种写作方式在C&C很可能 会得到六分。

Why?

为什么？

Because, if you do this, you’re trying to put too much in one paragraph.

因为，如果您这样做，您在试着放 太多东西到一个段落里面了。

That means your paragraph won’t have a clear central topic.

那意味着您的段落不会有 一个清晰的中心主题。

So, what’s the solution?

所以，解决方案是什么？

First, plan your essay carefully.

首先，仔细地规划您的议论文。

Make sure you know exactly what you’re putting in each paragraph before you start writing.

在您开始写作之前，确认您准确地知道 您会在每一个段落里放什么东西。

Secondly, make sure your paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence.

其次，确认您的段落以一个 清晰的主题句开始。

Your topic sentence should be relatively short and simple.

您的主题句应该相对地 比较短且简单。

If your topic sentence is very long and complicated, then your topic probably isn’t clear.

如果您的主题句很长、很复杂， 那么您的主题有可能是不清晰的。

Then, after your topic sentence, spend the rest of the paragraph developing and extending

然而，在您的主题句之后，用段落的 剩余部分来展开和

your main idea.

铺叙您的主要观点。

This means that you aren’t adding any new ideas or changing the topic in the middle

这意味着您不会在您的段落 中间添加任何新想法

of your paragraph.

或改变主题。

Also, this means you might need different numbers of paragraphs depending on how many

同样，这意味着您可能根据您 有多少主要的观点

main ideas you have.

而需要不同数量的段落。

Do you have two body paragraphs in your essay?

在您的议论文里您有两个主体段落吗？

That means you have two main ideas.

那意味着您有两个主要想法。

Do you have three main ideas?

您有三个主要的想法吗？

Then you need three paragraphs!

那么，您需要三个段落！

Another point: paragraphs don’t have a minimum length.

另一个要点：段落没有 一个最短的长度。

There’s no such thing as a paragraph which is too short.

没有一个段落太短了 这种事。

Paragraphs can be any length.

段落可以有任何长度。

So, let’s review this section.

所以，我们来复习这个部分。

To get band seven C&C in your IELTS writing exam, you need to focus on using linking words

要在您的雅思写作考试里C&C得 七分，您需要在准确、适当地

accurately and appropriately.

使用连接词上多注意。

You also need to make sure every paragraph has a clear central topic, which means you

您也需要确认每个段落有一个清晰的 中心主题，那意味着您

shouldn’t try to put many different ideas in one paragraph.

不要试着放很多不同的想法 到一个段落里。

Next, let’s look at vocabulary and how you can get to band seven.

接下来，我们看看词汇和 您怎么能得到七分。

Here’s a band six idea that students often have:

这里是学生们常有的 六分的想法：

“I need to learn lots of synonyms and uncommon vocabulary.

“I need to learn lots of synonyms and uncommon vocabulary.

If my vocabulary is bigger, I’ll get a higher score.”

If my vocabulary is bigger, I’ll get a higher score.”

There’s one important difference between band six and seven for vocabulary.

在词汇的六分和七分之间 有一个重要的区别。

At band six, you need two things: range and clarity.

在六分，您需要两件事情： 范围和清晰度。

That means, if you at least try to use some more advanced or uncommon vocabulary, you can get six if

那意味着，如果您至少试着使用一些 更高级或不常见的词汇，如果您的

your meaning is clear, even if you make mistakes, even if you make lots of mistakes.

意思是清晰的、即使您犯错了，即使 您犯了很多错误，您可以得到六分。

However, for band seven, you need three things: range, clarity and accuracy.

然而，对于七分，您需要三件事： 范围、清晰度和准确。

It’s no longer enough just to try.

仅仅去试试是不够了。

You need to use vocabulary “with flexibility and precision”—again, this is a quote

您需要使用词汇“with flexibility and precision” — 同样，这一段

from the official scoring scheme.

文字是引用自官方评分方案。

You can’t make many mistakes for band seven.

在七分，您不能犯很多错误。

You can produce ‘occasional errors’ and still get band seven.

您可以犯“occasional errors”， 并仍然得到七分。

What does this mean for you?

这对您意味着什么？

It means that your priority should be avoiding mistakes.

那意味着您的优先事项 应当是防止犯错。

I see many IELTS students trying to learn lots of idioms, phrases, academic vocabulary

我看到很多雅思考生试图学 大量的成语、短语、

and so on.

学术词汇等等。

But then, they often don’t know how to use this vocabulary well.

但是，然后，他们通常不知道 怎么使用这些词汇。

They use it in their writing, because they think it sounds nice, and their meaning might

他们在他们的写作里使用这些 词汇，因为他们认为那

be clear, but it’s not correct.

听起来很好，它们的意思也许是 清晰的，但是那是不正确的。

That’s fine for band six, but not for band seven.

那对六分是不错的， 但是，对七分不是的。

So, what should you do?

所以，您应该要做什么？

Look, first of all, vocabulary learning is hard work and it’s slow.

看，首先，词汇学习是辛苦的 工作，并且很慢。

There aren’t any magic solutions here.

在这里，没有任何魔术解决方案。

But I’ll give you one tip:

但是，我会给您一个提示：

When you’re learning vocabulary, focus on quality and depth, not quantity.

当您在学词汇时，关注质量和 深度，而不是数量。

Don’t try to learn 50 words or phrases.

不要试着学50个单词或短语。

Learn five words or phrases, but really learn them.

学习五个单词或短语，但是， 真正地学习它们。

Spend an hour learning and practising five new words and phrases.

花一个小时学习和练习 五个单词和短语。

Find example sentences.

找例句。

Write your own example sentences.

写您自己的例句。

Ask a teacher or whoever you can find to give you feedback.

问一个老师或任何一个您能找到的 并能给您反馈意见的人。

Make sure you know how to use your new vocabulary correctly.

确认您知道怎样去正确地 使用您的新词汇。

Another point: in the exam, if you have a choice between a simple word which you know

另一个重点：在考试里，如果您在 一个您知道是正确的简单的

is correct, and a more advanced or academic word which you aren’t sure about, what should

单词与一个您不确定的更高级 或学术的单词里做一个选择，

you do?

您应当做什么？

Use the simple word.

使用简单的单词。

Only use vocabulary you’re sure you understand and that you know how to use.

仅仅使用您确定的、您理解的 以及您知道怎么用的词汇。

This is the opposite to band six.

这是与六分相反的。

For band six, you can use the more advanced word, even if it’s wrong.

对于六分，您可以使用更高级的 单词，即使它是错误的。

But remember, to get band seven, you need to be accurate.

但是，记住，要得到七分， 您需要是准确的。

You can’t make many mistakes.

您不能犯很多错误。

So, in this situation, take the safe choice!

所以，在这种情形下，做安全的选择！

Finally, let’s look at the grammar score and how you can get to band seven.

最后，我们来看看语法评分， 以及您怎样拿到七分。

Here’s the band six idea which students often have:

这里是学生们常常有的 六分的想法：

“Grammar’s not so important, so long as people can understand what I mean.”

“Grammar’s not so important, so long as people can understand what I mean.”

Again, band six and band seven are very different.

同样，六分和七分差异很大。

This is especially true for your grammar score.

这对您的语法评分尤其如此。

What’s the difference?

差异是什么？

Like vocabulary, you need to be accurate to get band seven.

像是词汇，要得到七分， 您需要用词准确。

At band six, it doesn’t really matter how many grammar mistakes you make so long as

在六分，只要您意思是清楚的， 您犯多少错误

your meaning is clear.

那真不重要。

At band seven, the quantity of grammar errors you make matters.

在七分，您犯的语法错误 数量是重要的。

It really matters!

那真的重要！

To get band seven for grammar, you need to “produce frequent error-free sentences”—again,

要得到语法七分，您需要 “produce frequent error-free sentences” — 同样，

these words are directly from the official IELTS scoring scheme.

这些话是直接引用自 雅思官方评分方案。

That means if you make a lot of small mistakes, it’s almost impossible to get band seven

那意思是如果您犯了很多小 错误，语法得到七分那几乎

for grammar.

是不可能的。

All mistakes count: you use the wrong preposition?

所有错误都会被考虑： 您用错介词了吗？

It’s a mistake.

那是一个错误。

You forget to use the?

您忘记使用the？

Mistake.

错误。

You forget the ‘s’ on a present simple verb?

您在动词现在简单式忘记了“s”？

Mistake.

错误。

If your writing is around band six, you probably make more mistakes than you realise.

如果您的写作是大约六分，您犯的错误 有可能比您意识到的要多。

So, again, what can you do?

所以，同样，您能做什么？

First, you need to identify the common mistakes which you make.

首先，您需要识别您 犯的常见错误。

For this, you need a teacher to show you where you make mistakes in your writing.

为此，您需要一个老师来告诉您 在您的写作里哪里有错误。

Every time you do some writing, look at the grammar mistakes you make.

每次您有一些写作， 看看您犯的语法错误。

Sort them into two categories.

把它们分成两类。

One: mistakes with things you don’t know.

一：您不知道的错误。

Two: mistakes with things you already knew.

二：您已经知道的错误。

For example, if you write ‘childrens’ instead of ‘children’, this is probably

例如，如果您写“childrens”取代 “children”，这有可能

a type two mistake.

是一个第二类错误。

Most likely, you knew this already.

很可能，您已经知道这一点。

You just made a mistake, because you were in a hurry, or you were tired, or you have

因为您很急，或您累了， 或您有一个坏习惯，或者您

a bad habit, or you weren't paying attention, or something like that.

没有留意，或某些像那样的 事情，您就犯了一个错误。

With type one mistakes—things you don’t know—get a good grammar book and study to

对于第一类错误 —— 您不知道 的错误 —— 找一本好的

fill the gaps in your knowledge.

语法书并学习以便填满您知识的空白。

With type two mistakes, put your errors into a digital flashcard app like Anki or Quizlet

对于第二类错误，把您的错误放到 一个数码闪卡应用程序里，像是

or something like that.

Anki或Quizlet或某些像那样的。

For example:

例如：

Question: This is one of most serious problems in today’s world.

问题：This is one of most serious problems in today’s world.

Answer: This is one of the most serious problems in today’s world.

回答：This is one of the most serious problems in today’s world.

Every time you write something, add your mistakes as questions to your flashcard app.

每次您写某些东西，添加您的错误当成 问题添加到您的闪卡应用程序里。

Review your mistakes regularly—every day is best!

有规律地复习您的 错误——最好是每天！

This approach requires a lot of patience, but it’s the only effective way to get rid

这种方法要求有大量的耐心， 但是，它是要摆脱那些会

of those bad habits which can stop you getting band seven in IELTS writing.

阻挡你在雅思写作里拿七分 的坏习惯的唯一有效方式。

Okay, so now you should have some ideas about how to get band seven in your IELTS writing

好了，所以现在您应当有了一些 怎样在您的雅思写作

exam.

考试里拿七分的想法。

There’s a lot of information in this lesson, and there’s also a lot which I didn’t

在本节课里有大量的信息， 也有很多

say!

我没讲的！

Band seven is a high standard, and you should accept that it will take time and work to

七分是高标准的，您应当接受 达到目标是要花时间

get there.

和费工夫的。

Do you have an IELTS experience which you think people could learn from?

您有您认为人们可以从里面学到 点什么的考雅思的经验吗？

Please let us know in the comments!

请让我们在评论栏里知道。

Check out our website for more free English lessons, including IELTS preparation lessons:

更多的免费英语课程，包括雅思 准备课程，看看我们的网页：

Oxford Online English dot com.

Oxford Online English dot com.

Our teachers can also help you prepare for your IELTS exam in online classes.

我们的老师也可以在网路课堂上 帮您准备您的雅思考试。

That’s all for this lesson.

本节课就到这。

Thanks for watching, and see you next time!

感谢观看，下次见！