7 Ways to Improve English Writing Skills | IELTS | EXAM | ESSAY | ACADEMIC

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- Hello, everyone, and welcome back to English with Lucy.
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Today, I've got a video that I've never really done before.
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I've never really spoken about writing, as far as I know.
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So, this one has been highly requested.
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I know a lot of you are doing your IELTS exams,
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so I have got seven top tips
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that are going to help you improve your writing.
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It's actually highly relevant to this video,
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because you really, ideally want somebody
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to check through your writing.
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you can mention that you'd like them
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to look at your writing,
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Let's get started with the lesson.
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So, my first tip for improving your writing
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is keep it simple.
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Now, I know this seems really, really obvious,
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but I always say to my students simple done accurately
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is better than complicated done inaccurately.
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In other words, it's better to keep things simple
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and do it well, rather than over-complicate everything
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and do it badly.
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So, in English writing exams,
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you want to show off your English,
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but you want to show off your accurate English,
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not all this English that you don't know
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or haven't learnt yet.
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Now, that leads me on to point number two.
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In order to avoid making mistakes in your writing,
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it's a really, really good idea
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to have a collection of set phrases and keywords
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that you can use in that exam.
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So, my tip number two is prepare key phrases.
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Now, you do have to be careful with this.
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You don't want to rehearse what you're going to write,
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but you do want to have a nice selection of things
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that you could possible say if the time arises.
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Now, especially on the IELTS exam,
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and I know a lot of you are studying for this
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but this really goes for any academic writing exam,
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you want to have linking words and key phrases prepared.
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Now I'm going to give you a list
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with two examples for each point.
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It doesn't cover everything that you need to know,
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but if you study everything in the list,
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you will be much, much more prepared
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for your English writing exam.
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So, pay attention, and if there's any point that you think,
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"I really could expand on that,"
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go and do your research, and prepare yourself.
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You want to make sure that you have a variety
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of different ways to ...
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compare: "in the same way," "at the same time,"
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contrast: "on the contrary," "however,"
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give examples: "for instance," "to illustrate,"
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give your opinion: "from my perspective,"
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"from my point of view,"
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generalise: "overall," "all things considered,"
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to express certainty: "undoubtedly," "of course,"
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to express partial agreement: "in a way," "to some extent,"
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to show cause: "owing to," "due to,"
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to show effect: "for this reason," "consequently,"
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to mark time: "to begin with," "following this,"
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to add information: "furthermore," "moreover,"
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to express condition: "unless," "provided that,"
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and to conclude: "in summary," "in short."
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So that's just a very brief list
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showing you exactly what you need to study
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to be fully prepared for any English writing exam.
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Now, point number three, and definitely,
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definitely, definitely for academic writing,
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i.e. English tests or university pieces,
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do not use contractions.
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Or is that don't use contractions?
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So, cannot to can't,
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do not to don't,
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shall not to shan't,
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I am to I'm, these are all examples of contractions,
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and in your writing exams you want to avoid these.
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I know that you guys really, really, really
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want to keep your word count down
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because you are restricted,
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and you want to show off as much as you possibly can,
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but I've got lots of tips for reducing your word count
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coming up, so make sure that you do not feel tempted
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to include contractions in your academic writing.
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So, tip number four, reduce your word count.
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Use as few words as possible.
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Completely contradictory, because I've just told you
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that you should not use contractions.
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But I've got some really, really good mini tips
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within this big tip to help you keep your word count down
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and your English level up.
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The first one is avoid these dead weight words
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like "very," "so," "a lot," "really."
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I have mentioned this before in a video,
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but if you want to show off your English,
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avoid these; they're pointless.
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They are empty calories in English.
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Replace them, instead, with a strong word.
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So instead of saying "really happy,"
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I would say, "I am elated."
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Instead of saying "so scared," I would say "terrified."
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Okay?
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So, by using strong words and avoiding these boring words,
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you can reduce your word count by a fair bit.
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Now, another way to really reduce your word count
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but really improve the quality of your writing
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is avoiding "there is" and "there are."
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We want everything to be as clear as possible,
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and sometimes "there is" and "there are"
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can act as fillers; they add extra words to our sentences.
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So, I'm going to give you an example
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so you can see this and bear it in mind
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next time you're doing an academic piece of writing.
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Sentence one: there are many problems that we may encounter.
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There are many problems that we may encounter.
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Sentence two: We may encounter many problems.
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We may encounter many problems.
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The first sentence has eight words.
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The second sentence has five words.
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You have reduced your word count, and you have increased
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the quality and the clarity of your writing.
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So, make sure you apply this in your next exam.
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Number five, read ...
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the right documents.
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Read the right pieces of writing.
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I know many of you like to read in your spare time,
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you like to do it for fun,
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and a lot of you will read books in English,
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which is amazing for improving you spelling
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and improving your vocabulary as well.
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But if you're trying to get a good score
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in an academic writing exam,
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you might not be reading the right kind of thing.
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Look at the potential pieces of writing
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that they're going to ask you to do.
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Are they asking you to write article, reports, essays?
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Maybe they're asking you to write all three.
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If they are, read all three.
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You need to go online or go to your library
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and read articles, read reports,
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read essays, read reviews.
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Do everything you can to familiarise yourselves
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with all the styles of writing.
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Number six is one that you will have heard in school
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so many times; but, I've worked as a teacher
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for many, many years, and I get so frustrated
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with silly, stupid mistakes
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that I know that my students know.
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They don't make these mistakes when they're speaking,
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so why do they make them when they're writing?
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So many times I've gone and I've prepared a lesson
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because I've seen that there were some very clear mistakes
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in my students' writing.
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And I prepare a lesson to correct this mistake,
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and when I go to teach it they say,
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"But teacher, we already know this; this is baby stuff."
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And it's because they don't check their work.
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I have a clear example of this.
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I used to work as a proofreader.
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I used to check through documents
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before they got sent off to publishers
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to make sure that they were all correct,
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that there was no spelling mistakes,
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there were no grammar mistakes,
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there was nothing, nothing wrong, they were all perfect.
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And I was amazing at doing this.
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I could get every single mistake.
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Just by looking at a document from a distance
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I could pick out those errors.
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However, if you follow me on Instagram,
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you will see that I make spelling and grammar mistakes
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all the time.
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Why?
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Because I don't check; I don't check my writing.
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I am a native English speaker, and I make spelling mistakes.
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Granted, many of them are due to auto-correct on my phone,
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which I am battling with.
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But a lot of them are my fault.
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And I don't check them, so I don't see them.
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I know when you finish an exam, you're like,
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"Ugh, I'm done; I want to move on to the next question,"
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but you can avoid so many point deductions
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just by checking through your work,
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so please, please, please, make it your absolute priority.
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I personally think it's much better if you write less
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and check more; fewer words, higher accuracy.
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And I know normally I promote fluency over accuracy,
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but not in writing exams.
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In writing exams, you want perfection.
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Now, number seven is perhaps the most relevant
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and the most difficult of all, especially if you're in
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really remote parts of the world.
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Number seven is write and get it checked.
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Write and get it checked.
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And unfortunately, the getting it checked thing
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is a lot harder than it seems.
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You want to write as much as possible,
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checking it, of course.
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It used to really annoy me when my students
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would come in with five essays.
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I was so happy that they'd done that,
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but then I saw that they'd made loads and loads
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of stupid mistakes, and I just thought,
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"Ugh, why didn't you check it?
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"I'm just correcting the same thing over and over again."
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But write as much as you can, check it,
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and then see if you can find somebody to correct it.
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Now, I'm not saying find a complete stranger.
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It's got to be in their interest to correct it as well.
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I personally think it's very unlikely
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that you're going to find a random teacher on the internet
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that will be willing to check your writing for free.
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However, there are lots of services and pen pal sites
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if it's like a mutual exchange.
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If you find somebody who wants to learn your language
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and they can help you with your English,
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then you can do that.
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Or, like I mentioned, on services such as Lingoda,
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and you can just have a straight hour of analysing writing
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that you've already done and already sent them.
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But I will say, especially to my younger viewers,
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really, really, really be careful when you're contacting
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people online to practise your English.
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Make sure it's a trustworthy person, because there are
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so many predators that want to talk to you,
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especially young girls, to "practise their English,"
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and it doesn't actually turn out to be a English practise.
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It turns out to be something quite different,
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so please, please, please be careful.
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If you've got the funds, and if you've got the time,
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get a proper teacher and pay them to help you.
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Is there any way that you're going to be guaranteed
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the proper skills, and the proper qualifications,
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and also the proper incentive.
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Why would a random stranger on the internet
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want to help you with your writing?
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What's in it for them?
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Always think about that.
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