How To Improve Your English Writing Skills | Tips For Intermediate And Advanced English Learners

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2017-09-22 ใƒป The English Coach


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How To Improve Your English Writing Skills | Tips For Intermediate And Advanced English Learners

213,848 views ใƒป 2017-09-22

The English Coach


ไธ‹ใฎ่‹ฑ่ชžๅญ—ๅน•ใ‚’ใƒ€ใƒ–ใƒซใ‚ฏใƒชใƒƒใ‚ฏใ™ใ‚‹ใจๅ‹•็”ปใ‚’ๅ†็”Ÿใงใใพใ™ใ€‚ ็ฟป่จณใ•ใ‚ŒใŸๅญ—ๅน•ใฏๆฉŸๆขฐ็ฟป่จณใงใ™ใ€‚

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Hey guys, what's up?
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ใฉใ†ใ—ใŸใฎ๏ผŸ
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Stefanie the English coach here from Englishfulltime.com in this video we are gonna talk about how
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Englishfulltime.com ใฎ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚ณใƒผใƒใงใ‚ใ‚‹ Stefanie ใŒใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใงใฎ
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to improve your writing in English.
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ใƒฉใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒณใ‚ฐใ‚’ๆ”นๅ–„ใ™ใ‚‹ๆ–นๆณ•ใซใคใ„ใฆ่ชฌๆ˜Žใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
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First there's four things that you have to do.
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ใพใšใ‚„ใ‚‹ในใใ“ใจใฏ4ใค ใ€‚
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1. Ask questions 2.Do research 3.Practice and 4. Get feedback
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1. ่ณชๅ•ใ™ใ‚‹ 2. ่ชฟๆŸปใ‚’่กŒใ† 3. ๅฎŸ่ทตใ™ใ‚‹ 4. ใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹
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That's it, but we're gonna break that down and talk about what each of those
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ใ“ใ‚Œใง็ต‚ใ‚ใ‚Šใงใ™ใŒใ€ใใ‚Œ ใ‚’ๅˆ†่งฃใ—ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๅ„
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steps means.
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ใ‚นใƒ†ใƒƒใƒ—ใฎๆ„ๅ‘ณใซใคใ„ใฆ่ชฌๆ˜Žใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
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First, ask questions... this is the most crucial part to improving your writing.
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ใพใšใ€่ณชๅ•ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ€ ใƒฉใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒณใ‚ฐใ‚’ๆ”นๅ–„ใ™ใ‚‹ใŸใ‚ใฎๆœ€ใ‚‚้‡่ฆใช้ƒจๅˆ†ใงใ™ใ€‚
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You have to know what good writing is.
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่‰ฏใ„ๆ–‡็ซ ใจใฏไฝ•ใ‹ใ‚’็Ÿฅใ‚‰ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
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So start by asking questions: what are you writing?
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่ณชๅ•ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‹ใ‚‰ๅง‹ใ‚ใพใ—ใ‚‡ ใ†ใ€‚ไฝ•ใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ‹?
00:40
What are you trying to improve?
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ไฝ•ใ‚’ๆ”นๅ–„ใ—ใ‚ˆใ†ใจใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
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What's lacking?
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ไฝ•ใŒ่ถณใ‚Šใชใ„๏ผŸ
00:43
Who is your audience?
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฎ่ด่ก†ใฏ่ชฐใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
00:44
What are the expectations of the people that are gonna be reading your writing?
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’่ชญใ‚“ใงใ„ใ‚‹ไบบใ€…ใฎๆœŸๅพ…ใฏไฝ• ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
00:49
Because the truth is, that there's so many different writing styles that you could use
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็œŸๅฎŸใฏใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใฎใซๅฟœใ˜ใฆไฝฟ็”จใงใใ‚‹้žๅธธใซๅคšใใฎ ็•ฐใชใ‚‹ๆ–‡ไฝ“ใŒใ‚ใ‚‹
00:54
depending on what you're writing.
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ใจใ„ใ†ใ“ใจใงใ™.
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If you're writing a business email to a client, your writing and the structure of your writing
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ใ‚ฏใƒฉใ‚คใ‚ขใƒณใƒˆใซใƒ“ใ‚ธใƒใ‚นใƒกใƒผใƒซใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใ€ ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใจๆ–‡็ซ ใฎๆง‹้€ ใฏใ€
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is gonna be a lot different than if you're writing a post on Facebook or if you're writing
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Facebook ใงๆŠ•็จฟใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใ€ๅญฆ่ก“่ซ–ๆ–‡ใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใ€ใพใŸใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใจใฏๅคงใใ็•ฐใชใ‚Š
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an academic essay or if you're writing a resume.
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ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
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So really you have to start by asking these questions.
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ใงใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎ่ณชๅ•ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‹ใ‚‰ๅง‹ใ‚ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
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What are you writing?
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ไฝ•ใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎ๏ผŸ
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Who are you writing it to?
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่ชฐใซๅ‘ใ‘ใฆๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
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What are their expectations?
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฎๆœŸๅพ…ใฏไฝ•ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
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Then it's time to do research.
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ๆฌกใซใ€่ชฟๆŸปใ‚’่กŒใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
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Go on Google, go on YouTube and start asking your questions.
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Google ใ‚„ YouTube ใซใ‚ขใ‚ฏใ‚ปใ‚นใ—ใฆใ€่ณชๅ•ใ‚’ๅง‹ใ‚ใฆ ใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
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Read blog posts and articles, look for the answers.
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ใƒ–ใƒญใ‚ฐใฎๆŠ•็จฟใ‚„่จ˜ไบ‹ใ‚’่ชญใ‚“ใงใ€็ญ”ใˆใ‚’ๆŽขใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ ใ€‚
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You can even read entire books on writing, Okay.
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ๅŸท็ญ†ใซ้–ขใ™ใ‚‹ๆœฌๅ…จไฝ“ใ‚’่ชญใ‚€ใ“ใจใ‚‚ใงใ ใพใ™ใ€‚
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But what I want to suggest here is that you don't go looking for material on how to become
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ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ใ“ใ“ใง็งใŒๆๆกˆใ—ใŸใ„ใฎใฏใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใฎๆ•™ๅธซใ‹ใ‚‰ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸไฝœๅฎถ ใซใชใ‚‹ๆ–นๆณ•ใซใคใ„ใฆใฎ่ณ‡ๆ–™ใ‚’ๆŽขใ—ใซ่กŒใในใใงใฏใชใ„ใจใ„ใ†ใ“ใจใงใ™
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a better writer from English teachers.
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.
01:41
Okay?
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ใ‚ใ‹ใฃใŸ๏ผŸ
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Here's the reason why.
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ใใฎ็†็”ฑใฏใ“ใ†ใงใ™ใ€‚
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English teachers teach English.
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่‹ฑ่ชžใฎๅ…ˆ็”Ÿใฏ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’ๆ•™ใˆใพใ™ใ€‚
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They teach vocabulary.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏ่ชžๅฝ™ใ‚’ๆ•™ใˆใพใ™ใ€‚
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They teach phrasal verbs.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏๅฅๅ‹•่ฉžใ‚’ๆ•™ใˆใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
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They teach grammar.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏๆ–‡ๆณ•ใ‚’ๆ•™ใˆใพใ™ใ€‚
01:49
But they are not experts on writing.
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ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏๅŸท็ญ†ใฎๅฐ‚้–€ๅฎถใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
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If you want to make a blog in English, for example, an English teacher can't show you
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ใŸใจใˆใฐใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใงใƒ–ใƒญใ‚ฐใ‚’ไฝœๆˆใ—ใŸใ„ๅ ดๅˆ ใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใฎๅ…ˆ็”Ÿใฏใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’่ฆ‹ใ›ใฆ
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and tell you how to do that successfully.
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ใ€ใใ‚Œใ‚’ๆˆๅŠŸใ•ใ›ใ‚‹ๆ–นๆณ•ใ‚’ๆ•™ใˆใฆใใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“.
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You have to go to the people who have already made blogs in English and look up... how do
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ใ™ใงใซ่‹ฑ่ชžใงใƒ–ใƒญใ‚ฐใ‚’ไฝœๆˆใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไบบใ€…ใฎใจใ“ใ‚ใซ ่กŒใฃใฆ่ชฟในใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™...
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they structure their blog posts?
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How do they structure their sentences?
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๆ–‡ใ‚’ๆง‹ๆˆใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ‹?
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How do they keep the readers engaged?
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่ชญ่€…ใฎ้–ขๅฟƒใ‚’ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซ็ถญๆŒใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ‹?
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What kind of writing style do they use?
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใชๆ›ธใๆ–นใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
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How do they incorporate humor?
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You have to learn writing from people who already do that kind of writing.
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ๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไบบใ‹ใ‚‰ๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’ๅญฆใฐใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Š ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
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If you want to learn how to write a resume, you have to look up articles in English that
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02:25
are actually for English speakers.
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ใฏใ€ๅฎŸ้š›ใซ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’่ฉฑใ™ไบบๅ‘ใ‘ใฎ่‹ฑ่ชžใฎ่จ˜ไบ‹ใ‚’ๆŽขใ™ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
02:27
Okay?
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ใ‚ใ‹ใฃใŸ๏ผŸ
02:28
Pretend you're already a fluent, confident... you're an English speaker, even if you're
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ใ™ใงใซๆตๆšขใง่‡ชไฟกใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใตใ‚Šใ‚’ใ— ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„... ใพใ ๅฎŒๅ…จใซ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’่ฉฑใ›ใฆใ„ใชใใฆใ‚‚ใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’่ฉฑใ™ใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ™
02:33
not totally there yet.
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ใ€‚ ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’่ฉฑใ™ไบบๅ‘ใ‘
02:36
Start looking up material that was written for English speakers because those articles,
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ใซๆ›ธใ‹ใ‚ŒใŸ่ณ‡ๆ–™ใ‚’ๆŽขใ—ๅง‹ใ‚ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚ ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎ่จ˜ไบ‹ใ€
02:41
those materials, those books are going to have the best information.
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่ณ‡ๆ–™ใ€ๆœฌใซ ใฏๆœ€้ซ˜ใฎๆƒ…ๅ ฑใŒๅซใพใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™ใ€‚
02:45
Now here's a tip for you guys.
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ใ“ใ“ใง็š†ใ•ใ‚“ใซใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
02:47
Writers, they don't study English.
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ไฝœๅฎถใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ—ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
02:50
Great writers, people that have written books, people that run websites, and write blog posts
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ๅ‰ๅคงใชไฝœๅฎถใ€ๆœฌใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใŸ ไบบใ€ใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใ‚’้‹ๅ–ถใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไบบใ€ใƒ–ใƒญใ‚ฐใฎๆŠ•็จฟใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไบบ
02:56
(there's obviously so many different kinds of writing you could do), but writers don't
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(ใ‚‚ใกใ‚ใ‚“ใ€ใ•ใพใ–ใพใช็จฎ้กž ใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’ๆ›ธใใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ™) ใงใ™ใŒใ€ไฝœๅฎถใฏ
03:01
study English.
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่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ—ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
03:02
They study writing.
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03:04
That's very important.
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ใใ‚Œใฏใจใฆใ‚‚้‡่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
03:05
The best writers in the world, they don't study grammar.
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ไธ–็•Œๆœ€้ซ˜ใฎไฝœๅฎถใฏ ๆ–‡ๆณ•ใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ—ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
03:09
They don't study vocabulary, they study more writing from other great writers.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏ่ชžๅฝ™ใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ™ใ‚‹ใฎใงใฏใชใ ใ€ไป–ใฎๅ‰ๅคงใชไฝœๅฎถใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’ใ‚‚ใฃใจๅ‹‰ๅผทใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
03:14
So if you want to improve your writing, you have to study good writing.
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ใ—ใŸใŒใฃใฆใ€ใƒฉใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒณใ‚ฐใ‚’ไธŠ้”ใ•ใ›ใŸใ„ๅ ดๅˆ ใฏใ€ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸใƒฉใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒณใ‚ฐใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
03:19
You have to analyze it, you have to break it down.
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ใใ‚Œใ‚’ๅˆ†ๆžใ—ใ€ๅˆ†่งฃใ—ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
03:22
You can't just get tips all the time, because sometimes even if you get a tip and you know,
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ๅธธใซใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใงใใ‚‹ใ‚ใ‘ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ ใŸใจใˆใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใ‚’ๅพ—ใฆ็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใŸใจใ—ใฆใ‚‚ใ€
03:27
someone says... "hey, your sentences need to be clear."
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ใ€Œใญใˆใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใฏๆ˜Ž็ขบใซใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€ใจ่ชฐใ‹ใŒ่จ€ใ†ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™ ใ€‚
03:31
That's a great tip... but what does that mean!?
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ใใ‚Œใฏ็ด ๆ™ดใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใงใ™...ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ใใ‚Œใฏใฉใ†ใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ‹!?
03:33
What is a clear sentence?
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ๆ˜Žๅฟซใชๆ–‡ใจใฏ๏ผŸ
03:34
What is a sentence that's convoluted and not clear?
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่ค‡้›‘ใงๆ˜Ž็ขบใงใชใ„ๆ–‡ใฏไฝ• ใงใ™ใ‹?
03:37
You actually have to read good writing because some things won't make sense until you see
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ๅฎŸ้š›ใซ่‰ฏใ„ๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’่ชญใพใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚‰ใชใ„ใฎใฏใ€ๅฎŸ้š›ใซ ่ฆ‹
03:43
it and until you can break it down in your mind and analyse it and then go "ohhhhh, that's
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ใฆใ€ ้ ญใฎไธญใงๅˆ†่งฃใ—ใฆๅˆ†ๆžใ—ใ€ใ€Œใ‚ใ‚ใ€
03:49
what it is!
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03:50
That's how you do it!
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ใใ†ใ„ใ†ใ“ใจใ ! ใใ‚ŒใŒใ‚ใชใŸใฎใ‚„ใ‚Šๆ–นใ ! ใใ‚Œใฏใใ‚Œใ !
03:51
That's how you transition from one sentence to the next.
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ใ‚ใ‚‹ๆ–‡ ใ‹ใ‚‰ๆฌกใฎๆ–‡ใธใฎ
03:54
That's how you transition from one paragraph to the next."
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็งป่กŒๆ–นๆณ•. ใใ‚ŒใŒใ€ใ‚ใ‚‹ๆฎต่ฝใ‹ใ‚‰ๆฌกใฎๆฎต่ฝใธใฎ็งป่กŒๆ–นๆณ•ใงใ™ .
03:57
You have to be a researcher, you have to ask questions, you have to research, then you
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฏ็ ”็ฉถ่€…ใงใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚‰ใšใ€ ่ณชๅ•ใ‚’ใ—ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚‰ใšใ€็ ”็ฉถใ—ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚‰ใšใ€ใใ—ใฆ
04:01
have to analyze.
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ๅˆ†ๆžใ—ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
04:03
And then the next step is practice.
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ๆฌกใฎใ‚นใƒ†ใƒƒใƒ—ใฏ็ทด็ฟ’ใงใ™ใ€‚ ็ทด็ฟ’ใ—
04:05
You won't improve your writing if you don't practice.
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ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใ€ๆ–‡็ซ ใฏไธŠ้”ใ—ใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
04:08
But now, at least, you know what you're writing, you know who your audience is, you know what
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ใ—ใ‹ใ—ไปŠใงใฏใ€ๅฐ‘ใชใใจใ‚‚ใ€ไฝ•ใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ€่ชญ่€…ใŒ่ชฐใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฎๆœŸๅพ…ใŒไฝ•ใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚’็†่งฃใ—
04:14
their expectations are, and you've researched what good writing is, you've looked at examples,
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ใ€ ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸๆ–‡็ซ ใจใฏไฝ•ใ‹ใ‚’็ ”็ฉถใ—ใ€ไพ‹ใ‚’่ฆ‹ใฆใ€
04:19
you've broken them down, you've analyzed them, so now it's time for you to implement everything
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ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ‚’็ ดใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸ. ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ‚’ๅˆ†ๆžใ—ใŸใฎใงใ€ๅญฆใ‚“ใ  ใ“ใจใ‚’ใ™ในใฆๅฎŸ่ฃ…ใ™ใ‚‹ๆ™‚
04:25
that you've learned.
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ใŒๆฅใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
04:27
And you want to basically make your writing look, sound, and feel like the writing that
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ๅŸบๆœฌ็š„ใซใฏใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒๅ‹‰ๅผท ใ—ใฆใใŸๆ–‡็ซ ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ€ๆ–‡็ซ ใฎ่ฆ‹ใŸ็›ฎใ€้Ÿณใ€ๆ„Ÿ่งฆใ‚’ไฝœใ‚ŠใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„
04:33
you've been studying.
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ใพใ™.
04:34
Ok?
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Ok๏ผŸ
04:35
So practice, practice, practice.
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ใ ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€็ทด็ฟ’ใ€็ทด็ฟ’ใ€็ทด็ฟ’ใ€‚
04:36
And then you need feedback.
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใŒๅฟ…่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
04:39
You don't just want to ask your friends, though.
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ใŸใ ใ—ใ€ๅ‹้”ใซๅฐ‹ใญใŸใ„ใ ใ‘ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
04:40
You don't just want to ask some random English speaker that you know, that you work with.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใŒ็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ€ไธ€็ท’ใซไป•ไบ‹ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใƒฉใƒณใƒ€ใƒ ใช่‹ฑ่ชž่ฉฑ่€…ใซๅฐ‹ใญใŸใ„ใ ใ‘ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
04:44
You want to ask somebody who understands the type of writing that you're doing.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‚ฟใ‚คใƒ—ใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใ‚’็†่งฃใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹่ชฐใ‹ใซๅฐ‹ใญใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใ† ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚
04:49
So, let's say you are preparing for the IELTS exam.
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ใŸใจใˆใฐใ€IELTS ่ฉฆ้จ“ใฎๆบ–ๅ‚™ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใจใ—ใพใ—ใ‚‡ใ† ใ€‚ ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’ๆฏๅ›ฝ่ชž
04:52
You can't just go to anybody, even if they're a native English speaker, and say "hey, what
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ใจใ™ใ‚‹ไบบใงใ‚ใฃใฆใ‚‚ใ€่ชฐใ‹ใฎใจใ“ใ‚ใซ่กŒใฃใฆ ใ€Œใ“ใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใซใคใ„ใฆใฉใ†
04:56
do you think of this writing?"
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ๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ‹?ใ€ใจ่จ€ใ†ใ‚ใ‘ใซใฏใ„ใใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
04:58
Because honestly, writing is a skill that people work to develop.
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ๆญฃ็›ดใชใจใ“ใ‚ใ€ๆ›ธใใ“ใจใฏ ไบบใ€…ใŒ้–‹็™บใ™ใ‚‹ใŸใ‚ใซๅƒใใ‚นใ‚ญใƒซใ ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™ใ€‚ ใŸใจใˆใฐใ€
05:01
And just because someone is a native English speaker, for example, doesn't mean that they
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่ชฐใ‹ใŒ่‹ฑ่ชžใ‚’ๆฏๅ›ฝ่ชžใจใ™ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‰ใจใ„ใฃใฆใ€ใใฎไบบใŒ
05:05
understand how to write, and who your audience is, what's expected etcetera, so you need
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ๆ–‡็ซ ใฎๆ›ธใๆ–นใ€ๅฏพ่ฑก่€… ใ€ๆœŸๅพ…ใ•ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ“ใจใชใฉใ‚’็†่งฃใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใจใฏ้™ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ใใฎใŸใ‚ใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒ
05:11
to get feedback from someone who knows what you're doing, why you're doing it, what the
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ไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚’็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไบบใ‹ใ‚‰ใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Š ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใชใœใใ‚Œใ‚’่กŒใ†ใฎใ‹ใ€
05:16
goal is, what the expectations are.
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็›ฎๆจ™ใฏไฝ•ใ‹ใ€ๆœŸๅพ…ใฏไฝ•ใ‹ใ€‚
05:19
Because then they can say "oh, look, this is a professional email that you're trying
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ใใ†ใ™ใ‚Œใฐใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ€Œใปใ‚‰ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œ ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆ›ธใ“ใ†ใจใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใƒ—ใƒญใฎใƒกใƒผใƒซใงใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒ
05:23
to write, and this phrase that you used here... this isn't very professional and this is why."
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ใ“ใ“ใงไฝฟใฃใŸใ“ใฎใƒ•ใƒฌใƒผใ‚บ ใฏ... ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ใพใ‚Šใƒ—ใƒญใ‚‰ใ—ใใชใ„็†็”ฑใงใ™ใ€ใจ่จ€ใ†ใ“ใจใŒใงใใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™ใ€‚
05:28
Ok?
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Ok๏ผŸ ใƒ—ใƒญใƒ•ใ‚งใƒƒใ‚ทใƒงใƒŠใƒซใชใƒกใƒผใƒซใฎๆ›ธใๆ–นใ‚’
05:29
If you talk with someone who doesn't understand how to write a professional email, again,
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็†่งฃใ—ใฆใ„ใชใ„ไบบใจ่ฉฑใ—ใŸๅ ดๅˆ ใ€
05:33
even if they are a native English speaker, the feedback you get is gonna be irrelevant.
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ใใฎไบบใŒ่‹ฑ่ชžใฎใƒใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒ– ใ‚นใƒ”ใƒผใ‚ซใƒผใงใ‚ใฃใฆใ‚‚ ใ€ๅพ—ใ‚‰ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใฏ้‡่ฆใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
05:37
They're not gonna know what they're talking about.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏไฝ•ใซใคใ„ใฆ่ฉฑใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใ‹ๅˆ†ใ‹ใ‚‰ใชใ„ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ† ใ€‚
05:39
So you have to get feedback from a source who knows.
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ใใฎใŸใ‚ใ€่ฉณใ—ใ„ๆƒ…ๅ ฑๆบใ‹ใ‚‰ใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ ใ€‚
05:42
Now, sometimes this means you might have to pay for it.
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ใ•ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใฏๆ™‚ใ€…ใ‚ใชใŸใŒใใ‚Œใ‚’ๆ”ฏๆ‰•ใ‚ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚‰ใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใชใ„ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆ„ๅ‘ณใ—ใพใ™ . ็ทจ้›†่€…ใ‚’้›‡ใ†
05:45
You might have to go to a website where you can hire an editor, or somebody to go through
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ใ“ใจใŒใงใใ‚‹ใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใซ่กŒใๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œ
05:49
and give you feedback.
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ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
05:50
Or, hopefully, you're lucky enough to have a friend who can help you with this.
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ใพใŸใฏใ€ใ†ใพใใ„ใ‘ ใฐใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚’ๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใใ‚Œใ‚‹ๅ‹ไบบใŒใ„ใ‚‹ใปใฉๅนธ้‹ใงใ™.
05:55
Or maybe you have to join a program where you practice your writing.
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ใพใŸใฏใ€ใƒฉใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒณใ‚ฐใ‚’็ทด็ฟ’ใ™ใ‚‹ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ฐใƒฉใƒ ใซๅ‚ๅŠ ใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
05:57
I have no idea.
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ไฝ•ใ‚‚ๆ€ใ„ใคใใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
05:59
But that is basically how you do it.
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06:01
That's how anyone and everyone improves their writing.
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06:04
That's how I've improved my writing.
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ใใ†ใ‚„ใฃใฆๆ–‡็ซ ๅŠ›ใ‚’ไธŠใ’ใฆใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
06:05
First, by figuring out what am I writing, who's my audience, asking those questions,
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06:10
doing the research, practicing, and then getting feedback.
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ใ—ใ€่ชฟๆŸปใ‚’่กŒใ„ใ€ๅฎŸ่ทตใ—ใ€ใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ .
06:13
That's the formula.
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06:15
That's how you do it.
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06:16
Just remember, that there's so many different types of writing out there, so you need to
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06:20
pay attention.
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06:22
There's different ways of structuring writing depending on what you're writing.
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06:26
There's different tones that you can use in your writing.
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06:29
And a tone is created by your word choices and by your sentence structures.
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ใใ—ใฆใƒˆใƒผใƒณใฏใ€ๅ˜่ชžใฎ้ธๆŠž ใจๆ–‡ใฎๆง‹้€ ใซใ‚ˆใฃใฆไฝœๆˆใ•ใ‚Œใพใ™ใ€‚
06:34
So as I was saying, there's different tones you could use depending on who you're writing
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ใงใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€็งใŒ่จ€ใฃใŸ ใ‚ˆใ†
06:38
to, what effect you want your writing to have on the audience.
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06:42
So, you know, this is not a simple process.
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06:44
This is not something that happens overnight.
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06:47
But as long as you are being strategic about it, you can improve your writing reletively
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06:51
quickly.
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06:53
You just have to know what good writing is, and what are you writing, and who is your
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06:57
audience, and then do the research.
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06:59
Figure out what you have to do to get to that end goal.
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07:03
Look, grammar is a part of it, it's obvious.
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07:06
You need to understand grammar.
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07:08
But guess what, grammar is not writing.
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07:11
Grammar is grammar.
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07:12
And sometimes you can have good writing where the grammar is wrong and that's part of the
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07:19
writing style.
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07:20
Sometimes that happens.
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07:21
In the famous book, "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn" by Mark Twain, that's one of the style
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07:27
elements of that book.
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07:29
In the dialogue where the people talk with each other, the grammar is totally messed
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07:33
up because it reflects how people would talk in that time period, in that era, etcetera.
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07:39
So, that's a kind of random example.
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07:41
But, you get the point, right?
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07:43
That writing is different everywhere depending on what you're doing.
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ใใฎๆ›ธใ่พผใฟใฏ ใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใซใ‚ˆใฃใฆใฉใ“ใงใ‚‚็•ฐใชใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
07:47
So hopefully this video was helpful.
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07:50
For those of you who know nothing about writing, I know these tips are really gonna help you.
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07:55
For those of you who kind of already know a lot about writing, maybe this stuff was
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07:58
obvious to you, and that's good... it should be obvious.
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08:03
Anyways, if you guys want 5 ways that you can improve your writing in less than 10 minutes,
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08:08
and these are really specific examples, then you can go ahead and download a free audio
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08:13
class that I made for you.
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08:15
I will link it in the description.
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08:18
And it's basically the basics of good writing... do this, don't do that.
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08:24
That's what I teach you guys in that audio class.
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08:26
So, it's linked in the description.
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08:28
And don't forget to find me on Instagram and follow me there at @theenglishcoach and @englishfulltime
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ใใ—ใฆใ€Instagram ใง็งใ‚’่ฆ‹ใคใ‘ใฆใ€@theenglishcoach ใจ @englishfulltime ใง็งใ‚’ใƒ•ใ‚ฉใƒญใƒผใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅฟ˜ใ‚Œใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„
08:34
a new Instagram account that Istarted for our community.
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08:38
Also, feel free to find me on Facebook.
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ใพใŸใ€Facebookใง็งใ‚’่ฆ‹ใคใ‘ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
08:41
Follow my page there "The English Coach" and check out the website and blog englishfulltime.com
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็งใฎใƒšใƒผใ‚ธ "The English Coach" ใ‚’ใƒ•ใ‚ฉใƒญใƒผ ใ—ใฆใ€ใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใจใƒ–ใƒญใ‚ฐ englishfulltime.com ใ‚’ใƒใ‚งใƒƒใ‚ฏใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
08:47
there's some other free stuff for you guys there, too.
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08:50
Anyways, that's it!
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08:51
I will put all the links in the description, and I look forward to seeing you guys in another
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