How To Improve Your English Writing Skills | Tips For Intermediate And Advanced English Learners

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2017-09-22 ใƒป The English Coach


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How To Improve Your English Writing Skills | Tips For Intermediate And Advanced English Learners

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hey guys, what's up?
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์–˜๋“ค์•„, ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์ด์•ผ?
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Stefanie the English coach here from Englishfulltime.com in this video we are gonna talk about how
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ Englishfulltime.com์˜ ์˜์–ด ์ฝ”์น˜ ์Šคํ…ŒํŒŒ๋‹ˆ๊ฐ€ ์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ
00:06
to improve your writing in English.
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ์ž‘๋ฌธ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:09
First there's four things that you have to do.
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๋จผ์ € ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์ด 4๊ฐ€์ง€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
00:12
1. Ask questions 2.Do research 3.Practice and 4. Get feedback
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1. ์งˆ๋ฌธํ•˜๊ธฐ 2. ์กฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ธฐ 3. ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ธฐ 4. ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ๋ฐ›๊ธฐ ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์ง€๋งŒ
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That's it, but we're gonna break that down and talk about what each of those
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, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ธ๋ถ„ํ™”ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๊ฐ€ ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ”์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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steps means.
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00:27
First, ask questions... this is the most crucial part to improving your writing.
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๋จผ์ € ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”... ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ž‘๋ฌธ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:33
You have to know what good writing is.
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์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์•Œ์•„์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:36
So start by asking questions: what are you writing?
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ ์งˆ๋ฌธ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?
00:40
What are you trying to improve?
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๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
00:42
What's lacking?
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๋ฌด์—‡์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
00:43
Who is your audience?
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์ฒญ์ค‘์€ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์„ ์ฝ์„
00:44
What are the expectations of the people that are gonna be reading your writing?
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์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์˜ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ?
00:49
Because the truth is, that there's so many different writing styles that you could use
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์‚ฌ์‹ค์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋А๋ƒ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:54
depending on what you're writing.
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.
00:56
If you're writing a business email to a client, your writing and the structure of your writing
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๊ณ ๊ฐ์—๊ฒŒ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฐ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋Š”
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is gonna be a lot different than if you're writing a post on Facebook or if you're writing
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Facebook์— ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
01:06
an academic essay or if you're writing a resume.
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ํ•™์ˆ  ์—์„ธ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์™€ ๋งŽ์ด ๋‹ค๋ฅผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ.
01:09
So really you have to start by asking these questions.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋˜์ง€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
01:14
What are you writing?
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
01:15
Who are you writing it to?
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๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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What are their expectations?
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๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
01:18
Then it's time to do research.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ํ•  ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:21
Go on Google, go on YouTube and start asking your questions.
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Google๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•˜๊ณ  YouTube๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•˜์—ฌ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜์„ธ์š” .
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Read blog posts and articles, look for the answers.
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๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ๊ณผ ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ฝ๊ณ  ๋‹ต์„ ์ฐพ์œผ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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You can even read entire books on writing, Okay.
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ์ฑ… ์ „์ฒด๋ฅผ ์ฝ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
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But what I want to suggest here is that you don't go looking for material on how to become
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ œ์•ˆํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฒƒ์€
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a better writer from English teachers.
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์˜์–ด ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ์ž‘๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์œผ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ง๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
01:42
Here's the reason why.
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๊ทธ ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:43
English teachers teach English.
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์˜์–ด ๊ต์‚ฌ๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:45
They teach vocabulary.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:46
They teach phrasal verbs.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ตฌ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:48
They teach grammar.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:49
But they are not experts on writing.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด,
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If you want to make a blog in English, for example, an English teacher can't show you
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์˜์–ด ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์ด
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and tell you how to do that successfully.
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์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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You have to go to the people who have already made blogs in English and look up... how do
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์ด๋ฏธ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ€์„œ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค...
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they structure their blog posts?
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๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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How do they structure their sentences?
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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How do they keep the readers engaged?
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋…์ž๋“ค์˜ ์ฐธ์—ฌ๋ฅผ ์œ ์ง€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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What kind of writing style do they use?
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์–ด๋–ค ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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How do they incorporate humor?
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์œ ๋จธ๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ†ตํ•ฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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You have to learn writing from people who already do that kind of writing.
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์ด๋ฏธ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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If you want to learn how to write a resume, you have to look up articles in English that
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด
02:25
are actually for English speakers.
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์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ์˜์–ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
02:28
Pretend you're already a fluent, confident... you're an English speaker, even if you're
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด๋ฏธ ์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ฒ™... ๋‹น์‹ ์€
02:33
not totally there yet.
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์•„์ง ์˜์–ด์— ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋„๋‹ฌํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๋”๋ผ๋„ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:36
Start looking up material that was written for English speakers because those articles,
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๊ทธ ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ, ๊ทธ
02:41
those materials, those books are going to have the best information.
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์ž๋ฃŒ, ๊ทธ ์ฑ…๋“ค์ด ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์งˆ ๊ฒƒ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์˜์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์“ฐ์—ฌ์ง„ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:45
Now here's a tip for you guys.
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์ด์ œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ํŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:47
Writers, they don't study English.
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์ž‘๊ฐ€๋“ค, ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”๋‹ค.
02:50
Great writers, people that have written books, people that run websites, and write blog posts
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ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•œ ์ž‘๊ฐ€, ์ฑ…์„ ์“ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ ์šด์˜ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ
02:56
(there's obviously so many different kinds of writing you could do), but writers don't
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(๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ข…๋ฅ˜ ์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค) ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋Š”
03:01
study English.
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์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:02
They study writing.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:04
That's very important.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:05
The best writers in the world, they don't study grammar.
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์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋“ค์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:09
They don't study vocabulary, they study more writing from other great writers.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์œ„๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋“ค์˜ ๊ธ€์„ ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:14
So if you want to improve your writing, you have to study good writing.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ธ€์„ ์ž˜ ์“ฐ๋ ค๋ฉด ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:19
You have to analyze it, you have to break it down.
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๋ถ„์„ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ถ„ํ•ดํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:22
You can't just get tips all the time, because sometimes even if you get a tip and you know,
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ํŒ๋งŒ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜๋Š” ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ€๋” ํŒ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์•Œ๋”๋ผ๋„
03:27
someone says... "hey, your sentences need to be clear."
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€... "์ด๋ด, ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด."๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:31
That's a great tip... but what does that mean!?
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๊ต‰์žฅํ•œ ํŒ์ธ๋ฐ... ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋ฌด์Šจ ๋œป์ด์•ผ!?
03:33
What is a clear sentence?
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๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด๋ž€?
03:34
What is a sentence that's convoluted and not clear?
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๋ณต์žกํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ?
03:37
You actually have to read good writing because some things won't make sense until you see
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์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์„ ์ฝ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ „๊นŒ์ง€๋Š”
03:43
it and until you can break it down in your mind and analyse it and then go "ohhhhh, that's
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ ์†์—์„œ ๋ถ„ํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ถ„์„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚˜์„œ "์˜ค์˜ค์˜ค, ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๊ทธ๊ฑฐ์•ผ
03:49
what it is!
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!
03:50
That's how you do it!
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๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ!
03:51
That's how you transition from one sentence to the next.
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๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์—์„œ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์ „ํ™˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:54
That's how you transition from one paragraph to the next."
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ํ•œ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์—์„œ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์œผ๋กœ ์ „ํ™˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."
03:57
You have to be a researcher, you have to ask questions, you have to research, then you
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์ž๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ณ , ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ณ , ์กฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ณ ,
04:01
have to analyze.
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๋ถ„์„์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:03
And then the next step is practice.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ์Šต
04:05
You won't improve your writing if you don't practice.
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ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
04:08
But now, at least, you know what you're writing, you know who your audience is, you know what
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์ตœ์†Œํ•œ ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์•Œ๊ณ , ์ฒญ์ค‘์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€, ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์•Œ๊ณ ,
04:14
their expectations are, and you've researched what good writing is, you've looked at examples,
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์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์—ฐ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ , ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ณ ,
04:19
you've broken them down, you've analyzed them, so now it's time for you to implement everything
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๊นจ๋œจ๋ ธ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„๋ž˜๋กœ, ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๋ถ„์„ํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ด์ œ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฐฐ์šด ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ•  ๋•Œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
04:25
that you've learned.
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.
04:27
And you want to basically make your writing look, sound, and feel like the writing that
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•ด ์˜จ ๊ธ€์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ณด์ด๊ณ  ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋А๊ปด์ง€๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
04:33
you've been studying.
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.
04:34
Ok?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
04:35
So practice, practice, practice.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ ์—ฐ์Šต, ์—ฐ์Šต, ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
04:36
And then you need feedback.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:39
You don't just want to ask your friends, though.
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์นœ๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:40
You don't just want to ask some random English speaker that you know, that you work with.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ณ  ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ์ž„์˜์˜ ์˜์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
04:44
You want to ask somebody who understands the type of writing that you're doing.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธ€์˜ ์œ ํ˜•์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:49
So, let's say you are preparing for the IELTS exam.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ IELTS ์‹œํ—˜์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๊ฐ€์ •ํ•ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์˜์–ด ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์ด๋ผ ํ• ์ง€๋ผ
04:52
You can't just go to anybody, even if they're a native English speaker, and say "hey, what
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๋„ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ€์„œ "
04:56
do you think of this writing?"
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์ด ๊ธ€์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”?"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜๋Š” ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:58
Because honestly, writing is a skill that people work to develop.
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์†”์งํžˆ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ
05:01
And just because someone is a native English speaker, for example, doesn't mean that they
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๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์–ด๋–ค ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ชจ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•ด์„œ
05:05
understand how to write, and who your audience is, what's expected etcetera, so you need
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๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•, ์ฒญ์ค‘์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ ์ธ์ง€, ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋“ฑ์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๋Š” ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ž์‹ ์ด
05:11
to get feedback from someone who knows what you're doing, why you're doing it, what the
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๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์•„๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์œผ๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์•„์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์™œ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€,
05:16
goal is, what the expectations are.
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๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€, ๊ธฐ๋Œ€์น˜๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€.
05:19
Because then they can say "oh, look, this is a professional email that you're trying
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ "์˜ค, ๋ณด์„ธ์š”, ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์“ฐ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ
05:23
to write, and this phrase that you used here... this isn't very professional and this is why."
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์ด๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•œ ์ด ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋Š”... ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ทธ๋‹ค์ง€ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์ด์œ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:28
Ok?
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์ข‹์•„์š”? ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ๋ฒ•์„
05:29
If you talk with someone who doesn't understand how to write a professional email, again,
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์ดํ•ดํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜๋ˆˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด , ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ,
05:33
even if they are a native English speaker, the feedback you get is gonna be irrelevant.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ชจ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ผ์ง€๋ผ๋„, ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฐ›๋Š” ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์€ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์—†์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:37
They're not gonna know what they're talking about.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋ฌด์Šจ ๋ง์„ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:39
So you have to get feedback from a source who knows.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์•„๋Š” ์ถœ์ฒ˜์—์„œ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์•„์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:42
Now, sometimes this means you might have to pay for it.
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์ด์ œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋•Œ๋•Œ๋กœ ๋น„์šฉ์„ ์ง€๋ถˆํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Œ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ํŽธ์ง‘์ž๋ฅผ ๊ณ ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”
05:45
You might have to go to a website where you can hire an editor, or somebody to go through
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์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ๊ณ  , ๊ฒ€ํ† 
05:49
and give you feedback.
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ์ค„ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ๊ณ ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:50
Or, hopefully, you're lucky enough to have a friend who can help you with this.
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์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‹คํ–‰์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ๋„ ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ์šด์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:55
Or maybe you have to join a program where you practice your writing.
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์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ์ž‘๋ฌธ์„ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์— ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:57
I have no idea.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ชจ๋ฅธ๋‹ค.
05:59
But that is basically how you do it.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋‹น์‹ ์ดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:01
That's how anyone and everyone improves their writing.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๋ชจ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
06:04
That's how I've improved my writing.
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์„œ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ๋Š˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:05
First, by figuring out what am I writing, who's my audience, asking those questions,
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์ฒซ์งธ, ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€, ๋‚ด ์ฒญ์ค‘์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ํ•˜๊ณ ,
06:10
doing the research, practicing, and then getting feedback.
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์กฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ณ , ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ณ , ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:13
That's the formula.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ณต์‹์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:15
That's how you do it.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์ดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:16
Just remember, that there's so many different types of writing out there, so you need to
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๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ฃผ์˜๋ฅผ
06:20
pay attention.
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๊ธฐ์šธ์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
06:22
There's different ways of structuring writing depending on what you're writing.
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์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ
06:26
There's different tones that you can use in your writing.
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๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์–ด์กฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
06:29
And a tone is created by your word choices and by your sentence structures.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์–ด์กฐ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ ๊ณผ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์กฐ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:34
So as I was saying, there's different tones you could use depending on who you're writing
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ง์”€๋“œ๋ฆฐ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š”์ง€์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์–ด์กฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:38
to, what effect you want your writing to have on the audience.
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06:42
So, you know, this is not a simple process.
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์•„์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๊ณผ์ •์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:44
This is not something that happens overnight.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ํ•˜๋ฃป๋ฐค ์‚ฌ์ด์— ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ์ผ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:47
But as long as you are being strategic about it, you can improve your writing reletively
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ „๋žต์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š” ํ•œ ์ƒ๋Œ€์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ž‘๋ฌธ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:51
quickly.
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06:53
You just have to know what good writing is, and what are you writing, and who is your
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋‹จ์ง€ ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€, ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ฒญ์ค‘์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์•Œ๊ณ 
06:57
audience, and then do the research.
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์กฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ตœ์ข… ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ
06:59
Figure out what you have to do to get to that end goal.
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๋‹ฌ์„ฑํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค .
07:03
Look, grammar is a part of it, it's obvious.
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๋ณด์„ธ์š”, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ช…๋ฐฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:06
You need to understand grammar.
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:08
But guess what, grammar is not writing.
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:11
Grammar is grammar.
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:12
And sometimes you can have good writing where the grammar is wrong and that's part of the
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๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ด ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋„ ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด
07:19
writing style.
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:20
Sometimes that happens.
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๋•Œ๋•Œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ผ์ด ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Mark Twain์˜
07:21
In the famous book, "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn" by Mark Twain, that's one of the style
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์œ ๋ช…ํ•œ ์ฑ… "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"์—์„œ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€
07:27
elements of that book.
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๊ทธ ์ฑ…์˜ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ ์š”์†Œ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:29
In the dialogue where the people talk with each other, the grammar is totally messed
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์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์„œ๋กœ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋Œ€ํ™”์—์„œ ๊ทธ ์‹œ๋Œ€, ๊ทธ ์‹œ๋Œ€ ๋“ฑ์—
07:33
up because it reflects how people would talk in that time period, in that era, etcetera.
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์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋งํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ด ์™„์ „ํžˆ ์—‰๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
07:39
So, that's a kind of random example.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ๋ฌด์ž‘์œ„์ ์ธ ์˜ˆ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:41
But, you get the point, right?
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์š”์ ์€ ์•Œ๊ฒ ์ฃ ?
07:43
That writing is different everywhere depending on what you're doing.
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๊ทธ ๊ธ€์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•˜๋А๋ƒ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์–ด๋””์—์„œ๋‚˜ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
07:47
So hopefully this video was helpful.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ์ด ์˜์ƒ์ด ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜์…จ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:50
For those of you who know nothing about writing, I know these tips are really gonna help you.
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์•„๋ฌด๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ด ํŒ์ด ์ •๋ง ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž„์„ ์••๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:55
For those of you who kind of already know a lot about writing, maybe this stuff was
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด๋ฏธ ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ถ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์•„๋งˆ๋„ ์ด ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด
07:58
obvious to you, and that's good... it should be obvious.
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ๋ช…๋ฐฑํ–ˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ถ„๋ช…ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:03
Anyways, if you guys want 5 ways that you can improve your writing in less than 10 minutes,
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์–ด์จŒ๋“ , ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด 10๋ถ„ ์•ˆ์— ์ž‘๋ฌธ์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” 5๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์›
08:08
and these are really specific examples, then you can go ahead and download a free audio
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ด๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ์ •๋ง ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์˜ˆ๋ผ๋ฉด
08:13
class that I made for you.
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋งŒ๋“  ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์˜ค๋””์˜ค ํด๋ž˜์Šค๋ฅผ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:15
I will link it in the description.
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์„ค๋ช…์— ๋งํฌํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:18
And it's basically the basics of good writing... do this, don't do that.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์˜ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค... ์ด๊ฒƒ์„ ํ•˜๋ผ, ์ €๊ฒƒ์„ ํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง๋ผ.
08:24
That's what I teach you guys in that audio class.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ ์˜ค๋””์˜ค ํด๋ž˜์Šค์—์„œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
08:26
So, it's linked in the description.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์„ค๋ช…์— ๋งํฌ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:28
And don't forget to find me on Instagram and follow me there at @theenglishcoach and @englishfulltime
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  Instagram์—์„œ ์ €๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๊ณ  @theenglishcoach์—์„œ ์ €๋ฅผ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ๋ฅผ
08:34
a new Instagram account that Istarted for our community.
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์œ„ํ•ด ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด Instagram ๊ณ„์ •์ธ @englishfulltime์„ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š” .
08:38
Also, feel free to find me on Facebook.
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๋˜ํ•œ Facebook์—์„œ ์ €๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
08:41
Follow my page there "The English Coach" and check out the website and blog englishfulltime.com
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๋‚ด ํŽ˜์ด์ง€ "The English Coach"๋ฅผ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์™€ ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š”
08:47
there's some other free stuff for you guys there, too.
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08:50
Anyways, that's it!
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์–ด์จŒ๋“ , ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์•ผ!
08:51
I will put all the links in the description, and I look forward to seeing you guys in another
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๋งํฌ๋Š” ๋ชจ๋‘ ์„ค๋ช…๋ž€์— ๋‹ฌ์•„๋‘๋„๋ก ํ•˜๊ฒ ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์˜์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์„ ๋ต™๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
08:54
video.
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08:55
Bye!
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์•ˆ๋…•!
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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