How to Write a Job Inquiry Email ๐Ÿ’ป๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ’ผ Tips for Job Searches ๐Ÿ“ฑ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ’ผ

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How to Write a Job Inquiry Email ๐Ÿ’ป๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ’ผ Tips for Job Searches ๐Ÿ“ฑ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ’ผ

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

00:28
Hi everyone. It's Jennifer.
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„. ์ œ๋‹ˆํผ์•ผ.
00:30
I'm going to show you an email and I want you to think about the
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์ €๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:34
relationship between the sender and the recipient, the person reading the message, and
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๋ฐœ์‹ ์ž์™€ ์ˆ˜์‹ ์ž, ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ฝ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์‚ฌ์ด์˜ ๊ด€๊ณ„์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ 
00:40
I want you to think about the purpose of the message. Okay?
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๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์•„์š”?
00:47
Hi Marcelo. How's it going? Just wanted to reach out and say hi. I'm thinking about taking my career somewhere else.
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์•ˆ๋…• ๋งˆ๋ฅด์…€๋กœ. ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์†์„ ๋ป—์–ด ์ธ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ์„ ์Œ“์„ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:55
I'm starting to look around, but no rush.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ์ฃผ์œ„๋ฅผ ๋‘˜๋Ÿฌ๋ณด๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์„œ๋‘๋ฅด์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:00
Things are going well with ZYX, but after four years, I feel it's time to explore new things.
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ZYX๋Š” ์ž˜ ์ง„ํ–‰๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ 4๋…„์ด ์ง€๋‚œ ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ฒƒ์„ ํƒ๊ตฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋•Œ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:08
Here are the quick highlights of my time with the ZYX.
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๋‹ค์Œ์€ ZYX์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ํ•œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์˜ ๋น ๋ฅธ ํ•˜์ด๋ผ์ดํŠธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:12
2014 booked 2 million dollars, a 125% of my quota.
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2014๋…„์—๋Š” ๋‚ด ํ• ๋‹น๋Ÿ‰์˜ 125%์ธ 200๋งŒ ๋‹ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:21
2015 booked 2.3 million dollars, 103% of my quota.
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2015๋…„์—๋Š” ๋‚ด ํ• ๋‹น๋Ÿ‰์˜ 103%์ธ 230๋งŒ ๋‹ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:26
2016 booked 2.7 million dollars,
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2016๋…„์—๋Š” ๋‚ด ํ• ๋‹น๋Ÿ‰์˜ 110%์ธ 270๋งŒ ๋‹ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
01:31
110% of my quota.
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.
01:34
2017 booked 3 million dollars,
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2017๋…„์—๋Š”
01:39
120% of my quota.
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๋‚ด ํ• ๋‹น๋Ÿ‰์˜ 120%์ธ 300๋งŒ ๋‹ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:42
Please keep me in mind if you come across any opportunities in sales. Thanks. Laura
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ํŒ๋งค ๊ธฐํšŒ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์ €๋ฅผ ์—ผ๋‘์— ๋‘์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ด์š”. Laura
01:51
If you're looking for a new job, there are a few different types of emails you might send out.
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์ƒˆ ์ผ์ž๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:59
First, you might network with people you already know.
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์ฒซ์งธ, ์ด๋ฏธ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค๊ณผ ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํฌ๋ฅผ ํ˜•์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:04
This is what Laura did in the model.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด Laura๊ฐ€ ๋ชจ๋ธ์—์„œ ํ•œ ์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:07
You might tell a few colleagues that you're quietly looking.
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๋ช‡๋ช‡ ๋™๋ฃŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์กฐ์šฉํžˆ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:13
That kind of email can sound conversational. It doesn't require formal language.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ๋Œ€ํ™”์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋“ค๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ˜•์‹์ ์ธ ์–ธ์–ด๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:20
Some useful phrases are
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
02:50
In your email, remember to keep the basic format with a greeting,
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. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง,
02:55
the main body of your message, a closing and your signature.
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๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ, ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๋ฐ ์„œ๋ช…์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ํ˜•์‹์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
03:01
With someone you know pretty well, your signature is just your first name.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ฝค ์ž˜ ์•„๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์„œ๋ช…์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์ผ ๋ฟ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:07
The message should be brie,f but there's still time for a short pleasantry like, "How's it going?" or "Hope all as well?"
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๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ"์ž˜ ์ง€๋‚ด์š”?" ๋˜๋Š” "๋ชจ๋‘ ์ž˜๋˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค?"
03:16
Also use standard punctuation.
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๋˜ํ•œ ํ‘œ์ค€ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
03:21
Laura included a summary because Marcelo knows what field she's in, but he's probably not familiar with her track record.
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Laura๋Š” Marcelo๊ฐ€ ์ž์‹ ์ด ์†ํ•œ ๋ถ„์•ผ๋ฅผ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์š”์•ฝ๋ณธ์„ ํฌํ•จ์‹œ์ผฐ์ง€๋งŒ Marcelo๋Š” ์•„๋งˆ๋„ ๊ทธ๋…€์˜ ์‹ค์ ์— ์ต์ˆ™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:30
If he is going to pass along a recommendation, it would be useful to know what she's capable of.
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๊ทธ๊ฐ€ ์ถ”์ฒœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์˜ˆ์ •์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋…€๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์•„๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์œ ์šฉํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:38
Now you're in luck today because I asked my husband to share some professional advice.
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์ด์ œ ๋‚จํŽธ์—๊ฒŒ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ๋ถ€ํƒํ–ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์šด์ด ์ข‹์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:45
He's an executive recruiter here in the U.S., so he knows a lot more about job searches than I do.
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๊ทธ๋Š” ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ ์ž„์› ์ฑ„์šฉ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋‚˜๋ณด๋‹ค ๊ตฌ์ง์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:52
Listen to his tips.
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๊ทธ์˜ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
03:56
Yeah, the first tip is use a professional-looking email. No silly words in the email address.
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์˜ˆ, ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์€ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ ์ˆ˜์ค€์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ฃผ์†Œ์— ์–ด๋ฆฌ์„์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:04
No..
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์•„๋‹ˆ..
04:05
[email protected]. Your first name, your last name...some numbers are acceptable.
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[email protected]. ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„, ์„ฑ... ์ผ๋ถ€ ์ˆซ์ž๋Š” ํ—ˆ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:13
Do not use dead email domains, like Verizon.net
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Verizon.net Comcast.net๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ฃฝ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋„๋ฉ”์ธ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค
04:19
Comcast.net... these are late '90s and they are officially dead.
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. ์ด๋“ค์€ 90๋…„๋Œ€ ํ›„๋ฐ˜์ด๊ณ  ๊ณต์‹์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ฃฝ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:28
The second kind of email you might send is to a company in direct response to a job posting.
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๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ์ฑ„์šฉ ๊ณต๊ณ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ง์ ‘์ ์ธ ์‘๋‹ต์œผ๋กœ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์— ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:35
You may see something you like online,
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์˜จ๋ผ์ธ์—์„œ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ
04:38
so you want to express your interest and submit your resume to the address listed.
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๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‚˜์—ด๋œ ์ฃผ์†Œ๋กœ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ œ์ถœํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
04:46
That kind of email requires a more professional, more formal tone. Remember not to make your message too long.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—๋Š” ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ณ  ํ˜•์‹์ ์ธ ์–ด์กฐ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ธธ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
04:56
Cover the main points: which position you're interested in, who you are, meaning what you do and what you've done,
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์ฃผ์š” ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค: ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ๊ด€์‹ฌ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ง์œ„, ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€, ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ผ๊ณผ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•œ ์ผ,
05:05
what you're attaching, your resume or your cover letter and a resume, and
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์ฒจ๋ถ€ํ•  ๋‚ด์šฉ, ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ๋˜๋Š” ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ,
05:11
how to contact you -- that's your contact information and your availability.
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๊ท€ํ•˜์—๊ฒŒ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• - - ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜ ์ •๋ณด์™€ ๊ฐ€์šฉ์„ฑ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:18
That kind of email may look like this.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:24
Hello. I'm writing to express my interest in the position of marketing manager.
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ๋งค๋‹ˆ์ € ์ง์ฑ…์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ํ‘œ๋ช…ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ธ€์„ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:30
I have seven years of experience in the field with OPQ and QPR.
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์ €๋Š” OPQ ๋ฐ QPR๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ˜„์žฅ์—์„œ 7๋…„์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:36
I was part of the team that helped establish a marketing function with OPQ and build it to a thirty-million dollar business.
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์ €๋Š” OPQ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ตฌ์ถ•ํ•˜๊ณ  3์ฒœ๋งŒ ๋‹ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ทœ๋ชจ์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค๋กœ ๊ตฌ์ถ•ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค€ ํŒ€์˜ ์ผ์›์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:45
With QPR, I was brought in to help execute a turnaround,
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QPR๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ „ํ™˜์„ ์‹คํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ฃผ๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ๊ณ ,
05:50
which resulted in a successful rebranding of the company and a return to growth.
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๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์ธ ๋ฆฌ๋ธŒ๋žœ๋”ฉ๊ณผ ์„ฑ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ์˜ ๋ณต๊ท€๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:56
Please see my attached resume. I look forward to hearing from you.
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์ฒจ๋ถ€๋œ ์ œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฐธ์กฐํ•˜์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:02
You can reach me at this address or by phone at...
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์ด ์ฃผ์†Œ๋‚˜ ์ „ํ™”๋กœ ์ €์—๊ฒŒ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค...
06:07
Thank you. Best regards, Chris Crosby.
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๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ˆ๋ถ€ ์ธ์‚ฌ, ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค ํฌ๋กœ์Šค๋น„.
06:11
Did you notice that the subject heading is the job title? Keep it simple and clear.
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์ œ๋ชฉ ์ œ๋ชฉ์ด ์งํ•จ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ๊ณ„์…จ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
06:18
Note that Chris only used "Hello." If a contact name is listed, use it in the greeting.
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Chris๋Š” "Hello"๋งŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์ด ๋‚˜์—ด๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
06:26
However, if there is none, a simple hello is acceptable.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์ธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ํ—ˆ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:32
"Dear Sir or Madam" is only for very formal correspondence.
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"Dear Sir or Madam"์€ ๋งค์šฐ ํ˜•์‹์ ์ธ ์„œ์‹ ์—๋งŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:38
In today's business world, many U.S. companies avoid overly formal language.
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์˜ค๋Š˜๋‚ ์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์„ธ๊ณ„์—์„œ ๋งŽ์€ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ๊ธฐ์—…์€ ์ง€๋‚˜์น˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜•์‹์ ์ธ ์–ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ํ”ผํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:45
At the same time, you don't want to sound unprofessional.
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๋™์‹œ์— ํ”„๋กœํŽ˜์…”๋„ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒŒ ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€๋„ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:48
So for this kind of email, I suggest a polite, professional tone
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—๋Š” ๊ณต์†ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์–ด์กฐ๋ฅผ ์ œ์•ˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:54
Use full verb forms.
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์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋™์‚ฌ ํ˜•ํƒœ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
06:56
complete sentences,
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์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ,
06:59
a polite closing, and your full name when you sign off.
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์ •์ค‘ํ•œ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ, ์„œ๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ์˜ ์ „์ฒด ์ด๋ฆ„.
07:05
Note these useful phrases:
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๋‹ค์Œ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ์— ์œ ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
07:47
Tip number 2. Make your resume a one-pager.
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ํŒ ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ 2. ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ํ•œ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“œ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
07:52
The reason behind that is that a hiring manager or
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๊ทธ ์ด์œ ๋Š” ์ฑ„์šฉ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž๋‚˜
07:56
a recruiter would only spend 30 seconds, maybe a minute,
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์ฑ„์šฉ ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋Š” ๋ฐ 30์ดˆ, ์–ด์ฉŒ๋ฉด 1๋ถ„ ์ •๋„๋งŒ ํ• ์• ํ•˜๊ณ 
08:03
looking at your resume, and it has to be brief and concise.
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๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:10
Tip number 3. Focus on your achievements and
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ํŒ ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ 3. ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณผ์™€ ์„ฑ๊ณผ์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค
08:15
accomplishments.
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.
08:17
It is not about what you did or what you do. It's about the results that you were able to achieve.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€, ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ฌ์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋˜ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:24
The things that you are proud of and back them up by numbers.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ž๋ž‘์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›Œํ•˜๊ณ  ์ˆซ์ž๋กœ ๋’ท๋ฐ›์นจํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋“ค.
08:32
Tip number 4. If you worked or work for a
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ํŒ ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ 4.
08:37
relatively small company, unknown company, make sure you provide an explanation
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์ƒ๋Œ€์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์€ ํšŒ์‚ฌ, ์•Œ๋ ค์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์€ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์ผํ–ˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
08:45
as to what the company does, what business the company is in.
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ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€, ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋–ค ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค์— ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:50
Finally, you may want to respond to a recruiter who reached out to you about a job opportunity.
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์ทจ์—… ๊ธฐํšŒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์•Œ๋ ค๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ›์€
08:57
Imagine you got this email in your Inbox.
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ํŽธ์ง€ํ•จ์— ์ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด ๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
09:02
Hello Kim. I'm a recruiter with LMN recruiting.
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์•ˆ๋…• ๊น€. ์ €๋Š” LMN ์ฑ„์šฉ ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น… ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ ๋ถ„์•ผ์˜ ์‹ ์ƒ ๊ธฐ์—…์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š”
09:06
I would love to connect to get your thoughts on a VP
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VP ์—”์ง€๋‹ˆ์–ด๋ง ๊ฒ€์ƒ‰์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
09:09
Engineering search that I am kicking off for a start-up in the Big Data space.
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.
09:13
Well backed by Tier one venture capital firms. High-growth with a number of Fortune 500 companies as early clients.
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Tier 1 ๋ฒค์ฒ˜ ์บํ”ผํ„ธ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์˜ ์ง€์›์„ ๋ฐ›์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Fortune์ง€ ์„ ์ • 500๋Œ€ ๊ธฐ์—…์˜ ์ดˆ๊ธฐ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์œผ๋กœ ๋†’์€ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ธ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์ด๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:20
It is a newly created role due to growth and expansion. If the timing is not right for you.
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์„ฑ์žฅ๊ณผ ํ™•์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ƒˆ๋กญ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ์—ญํ• ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํƒ€์ด๋ฐ์ด ๋งž์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ.
09:26
I would still love to connect to start a relationship and network with you.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ๋‹น์‹ ๊ณผ ๊ด€๊ณ„์™€ ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํฌ๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:30
Thanks and looking forward to hearing back from you. Best, Sydney Hunter.
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๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํšŒ์‹ ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ตœ๊ณ , ์‹œ๋“œ๋‹ˆ ํ—Œํ„ฐ.
09:38
So, how can you respond? Keep it brief. Are you interested or not?
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋Œ€์‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๊ฐ„๋žตํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ์žˆ๋Š๋ƒ ์—†๋Š๋ƒ?
09:44
Tip number five. If a recruiter reaches out to you, do not automatically send your resume in your response.
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๋‹ค์„ฏ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ. ์ฑ„์šฉ ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž๊ฐ€ ๊ท€ํ•˜์—๊ฒŒ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์‘๋‹ต์— ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž๋™์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด๋‚ด์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
09:53
Engage in a conversation
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09:55
To determine whether or not the opportunity is appealing to you.
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๊ธฐํšŒ๊ฐ€ ๊ท€ํ•˜์—๊ฒŒ ๋งค๋ ฅ์ ์ธ์ง€ ์—ฌ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๊ฒฐ์ •ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋Œ€ํ™”์— ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
10:02
So in the response, Kim can simply reply with the purpose of starting a dialog.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์‘๋‹ต์—์„œ Kim์€ ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ชฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‘๋‹ตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:09
She can state her general
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜ ๊ฐ€์šฉ์„ฑ์„ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜
10:11
availability, but as the discussion moves forward and more emails are exchanged,
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์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ํ† ๋ก ์ด ์ง„ํ–‰๋˜๊ณ  ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๊ตํ™˜๋จ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ
10:16
she and Sydney can later agree on a specific day and time in exchange contact information.
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๊ทธ๋…€์™€ ์‹œ๋“œ๋‹ˆ๋Š” ๋‚˜์ค‘์— ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๊ตํ™˜ํ•  ํŠน์ • ๋‚ ์งœ์™€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ๋™์˜ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:24
Kim's initial response may look like this.
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๊น€ ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์˜ ์ฒซ ๋ฐ˜์‘์€ ์ด๋ ‡๋‹ค.
10:29
Hello Sydney. Thank you for reaching out.
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์•ˆ๋…• ์‹œ๋“œ๋‹ˆ. ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:32
I would love to learn more. How does next week look for you?
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๋” ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
10:37
I am free after 3 p.m. on Monday and Wednesday.
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์˜คํ›„ 3์‹œ ์ดํ›„์—๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์›”์š”์ผ๊ณผ ์ˆ˜์š”์ผ์—.
10:41
Regards, Kim
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Kim ๋‹˜,
10:47
And the final tip is make sure that your LinkedIn profile is up-to-date and accurate and
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ํŒ์€ LinkedIn ํ”„๋กœํ•„์ด ์ตœ์‹  ์ƒํƒœ์ด๊ณ  ์ •ํ™•ํ•˜๋ฉฐ
10:55
contains as much information as you can disclose on a public domain.
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๊ณต๊ฐœ ๋„๋ฉ”์ธ์— ๊ณต๊ฐœํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋งŽ์€ ์ •๋ณด๊ฐ€ ํฌํ•จ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:04
As a recruiter, I spend
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์ฑ„์šฉ ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž๋กœ์„œ
11:06
four or five hours a day looking through
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ํ•˜๋ฃจ์— 4~5์‹œ๊ฐ„์„
11:09
profiles on LinkedIn.
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LinkedIn์—์„œ ํ”„๋กœํ•„์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:13
Well, that's all for now.
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์Œ, ์•„์ง์€ ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์•ผ.
11:15
Please remember to like this video if you found it useful, and be sure to subscribe
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์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค๊ฐ€ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜์…จ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ข‹์•„์š”๋ฅผ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ณ , ๊ตฌ๋…์„ ๊ผญ ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ๋” ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์žˆ๊ณ  ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋กœ
11:20
so you can get more lessons to help you communicate
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์†Œํ†ตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋ ˆ์Šจ์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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more confidently and effectively in English. If you know someone who's doing a job search or getting ready for a job search,
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. ๊ตฌ์ง ์ค‘์ด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ตฌ์ง ์ค€๋น„๋ฅผ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด
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๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
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๋Š˜ ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋“ฏ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ณ  ํ–‰๋ณตํ•œ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
11:39
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๋‚ด ํ•™์Šต ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ์˜ ํšŒ์›์ด ๋˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. JOIN ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ ์ œ๋‹ˆํผ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ํ•˜๋Š” ์ œ ์œ ์œ ๋ธŒ ์˜์–ด ์ฑ„๋„์˜ ํšŒ์›์ด ๋˜์„ธ์š”.
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์˜จ์Šคํฌ๋ฆฐ ํฌ๋ ˆ๋”ง ๋ฐ ์›”๊ฐ„ ๋ผ์ด๋ธŒ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ฆผ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ˜„์žฌ ์ผ๋ถ€ ๊ตญ๊ฐ€์—์„œ๋Š” YouTube ์ฑ„๋„ ๋ฉค๋ฒ„์‹ญ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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