Greetings & Closings for FORMAL Email Messages in English

146,307 views ・ 2016-06-09

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μ•„λž˜ μ˜λ¬Έμžλ§‰μ„ λ”λΈ”ν΄λ¦­ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄ μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ²ˆμ—­λœ μžλ§‰μ€ 기계 λ²ˆμ—­λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

00:01
[Subject:] Upcoming absence and school work
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[제λͺ©:] μ˜ˆμ •λœ 결석 및 ν•™μ—…
00:06
Read the message with me.
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저와 ν•¨κ»˜ λ©”μ‹œμ§€λ₯Ό μ½μ–΄λ³΄μ„Έμš”.
00:47
Is the relationship between the sender and the recipient clear?
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λ³΄λ‚΄λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒκ³Ό λ°›λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ˜ 관계가 λͺ…ν™•ν•©λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
00:51
It should be.
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κ·Έκ²ƒμ€ν•΄μ•Όν•œλ‹€.
00:53
This is a parent writing to a teacher,
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이것은 λΆ€λͺ¨κ°€ κ΅μ‚¬μ—κ²Œ μ“°λŠ” κΈ€
00:56
and so that's why the tone is more formal.
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μ΄λ―€λ‘œ μ–΄μ‘°κ°€ μ’€ 더 ν˜•μ‹μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:59
What exactly is making it formal?
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κ³΅μ‹μ μœΌλ‘œ λ§Œλ“œλŠ” 것이 μ •ν™•νžˆ λ¬΄μ—‡μž…λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
01:02
Well, there are no contractions.
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음, μˆ˜μΆ•μ΄ μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:05
There are full forms used.
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μ‚¬μš©λœ 전체 양식이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:07
Also, you'll see more polite and formal grammar structures.
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λ˜ν•œ 보닀 μ •μ€‘ν•˜κ³  ν˜•μ‹μ μΈ 문법 ꡬ쑰λ₯Ό 보게 될 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:12
And Christina uses higher level vocabulary.
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그리고 ChristinaλŠ” 더 높은 μˆ˜μ€€μ˜ μ–΄νœ˜λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:16
One thing Christina still needs to do is add in an appropriate greeting and closing.
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Christinaκ°€ μ—¬μ „νžˆ ν•΄μ•Ό ν•  ν•œ κ°€μ§€λŠ” μ μ ˆν•œ 인사말과 마무리λ₯Ό μΆ”κ°€ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:23
"Hello" could work.
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"μ•ˆλ…•ν•˜μ„Έμš”"κ°€ μž‘λ™ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:25
So could "Dear."
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"μΉœμ• ν•˜λŠ”"도 λ§ˆμ°¬κ°€μ§€μ˜€μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:28
Christina could end with "Sincerely,"
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ChristinaλŠ” "Sincerely"둜 끝낼 수
01:31
but I think "Regards," adds a bit of warmth.
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μžˆμ§€λ§Œ "Regards"κ°€ μ•½κ°„μ˜ λ”°λœ»ν•¨μ„ λ”ν•œλ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:37
Have you ever written a message like this?
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이런 λ©”μ‹œμ§€λ₯Ό 써 λ³Έ 적이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
01:41
Let's talk more about formal greetings and closings.
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곡식적인 인사와 λ§ˆλ¬΄λ¦¬μ— λŒ€ν•΄ 더 이야기해 λ΄…μ‹œλ‹€.
01:57
Email is used at home, at work, at school...
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이메일은 κ°€μ •μ—μ„œ, 직μž₯μ—μ„œ, ν•™κ΅μ—μ„œ μ‚¬μš©λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€...
02:02
If you're writing to a teacher or other school staff member,
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κ΅μ‚¬λ‚˜ λ‹€λ₯Έ κ΅μ§μ›μ—κ²Œ νŽΈμ§€λ₯Ό μ“°λŠ” 경우
02:06
you'll likely need a more formal tone, as you saw in the model.
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λͺ¨λΈμ—μ„œ λ³Έ κ²ƒμ²˜λŸΌ μ’€ 더 ν˜•μ‹μ μΈ μ–΄μ‘°κ°€ ν•„μš”ν•  κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:11
Here are some possible ways to start a formal email.
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곡식 이메일을 μ‹œμž‘ν•˜λŠ” λͺ‡ 가지 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ 방법은 λ‹€μŒκ³Ό κ°™μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:30
Greetings with colons are very formal.
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μ½œλ‘ μ„ μ‚¬μš©ν•œ 인사말은 맀우 ν˜•μ‹μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:33
They're used in traditional business letter writing,
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전톡적인 λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ μ„œμ‹  μž‘μ„±μ— μ‚¬μš©λ˜μ§€λ§Œ
02:36
but they aren't used often in email.
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μ΄λ©”μΌμ—λŠ” 자주 μ‚¬μš©λ˜μ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:42
"Dear Sir or Madam" is very formal.
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"μΉœμ• ν•˜λŠ” κ°ν•˜ λ˜λŠ” 뢀인"은 맀우 ν˜•μ‹μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. λˆ„κ°€ λ©”μ‹œμ§€λ₯Ό 읽을지
02:45
We use it in business email when we don't know
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λͺ¨λ₯Ό λ•Œ λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ μ΄λ©”μΌμ—μ„œ μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€
02:49
who will be reading the message.
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02:51
But if at all possible, try to get the name of the receipient
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κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ κ°€λŠ₯ν•˜λ©΄ λ°›λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ˜ 이름을 μ•Œμ•„λ‚΄μ–΄
02:55
and use it in your greeting.
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인사말에 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
02:58
Another option is "To whom it may concern:"
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또 λ‹€λ₯Έ μ˜΅μ…˜μ€ "λˆ„κ΅¬μ—κ²Œ 관심을 κ°€μ§ˆ 수 μžˆλŠ”μ§€"μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:03
This is very impersonal and not always appropriate.
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이것은 맀우 비인격적이며 항상 μ μ ˆν•œ 것은 μ•„λ‹™λ‹ˆλ‹€. 더 큰 쑰직의
03:07
I might use this greeting if I were writing to a department
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λΆ€μ„œμ— νŽΈμ§€λ₯Ό μ“Έ λ•Œ 이 인사말을 μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
03:12
of a larger organization.
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03:14
Let's look at a model.
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λͺ¨λΈμ„ μ‚΄νŽ΄λ³΄κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:20
[Subject:] Missing sign on Elm Street
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[제λͺ©:] Elm Street의 κ°„νŒ λˆ„λ½
03:38
Mr. Lee does not know who is on the receiving end.
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μ΄μ”¨λŠ” 수령인이 λˆ„κ΅¬μΈμ§€ λͺ¨λ¦…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:42
He's just sending this message to the Department of Public Works in his town.
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κ·ΈλŠ” 이 λ©”μ‹œμ§€λ₯Ό μžμ‹ μ˜ λ§ˆμ„μ— μžˆλŠ” 곡곡 사업뢀에 보내고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:47
An appropriate closing is "Sincerely."
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μ μ ˆν•œ λ§ˆλ¬΄λ¦¬λŠ” "μ§„μ‹¬μœΌλ‘œ"μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:50
It's not the friendliest closing,
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κ°€μž₯ μΉœκ·Όν•œ λ§ˆλ¬΄λ¦¬λŠ” μ•„λ‹ˆμ§€λ§Œ
03:52
but it's very polite and it's appropriate for this message.
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맀우 예의 λ°”λ₯΄κ³  이 λ©”μ‹œμ§€μ— μ ν•©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:56
Let me show you some other closings used in formal email.
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곡식 μ΄λ©”μΌμ—μ„œ μ‚¬μš©λ˜λŠ” λ‹€λ₯Έ 마무리λ₯Ό λ³΄μ—¬λ“œλ¦¬κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:14
Here are a couple tips on adding a signature
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λ‹€μŒμ€ 곡식 μ „μž 메일 λ©”μ‹œμ§€μ— μ„œλͺ…을 μΆ”κ°€ν•˜λŠ” 방법에 λŒ€ν•œ λͺ‡ 가지 νŒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€
04:17
to a formal email message.
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04:19
First, use your full name, especially if it's the first time you're contacting someone.
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λ¨Όμ €, 특히 λˆ„κ΅°κ°€μ—κ²Œ 처음으둜 μ—°λ½ν•˜λŠ” 경우 이름을 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
04:25
Second, consider using a default signature.
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λ‘˜μ§Έ, κΈ°λ³Έ μ„œλͺ…을 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ’‹μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:29
If you want to include contact information and links,
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μ—°λ½μ²˜ 정보 및 링크λ₯Ό ν¬ν•¨ν•˜λ €λŠ” 경우
04:33
the default signature is a great option because this information
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이 정보가
04:37
will be added in all outgoing messages.
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λͺ¨λ“  λ°œμ‹  λ©”μ‹œμ§€μ— μΆ”κ°€λ˜κΈ° λ•Œλ¬Έμ— κΈ°λ³Έ μ„œλͺ…은 ν›Œλ₯­ν•œ μ˜΅μ…˜μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:44
That's all for now.
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μ§€κΈˆμ€ μ—¬κΈ°κΉŒμ§€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‹œμ²­
04:45
Thanks for watching and happy studies!
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ν•΄μ£Όμ…”μ„œ κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 즐거운 κ³΅λΆ€ν•˜μ„Έμš”!
04:50
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