Get the Job Interview with the RIGHT Cover Letter | Getting a Job in the US

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2019-04-26 ใƒป Rachel's English


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Get the Job Interview with the RIGHT Cover Letter | Getting a Job in the US

43,750 views ใƒป 2019-04-26

Rachel's English


์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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A bad cover letter could prevent you from getting the job even if you've got a strong resume.
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์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๊ฐ€ ์ž˜๋ชป๋˜๋ฉด ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋”๋ผ๋„ ์ผ์ž๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์–ป์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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In this video, we sit down with three experts to figure out how to make your cover letter work for you.
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์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ๋Š” 3๋ช…์˜ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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We're going to make sure you pass into the interview process.
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๋ฉด์ ‘์ „ํ˜•์— ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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If you're one of my non-native students looking for an English lesson, at the end of the video,
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์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ œ ๋น„์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ•™์ƒ ์ค‘ ํ•œ ๋ช…์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๋น„๋””์˜ค ๋์—์„œ
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we'll go over some idioms and phrasal verbs that were used in the interviews.
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์ธํ„ฐ๋ทฐ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋œ ๊ด€์šฉ๊ตฌ์™€ ๊ตฌ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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00:27
Steve is a local small business owner who's done a lot of hiring for his company.
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Steve๋Š” ์ž์‹ ์˜ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋งŽ์€ ๊ณ ์šฉ์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•œ ์ง€์—ญ ์†Œ๊ธฐ์—… ์†Œ์œ ์ฃผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:31
He knows what he's looking for and I thought it was interesting what he saidย a cover letter does.
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๊ทธ๋Š” ์ž์‹ ์ด ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ €๋Š” ๊ทธ๊ฐ€ ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ผ์ด ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กญ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:36
In your opinion what can a cover letter do that a resume can't?
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์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๊ฐ€ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ ์ค‘ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๊ฐ€ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์ผ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์‹ญ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
00:41
A cover letter, I think it helps start a conversation and can be more personal.
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์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋Š” ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๊ณ  ๋” ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:46
The resume feels often to me like a series of your history, of your work history,
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋Š” ๋‚˜์—๊ฒŒ ์ข…์ข… ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ด๋ ฅ, ์ž‘์—… ์ด๋ ฅ์˜ ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋Š๊ปด์ง€๋ฉฐ, ์ž๊ธฐ
00:52
and the cover letter feels like, if done right, can be a good way to start a conversation,
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์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋Š” ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋ฉด ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ 
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let people know what you've done, what you've accomplished.
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์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•œ ์ผ, ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•œ ์ผ์„ ์•Œ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋Š๋‚๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ฌ์„ฑํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:02
I've never heard, heard it that way, as starting a conversation but I like the idea of that.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์—†์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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It starts a conversation it can be more personal if done right. How do you do it right?
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๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋” ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ฒŒํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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Here, I sit down with Cindy, who in her career as an executive director,
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ์ „๋ฌด์ด์‚ฌ๋กœ ์ผํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ
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has interviewed and hired literally hundreds of people.
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๋ฌธ์ž ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ˆ˜๋ฐฑ ๋ช…์˜ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์„ ์ธํ„ฐ๋ทฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณ ์šฉํ•œ Cindy์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์•‰์•„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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I think it's safe to say she's read thousands of cover letters.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋…€๊ฐ€ ์ˆ˜์ฒœ ๊ฐœ์˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์—ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•ˆ์ „ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
01:24
Thousands.
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์ˆ˜์ฒœ.
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What does she have to say about a standout cover letter?
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๋งํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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A cover letter that stands out to me is one that has been personalized for the job and for the role.
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์ €์—๊ฒŒ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋Š” ์ง์—…๊ณผ ์—ญํ• ์— ๋งž๊ฒŒ ๊ฐœ์ธํ™”๋œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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And so it's one that generally early on in the cover letter, expresses why somebody wants that job,
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์˜ ์ดˆ๊ธฐ์— ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ ์ง์—…์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:40
it's the one thing that you can't put in your resume.
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ๋„ฃ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Why?
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์™œ?
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It's a compelling question and it does feel like it's a question that leads to conversation.
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๋งค๋ ฅ์ ์ธ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด๊ณ  ๋Œ€ํ™”๋กœ ์ด์–ด์ง€๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋Š๊ปด์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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If you've spent any amount of time around a small child, you know this question gets asked a lot.
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์–ด๋ฆฐ ์•„์ด์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋‚ธ ์ ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋งŽ์ด ๋ฐ›๋Š”๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ๊ณ„์‹ค ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Why?
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์™œ?
01:56
It's how a child begins to understand his world.
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์•„์ด๊ฐ€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์„ธ๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:59
This employer is trying to understand you.
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์ด ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Why you?
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์™œ ๋„ค๊ฐ€?
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They have hundreds of people who want this job.
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์ด ์ง์—…์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์ˆ˜๋ฐฑ ๋ช…์˜ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Before writing your cover letter, sit down and ask yourself why you want the job.
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์•‰์•„์„œ ์™œ ๊ทธ ์ผ์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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Write down every idea that comes to mind.
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๋– ์˜ค๋ฅด๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ ์œผ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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It's just a brainstorming session so don't judge your own answers, just write down everything.
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๋ธŒ๋ ˆ์ธ์Šคํ† ๋ฐ ์„ธ์…˜์ผ ๋ฟ์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํŒ๋‹จํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง๊ณ  ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ ์–ด ๋‘์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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You never know what one idea will lead to.
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ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์œผ๋กœ ์ด์–ด์งˆ์ง€ ๊ฒฐ์ฝ” ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:20
Maybe, your perfect answer.
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์•„๋งˆ๋„ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ๋Œ€๋‹ต์ผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:22
Then do the same for this question.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋„ ๋˜‘๊ฐ™์ด ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:25
Why should the employer hire you?
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๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ๊ณ ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
02:27
Brainstorm without judgment.
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ํŒ๋‹จ ์—†๋Š” ๋ธŒ๋ ˆ์ธ์Šคํ† ๋ฐ.
02:29
When you're done with your brainstorms, look at your lists.
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๋ธŒ๋ ˆ์ธ์Šคํ† ๋ฐ์„ ๋งˆ์น˜๋ฉด ๋ชฉ๋ก์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๊ฐ€์žฅ
02:31
Pull the clearest, most compelling, most unique, and truest points,
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๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๊ณ , ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋…ํŠนํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ง„์‹คํ•œ ์š”์ ์„ ๋ฝ‘์•„
02:36
and write these into the beginning of your cover letter.
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์˜ ์‹œ์ž‘ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์— ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:38
Remember, a potential employer might not read your whole cover letter. Hook them at the beginning.
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์ž ์žฌ์ ์ธ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ ์ „์ฒด๋ฅผ ์ฝ์ง€ ์•Š์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Œ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ฒ˜์Œ์— ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:44
I sat down with a career advisor, who stressed that what you really want to focus on
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๋‚˜๋Š” ์ง„๋กœ ์ƒ๋‹ด๊ฐ€์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์•‰์•˜๋Š”๋ฐ, ๊ทธ๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ง„์ •์œผ๋กœ ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฒƒ์€
02:49
is answering the question why an employer would want you. She has specific advice on how to do this.
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๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€๋‹ตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๊ฐ•์กฐํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ์ด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:55
Make a case for yourself.
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์ž์‹ ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:57
She talks here about students who are just starting their careers,
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ์ด์ œ ๋ง‰ ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ
03:00
but this definitely applies to any cover letter for any job,
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ง์—…์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ์ ์šฉ๋˜๋ฉฐ
03:04
and also relating that to your resume that you've worked so hard on.
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๋˜ํ•œ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์—ด์‹ฌํžˆ ์ผํ•œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:08
Laura, do you have any advice on how to help students put together the best cover letter and resume possible,
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Laura, ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ํ•œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋„๋ก ๋•๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์กฐ์–ธ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
03:13
especially if they're just starting out with their career and don't have much experience?
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ํŠนํžˆ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์ด์ œ ๋ง‰ ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ๊ณ  ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ๋งŽ์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์— ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
03:19
You need to think about what the employer wants and then you have to make a case for yourself.
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๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋ณธ ๋‹ค์Œ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์ฃผ์žฅ์„ ์„ธ์›Œ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:23
So don't expect the employer to
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€
03:26
interpret your resume the way you want to interpret it, or to
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ํ•ด์„ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
03:29
read a cover letter the way that you want them to read it.
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๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
03:32
You have to connect the dots for them and make a case for why you're the best candidate for the position.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ ๋“ค์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์™œ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ ์ž๋ฆฌ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ํ›„๋ณด์ธ์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:37
That means that you're doing a lot of targeting for that particular position.
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์ด๋Š” ํŠน์ • ์œ„์น˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋งŽ์€ ํƒ€๊ฒŸํŒ…์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Œ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:42
And when I say targeting, I mean you are changing your resume to use certain keywords that
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํƒ€๊ฒŸํŒ…์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ง๋ฌด ์„ค๋ช…์— ๋งž๋Š” ํŠน์ • ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋„๋ก ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:47
would fit with the job description.
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03:49
You are shifting things around in your resume so that the most important things are at the top.
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๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋งจ ์œ„์— ์˜ค๋„๋ก ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ด๋™ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์•ฝ 30์ดˆ๋ฅผ ์†Œ์š”ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—
03:55
You're shifting things around so that anything that is relevant rises to the top half of your resume
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๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์˜ ์ƒ๋‹จ ์ ˆ๋ฐ˜์œผ๋กœ ์˜ฌ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋„๋ก ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ์ด๋™ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
04:00
because employers typically spend around thirty seconds on a resume.
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04:04
There's just no time at all, so there has to be something that catches their eye and rules them in further.
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์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ „ํ˜€ ์—†๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ์‹œ์„ ์„ ์‚ฌ๋กœ์žก๊ณ  ๋” ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์ง€๋ฐฐํ•  ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:09
And then in a cover letter, even more so, you're connecting the dots.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋” ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€ ์ ๋“ค์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:13
So you're taking the experiences that you have that are most relevant from your resume
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๊ด€๋ จ์„ฑ์ด ๋†’์€ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ์„ ํƒ
04:18
and you're highlighting them in a cover letter,
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ ๊ฐ•์กฐ
04:20
and you're explaining why that experience prepares you for this particular position.
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ์ด ํŠน์ • ์ง์ฑ…์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:25
I think one of the biggest challenges students face is that they try to explain why they want the job
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์ œ ์ƒ๊ฐ์— ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด ์ง๋ฉดํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํฐ ๋„์ „ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š” ์™œ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๊ทธ ์ง์—…์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅ
04:30
and focus more on that than why they're qualified for the job.
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ์™œ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๊ทธ ์ง์—…์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž๊ฒฉ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€๋ณด๋‹ค ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์— ๋” ์ดˆ์ ์„ ๋งž์ถ”๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
04:33
Interesting.
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ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กœ์šด.
04:34
Employers may care, most employers do care why you want it,
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๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋Š” ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๊ฐ€์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋Š” ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๊ฐ–์ง€๋งŒ
04:38
but not nearly as much as what you can do for me as an employer.
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๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋กœ์„œ ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋งŒํผ์€ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:41
So focusing more on what I have to offer and showing them what that is rather than just telling them.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋” ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹จ์ง€ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:48
So don't tell me as an employer "I have good communication skills".
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋กœ์„œ ์ €์—๊ฒŒ "์ €๋Š” ์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
04:52
I can read that through your bullets in your resume.
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์˜ ๊ธ€ ๋จธ๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ฝ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:54
Tell me what you did that proves that you have good community skills.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ข‹์€ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฆ๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•œ ์ผ์„ ๋งํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
04:58
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04:59
So I think making that case for yourself by showing examples and not just telling me is very important.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ œ๊ฒŒ ๋ง๋งŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์—ฌ์คŒ์œผ๋กœ์จ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ๊ทธ ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:05
I love the point that you don't want to leave it up to interpretation.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ•ด์„์— ๋งก๊ธฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:09
You want your cover letter to be crystal clear with examples.
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ์˜ˆ์ œ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:12
Think about the number one thing you want this person to know about you.
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์ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์•Œ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋Š” ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
05:16
Get really specific.
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์ •๋ง ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:18
Have an example why do they want you.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๋‹จ์ง€
05:21
Don't just list qualities, list examples that support those qualities.
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์ž์งˆ์„ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ž์งˆ์„ ์ง€์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
05:26
What makes a bad cover letter?
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๋‚˜์œ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
05:27
And what do you do if English isn't your first language?
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์˜์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ชจ๊ตญ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์‹œ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
05:31
What stands out on the bad side is something that says "to whom this concerns", or some generic start,
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๋‚˜์œ ์ธก๋ฉด์—์„œ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ "์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๋˜๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์‹œ์ž‘,
05:39
and then something that has clearly not been personalized for this role in any way whatsoever like,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ๋“  ์ด ์—ญํ• ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ๊ฐœ์ธํ™”๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฒƒ,
05:46
or worse, it actually has a different job written in it.
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๋˜๋Š” ๋” ๋‚˜์œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ง์—…์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์— ์“ฐ์—ฌ์กŒ๋‹ค.
05:49
>> That hasn't been changed yet. >> Oh, gosh. Okay, like a copy and paste error.
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>> ์•„์ง ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. >> ์˜ค ์ด๋Ÿฐ. ์ข‹์•„, ๋ณต์‚ฌ ๋ฐ ๋ถ™์—ฌ๋„ฃ๊ธฐ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ.
05:52
Correct.
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05:52
The other thing you're looking for in a cover letter and the resume is, can somebody write
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์˜ณ์€.
๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์—์„œ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€
05:56
in a way that is compelling, that has no errors, that is clean.
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์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๊ณ , ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๊ณ , ๊น”๋”ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š๋ƒ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:01
Like you are looking at the writing, but that's not going to get you a job, it is going to
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ธ€์„ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ์ง์—…์„ ์ฃผ์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๊ณ 
06:06
potentially not get you an interview, right?
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์ž ์žฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฉด์ ‘์„ ์ฃผ์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค, ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ฃ ?
06:09
But the content is important as to like why do you want this job, what's compelling to you about this?
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋Š” ์™œ ์ด ์ง์—…์„ ์›ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€, ์ด๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ๋งค๋ ฅ์ ์ธ ์ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€์™€ ๊ฐ™์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:14
What if the content was great and the grammar wasn't perfect?
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๋‚ด์šฉ์€ ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ด ์™„๋ฒฝํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๋ฉด?
06:21
It depends a little bit on the job and how unperfect it is.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ง์—…๊ณผ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ๋ถˆ์™„์ „ํ•œ๊ฐ€์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:26
So if it's really poor grammar consistently through,
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ด ์ผ๊ด€๋˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜•ํŽธ์—†๋‹ค๋ฉด
06:30
I think it's unlikely that somebody's going to get an interview.
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ์ธํ„ฐ๋ทฐ๋ฅผ ํ•  ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ์€ ํฌ๋ฐ•ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:33
So that part is really important.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ทธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ์ •๋ง ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:35
What if it's a non-native speaker?
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์›์–ด๋ฏผ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๋ฉด?
06:37
Like is there an allowance for that, would you say?
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ˆ˜๋‹น์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋งํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
06:41
It depends on the job.
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์ง์—…์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:43
So it depends on: does this person need to produce writing that has no grammar mistakes for their job?
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค์Œ์— ๋‹ฌ๋ ค ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์—…๋ฌด์— ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š” ๊ธ€์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
06:48
In which case, it's unlikely.
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์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ์ด ๋‚ฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:50
If this is a role in which being a bilingual person is a part of the requirements, then yes I think there there's room.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์ด์ค‘ ์–ธ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์š”๊ตฌ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€์ธ ์—ญํ• ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๋„ค, ์—ฌ์ง€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:58
But it depends.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:59
And it depends on like, is this a role where there's no writing involved at all?
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋‹ฌ๋ ค ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธ€์ด ์ „ํ˜€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ ์—ญํ• ์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
07:02
Right.
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์˜ค๋ฅธ์ชฝ.
07:03
Then I think there's a lot more allowance for that.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ์—ฌ์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์ƒ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”.
07:05
A lot of the jobs that Iโ€™ve hired for are jobs that require writing for the part of it, and knowing that you're not,
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ณ ์šฉํ•œ ๋งŽ์€ ์ง์—…์€ ๊ทธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ธ€์„ ์จ์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ง์—…์ด๊ณ 
07:13
you know, good in editing and mistakes. But Iโ€™ve also hired for several bilingual positions,
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ํŽธ์ง‘๊ณผ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Šฅ์ˆ™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋˜ํ•œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ์ด์ค‘ ์–ธ์–ด ์ง์ฑ…์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ณ ์šฉํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ
07:18
and in which case, I do think there's more allowance for sure.
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์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ์ˆ˜๋‹น์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
07:22
Or, so you're saying if it's a job where they're going to be relying much more on
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์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ์ง์ ‘ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์™€ ๊ตฌ๋‘๋กœ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ์˜์กดํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ง์—…์ด๋ผ๋ฉด
07:27
speaking verbally with somebody in person, writing doesn't matter as much, then...
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ๋‹ค์ง€ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๋ฉด...
07:31
It doesn't matter as much, I think it's, it's tricky, it's worth getting your cover letter and your resume
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๋ณ„๋กœ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊นŒ๋‹ค๋กญ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ
07:36
reviewed by a native English speaker.
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์˜์–ด ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ฒ€ํ† ๋ฐ›์„ ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:39
Because you don't have the ability to do a first impression at that point in person.
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๊ทธ ์‹œ์ ์—์„œ ์ง์ ‘ ์ฒซ์ธ์ƒ์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ์—†๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:44
And so if you're looking at tons of letters, those things do matter.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ ๊ธ€์ž๋ฅผ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:48
And they do, I mean, I do think there are allowances depending on the on the job but ultimately,
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์ œ ๋ง์€, ์ง์—…์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์ˆ˜๋‹น์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ถ๊ทน์ ์œผ๋กœ
07:53
like that also shows your attention to detail, it shows your thoroughness, like
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ 
07:57
your ability to find somebody to review it for you,
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๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ
08:02
and the fact that you did that, all of that matters, and it's going to show in your cover letter, your resume.
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๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ฒ ์ €ํ•จ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค, ๊ทธ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:07
Yeah, I totally agree.
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๋„ค, ์ „์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋™์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:08
It's like, how much effort did this person put into it? That's part of what you're looking for.
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์ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ๋งŽ์€ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์„ ๊ธฐ์šธ์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ฐพ๊ณ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:12
So make sure you're writing the cover letter specific to the job.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ž‘์—…์— ํŠน์ •ํ•œ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
08:16
Look at the job description as you're writing. Make sure you're making a case for yourself on the actual skills
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์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ ์ž‘์—… ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ํ•ด๋‹น ์ง์ฑ…์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ๊ณผ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค
08:21
and experience they want for that position.
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08:24
And whether you're a native speaker of English or not, ask someone to proofread it for you.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์˜์–ด ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์ด๋“  ์•„๋‹ˆ๋“  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ต์ •์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
08:30
They can look for things like typos and grammar mistakes,
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์˜คํƒ€ ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฐพ์„ ์ˆ˜
08:33
but then they can all so tell you if something isn't clear.
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์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๋ชจ๋‘ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:35
They can say I don't understand what you mean by this.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ”๋ฅผ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:38
Then you'll want to change the wording.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:40
You want to make sure the person reading your cover letter knows exactly what you mean.
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ฝ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ”๋ฅผ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:45
If you're in college, visit the career center for advice.
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๋Œ€ํ•™์— ๋‹ค๋‹ˆ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ง„๋กœ ์„ผํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜์—ฌ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ๊ตฌํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
08:48
I have a feeling they have resources for you, people who can help you do your cover letter or resume.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ž์›, ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ
08:53
What do you do with your cover letter if you're just starting out?
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๋ง‰ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋กœ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
08:57
You don't have much experience to draw from.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๋ฆด ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ๋งŽ์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:00
And then for a student that has very little experience, you can highlight all kinds of things.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ๊ฑฐ์˜ ์—†๋Š” ํ•™์ƒ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:06
So a lot of students will only think about work experience as relevant to a resume.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋งŽ์€ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ์—…๋ฌด ๊ฒฝํ—˜๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:11
But most students have some kind of volunteer experience, or they've had a summer job,
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์€ ์–ด๋–ค ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ์ž์› ๋ด‰์‚ฌ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์—ฌ๋ฆ„ ์ผ์„ ํ–ˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
09:16
or they did an independent project somehow, they tutored a friend's child, they babysat.
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์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ๋“  ๋…๋ฆฝ์ ์ธ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ–ˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์นœ๊ตฌ์˜ ์ž๋…€๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์•„๊ธฐ ๋Œ๋ณด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:25
So anything that you can pull out of your experience and relate some of your transferable skills,
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์—์„œ ๋Œ์–ด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์–‘๋„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ  ์ค‘ ์ผ๋ถ€์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ์‹œํ‚ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ,
09:33
which transferable skills are skills that you may have gained in babysitting,
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์–‘๋„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์€ ์•„๊ธฐ ๋Œ๋ณด๊ธฐ์—์„œ ์Šต๋“ํ–ˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด๋ฉฐ
09:38
and aren't directly related to doing administrative work in a law firm, but there may be some connection.
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๋ฒ•๋ฅ  ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ ์—…๋ฌด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ์ง์ ‘ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์—†์ง€๋งŒ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ.
09:45
So it's how you frame it and again, making a case for why it's relevant to the position.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ‹€์— ๋งž์ถ”๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ์™œ ๊ทธ ์œ„์น˜์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:51
Frame it.
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์•ก์ž์— ๋„ฃ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:52
Think of important past experience and what skills you needed or developed in that experience.
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์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ๊ฒฝํ—˜๊ณผ ๊ทธ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์—์„œ ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
09:58
Then do what we've already said.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฏธ ๋งํ•œ ๋Œ€๋กœ ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
10:00
Get specific about those skills with examples, and write them into your cover letter.
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ํ•ด๋‹น ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
10:05
Taking time and carefully writing your best cover letter and resume
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์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ์‹ ์ค‘ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋ฉด
10:08
will give you the best chance of landing an interview.
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๋ฉด์ ‘ ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:11
In the next videos in this course, we'll go over how to prepare for the job interview.
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์ด ๊ณผ์ •์˜ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ทจ์—… ๋ฉด์ ‘์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:16
There are real and concrete things you can do to prepare and impress that will make a difference.
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์ฐจ์ด๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ๋™์„ ์ฃผ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํ˜„์‹ค์ ์ด๊ณ  ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์ผ๋“ค์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:21
If you don't do them, the interviewer will notice and will likely not choose you for the position.
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด ๋ฉด์ ‘๊ด€์ด ๋ˆˆ์น˜์ฑ„๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ๊ทธ ์ž๋ฆฌ์— ์„ ํƒํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:27
For my non-native students, we're going to get to your English lesson in just a minute.
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์ œ ๋น„์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‹จ 1๋ถ„ ๋งŒ์— ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐˆ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:32
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์•„์ง ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ์…จ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ตฌ๋… ๋ฒ„ํŠผ๊ณผ ์•Œ๋ฆผ ๋ฒจ์„ ๊ผญ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
10:36
I make new videos on the English language and American culture every Tuesday,
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์ €๋Š” ๋งค์ฃผ ํ™”์š”์ผ ์˜์–ด์™€ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ๋ฌธํ™”์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋น„๋””์˜ค๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ 
10:41
and have over 600 videos on my channel to date
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์ œ ์ฑ„๋„์—๋Š” ํ˜„์žฌ๊นŒ์ง€
10:43
focusing on listening comprehension, and accent reduction.
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๋“ฃ๊ธฐ ์ดํ•ด์™€ ์–ต์–‘ ๊ฐ์†Œ์— ์ดˆ์ ์„ ๋งž์ถ˜ 600๊ฐœ ์ด์ƒ์˜ ๋น„๋””์˜ค๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:47
While you're waiting for next week's video, a great next step would be to check out this get started playlist.
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๋‹ค์Œ ์ฃผ ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋Š” ์ด ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์žฌ์ƒ๋ชฉ๋ก์„ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:53
Now, let's go over some of the idioms and phrasal verbs you heard in these interviewsย today.
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์ด์ œ ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ด ์ธํ„ฐ๋ทฐ์—์„œ ๋“ค์€ ์ˆ™์–ด์™€ ๊ตฌ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:58
Laura used two phrases.
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Laura๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:59
"Connect the dots" and "make the case".
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"์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ" ๋ฐ "์‚ฌ๋ก€ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ".
11:02
Connecting the dots literally is an exercise that children do to practice fine motor skills
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๋ง ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ ์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์•„์ด๋“ค์ด ์†Œ๊ทผ์œก ์šด๋™ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ์—ฐ์Šต
11:08
and following numbers in a sequence.
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ˆœ์„œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ˆซ์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:10
But in an idiom, that means to see the bigger picture from details, or to relate one idea to another.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๊ด€์šฉ๊ตฌ์—์„œ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์—์„œ ๋” ํฐ ๊ทธ๋ฆผ์„ ๋ณด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด์™€ ์—ฐ๊ด€์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:16
Let's listen to how Laura used it.
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Laura๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋“ค์–ด๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
11:18
So don't expect the employer to
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€
11:21
interpret your resume the way you want it interpreted or
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์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์„ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
11:24
to read a cover letter the way that you want them to read it.
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๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค .
11:26
You have to connect the dots for them and make a case for why you're the best candidate for the position.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ ๋“ค์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์™œ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ ์ž๋ฆฌ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ํ›„๋ณด์ธ์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:31
She said 'you have to connect the dots for them',
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” '๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ ๋“ค์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค'๊ณ  ๋งํ–ˆ๊ณ ,
11:34
don't leave it up to the employer to figure out how your experience relates to what they want.
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ด€๋ จ๋˜๋Š”์ง€ ์•Œ์•„๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ์—๊ฒŒ ๋งก๊ธฐ์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
11:39
Connect the dots for them.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ ๋“ค์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
11:40
Make those connections clear yourself and not open to interpretation.
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์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์„ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๊ณ  ํ•ด์„์— ๊ฐœ๋ฐฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
11:44
She also said 'make the case for'.
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ๋˜ํ•œ '์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋ผ'๊ณ  ๋งํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:47
This phrase means to convince someone of something, to give you reasons,
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์ด ๊ด€์šฉ๊ตฌ๋Š” ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ํ™•์‹ ์‹œํ‚ค๋‹ค, ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋‹ค,
11:51
to make a strong argument for someone to choose something. In this example,
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๋„๋ก ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•œ ์ฃผ์žฅ์„ ํŽผ์นœ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์˜ˆ์—์„œ
11:55
you're making the case for an employer to hire you.
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๊ท€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ๊ท€ํ•˜๋ฅผ ๊ณ ์šฉํ•˜๋„๋ก ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:58
You're convincing that person that they want to choose you out of all of the applicants.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์ง€์›์ž ์ค‘์—์„œ ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๊ทธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์„ค๋“ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:02
Let's listen to Lauraโ€™s example one more time.
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Laura์˜ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๋” ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:05
So don't expect the employer to
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€
12:08
interpret your resume the way you want it interpreted or
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์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์„ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
12:11
to read a cover letter the way that you want them to read it.
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๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค .
12:14
You have to connect the dots for them and make a case for why you're the best candidate for the position.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ ๋“ค์„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์™œ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ ์ž๋ฆฌ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ํ›„๋ณด์ธ์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:19
Cindy and I both used the phrasal verb 'to stand out'.
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Cindy์™€ ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค 'to stand out'์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:23
What makes the cover letter stand out for you?
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
12:25
A cover letter that stands out to me is one that has been personalized for the job and for the role.
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์ €์—๊ฒŒ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋Š” ์ง์—…๊ณผ ์—ญํ• ์— ๋งž๊ฒŒ ๊ฐœ์ธํ™”๋œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:31
Can you tell what it means?
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
12:32
It means to separate from something.
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๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌ๋œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:34
In this case, all the other applicants.
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์ด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ง€์›์ž.
12:36
You want to stand out from all the other applicants because you want the job, you want them to notice you.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ์ง์—…์„ ์›ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์ฃผ๋ชฉํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ง€์›์ž๋“ค๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:42
But maybe there are times when you don't want to be noticed.
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ฃผ๋ชฉ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๋•Œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:44
You just want to blend in.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์„ž์ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๋ฟ์ด์—์š”.
12:46
Then you could say I don't want to stand out, I just want to be like everyone else.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๋ฟ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:51
Let's listen to the example one more time.
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์˜ˆ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด์ž.
12:54
What makes the cover letter stand out for you?
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
12:57
A cover letter that stands out to me is one that has been personalized for the job and for the role.
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์ €์—๊ฒŒ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋„๋Š” ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋Š” ์ง์—…๊ณผ ์—ญํ• ์— ๋งž๊ฒŒ ๊ฐœ์ธํ™”๋œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:02
Later, Cindy used the word 'tons' idiomatically.
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๋‚˜์ค‘์— Cindy๋Š” 'tons'๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ด€์šฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:05
If you're looking at tons of letters, those things do matter.
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์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ ๊ธ€์ž๋ฅผ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:09
A ton is 2,000 pounds.
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1ํ†ค์€ 2,000ํŒŒ์šด๋“œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:11
So, Cindy said if you're looking at tons of letters, meaning cover letters,
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ Cindy๋Š” ํ‘œ์ง€ ๊ธ€์ž๋ฅผ ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š” ์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ ๊ธ€์ž๋ฅผ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด
13:15
of course she doesn't literally mean she's weighed the letters. She means a lot, many, many, many.
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๋ฌธ์ž ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ๊ธ€์ž์˜ ๋ฌด๊ฒŒ๋ฅผ ์žฐ๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๋Š” ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ๋งŽ์ด, ๋งŽ์ด, ๋งŽ์ด, ๋งŽ์ด ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:21
This is how we use this word; it has nothing to do with physical weight, but rather, quantity.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ๋ฌด๊ฒŒ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์ˆ˜๋Ÿ‰๊ณผ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:26
For example, I get tons of emails every day.
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋งค์ผ ์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ฐ›์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:29
Another way I could have said that was "I get a ton of emails every day".
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋˜ ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ "๋งค์ผ ๋งŽ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ฐ›์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค"์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:33
'A ton ofโ€™ and 'tons of' mean the same thing.
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'ํ†ค ์˜ค๋ธŒ'์™€ 'ํ†ค ์˜ค๋ธŒ'๋Š” ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:37
They can be used interchangeably.
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์„œ๋กœ ๋ฐ”๊ฟ”์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:39
Don't be afraid to use these expressions in your own everyday English.
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ผ์ƒ ์˜์–ด์—์„œ ์ด ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‘๋ ค์›Œํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
13:43
That's it and thanks so much for using Rachelโ€™s English.
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์ด์ƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Rachel์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:48
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์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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