Writing in English: Replying to Business & Personal Emails - JenniferESL

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μ•„λž˜ μ˜λ¬Έμžλ§‰μ„ λ”λΈ”ν΄λ¦­ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄ μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ²ˆμ—­λœ μžλ§‰μ€ 기계 λ²ˆμ—­λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

00:01
There are two basic kinds of messages.
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두 가지 κΈ°λ³Έ μ’…λ₯˜μ˜ λ©”μ‹œμ§€κ°€ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:04
Either you send an initial email, or you reply to one.
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초기 이메일을 λ³΄λ‚΄κ±°λ‚˜ νšŒμ‹ ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:08
Let's take a look at a reply in a work-related situation.
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업무와 κ΄€λ ¨λœ μƒν™©μ—μ„œ νšŒμ‹ μ„ μ‚΄νŽ΄λ³΄μž.
00:16
Earlier Vance wrote a message to Evan.
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이전에 VanceλŠ” Evanμ—κ²Œ λ©”μ‹œμ§€λ₯Ό μΌμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:18
And he asked Evan to confirm a meeting for that following Monday.
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그리고 κ·ΈλŠ” Evanμ—κ²Œ κ·Έ λ‹€μŒ μ›”μš”μΌ 회의λ₯Ό 확인해달라고 μš”μ²­ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:23
Now Evan is replying.
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이제 μ—λ°˜μ΄ λŒ€λ‹΅ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:26
We writes:
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μš°λ¦¬λŠ” λ‹€μŒκ³Ό 같이 μ”λ‹ˆλ‹€:
00:53
Remember to keep the same subject heading on the same thread.
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λ™μΌν•œ μŠ€λ ˆλ“œμ—μ„œ λ™μΌν•œ 주제 제λͺ©μ„ μœ μ§€ν•˜λŠ” 것을 κΈ°μ–΅ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
00:57
That's a series of replies on one subject.
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ν•˜λ‚˜μ˜ μ£Όμ œμ— λŒ€ν•œ 일련의 λ‹΅λ³€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:00
You can add to it, but changing the subject heading completely can create confusion.
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μΆ”κ°€ν•  수 μžˆμ§€λ§Œ 제λͺ© 제λͺ©μ„ μ™„μ „νžˆ λ³€κ²½ν•˜λ©΄ ν˜Όλž€μ΄ 생길 β€‹β€‹μˆ˜ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:09
This message is brief and to the point.
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이 λ©”μ‹œμ§€λŠ” κ°„λ‹¨ν•˜κ³  μš”μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:12
The most important information is given immediately.
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κ°€μž₯ μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ •λ³΄λŠ” μ¦‰μ‹œ μ œκ³΅λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:16
And yet Evan took the time to be polite.
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κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ Evan은 μ •μ€‘ν•˜κ²Œ μ‹œκ°„μ„ λ³΄λƒˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:20
He wrote an appropriate "thank you" and included a pleasantry.
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κ·ΈλŠ” μ μ ˆν•œ "κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€"λ₯Ό 썼고 μœ μΎŒν•¨μ„ ν¬ν•¨ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:26
This message is good to go.
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이 λ©”μ‹œμ§€λŠ” μ’‹μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:41
Replying to a business email in some ways is easier than starting a discussion via email.
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μ–΄λ–€ λ©΄μ—μ„œλŠ” λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ 이메일에 νšŒμ‹ ν•˜λŠ” 것이 이메일을 톡해 토둠을 μ‹œμž‘ν•˜λŠ” 것보닀 μ‰½μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:47
The first person sets the tone.
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첫 번째 μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ 톀을 μ„€μ •ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:50
So if you're replying to a message, most of the time you can use the same tone that the sender uses.
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λ”°λΌμ„œ λ©”μ‹œμ§€μ— νšŒμ‹ ν•˜λŠ” 경우 λŒ€λΆ€λΆ„μ˜ 경우 보낸 μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” 것과 λ™μΌν•œ μ–΄μ‘°λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:57
If they're friendly, you can be friendly.
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그듀이 μΉœν•˜λ©΄ μΉœν•΄μ§ˆ 수 μžˆλ‹€.
02:00
If they're formal, you can be formal.
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ν˜•μ‹μ μ΄λΌλ©΄ ν˜•μ‹μ μΌ 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:06
Here are some useful expressions you can use in a reply.
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λ‹€μŒμ€ λ‹΅μž₯에 μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” λͺ‡ 가지 μœ μš©ν•œ ν‘œν˜„μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:24
Let's take a look at another model.
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λ‹€λ₯Έ λͺ¨λΈμ„ μ‚΄νŽ΄λ³΄κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:27
This one will be slightly less formal.
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이것은 μ•½κ°„ 덜 ν˜•μ‹μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:32
Here's another message to Evan.
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λ‹€μŒμ€ Evanμ—κ²Œ λ³΄λ‚΄λŠ” 또 λ‹€λ₯Έ λ©”μ‹œμ§€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:34
It's about a reference.
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참쑰에 κ΄€ν•œ κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:06
Can you predict how Evan will respond?
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Evan이 μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ λ°˜μ‘ν• μ§€ μ˜ˆμΈ‘ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
04:12
Let's take a look at the reply.
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λ‹΅μž₯을 μ‚΄νŽ΄λ³΄μž.
04:16
Evan replies:
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Evan이 λŒ€λ‹΅ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:41
What's good about Evan's message?
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Evan의 λ©”μ‹œμ§€μ—μ„œ 쒋은 점은 λ¬΄μ—‡μž…λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
04:45
He used the same subject heading in his reply.
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κ·ΈλŠ” λ‹΅μž₯에 같은 제λͺ©μ„ μ‚¬μš©ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:49
He kept the same friendly tone.
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κ·ΈλŠ” 같은 μΉœκ·Όν•œ μ–΄μ‘°λ₯Ό μœ μ§€ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:54
And this message is brief with a clear purpose.
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그리고 이 λ©”μ‹œμ§€λŠ” λͺ…ν™•ν•œ λͺ©μ μ„ 가진 κ°„κ²°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:04
That's all for now. Thanks for watching and happy studies!
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μ§€κΈˆμ€ μ—¬κΈ°κΉŒμ§€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‹œμ²­ν•΄μ£Όμ…”μ„œ κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 즐거운 κ³΅λΆ€ν•˜μ„Έμš”!
05:11
Remember to visit www.englishwithjennifer.com for more practice.
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