Learn Useful Phrases for Email Inquiries - English Writing Skills

66,597 views ・ 2016-11-10

English with Jennifer


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Sometimes a business website doesn't answer all your questions.
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That's why they have a Contact Us button, right?
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So you want to make an inquiry,
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but you may not know who exactly is on the receiving end.
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What can you write in your message?
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Let's take a look at one possible model.
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Subject: Piano rentals
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A message like this doesn't have to be overly formal.
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A simple "Hello" is fine.
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You might even choose to skip the closing
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and just add your name at the end, like Helen did.
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Some might even choose not to add their name.
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In any case, this message is good to go,
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so Helen can click "Send."
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Here are some other ways to start an inquiry.
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We'll start with very polite wording
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and then become more informal.
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Using contractions is fine if you think a more informal tone is appropriate.
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Of course, inquiries among coworkers would sound more relaxed and friendly.
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Let's take a look at a couple models.
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Remember that informal email tends to be very brief.
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Pleasantries are kept to a minimum,
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and the sender may not even use full sentences.
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I hope seeing a model or two helps you understand
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just how informal we can be without losing the basic structure of a message.
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Here's our final model.
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A message to a new contact.
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Terry's message sound very friendly,
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but he isn't overly demanding.
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Look at the words and expressions he uses to soften his tone.
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Without these words and expressions,
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his message would sound too forceful.
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He'd likely come across as being pushy.
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That's all for now. Thanks for watching and happy studies!
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