5 Tips for University Applications: Essays, Letters, Statements, etc.

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ไธ‹ใฎ่‹ฑ่ชžๅญ—ๅน•ใ‚’ใƒ€ใƒ–ใƒซใ‚ฏใƒชใƒƒใ‚ฏใ™ใ‚‹ใจๅ‹•็”ปใ‚’ๅ†็”Ÿใงใใพใ™ใ€‚ ็ฟป่จณใ•ใ‚ŒใŸๅญ—ๅน•ใฏๆฉŸๆขฐ็ฟป่จณใงใ™ใ€‚

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Hi everybody, welcome to www.engvid.com, I'm Adam.
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Today's video is mostly targeting people who are going to be applying to universities in
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ไปŠๆ—ฅใฎใƒ“ใƒ‡ใ‚ชใฏไธปใซใ€่‹ฑ่ชžๅœใฎๅคงๅญฆใซๅ‡บ้ก˜ใ—ใ‚ˆใ†ใจใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไบบใ€…ใ‚’ๅฏพ่ฑกใจใ—ใฆใ„
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English-speaking countries; Canada, US, UK, Australia, New Zealand, but also some other
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ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใ‚ซใƒŠใƒ€ใ€็ฑณๅ›ฝใ€่‹ฑๅ›ฝใ€ ใ‚ชใƒผใ‚นใƒˆใƒฉใƒชใ‚ขใ€ใƒ‹ใƒฅใƒผใ‚ธใƒผใƒฉใƒณใƒ‰ใ ใ‘ใงใชใใ€ๅŒๆง˜ใฎ็”ณ่ซ‹ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ปใ‚น
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countries that have English-based schools that have a similar application process.
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ใ‚’ๆŒใค่‹ฑ่ชžใƒ™ใƒผใ‚นใฎๅญฆๆ กใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ไป–ใฎๅ›ฝใ‚‚ๅซใพใ‚Œ ใพใ™ใ€‚
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Now, those of you who are applying to these schools, especially graduate schools, but
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ใ•ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎ ๅญฆๆ กใ€็‰นใซๅคงๅญฆ้™ขใ€
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even undergraduate schools, you understand that the application process includes a sample
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ใ•ใ‚‰ใซใฏๅญฆ้ƒจ ใซๅ‡บ้ก˜ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹็š†ใ•ใ‚“ใฏใ€ๅ‡บ้ก˜ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ปใ‚นใซใ‚ตใƒณใƒ—ใƒซใƒฉใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒณใ‚ฐใŒๅซใพใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’็†่งฃใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™
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writing.
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Now, every school will have their own requirements, the things that they want from you, but all
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ใ•ใฆใ€ใ™ในใฆใฎๅญฆๆ กใซใฏ็‹ฌ่‡ชใฎ ่ฆไปถใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใซๆฑ‚ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใฎใงใ™ใŒใ€ใ™ในใฆ
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of them will have general basics that you need to send, and all the things I'm going
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ใฎๅญฆๆ กใซใฏใ€้€ไฟกใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ไธ€่ˆฌ็š„ใชๅŸบๆœฌไบ‹้ …ใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
00:50
to talk about today apply to any of the things that you're going to need to write.
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ไปŠๆ—ฅใŠ่ฉฑใ—ใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใฏใ™ในใฆใ€ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใชใ‚‚ใฎใซใ‚‚ๅฝ“ใฆใฏใพใ‚Šใพใ™ ใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆ›ธใๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ ใ‚ใ†ใ“ใจใ€‚
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So, first, what are the types of things you're going to need to write as part of your university
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ใงใฏใ€ใพใšใ€ๅคงๅญฆใฎๅ‡บ้ก˜ๆ›ธ้กžใฎไธ€้ƒจใจใ—ใฆใ€ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใชใ‚‚ใฎ ใ‚’ๆ›ธใๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใฎ
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application?
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ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹?
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Some schools will ask for a personal statement, others will ask for a statement of purpose,
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ไธ€้ƒจใฎๅญฆๆ กใฏๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Ž ใ‚’ๆฑ‚ใ‚ใพใ™ใŒใ€ไป–ใฎๅญฆๆ กใฏ็›ฎ็š„ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ€
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especially graduate schools, or a letter of intent.
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็‰นใซๅคงๅญฆ้™ขใ€ ใพใŸใฏ่ถฃๆ„ๆ›ธใ‚’ๆฑ‚ใ‚ใพใ™ใ€‚
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A statement of purpose and a letter of intent are essentially the same thing, okay?
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่ถฃๆ—จ่ชฌๆ˜Žๆ›ธใจ ่ถฃๆ„ๆ›ธใฏๅŸบๆœฌ็š„ใซๅŒใ˜ใ‚‚ใฎใงใ™ใ‚ˆใญ๏ผŸ
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Some will ask for a cover letter, just like you're applying for a job, you send a cover
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ไป•ไบ‹ใซๅฟœๅ‹Ÿใ™ใ‚‹ใจใใจๅŒใ˜ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒใ‚ซใƒใƒผ ใƒฌใ‚ฟใƒผใ‚’้€ใ‚‹ใจ
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letter, they want a cover letter with your application.
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ใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใฎใ‚ขใƒ—ใƒชใ‚ฑใƒผใ‚ทใƒงใƒณใซใ‚ซใƒใƒผ ใƒฌใ‚ฟใƒผใ‚’ๆฑ‚ใ‚ใพใ™ใ€‚
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This is more similar to the personal statement.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใฏ ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใซไผผใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
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Some of them will just give you supplementary essays, so a lot of the applications will
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ไธ€้ƒจใฎๅคงๅญฆใฏ่ฃœ่ถณ็š„ใชใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใฎใฟใ‚’ๆไพ›ใ™ใ‚‹ ใŸใ‚ใ€ๅคšใใฎใ‚ขใƒ—ใƒชใ‚ฑใƒผใ‚ทใƒงใƒณใซ
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have an essay question, or they'll automatically ask for a personal statement, and then each
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ใฏใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใฎ่ณชๅ•ใŒๅซใพใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ€่‡ชๅ‹•็š„ใซ ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚’ๆฑ‚ใ‚ใ‚‰ใ‚Œใพใ™ใ€‚ใใฎๅพŒใ€ๅ„
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university will give you a few more questions that you have to write short essays for.
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ๅคงๅญฆใฏ็Ÿญใ„่ณชๅ•ใ‚’ใ„ใใคใ‹่ฟฝๅŠ  ใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใฎใŸใ‚ใฎใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใ€‚
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So, make sure you know exactly what you need to submit.
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ใใฎใŸใ‚ใ€ ไฝ•ใ‚’ๆๅ‡บใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚’ๆญฃ็ขบใซๆŠŠๆกใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
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Now, it's very, very important that you do not underestimate the importance of these
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ใ•ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใฎ้‡่ฆๆ€งใ‚’้Žๅฐ่ฉ•ไพกใ—ใชใ„ใ“ใจใŒ้žๅธธใซ้‡่ฆใงใ™
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pieces of writing.
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ใ€‚
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Your application consists of transcripts, your resume, the actual application you're
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็”ณ่ซ‹ๆ›ธใฏใ€ๆˆ็ธพ่จผๆ˜Ž ๆ›ธใ€ๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใ€่จ˜ๅ…ฅใ™ใ‚‹ๅฎŸ้š›ใฎ็”ณ่ซ‹ๆ›ธ
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filling out, all these things, and a sample of your writing that shows who you are, what
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ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ™ในใฆใซๅŠ ใˆใฆใ€ ใ‚ใชใŸใŒ่ชฐใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ€ไฝ•
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you want to do, why the university should accept you instead of someone else.
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ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ„ใฎใ‹ใ€ๅคงๅญฆ ใŒไป–ใฎ่ชฐใ‹ใงใฏใชใใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ๅ—ใ‘ๅ…ฅใ‚Œใ‚‹ในใ็†็”ฑใ‚’็คบใ™ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใฎใ‚ตใƒณใƒ—ใƒซใงๆง‹ๆˆใ•ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใพใ™ .
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So, it's very, very important.
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ใงใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใจใฆใ‚‚ใ€ใจใฆใ‚‚้‡่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
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Sometimes this is what's going to decide whether you are accepted to a university or not.
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ๅ ดๅˆใซใ‚ˆใฃใฆใฏใ€ใ“ใ‚ŒใŒ ๅคงๅญฆใซๅˆๆ ผใ™ใ‚‹ใ‹ใฉใ†ใ‹ใ‚’ๆฑบๅฎšใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใซใชใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
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If you're applying and there's a lot of other applicants with similar grades, similar experiences,
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ๅŒใ˜ๆˆ็ธพใ€ๅŒใ˜ใ‚ˆใ†ใช็ตŒ้จ“ใ€ๅŒใ˜ใ‚ˆใ†ใช่ชฒๅค–ๆดปๅ‹•ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไป–ใฎๅคšใใฎๅฟ—้ก˜่€…ใŒใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฏไป–ใฎๅฟ—้ก˜่€…ใจ
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similar extracurricular activities, what is going to make you different from the others?
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ไฝ•ใŒ ้•ใ†ใฎใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹?
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This.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ€‚
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The extra piece of writing that you need to submit.
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ๆๅ‡บใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ไฝ™ๅˆ†ใชๆ–‡็ซ ใ€‚
02:48
So, the most important tip - I'm going to give you, actually, five major tips - but
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ใงใฏใ€ๆœ€ใ‚‚้‡่ฆ ใชใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆ - ๅฎŸ้š›ใซใฏ 5 ใคใฎไธป่ฆใชใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใ‚’็ดนไป‹ใ—ใพใ™ - ใ—ใ‹ใ—
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the most important thing that you need to understand right now, give yourself time to
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03:01
work on these writing pieces, okay?
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๆ–‡็ซ ใซ ๅ–ใ‚Š็ต„ใ‚€ๆ™‚้–“ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
03:04
It is very, very important.
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ใจใฆใ‚‚ใ€ใจใฆใ‚‚้‡่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
03:06
Now, I've helped a lot of students with their application writing.
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็พๅœจใ€็งใฏๅคšใใฎ ๅญฆ็”Ÿใฎ็”ณ่ซ‹ๆ›ธใฎไฝœๆˆใ‚’ๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
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It's amazing how many people contact me and say, "Can you help me with my personal statement?
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้ฉšใในใใ“ใจใซใ€ๅคšใใฎไบบใŒ็งใซ้€ฃ็ตกใ‚’ๅ–ใ‚Šใ€ ใ€Œๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚’ๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ‹?
03:18
I need it by next week."
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ๆฅ้€ฑใพใงใซๅฟ…่ฆใงใ™ใ€ใจ่จ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
03:20
Next week is too late.
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ๆฅ้€ฑใฏ้…ใ™ใŽใ‚‹ใ€‚
03:21
Like, if you haven't already thought about things, you might not have enough time.
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ใพใ ่€ƒใˆใฆใ„ใชใ„ ใฎใชใ‚‰ใ€ๆ™‚้–“ใŒ่ถณใ‚Šใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
03:27
American students, Canadian students, UK students, etc., when they know they're going to be applying
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ใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใ€ใ‚ซใƒŠใƒ€ใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใ€่‹ฑๅ›ฝใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿ ใชใฉใฏใ€ๅคงๅญฆใซๅ‡บ้ก˜ใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใ‹ใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆ
03:33
for university, they start writing these things a minimum of six months before the application
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03:40
deadline or before they're ready to submit.
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ใพใŸใฏ ๆๅ‡บใฎๆบ–ๅ‚™ใŒๆ•ดใ†ๅ‰ใซใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎใ“ใจใ‚’ๆ›ธใๅง‹ใ‚ใพใ™.
03:43
Some people start writing them a year before.
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1ๅนดๅ‰ใ‹ใ‚‰ๆ›ธใๅง‹ใ‚ใ‚‹ไบบใ‚‚ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
03:46
Don't leave it until the last few days or the last week or two.
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ใ“ใ“ ๆ•ฐๆ—ฅใ€ใพใŸใฏๅ…ˆ้€ฑใพใŸใฏ 2 ้€ฑ้–“ๅ‰ใพใงๆ”พ็ฝฎใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
03:50
Give yourself two, three, four months, as much as possible.
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03:54
Now, I'm going to start with a few general tips, and then I'm going to get into some
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ใ“ใ“ใงใ€ใ„ใใคใ‹ใฎไธ€่ˆฌ็š„ใชใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใ‹ใ‚‰ๅง‹ใ‚ใฆ ใ€ๆฌกใซ็ŸฅใฃใฆใŠใๅฟ…่ฆใฎใ‚ใ‚‹
03:58
more specific tips that you need to know.
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ใ‚ˆใ‚Šๅ…ทไฝ“็š„ใชใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใซ้€ฒใฟ ใพใ™ใ€‚
04:03
Do not underestimate the value of good writing.
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ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸๆ–‡็ซ ใฎไพกๅ€คใ‚’้Žๅฐ่ฉ•ไพกใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
04:06
And good writing is built on good vocab, good grammar, good structure, etc.
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ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸๆ–‡็ซ ใฏใ€ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸ่ชžๅฝ™ใ€ ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸๆ–‡ๆณ•ใ€ๅ„ชใ‚ŒใŸๆง‹้€ ใชใฉใซๅŸบใฅใ„ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
04:11
So, the English is important.
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ใ—ใŸใŒใฃใฆใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใฏ้‡่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
04:15
You can't write a sloppy statement or letter and expect the university to be impressed
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ใšใ•ใ‚“ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚„ๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆ ใ€ๅคงๅญฆใŒใ‚ใชใŸใซๆ„Ÿ้Š˜ใ‚’ๅ—ใ‘ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆœŸๅพ…ใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใฏใงใใพใ›
04:21
by you.
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ใ‚“.
04:23
You can't have mistakes, grammar, vocab, or otherwise, and you have to be very clear,
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้–“้•ใ„ใ€ๆ–‡ๆณ•ใ€่ชžๅฝ™ ใชใฉใŒใ‚ใฃใฆใฏใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚้žๅธธใซๆ˜Ž็ขบใงใ€
04:28
you have to be very convincing, and you can't be boring.
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้žๅธธใซ่ชฌๅพ—ๅŠ› ใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใ€้€€ๅฑˆใงใ‚ใฃใฆใฏใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
04:32
All of this has to do with language, so make sure the English is very good.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ™ในใฆ่จ€่ชžใซ้–ขไฟ‚ใ—ใฆ ใ„ใ‚‹ใŸใ‚ใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใŒไธŠๆ‰‹ใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’็ขบ่ชใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
04:38
Do not send the first draft.
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ๆœ€ๅˆใฎใƒ‰ใƒฉใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚’้€ไฟกใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
04:40
Do not write a personal statement or a statement of purpose and then send it.
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ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใช ๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚„็›ฎ็š„ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆ้€ไฟกใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
04:46
Edit, rewrite, edit, rewrite.
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็ทจ้›†ใ€ๆ›ธใๆ›ใˆใ€็ทจ้›†ใ€ๆ›ธใๆ›ใˆใ€‚
04:49
Do this a few times.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚’ๆ•ฐๅ›ž่กŒใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
04:50
You should go through five, six, seven drafts before you have your final draft to send.
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ๆœ€็ต‚ใƒ‰ใƒฉใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚’้€ไฟกใ™ใ‚‹ๅ‰ใซใ€5ใ€6ใ€7 ๅ›žใฎใƒ‰ใƒฉใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚’ๅฎŸ่กŒใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
04:57
Sometimes people go 10, 15 drafts.
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10ๅ›žใ€ 15ๅ›žใƒ‰ใƒฉใƒ•ใƒˆใ™ใ‚‹ไบบใ‚‚ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
05:00
Definitely don't send your first draft or your second draft.
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็ตถๅฏพใซใ€ ๆœ€ๅˆใฎใƒ‰ใƒฉใƒ•ใƒˆใพใŸใฏ 2 ็•ช็›ฎใฎใƒ‰ใƒฉใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚’้€ไฟกใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
05:05
Know the requirements.
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่ฆไปถใ‚’็Ÿฅใ‚‹ใ€‚
05:07
Make sure you understand exactly what they're asking for.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒไฝ•ใ‚’ๆฑ‚ใ‚ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใ‹ใ‚’ๆญฃ็ขบใซ็†่งฃใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
05:09
Is there a word limit, like a word count limit?
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ๆ–‡ๅญ—ๆ•ฐๅˆถ้™ ใชใฉใฎๆ–‡ๅญ—ๆ•ฐๅˆถ้™ใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
05:14
For example, they say write no more than 1,000 words.
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ใŸใจใˆใฐ ใ€1,000 ่ชžใ‚’่ถ…ใˆใฆๆ›ธใใ“ใจใฏใชใ„ใจๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏ่จ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
05:17
If you wrote 1,100 words already, you've already lost the opportunity to go to this university
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ใ™ใงใซ 1,100 ่ชžใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใŸ ใจใ—ใฆใ‚‚ใ€ใ“ใฎๅคงๅญฆใซ่กŒใๆฉŸไผšใ‚’ๅคฑใฃใŸใ“ใจใซใชใ‚Š
05:26
because they're not even going to read your application.
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ใพใ™ใ€‚
05:28
If you can't read a simple instruction, how are you going to understand complex instructions
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็ฐกๅ˜ใชๆŒ‡็คบใŒ่ชญใ‚ใชใ„ๅ ดๅˆใ€ๆ•™ๆŽˆใ‹ใ‚‰ใฎ่ค‡้›‘ใชๆŒ‡็คบใ‚’ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ† ใซ็†่งฃใ™ใ‚‹ใฎ
05:34
from your professors?
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ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹?
05:36
Make sure you understand what you need to do.
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ไฝ•ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚’ๅฟ…ใš็†่งฃใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
05:38
Word count, character count.
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ๅ˜่ชžๆ•ฐใ€ๆ–‡ๅญ—ๆ•ฐใ€‚
05:41
Some of the supplementary essays will say in 300 characters or less.
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ไธ€้ƒจใฎ่ฃœ่ถณใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚ค ใฏ 300 ๆ–‡ๅญ—ไปฅๅ†…ใง่จ˜่ฟฐใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
05:47
Characters means each letter and space and punctuation.
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ๆ–‡ๅญ—ใจใฏใ€ๅ„ๆ–‡ๅญ— ใจใ‚นใƒšใƒผใ‚นใจๅฅ่ชญ็‚นใ‚’ๆ„ๅ‘ณใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
05:50
It's not 300 words.
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300่ชžใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
05:53
Make sure you know how much you're allowed to write.
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ใฉใฎ ็จ‹ๅบฆใฎๆ›ธใ่พผใฟใŒ่จฑๅฏใ•ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚’็ขบ่ชใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
05:56
If they say 12 font times new Roman, times new Roman font, 12 point size, make sure you
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12 ใƒ•ใ‚ฉใƒณใƒˆร—ใƒ‹ใƒฅใƒผ ใƒญใƒผใƒžใƒณใ€ร— ใƒ‹ใƒฅใƒผ ใƒญใƒผใƒžใƒณ ใƒ•ใ‚ฉใƒณใƒˆใ€12 ใƒใ‚คใƒณใƒˆ ใ‚ตใ‚คใ‚บใจๆ›ธใ‹ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆ
06:06
don't write with a bigger font or a different font.
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ใฏใ€ใ‚ˆใ‚Šๅคงใใช ใƒ•ใ‚ฉใƒณใƒˆใ‚„ๅˆฅใฎใƒ•ใ‚ฉใƒณใƒˆใงๆ›ธใ‹ใชใ„ใ‚ˆใ†ใซๆณจๆ„ใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
06:09
Margins.
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ไฝ™็™ฝใ€‚
06:10
All these things.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ™ในใฆใฎใ“ใจใ€‚
06:11
Make sure you know exactly what they're asking you for, otherwise you're showing that you're
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใซๆฑ‚ใ‚ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆญฃ็ขบใซ็†่งฃใ—ใฆ
06:15
not a very serious student.
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ใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
06:18
Do use the pronoun "I", okay?
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ไปฃๅ่ฉžใ€ŒIใ€ใ‚’ไฝฟใ„ใพใ™ใ‚ˆใญ๏ผŸ
06:21
And these two things go together.
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰2ใคใฎ ใ“ใจใฏไธ€็ท’ใซใชใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
06:23
This is not an academic essay.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใฏๅญฆ่ก“่ซ–ๆ–‡ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
06:26
This is a personal essay, so it's okay to use the pronoun "I", and you don't need to
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ใ“ใ‚Œใฏๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใชใฎใง ใ€ใ€ŒIใ€ใจใ„ใ†ไปฃๅ่ฉžใ‚’ไฝฟใฃใฆใ‚‚ใ‹ใพใ„ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
06:31
worry about fancy vocabulary, and you don't need to worry about transitions and all these
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ๆดพๆ‰‹ใช่ชžๅฝ™ใซใคใ„ใฆๅฟƒ้…ใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ใพใŸใ€ ใƒˆใƒฉใƒณใ‚ธใ‚ทใƒงใƒณใ‚„
06:37
things that you would use for the - you would need for the IELTS or TOEFL.
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ใ€ IELTSใพใŸใฏTOEFLใŒๅฟ…่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
06:41
This is more of a personal story, so you don't need to be too academic.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใฏๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใช่ฉฑ ใชใฎใงใ€ใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅญฆๅ•็š„ใงใ‚ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
06:46
You can be - you could use "I", although you can use "I" in academic essays anyway, too,
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ใ€ŒIใ€ใ‚’ไฝฟใ†ใ“ใจใ‚‚ใงใใพใ™ ใŒใ€ใ‚ขใ‚ซใƒ‡ใƒŸใƒƒใ‚ฏ ใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใงใ‚‚ใ€ŒIใ€ใ‚’ไฝฟ็”จใงใใพใ™
06:52
but don't be afraid of the "I", okay?
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ใŒใ€ใ€ŒIใ€ใ‚’ๆใ‚Œใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ ใญใ€‚
06:54
So, this is a very general introduction.
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ใงใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ ใ“ใ‚Œใฏ้žๅธธใซไธ€่ˆฌ็š„ใช็ดนไป‹ใงใ™ใ€‚
06:56
Now, let's look at some more specific things.
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ใงใฏใ€ ใ‚‚ใ†ๅฐ‘ใ—ๅ…ทไฝ“็š„ใชๅ†…ๅฎนใ‚’่ฆ‹ใฆใฟใพใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚
06:59
Okay, so let's start looking at these statements and letters, etc.
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ใงใฏใ€ ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚„ๆ‰‹็ด™
07:05
The most common mistake I see when people send me their draft of what they wrote, what
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ใชใฉใ‚’่ฆ‹ใฆใ„ใใพใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚ไบบใ€… ใŒ่‡ชๅˆ†ใŒๆ›ธใ„ใŸใ‚‚ใฎใ€ๆๅ‡บใ—ใŸใ„ใ‚‚ใฎใฎไธ‹ๆ›ธใใ‚’็งใซ้€ใ‚‹ใจใใซ็งใŒ่ฆ‹ใ‚‹ๆœ€ใ‚‚ไธ€่ˆฌ็š„ใช้–“้•ใ„
07:11
they want to submit, is that people repeat a lot of information that the admissions officers
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ใฏ ใ€ๅ…ฅๅญฆๆ‹…ๅฝ“ๅฎ˜ใŒใงใใ‚‹ๅคšใใฎๆƒ…ๅ ฑใ‚’ไบบใ€…ใŒ็นฐใ‚Š่ฟ”ใ™
07:18
can see elsewhere.
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ใ“ใจใงใ™. ไป–ใฎๅ ดๆ‰€ใ‚’ๅ‚็…งใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
07:19
So, don't forget, when you're applying, you're not only sending the statement, you're also
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ใ—ใŸใŒใฃใฆใ€ๅฟœๅ‹Ÿใ™ใ‚‹ใจใใฏ ใ€ใ‚นใƒ†ใƒผใƒˆใƒกใƒณใƒˆใ‚’้€ใ‚‹ใ ใ‘ใงใชใ
07:24
sending your transcript, you're sending your CV or resume, for most schools ask for this,
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ใ€ๆˆ็ธพ่จผๆ˜Žๆ›ธใ‚‚้€ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ€ ๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใพใŸใฏๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใ‚’้€ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅฟ˜ใ‚Œใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚ใปใจใ‚“ใฉใฎๅญฆๆ กใงใ“ใ‚Œใ‚’ๆฑ‚ใ‚
07:30
and you're sending a reference letter.
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ใ‚‰ใ‚Œใพใ™ใ€‚ ๅ‚่€ƒๆ›ธใ‚’้€ใ‚‹ใ€‚
07:33
Somebody recommended you, like a professor or a co-worker or a boss, I mean, etc., so
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ๆ•™ๆŽˆใ‚„ๅŒๅƒšใ€ไธŠๅธใชใฉใฎ่ชฐใ‹ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ๆŽจ่–ฆใ—ใŸ ใฎใง
07:39
make sure that anything that I can see here, I shouldn't see in your personal statement.
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ใ€ใ“ใ“ใง่ฆ‹ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใงใใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใฎใฏใ™ในใฆ ใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใซใฏ่กจ็คบใ•ใ‚Œใชใ„ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
07:47
Don't tell me about your grades, because I can see your transcripts.
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็งใฏใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆˆ็ธพ ่จผๆ˜Žๆ›ธใ‚’่ฆ‹ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใงใใ‚‹ใฎใงใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆˆ็ธพใซใคใ„ใฆ็งใซ่จ€ใ‚ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„.
07:51
Don't tell me about the job you had and how long you were there and who was your boss,
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ใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆŒใฃใฆใ„ใŸไป•ไบ‹ใ€ ใ‚ใชใŸใŒใใ“ใซใ„ใŸๆœŸ้–“ใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฎไธŠๅธใฏ่ชฐใ ใฃใŸ
07:56
I can see that in your resume or your CV.
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ใ‹ใซใคใ„ใฆ็งใซ่จ€ใ‚ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„. ๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใ‚„ๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใ‚’่ฆ‹ใ‚Œใฐใ‚ใ‹ใ‚Šใพใ™.
07:59
Don't tell me that your boss really liked you, because he will have said that in the
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฎไธŠๅธใŒใ‚ใชใŸใฎใ“ใจใ‚’ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซๅฅฝใใ ใฃใŸ ใจใฏ่จ€ใ‚ใชใ„
08:03
reference letter.
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08:05
If you say your boss really liked you, but your boss didn't write you a reference letter,
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ไธŠๅธใŒใ‚ใชใŸใฎใ“ใจใ‚’ใจใฆใ‚‚ๅฅฝใใ ใจ่จ€ใฃใŸใฎใซ ใ€ไธŠๅธใŒใ‚ใชใŸใซๆŽจ่–ฆ็Šถใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใใ‚Œใชใ‹ใฃใŸ
08:09
that makes you look very bad.
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ใจใ—ใŸใ‚‰ใ€ใใ‚Œใฏใ‚ใชใŸใฎๅฐ่ฑกใ‚’ใจใฆใ‚‚ๆ‚ชใใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
08:10
Either you're lying, or maybe you misunderstood your boss's feelings, right?
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ๅ˜˜ใ‚’ใคใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ ใ€ไธŠๅธใฎๆฐ—ๆŒใกใ‚’่ชค่งฃใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ‚ˆใญ๏ผŸ
08:16
Anyway, all of these things, the admissions officers will see first, before they read
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ใ„ใšใ‚Œใซใ›ใ‚ˆใ€ๅ…ฅๅญฆๅฏฉๆŸป ๅฎ˜ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚„ๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚’่ชญใ‚€ๅ‰ใซๆœ€ๅˆใซ็›ฎใซใ™ใ‚‹
08:22
your statement or letter, so don't merely summarize something that they already know.
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ใฎใง ใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒใ™ใงใซ็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅ˜ใซ่ฆ็ด„ใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„.
08:30
You have to give them something new.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฏๅฝผใ‚‰ใซไฝ•ใ‹ๆ–ฐใ—ใ„ใ‚‚ใฎใ‚’ไธŽใˆใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
08:32
You have to make every word count and do something.
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ใ™ในใฆใฎ ่จ€่‘‰ใ‚’้‡่ฆใชใ‚‚ใฎใซใ—ใฆใ€ไฝ•ใ‹ใ‚’ใ—ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
08:38
It has to have a purpose, it has to lead to some effect on the reader, okay?
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08:45
That's the most important thing.
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08:47
Don't repeat information.
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ๆƒ…ๅ ฑใ‚’็นฐใ‚Š่ฟ”ใ•ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
08:49
Then, and this is another thing that a lot of people fail to do, I think.
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใฏ ๅคšใใฎไบบใŒๅคฑๆ•—ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใ† 1 ใคใฎใ“ใจใ ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๅคงๅญฆ
08:54
When you're applying to a seat in a classroom in a university, it's very, very important
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ใฎๆ•™ๅฎคใฎๅธญใซๅฟœๅ‹Ÿใ™ใ‚‹ใจใใฏใ€ๅŒใ˜ๅธญใซ
09:01
that you remember that hundreds, maybe even thousands of other people are applying for
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ไฝ•็™พไบบใ€ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใŸใ‚‰ ไฝ•ๅƒไบบใ‚‚ใฎไบบใ€…ใŒๅฟœๅ‹Ÿใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’่ฆšใˆใฆใŠใใ“ใจใŒ้žๅธธใซ้‡่ฆใงใ™
09:10
that same seat.
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09:12
Not all of you are going to get it.
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ๅ…จๅ“กใŒๅ—ใ‹ใ‚‹ใ‚ใ‘ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Š ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
09:15
Let's say for, in some programs, let's say they have 25 seats opening every year.
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ใŸใจใˆใฐใ€ไธ€้ƒจใฎใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ฐใƒฉใƒ ใงใฏใ€ ๆฏŽๅนด 25 ๅธญใŒ็ฉบๅธญใซใชใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใจใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
09:22
Two, three thousand students apply.
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2ใ€3ๅƒไบบใฎๅญฆ็”ŸใŒๅฟœๅ‹Ÿใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
09:26
That means that close to three thousand people are not going to be accepted, so you have
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ใคใพใ‚Šใ€3,000 ไบบ่ฟ‘ใ ใŒๅ—ใ‘ๅ…ฅใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ‚Œใชใ„ใจใ„ใ†ใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚ใใฎใŸใ‚
09:31
to ask yourself what makes you different from those hundreds or thousands of other applicants.
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ใ€ไป–ใฎไฝ•็™พใ€ไฝ•ๅƒใ‚‚ใฎๅฟœๅ‹Ÿ่€…ใจไฝ•ใŒ้•ใ†ใฎใ‹ใ‚’่‡ชๅ•ใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
09:40
Now, I'll give you a bit of a case study.
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ใงใฏ ใ€ใกใ‚‡ใฃใจใ—ใŸไบ‹ไพ‹ใ‚’ใ”็ดนไป‹ใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
09:43
I've helped a few students from a particular country.
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็งใฏ็‰นๅฎšใฎๅ›ฝใ‹ใ‚‰ใฎๆ•ฐไบบใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใ‚’ๅŠฉใ‘ใพใ—ใŸ ใ€‚
09:48
All of them applied to a particular program in the US, the same program.
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ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฏใ™ในใฆ ใ€็ฑณๅ›ฝใฎ็‰นๅฎšใฎใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ฐใƒฉใƒ ใ€ๅŒใ˜ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ฐใƒฉใƒ ใซ้ฉ็”จใ•ใ‚Œใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
09:54
Different students, same country, all wanting to go study the same thing in the US.
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ๅŒใ˜ๅ›ฝใซใ„ใ‚‹ใ•ใพใ–ใพใชๅญฆ็”Ÿ ใŒใ€ใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซใงๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅญฆใณใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
10:00
And this were different times, like different years and all this stuff.
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ•ใพใ–ใพใชๅนดใงใ‚ใ‚Šใ€ใ•ใพใ–ใพใชๆ™‚ไปฃ ใงใ—ใŸใ€‚
10:04
But every single one of them did the exact same thing.
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ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฎไธ€ไบบไธ€ ไบบใŒใพใฃใŸใๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใ‚’ใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
10:08
She told me about her experiences and how they were very valuable and how they changed
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ๅฝผๅฅณใฏ่‡ชๅˆ†ใฎ็ตŒ้จ“ใจใ€ ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใŒใ„ใ‹ใซไพกๅ€คใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใ€ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซ่ฆ–็‚นใ‚’ๅค‰ใˆ
10:12
her perspective, then her work experience, and then what school she wants to go to, what
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ใŸใ‹ใ€ๆฌกใซไป•ไบ‹ใฎ็ตŒ้จ“ ใ€ๆฌกใซใฉใฎๅญฆๆ กใซ่กŒใใŸใ„ใ‹ใ€ไฝ•ใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ—ใŸใ„ใ‹ใซใคใ„ใฆ่ฉฑใ—ใฆใใ‚Œ
10:18
she wants to study.
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ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
10:20
But each of these students, three completely different students, all wrote the essentially
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ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใฏใใ‚Œใžใ‚Œใ€3 ไบบใฎ ใพใฃใŸใ็•ฐใชใ‚‹ๅญฆ็”Ÿใงใ‚ใ‚Šใ€ๆœฌ่ณช็š„ใซ
10:28
same thing.
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ๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆ›ธใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
10:30
So imagine how many hundreds of others are also writing the exact same thing.
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ไฝ•็™พไบบใ‚‚ใฎไบบใŒใพใฃใŸใๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆƒณๅƒใ—ใฆใฟใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ ใ€‚
10:35
So you need to stand out, right?
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ใ ใ‹ใ‚‰็›ฎ็ซ‹ใคๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‚ˆใญ๏ผŸ
10:38
There's a crowd of students all saying the same thing.
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ๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใ‚’่จ€ใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅญฆ็”ŸใŒใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
10:41
You need to stand out and say something different.
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็›ฎ็ซ‹ใฃใฆ ใ€้•ใ†ใ“ใจใ‚’่จ€ใ†ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
10:44
Now, saying something different might sound easy to say.
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ใ•ใฆใ€ไฝ•ใ‹ ้•ใ†ใ“ใจใ‚’่จ€ใ†ใฎใฏ็ฐกๅ˜ใซ่žใ“ใˆใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
10:49
It's a very difficult thing to do.
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ใใ‚Œใฏ้žๅธธใซ้›ฃใ—ใ„ ใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
10:52
You have to think very carefully about what makes you different, right?
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ไฝ•ใŒ่‡ชๅˆ†ใ‚’ๅทฎๅˆฅๅŒ–ใ™ใ‚‹ใฎใ‹ใ€้žๅธธใซๆ…Ž้‡ใซ่€ƒใˆใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‚ˆใญ?
10:59
And this is especially for the statement of purpose, but when we come to the personal
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11:04
statement, which I'm going to talk about next, the personal statement, a lot of people forget
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ใ‚นใƒ†ใƒผใƒˆใƒกใƒณใƒˆใงใ™ใŒใ€ๆฌกใซใŠ่ฉฑใ— ใ™ใ‚‹ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชใ‚นใƒ†ใƒผใƒˆใƒกใƒณใƒˆใซใชใ‚‹ใจใ€ๅคšใใฎไบบใŒ
11:09
the word "personal".
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ใ€Œๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†่จ€่‘‰ใ‚’ๅฟ˜ใ‚Œใฆใ—ใพใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
11:12
It's about you.
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ใใ‚Œใฏใ‚ใชใŸใฎใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
11:14
It's not about where you've been, what you've done.
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ใฉใ“ใซใ„ใŸ ใ‹ใ€ไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ‹ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
11:18
It's not about who you met, what sort of experiences you had.
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่ชฐใจไผšใฃใŸ ใ‹ใ€ใฉใ‚“ใช็ตŒ้จ“ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ‹ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ ไป–ใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใฏๅ ดๆ‰€ใ ใฃใŸใฎใง
11:23
All of these things don't matter because other students have been places.
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ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎใ“ใจใฏใ™ในใฆๅ•้กŒใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
11:29
Other students have seen things, have met people, have had experiences.
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ไป–ใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใฏใ€็‰ฉใ‚’่ฆ‹ใŸใ‚Šใ€ ไบบใซไผšใฃใŸใ‚Šใ€็ตŒ้จ“ใ—ใŸใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
11:34
Everybody goes places, does things, and has experiences.
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่ชฐใ‚‚ใŒๅ ดๆ‰€ใซ่กŒใใ€ ็‰ฉไบ‹ใ‚’่กŒใ„ใ€็ตŒ้จ“ใ‚’็ฉใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
11:38
The question is how did these places, experiences, meetings change you?
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ๅ•้กŒใฏใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๅ ดๆ‰€ใ€ ็ตŒ้จ“ใ€ๅ‡บไผšใ„ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅค‰ใˆใŸใ‹ใจใ„ใ†ใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
11:45
How did these things affect your life?
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎ ใ“ใจใฏใ‚ใชใŸใฎ็”Ÿๆดปใซใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใชๅฝฑ้Ÿฟใ‚’ไธŽใˆใพใ—ใŸใ‹ใ€‚
11:47
How did they make you the person you are today?
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ—ใฆไปŠๆ—ฅใฎใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ไฝœใฃใŸใฎใงใ™ ใ‹๏ผŸ
11:52
The person who is going to be a part of the student body at this university?
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11:58
Remember, the admissions officers, when they read these statements, they want to see a
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่ฆšใˆใฆใŠใ„ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€ๅ…ฅๅญฆๅฏฉๆŸปๅฎ˜ใฏใ€ ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚’่ชญใ‚€ใจใใ€ไบบใซไผšใ„ใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™
12:04
person.
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12:05
They don't want to see a transcript.
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12:06
They don't want to see a resume.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏๅฑฅๆญดๆ›ธใ‚’่ฆ‹ใŸใใชใ„ใ€‚
12:08
They don't want to see a copy of all the hundred of other students who are applying.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ ใฏใ€ๅฟœๅ‹Ÿใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ไป–ใฎไฝ•็™พไบบใ‚‚ใฎๅญฆ็”Ÿใฎใ‚ณใƒ”ใƒผใ‚’่ฆ‹ใŸใใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
12:15
They want to see an individual who has something to offer, okay?
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12:21
So, tell me, who are you?
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ๆ•™ใˆใฆใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฏ่ชฐ๏ผŸ
12:24
That's your mission in this statement.
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12:26
Basically, you're selling yourself.
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12:29
You're selling yourself.
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12:30
You are a product, and you're hoping that the admissions officers want to buy you.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฏ่ฃฝๅ“ใงใ‚ใ‚Š ใ€ๅ…ฅๅญฆๅฏฉๆŸปๅฎ˜ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’่ณผๅ…ฅใ—ใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆœ›ใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ™.
12:36
Obviously, not money.
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12:37
There's no money involved here, but they want to choose you.
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ใ“ใ“ใซใฏใŠ้‡‘ใฏ้–ขไฟ‚ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใŒใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’้ธใณใŸใŒใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
12:41
Why?
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12:42
Because they think you can contribute to the university.
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12:46
They think you will be good classmates with the other students there.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒ ใใ“ใซใ„ใ‚‹ไป–ใฎ็”Ÿๅพ’ใŸใกใจ่‰ฏใ„ใ‚ฏใƒฉใ‚นใƒกใƒผใƒˆใซใชใ‚‹ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๆ•™ๆŽˆใŸใก
12:50
You will get along with the professors.
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ใจไปฒ่‰ฏใใชใ‚Šใพใ™ ใ€‚
12:52
You will work hard.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฏไธ€็”Ÿๆ‡ธๅ‘ฝๅƒใใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚
12:53
You will succeed.
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12:54
You will make the university look good.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฏ ๅคงๅญฆใฎ่ฆ‹ๆ „ใˆใ‚’่‰ฏใใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
12:58
At the end of the day, the university cares about the university.
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็ตๅฑ€ใฎใจใ“ใ‚ ใ€ๅคงๅญฆใฏๅคงๅญฆใ‚’ๆฐ—ใซใ‹ใ‘ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
13:03
They want students to come and succeed, not students to come and be part of the decorations
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏ็”Ÿๅพ’ใŸใกใŒๆฅใฆๆˆๅŠŸใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆœ›ใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ™ใŒใ€ ็”Ÿๅพ’ใŸใกใŒๆฅใฆๅฃใฎ่ฃ…้ฃพใฎไธ€้ƒจใซใชใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆœ›ใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ›ใ‚“
13:09
on the walls, right?
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13:10
So, you have to be very personal and very unique, and make sure that you stand out from
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13:16
the crowd.
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13:17
These two things kind of go together, right, very, very, very important.
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13:22
Don't forget there are others.
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13:24
Who are you in relation to them, okay?
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใจใฎ้–ขไฟ‚ใงใ‚ใชใŸใฏ่ชฐ ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
13:28
Very important.
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้žๅธธใซ้‡่ฆใงใ™ใ€‚
13:29
Two more tips coming up.
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ใ•ใ‚‰ใซ 2 ใคใฎใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใŒ่กจ็คบใ•ใ‚Œใพใ™ใ€‚
13:30
Okay, so we're going to continue, but this is a little bit of a review.
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ใ•ใฆใ€็ถšใใพใ™ ใŒใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใกใ‚‡ใฃใจใ—ใŸใƒฌใƒ“ใƒฅใƒผใงใ™ใ€‚
13:34
When we're talking about the personal statement, I'm sure a lot of people are thinking, "Well,
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่‡ชๅทฑ็ดนไป‹ใ‚’ ใ™ใ‚‹ใจใ€ใ€Œ
13:39
what can I say?"
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13:40
Well, you have to think about yourself quite a bit.
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ใ•ใฆใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฏ่‡ชๅˆ†่‡ช่บซใซใคใ„ใฆใ‹ใชใ‚Š่€ƒใˆใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
13:44
You can think about what you have done, but think about how this has changed you.
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่‡ชๅˆ†ใŒไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ‹ใ‚’่€ƒใˆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ™ใŒใ€ ใ“ใ‚ŒใŒใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅค‰ใˆใŸใ‹ใ‚’่€ƒใˆใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
13:49
For example, were you on a sports team?
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13:53
People say that sports have become clichรฉ, don't use it, but if that's who you are, that's
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ไบบใ€…ใฏใ€ใ‚นใƒใƒผใƒ„ใฏๆฑบใพใ‚Šๆ–‡ๅฅใซใชใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใจ่จ€ใ„ ใพใ™ใŒใ€ใใ‚Œใ‚’ไฝฟ็”จใ—ใชใ„
13:58
who you are.
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13:59
If you were there - if you were on a sports team and you made very good friends, and this
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14:04
teamwork and this friendship changed your life and made you the person that you are,
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ใ“ใฎใƒใƒผใƒ ใƒฏใƒผใ‚ฏใจๅ‹ๆƒ…ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใฎไบบ็”Ÿใ‚’ๅค‰ใˆใ€ใ‚ใชใŸ ใ‚’ใ‚ใชใŸใจใ„ใ†ไบบ้–“ใซใ—ใŸใจใ—ใŸใ‚‰ใ€ใใ‚Œ
14:09
write about that.
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ใซใคใ„ใฆๆ›ธใ„ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
14:11
Explain it, show how it affected you and how this will basically continue on into university
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ใใ‚Œใ‚’่ชฌๆ˜Žใ—ใ€ใใ‚ŒใŒใ‚ใชใŸใซใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅฝฑ้Ÿฟใ—ใŸใ‹ใ€ใใ—ใฆ ใ“ใ‚ŒใŒๅŸบๆœฌ็š„ใซๅคงๅญฆ
14:17
and how being a friend will help you be a better student, will help other students be
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ใซใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซ็ถšใใ‹ใ€ใใ—ใฆๅ‹้”ใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒใ‚ˆใ‚Š่‰ฏใ„ๅญฆ็”Ÿใซใชใ‚‹ใฎใซใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅฝน็ซ‹ใคใ‹ ใ€ไป–ใฎๅญฆ็”ŸใŒใ‚ˆใ‚Š่‰ฏใ„ๅญฆ็”Ÿใซใชใ‚‹ใฎใซใฉใฎ
14:22
better students, etc., things like that.
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ใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅฝน็ซ‹ใคใ‹ใชใฉใ‚’็คบใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
14:26
On the other hand, if you're writing a statement of purpose or a letter of intent, you have
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14:31
to be very careful not to confuse the two issues.
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14:35
You still have to show them who you are as a person, but you very much have to tell them
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14:43
your purpose, right?
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ใพใ™ใ‚ˆใญ?
14:45
So, statement of purpose, okay?
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ใใ‚Œใงใ€็›ฎ็š„ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ€ใ„ใ„ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
14:52
Letter of intent.
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ๆ„ๅ‘ๆ›ธใ€‚
14:57
Make sure you tell them what is your purpose in coming to this school, what is your intention,
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ใ‚ใชใŸ ใŒใ“ใฎๅญฆๆ กใซๆฅใŸ็›ฎ็š„ใฏไฝ•ใงใ™ใ‹ใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆ„ๅ›ณใฏ
15:02
what do you want to do if you are accepted into this school.
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15:06
And a lot of people make the mistake in the SOP or the LOI of talking about, "Oh, I did
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ๅคšใใฎไบบใŒ SOP ใ‚„ LOI ใงใ€ใ€Œใ‚ใ‚ใ€็งใฏ
15:13
this and I learned that and I met..."
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚’่กŒใ„ใ€ใใ‚Œใ‚’ ๅญฆใณใ€ไผšใฃใŸ...ใ€ใจใ„ใ†้–“้•ใ„ใ‚’็Šฏใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
15:15
That's not purpose, that's background.
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ใใ‚Œใฏ็›ฎ็š„ใง ใฏใชใใ€่ƒŒๆ™ฏใงใ™ใ€‚
15:18
A little bit of background, sure, is very important, but make sure that you focus on
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็ขบใ‹ใซใ€ๅฐ‘ใ—ใฎใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚ฐใƒฉใ‚ฆใƒณใƒ‰ใฏ้žๅธธใซ ้‡่ฆใงใ™ใŒใ€ๅฟ…ใšๅฐ†ๆฅใซ็„ฆ็‚นใ‚’ๅˆใ‚ใ›ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„
15:23
the future.
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.
15:24
What do you want to do?
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15:27
Do you want - like, for example, you want to be a doctor?
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ใŸใจใˆใฐ ใ€ๅŒป่€…ใซใชใ‚ŠใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
15:30
Do you want to have your own clinic?
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่‡ชๅˆ†ใฎใ‚ฏใƒชใƒ‹ใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚’ๆŒใกใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
15:31
Do you want to work in a hospital?
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15:33
Do you want to specialize in a particular area?
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15:36
Do you want to work for Doctors Without Borders?
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ใงๅƒใใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ‹๏ผŸ ่ฒงใ—ใ„ๅ›ฝใชใฉใง
15:39
Do you want to volunteer in, like, poor countries?
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ใƒœใƒฉใƒณใƒ†ใ‚ฃใ‚ขใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
15:43
What do you want to do once you're educated and once you're licensed as a doctor?
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ๆ•™่‚ฒใ‚’ๅ—ใ‘ ใฆๅŒปๅธซใฎๅ…่จฑใ‚’ๅ–ๅพ—ใ—ใŸใ‚‰ใ€ไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹?
15:49
Purpose, intent.
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็›ฎ็š„ใ€ๆ„ๅ›ณใ€‚
15:51
Now, I also have a lot of people telling me, "Oh, I want - I'm applying to this university
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15:56
because it's a very good school", and they go on and on and on.
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16:00
But interestingly, they never actually say in their letter of intent or in their statement
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16:07
of purpose what it is they want to study.
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16:11
They're applying for dental school, for example.
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16:13
Okay, yeah, that's obvious.
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16:15
That's where you send the application.
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ใใ“ ใ‹ใ‚‰็”ณ่ซ‹ๆ›ธใ‚’้€ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
16:17
They know you're applying to dental school.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒ ๆญฏๅญฆ้ƒจใซๅ‡บ้ก˜ใ—ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๆญฏ็ง‘ๅŒปใซ
16:20
Do you just want to be a dentist?
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16:21
Do you want to be an orthodontist?
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็Ÿฏๆญฃๆญฏ็ง‘ใซใชใ‚ŠใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ ใ“ใฎๅˆ†้‡Ž
16:25
Do you want to specialize in this area or that area?
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ใ‚’ๅฐ‚้–€ใซใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ ใ‹ใ€ใใ‚Œใจใ‚‚ใใฎๅˆ†้‡Žใ‚’ๅฐ‚้–€ใซใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹ใ€‚
16:29
You actually have to say what it is you want to study.
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ๅฎŸ้š›ใซ ไฝ•ใ‚’ๅ‹‰ๅผทใ—ใŸใ„ใฎใ‹ใ‚’่จ€ใ‚ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
16:32
They know you want to go to dental school, you applied to a dental school.
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16:38
Tell them specifically what you want to do.
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ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅ…ทไฝ“็š„ใซไผใˆ ใพใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚
16:40
If they accept you, what are you going to do?
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ๅ—ใ‘ๅ…ฅใ‚ŒใŸใ‚‰ใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใฏ ใฉใ†ใ—ใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
16:44
What are you going to do while you're in school?
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ๅœจๅญฆไธญใฏไฝ•ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใคใ‚‚ใ‚Šใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ฐใƒฉใƒ ใ‚’ๅ’ๆฅญใ—ใŸๅพŒ
16:47
What do you hope to do, what do you hope to accomplish after you graduate from the program?
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ใ€ไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹ใ€ไฝ•ใ‚’ ้”ๆˆใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹?
16:53
What is your purpose?
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฎ็›ฎ็š„ใฏใชใ‚“ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
16:55
What is your intent?
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฎๆ„ๅ›ณใฏไฝ•ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
16:56
What are you going to do with this education?
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ใ“ใฎๆ•™่‚ฒใงไฝ•ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใคใ‚‚ใ‚Šใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
17:00
And when I say during school, when you come to the university, what are you going to do
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ๅœจๅญฆไธญ ใ€ๅคงๅญฆใซๆฅใŸใ‚‰ไฝ•ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใคใ‚‚ใ‚Š
17:06
there?
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ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
17:07
What do you want to accomplish?
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17:08
Do you want to just go to classes, take notes, pass the test, and go out and get your degree?
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ๆŽˆๆฅญใซๅ‡บใฆใ€ใƒกใƒขใ‚’ๅ–ใฃใฆ ใ€ใƒ†ใ‚นใƒˆใซๅˆๆ ผใ—ใฆใ€ๅค–ใซๅ‡บใฆๅญฆไฝใ‚’ๅ–ๅพ—ใ—ใŸใ„ใ ใ‘ใงใ™ใ‹?
17:14
Or do you want to engage, do you want to do research, do you want to contribute to the
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ใใ‚Œใจใ‚‚ใ€ๅ‚ๅŠ ใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹ใ€ ็ ”็ฉถใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ„
17:19
growth of the program, etc.?
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ใงใ™ใ‹ใ€ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ฐใƒฉใƒ ใฎๆˆ้•ทใซ่ฒข็Œฎใ—ใŸใ„ใงใ™ใ‹?
17:23
Lots of little details.
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ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใฎๅฐใ•ใช่ฉณ็ดฐใ€‚ ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ™ในใฆใฎ็ดฐ้ƒจใซใคใ„ใฆ
17:24
You have to think very, very carefully about all these little details.
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ใ€้žๅธธใซๆ…Ž้‡ใซ่€ƒใˆใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ ใ€‚
17:29
Because again, a thousand other people are writing the exact same thing you are.
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็นฐใ‚Š่ฟ”ใ—ใซใชใ‚Šใพใ™ใŒใ€ไป–ใฎไฝ•ๅƒไบบใ‚‚ใฎไบบใ€… ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใจใพใฃใŸใๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™. ้”ๆˆใ—ใŸใ„ใ“ใจใซใคใ„ใฆ
17:36
You must stand out by being very detailed and very precise about what you want to accomplish.
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้žๅธธใซ่ฉณ็ดฐใ‹ใคๆญฃ็ขบใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใงใ€้š›็ซ‹ใฃใฆใ„ใชใ‘ใ‚Œใฐใชใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚
17:43
Okay?
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ใ‚ใ‹ใฃใŸ๏ผŸ
17:45
And don't tell me why you want to accomplish this.
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ใใ—ใฆใ€ใชใœใ“ใ‚Œใ‚’้”ๆˆใ—ใŸใ„ใฎใ‹็งใซ่จ€ใ‚ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ ใ€‚
17:50
This is part of the background.
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17:51
You can say, "Oh, I grew up watching my grandfather build all kinds of machines, that's why I
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ใ€Œใ‚ใ‚ใ€็ฅ–็ˆถใŒ ใ‚ใ‚‰ใ‚†ใ‚‹็จฎ้กžใฎๆฉŸๆขฐใ‚’ไฝœใ‚‹ใฎใ‚’่ฆ‹ใฆ่‚ฒใฃ
17:58
want to be an engineer."
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ใŸใฎใงใ€ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใ‚ขใซใชใ‚ŠใŸใ„ใฎใงใ™ใ€ใจ่จ€ใ†ใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ™ใ€‚
18:00
Great.
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็ด ๆ™ดใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใ€‚
18:01
Two, three sentences, you're done.
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18:03
How are you going to be an engineer?
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ใฉใ†ใ‚„ใฃใฆ ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใ‚ขใซใชใ‚‹ใฎ๏ผŸ ๅคงๅญฆใซ
18:06
How are you going to contribute to the university?
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ใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซ ่ฒข็Œฎใ—ใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
18:09
How are you going to graduate?
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ใฉใ†ใ‚„ใฃใฆๅ’ๆฅญใ™ใ‚‹ใฎ๏ผŸ ๅคข
18:11
How are you going to make your dream come true?
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ใ‚’ๅถใˆใ‚‹ใซใฏใฉใ†ใ—ใŸใ‚‰ ใ„ใ„ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
18:14
How are you going to attain your purpose?
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ใฉใ†ใ‚„ใฃ ใฆ็›ฎ็š„ใ‚’้”ๆˆใ™ใ‚‹ใคใ‚‚ใ‚Šใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
18:18
Right?
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18:19
That's what you need to focus on.
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ใใ‚ŒใŒใ‚ใชใŸ ใŒ้›†ไธญใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใฎใงใ™ใ€‚
18:20
So, they know that you're motivated.
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ใ ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒใ‚„ใ‚‹ๆฐ—ใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
18:22
They know you're going to come and work hard.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸ ใŒๆฅใฆไธ€็”Ÿๆ‡ธๅ‘ฝๅƒใใ“ใจใ‚’็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
18:25
They know you're going to succeed and make the university look good, which is what is
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆˆๅŠŸใ—ใ€ๅคงๅญฆใฎ่ฆ‹ๆ „ใˆใ‚’่‰ฏใใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใใ‚ŒใŒ
18:30
important to them.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใซใจใฃใฆ้‡่ฆใชใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
18:32
And that's that.
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18:33
Next, the essays.
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ๆฌกใซใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใ€‚
18:35
Again, not every university application is going to give you supplementary essays, but
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็นฐใ‚Š่ฟ”ใ—ใซใชใ‚Šใพใ™ใŒใ€ใ™ในใฆใฎๅคงๅญฆใฎใ‚ขใƒ—ใƒชใ‚ฑใƒผใ‚ทใƒงใƒณ ใŒ่ฃœ่ถณใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใ‚’ๆไพ›ใ™ใ‚‹ใ‚ใ‘
18:40
the ones that do, do not take lightly.
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ใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใŒใ€ๆไพ›ใ•ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใฎ ใฏ่ปฝ่ฆ–ใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„.
18:44
Okay?
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ใ‚ใ‹ใฃใŸ๏ผŸ
18:45
Put a lot of effort into these.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใซๅŠ›ใ‚’ๅ…ฅใ‚Œใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
18:47
Usually they're going to be very short.
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้€šๅธธใ€ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฏ ้žๅธธใซ็Ÿญใใชใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
18:49
Now, people think short essays are okay, easy, just write something.
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ไปŠใ€ไบบใ€…ใฏ็Ÿญใ„ใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใฏๅคงไธˆๅคซใ€ ็ฐกๅ˜ใงใ€ไฝ•ใ‹ใ‚’ๆ›ธใใ ใ‘ใ ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
18:53
The short essays are actually harder, because you have very few words with which to express
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ๅฐ่ซ–ๆ–‡ใฏๅฎŸ้š›ใซใฏ้›ฃใ—ใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚ใชใœใชใ‚‰ใ€่‡ชๅˆ†่‡ช่บซใซใคใ„ใฆใฎๅคงใใช่€ƒใˆ ใ‚’่กจ็พใ™ใ‚‹่จ€่‘‰ใŒใปใจใ‚“ใฉใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™
19:00
big ideas about yourself, right?
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ใ‚ˆใญ?
19:03
You still have to stand out, you still have to express something, but you have very little
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ใใ‚Œใงใ‚‚็›ฎ็ซ‹ใคๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Š ใ€ไฝ•ใ‹ใ‚’่กจ็พใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใŒใ€
19:09
space to do it in.
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ใใ‚Œใ‚’่กŒใ†ใ‚นใƒšใƒผใ‚นใฏ
19:10
So, the writing has to be very, very tight, very clear, and very on point.
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ใปใจใ‚“ใฉใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
19:18
The most important thing, and this is where a lot of people make a mistake, make sure
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ๆœ€ใ‚‚้‡่ฆใชใ“ใจใฏใ€ใ“ใ‚Œ ใฏๅคšใใฎไบบใŒ้–“้•ใ„ใ‚’็Šฏใ™ๅ ดๆ‰€
19:22
that you actually answer the question that they give you.
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ใงใ™ใ€‚ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใซไธŽใˆใ‚‹่ณชๅ•ใซๅฎŸ้š›ใซ็ญ”ใˆใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
19:26
The supplementary essays are always going to give you a question or a prompt.
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่ฃœ่ถณใฎใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใฏๅธธใซ ใ‚ใชใŸใซ่ณชๅ•ใ‚„ใƒ—ใƒญใƒณใƒ—ใƒˆใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚‹ใคใ‚‚ใ‚Šใงใ™.
19:30
Make sure that you answer the question.
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ๅฟ…ใš ่ณชๅ•ใซ็ญ”ใˆใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚ ไป–ใฎ
19:33
Don't go writing about something else.
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ใ“ใจใซใคใ„ใฆๆ›ธใใซ่กŒใ‹ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ ใ€‚
19:36
Answer the question and put a lot of information into very tight sentences.
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่ณชๅ•ใซ็ญ”ใˆใฆใ€ ้žๅธธใซใ‚ฟใ‚คใƒˆใชๆ–‡็ซ ใซๅคšใใฎๆƒ…ๅ ฑใ‚’ๅ…ฅใ‚Œใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
19:41
Now, if I can only give you one piece of advice, well, I'll give you two pieces of advice.
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ใงใฏใ€1 ใค ใ ใ‘ใ‚ขใƒ‰ใƒใ‚คใ‚นใงใใ‚‹ใจใ—ใŸใ‚‰ใ€2 ใคใฎใ‚ขใƒ‰ใƒใ‚คใ‚นใ‚’ใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
19:47
One I already gave you, give yourself a lot of time to work on these essays and letters
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็งใŒใ™ใงใซใ‚ใชใŸใซไธŽใˆใŸใ‚‚ใฎ ใฏใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใ‚„ๆ‰‹็ด™
19:53
and whatever else you need.
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ใ€ใใฎไป–ๅฟ…่ฆใชใ‚‚ใฎใซๅ–ใ‚Š็ต„ใ‚€ใŸใ‚ใซๅคšใใฎๆ™‚้–“ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
19:55
Don't wait until the last few days or the last week or the last two weeks, two, three
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้ŽๅŽปๆ•ฐๆ—ฅใ€ ๅ…ˆ้€ฑใ€ใพใŸใฏ้ŽๅŽป 2 ้€ฑ้–“ใ€2ใ€3
20:00
months or more.
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ใ‹ๆœˆใ€ใพใŸใฏใใ‚ŒไปฅไธŠใพใงๅพ…ใŸใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
20:02
My second most important tip, don't try to impress the admissions officers.
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2 ็•ช็›ฎใซ้‡่ฆใชใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใฏ ใ€ๅ…ฅๅญฆๅฏฉๆŸปๅฎ˜ใซๅฅฝๅฐ่ฑกใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚ˆใ†ใจใ—ใชใ„ใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
20:10
They're reading many, many, many applications.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏ ้žๅธธใซๅคšใใฎใ‚ขใƒ—ใƒชใ‚ฑใƒผใ‚ทใƒงใƒณใ‚’่ชญใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
20:13
The only way you're going to impress them is by actually impressing them, by being an
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใซๆ„Ÿ้Š˜ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚‹ๅ”ฏไธ€ใฎๆ–นๆณ• ใฏใ€ๅฎŸ้š›ใซๅฝผใ‚‰ใซๆ„Ÿ้Š˜ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ€ใคใพใ‚Šๅ€‹ไบบใงใ‚ใ‚‹
20:18
individual.
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ใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚
20:20
Impress them by making them see you.
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ๅฝผใ‚‰ใซ ใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’่ฆ‹ใฆใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใ„ใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใซๆ„Ÿ้Š˜ใ‚’ไธŽใˆใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
20:23
If you're writing the same as everybody else, they just toss you in the rejection pile.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใŒไป–ใฎไบบใจๅŒใ˜ใ‚ˆใ†ใซๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚Œใฐใ€ ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ๆ‹’็ตถใฎๅฑฑใซๆ”พใ‚Š่พผใ‚€ใ ใ‘ใงใ™ใ€‚
20:28
If your English is bad, rejection pile.
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฎ่‹ฑ่ชžใŒไธ‹ๆ‰‹ใชใ‚‰ใ€ ๆ‹’็ตถใฎๅฑฑใ€‚
20:31
If you're writing a personal statement but not saying anything personal, rejection pile.
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ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใŒใ€ๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชใ“ใจใฏ ไฝ•ใ‚‚่จ€ใฃใฆใ„ใชใ„ๅ ดๅˆใฏใ€ๅดไธ‹ใฎๅฑฑใงใ™ใ€‚
20:37
If you're writing a statement of purpose but you don't actually tell them what you want
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็›ฎ็š„ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚’ๆ›ธใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใŒใ€ ๅฎŸ้š›ใซไฝ•ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ„ใฎใ‹ใ‚’ไผใˆใฆใ„ใชใ„ๅ ดๅˆ
20:40
to do, rejection pile.
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ใ€ๆ‹’ๅฆใฎๅฑฑ.
20:43
Don't try to do anything, just do.
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ไฝ•ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚ˆใ†ใจใ—ใชใ„ใงใ€ ใŸใ ใ‚„ใฃใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
20:46
Just sell yourself, be yourself, and make sure that they see you.
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่‡ชๅˆ†ใ‚’ๅฃฒใ‚Š่พผใฟใ€่‡ชๅˆ†ใ‚‰ใ—ใใ‚ใ‚Šใ€ ๅฝผใ‚‰ใŒใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’่ฆ‹ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’็ขบ่ชใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
20:51
Now, having said all that, I honestly do think, especially for the non-native speakers, but
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ใจใฏใ„ใˆใ€ๆญฃ็›ดใชใจใ“ใ‚ใ€ ็‰นใซ้žใƒใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒ– ใ‚นใƒ”ใƒผใ‚ซใƒผใฎๅ ดๅˆใฏใใ†
20:59
believe me, I've worked with native speakers as well who honestly just don't know how to
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ๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใŒใ€ ๆญฃ็›ดใชใจใ“ใ‚ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎ็‰นๅฎšใฎใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใฎๆ›ธใๆ–นใ‚’็Ÿฅใ‚‰ใชใ„ใƒใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒ– ใ‚นใƒ”ใƒผใ‚ซใƒผใจไป•ไบ‹ใ‚’ใ—ใŸใ“ใจใ‚‚ใ‚ใ‚‹ใจๆ€ใ„
21:05
write these particular essays.
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21:07
Very smart people, very capable people, they just don't know how to write these particular
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้žๅธธใซ่ณขใ„ไบบใ€…ใ€้žๅธธใซๆœ‰่ƒฝใชไบบใ€…ใฏใ€ ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎ็‰นๅฎšใฎใ‚‚ใฎใ‚’ๆ›ธใๆ–นๆณ•ใ‚’็Ÿฅใ‚‰ใชใ„ใ ใ‘ใงใ™
21:13
things.
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21:14
If you're a non-native speaker, it's twice as hard, three times as hard.
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ใƒใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒ– ใ‚นใƒ”ใƒผใ‚ซใƒผใงใชใ„ๅ ดๅˆใฏใ€ 2 ๅ€ใ€3 ๅ€ใฎ้›ฃใ—ใ•ใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
21:19
I strongly recommend that you find someone to work with.
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ไธ€็ท’ใซๅƒใไบบใ‚’่ฆ‹ใคใ‘ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅผทใใŠๅ‹งใ‚ใ— ใพใ™ใ€‚
21:25
If you're in a school now, go to the guidance counselor's office and ask for an appointment.
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็พๅœจๅญฆๆ กใซ้€šใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใฏใ€ๆŒ‡ๅฐŽ ใ‚ซใ‚ฆใƒณใ‚ปใƒฉใƒผใฎใ‚ชใƒ•ใ‚ฃใ‚นใซ่กŒใใ€ไบˆ็ด„ใ‚’ไพ้ ผใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
21:31
Ask the guidance counselor to help you write these things.
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎใ“ใจใ‚’ๆ›ธใใฎใ‚’ๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†ๆŒ‡ๅฐŽใ‚ซใ‚ฆใƒณใ‚ปใƒฉใƒผใซไพ้ ผใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
21:35
If you don't have access to a guidance counselor or you don't want to work with your guidance
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ใ‚ฌใ‚คใƒ€ใƒณใ‚นใ‚ซใ‚ฆใƒณใ‚ปใƒฉใƒผใซใ‚ขใ‚ฏใ‚ปใ‚นใงใใชใ„ๅ ดๅˆใ€ ใพใŸใฏใ‚ฌใ‚คใƒ€ใƒณใ‚นใ‚ซใ‚ฆใƒณใ‚ปใƒฉใƒผใจๅ”ๅŠ›ใ—ใŸใใชใ„
21:39
counselor, there are a lot of people online or probably in your area who are professionals
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ๅ ดๅˆใฏใ€ใ‚ชใƒณใƒฉใ‚คใƒณ ใพใŸใฏใŠใใ‚‰ใใ‚ใชใŸใฎๅœฐๅŸŸใซ
21:46
who can help you work on these essays and letters.
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ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎใ‚จใƒƒใ‚ปใ‚คใ‚„ๆ‰‹็ด™ใซๅ–ใ‚Š็ต„ใ‚€ใฎใ‚’ๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใใ‚Œใ‚‹ๅฐ‚้–€ๅฎถใŒใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ„ใพใ™.
21:50
Okay?
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ใ‚ใ‹ใฃใŸ๏ผŸ
21:51
Now, if you want, I also do this, I don't do it very much, but you can go to www.editorproof.com.
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ใ•ใฆใ€ใ‚ใชใŸใŒๆœ›ใ‚€ใชใ‚‰ใ€็งใ‚‚ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚’ใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚็งใฏใ‚ใพใ‚Šใ—ใพใ›ใ‚“ใŒ ใ€www.editorproof.com ใซ่กŒใใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ™ใ€‚
22:13
You can get a bit more information, but keep in mind, this is not a cheap service.
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ใ‚‚ใ†ๅฐ‘ใ—ๆƒ…ๅ ฑใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ™ใŒ ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใฏๅฎ‰ไพกใชใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใงใฏใชใ„ใ“ใจใซๆณจๆ„ใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
22:20
These letters, again, they take time, whereas most people spend months on them, the people
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚‚ๆ™‚้–“ใŒใ‹ใ‹ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚ ใปใจใ‚“ใฉใฎไบบใฏๆ•ฐใ‹ๆœˆใ‚’่ฒปใ‚„ใ—ใพใ™ใŒใ€
22:26
who help you write these will spend a few days maybe or maybe a couple of weeks going
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ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚’ๆ›ธใใฎใ‚’ๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใใ‚Œใ‚‹ไบบใฏใ€ๅพ€ๅพฉใ™ใ‚‹ใฎใซ ใŠใใ‚‰ใๆ•ฐๆ—ฅใพใŸใฏๆ•ฐ้€ฑ้–“
22:32
back and forth, but they're going to spend a lot of hours.
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ใ‚’่ฒปใ‚„ใ—ใพใ™ใŒใ€ๅฝผใ‚‰ใฏๅคšใใฎๆ™‚้–“ใ‚’่ฒปใ‚„ใ—ใพใ™. ๆ™‚้–“ใ€‚
22:35
Do not expect to pay $20, $30, it doesn't work that way.
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20 ใƒ‰ใƒซใ€30 ใƒ‰ใƒซใ‚’ๆ”ฏๆ‰•ใ†ใ“ใจใ‚’ๆœŸๅพ…ใ—ใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ ใ€‚ใใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซใฏๆฉŸ่ƒฝใ—ใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
22:41
Either commit the time yourself or be prepared to pay someone to help you with it.
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่‡ชๅˆ†ใงๆ™‚้–“ใ‚’ๅ‰ฒใใ‹ใ€ ่ชฐใ‹ใซใŠ้‡‘ใ‚’ๆ‰•ใฃใฆๆ‰‹ไผใฃใฆใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใ†ๆบ–ๅ‚™ใ‚’ใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
22:46
Either way, take these statements and letters very, very seriously.
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ใ„ใšใ‚Œใซใ›ใ‚ˆใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜Ž ใจๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚’้žๅธธใซใ€้žๅธธใซ็œŸๅ‰ฃใซๅ—ใ‘ๆญขใ‚ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„.
22:53
They could be the difference between being accepted to university or being rejected.
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ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใฏใ€ๅคงๅญฆใซๅ—ใ‘ๅ…ฅใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‹ใ€ๆ‹’ๅฆใ•ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‹ใฎ้•ใ„ใซใชใ‚‹ๅฏ่ƒฝๆ€งใŒใ‚ใ‚Š ใพใ™ใ€‚
22:59
Okay?
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23:00
Now, I did put a quiz on this lesson at www.engvid.com.
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ใ•ใฆใ€www.engvid.com ใงใ“ใฎใƒฌใƒƒใ‚นใƒณใซ้–ขใ™ใ‚‹ใ‚ฏใ‚คใ‚บใ‚’ๅ‡บใ—ใพใ—ใŸ ใ€‚ ่‹ฑ่ชž
23:06
Just for those of you who are practicing your English and you need a little bit of practice
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ใ‚’็ทด็ฟ’ใ—ใฆใ„ใฆ ใ€ๅฐ‘ใ—ใฎ็ทด็ฟ’
23:09
and comprehension, there'll be questions about everything I said, just to test your understanding
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ใจ็†่งฃใŒๅฟ…่ฆใชไบบใฎ ใŸใ‚
23:16
of what I said.
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ใซใ€็งใŒ่จ€ใฃใŸใ“ใจใฎ็†่งฃใ‚’ใƒ†ใ‚นใƒˆใ™ใ‚‹ใŸใ‚ใซใ€็งใŒ่จ€ใฃใŸใ“ใจใ™ในใฆใซใคใ„ใฆ่ณชๅ•ใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™.
23:17
But if you have questions about any of this stuff, you can ask me at www.engvid.com as
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ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‚‰ใซใคใ„ใฆ่ณชๅ•ใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใฏ ใ€www.engvid.com ใฎใ‚ณใƒกใƒณใƒˆ ใ‚ปใ‚ฏใ‚ทใƒงใƒณใงใ‚‚่ณชๅ•ใงใใพใ™
23:23
well in the comments section, and I'll do my best to help everybody.
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ใ€‚ใ™ในใฆใฎไบบใ‚’ๅŠฉใ‘ใ‚‹ใŸใ‚ใซๆœ€ๅ–„ใ‚’ๅฐฝใใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
23:30
Some people might ask, "Why didn't I put a sample letter?"
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ใ€Œใชใœใ‚ตใƒณใƒ—ใƒซใƒฌใ‚ฟใƒผใ‚’ๅ…ฅใ‚Œใชใ‹ใฃใŸใฎใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸใ€ใจๅฐ‹ใญใ‚‹ไบบใ‚‚ใ„ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚
23:33
I can't, because there's no such thing as a standard personal statement or statement
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ๆจ™ๆบ–็š„ใชๅ€‹ไบบ็š„ใชๅฃฐๆ˜Žใ‚„็›ฎ็š„ใฎๅฃฐๆ˜ŽใชใฉใŒใชใ„ใŸใ‚ใ€ใงใใพใ›ใ‚“
23:39
of purpose.
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23:40
Every letter is unique, because every applicant is unique, alright?
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ใ™ในใฆใฎ ็”ณ่ซ‹่€…ใฏใƒฆใƒ‹ใƒผใ‚ฏใชใฎใงใ€ใ™ในใฆใฎๆ‰‹็ด™ใฏใƒฆใƒ‹ใƒผใ‚ฏใงใ™ใ‚ˆใญ๏ผŸ
23:47
I can't give you one letter, because I would have to create a person in order to do that.
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1 ้€šใฎๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚’ๆธกใ™ใ“ใจใฏใงใใพใ›ใ‚“ ใ€‚ใใฎใŸใ‚ใซใฏไบบใ‚’ไฝœๆˆใ™ใ‚‹ๅฟ…่ฆใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‰ใงใ™ใ€‚
23:52
I don't want to make up an imaginary person.
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ๆžถ็ฉบใฎไบบ็‰ฉใ‚’ไฝœใ‚ŠใŸใใชใ„ใ€‚
23:56
The letter is you.
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23:58
You are the letter, and I can't write you on the board here, so that's why there's no
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ใ‚ใชใŸใฏๆ‰‹็ด™ใงใ‚ใ‚Šใ€็งใฏใ“ใ“ใฎใƒœใƒผใƒ‰ใซใ‚ใชใŸใ‚’ๆ›ธใใ“ใจใŒใงใใชใ„ ใฎใงใ€ใ‚ตใƒณใƒ—ใƒซใŒใชใ„ใฎใฏใใฎใŸใ‚ใงใ™
24:02
sample.
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24:03
But keep that in mind when you're writing your own letter.
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ใŸใ ใ—ใ€่‡ชๅˆ†ใฎๆ‰‹็ด™ใ‚’ๆ›ธใใจใใฏใ€ใ“ใฎใ“ใจใ‚’ๅฟต้ ญใซ็ฝฎใ„ ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
24:06
Anyway, I hope some of this stuff was helpful to you.
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ใจใซใ‹ใใ€ ใ“ใฎๅ†…ๅฎนใŒๅฐ‘ใ—ใงใ‚‚ใŠๅฝนใซ็ซ‹ใฆใฐๅนธใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚
24:10
If you liked the video, please give me a like.
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ใƒ“ใƒ‡ใ‚ชใŒ ๆฐ—ใซๅ…ฅใฃใŸใ‚‰ใ€ใ„ใ„ใญใ‚’ใŠ้ก˜ใ„ใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚
24:12
Don't forget to subscribe to my channel, and ring the bell if you want to get notifications
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็งใฎใƒใƒฃใƒณใƒใƒซใ‚’่ณผ่ชญใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‚’ๅฟ˜ใ‚Œใชใ„ใงใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚ไปŠๅพŒใฎใƒ“ใƒ‡ใ‚ชใฎ ้€š็Ÿฅใ‚’ๅ—ใ‘ๅ–ใ‚ŠใŸใ„ๅ ดๅˆใฏใƒ™ใƒซใ‚’้ณดใ‚‰ใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„
24:17
of future videos, and come back soon.
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ใ€‚ใ™ใใซๆˆปใฃใฆใใพใ™ใ€‚ ่‹ฑ่ชž
24:20
I'll have more useful tips for you to help you with your futures in English.
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ใงใ‚ใชใŸใฎๅฐ†ๆฅใ‚’ๅŠฉใ‘ใ‚‹ใŸใ‚ใฎใ‚ˆใ‚Šๆœ‰็”จใชใƒ’ใƒณใƒˆใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ .
24:25
See you again soon.
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ใพใŸใŠไผšใ„ใ—ใพใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚
24:26
Bye-bye.
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