10 IELTS Writing Tips From Examiners, Teachers & Students - Improve Your IELTS Score

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Hi, I’m Martin.
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Welcome to Oxford Online English!
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In this lesson, you can get ten essential tips for your IELTS writing exam.
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How’s this video different?
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Well, we collected feedback from students who took IELTS, and also interviewed IELTS
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examiners.
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Our aim is to give you the most up-to-date IELTS advice, and also give you tips which
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you might not find elsewhere.
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We’ve also included our own top tips, which we’ve developed through teaching hundreds
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of IELTS candidates.
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You can study with us too, if you want; book classes on Oxford Online English dot com.
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One more thing, do you want English subtitles while watching this video?
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Turn them on now if you like.
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If your overall IELTS score is between two bands, your score is rounded up.
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For example, if you score 7-7-7-6 in the four sections, you’ll get band seven overall.
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In the writing exam, it probably doesn’t work the same way.
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Why ‘probably’?
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Well, there’s no clear information publicly available, and even the examiners we spoke
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to weren’t sure.
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However, according to the best information we have: if you score seven for task achievement,
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seven for coherence/cohesion, seven for vocabulary and six for grammar in your writing exam,
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that will be rounded *down* to 6.5.
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What does this mean for you?
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It means that you can’t have any major weaknesses.
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If your target score is seven, you probably need to score seven in all four areas.
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Do you make multiple small grammar errors when you write?
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This will likely limit your grammar score to six.
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If you get one score of six, then getting band seven overall becomes much more difficult.
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OK, if you score band eight in one area, then you can score band six somewhere else and
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still get seven.
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However, it’s rare that we see students with some scores much higher than others.
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Generally, the four scores – TA, C&C, vocabulary and grammar – are close together.
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So, if your target score is, for example, seven, you need to aim for seven in all four
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areas.
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Find your weakest area, find out what you need to do to hit your target score, and give
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it extra focus when preparing.
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In the past, IELTS examiners would count how many words you had written, and apply a penalty
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to your TA score if you hadn’t written enough.
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They no longer do this.
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No one will count your words.
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So, you shouldn’t do this in the exam, either.
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Why did they change?
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The idea is that you can’t write a full answer while writing less than the word count,
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and this will be reflected in your TA score anyway; there’s no need for an extra word
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count penalty.
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So, focus on writing full, well-developed answers which answer every part of the task.
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Don’t worry about word count.
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This applies to the exam.
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When practising, you should count your words.
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However, don’t focus on the word count as a number.
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If you find it difficult to meet the word count, this strongly suggests that you aren’t
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answering the task fully.
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Ask yourself: what could you add?
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What ideas could you explain in more depth?
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How long do you think the examiner will spend reading your writing?
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It depends, but the basic answer is: “not long.”
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Examiners we spoke to said they spent around five minutes per task on average; one mentioned
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that he has heard of examiners spending only three minutes per task.
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If I’m marking some IELTS writing, I need ten to fifteen minutes to do a thorough job.
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If the examiner is spending only five minutes – or less – then they’re not reading
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everything carefully.
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What does this mean for you?
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It means you should follow obvious strategies.
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Don’t experiment; give the examiner what they’re expecting to see.
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For example, in general task one, write a separate paragraph for each bullet point in
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the task.
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In academic task one, put your overview in a separate paragraph near the start of your
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answer.
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In task two, start each body paragraph with a clear topic sentence.
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You don’t *have* to do these things to get high scores, but most people follow these
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methods.
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If you take a different approach, examiners might not take the time to read your work
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carefully and understand what you’re doing.
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Keep it simple!
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It’s hopefully obvious that if you can’t write a high-scoring IELTS answer in two hours,
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then you can’t do it in one hour, either.
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Often, IELTS students try to write with a time limit, like in the exam.
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Of course, the time limit is important.
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But, if your writing has problems, then you should fix the problems first, and worry about
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the time later.
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For example, many IELTS students we meet have big problems with TA in task two.
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Often, the problems relate to planning and organising ideas.
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When we start practising, it’s common for students to need thirty minutes – or sometimes
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longer – just to *plan* one task two answer.
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If this is your situation, then don’t worry about time limits at first.
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Focus on writing an answer at your target band score.
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If it takes three hours, then OK.
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Once you can *consistently* hit your target band score, then start training for speed.
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Here’s a common question which IELTS students ask: how do I get ideas for my essay in task
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two?
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I don’t know.
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You need to solve that problem.
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If you’re in the exam, and you read the task two question, and you think “I don’t
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have anything to say about this”, then you’re in a bad position.
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There’s not much that can help you at that moment.
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You need to prepare for this *before* the exam.
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So, what should you do?
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First, read as many task two questions as you can, and think about them.
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Second, if you don’t have a strong opinion, then try to find some news articles on the
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same topic.
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Read articles with different opinions, and think about what you do or don’t agree with,
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and why.
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If you have someone to practise speaking with, then debating is also helpful.
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Take a topic; you and your partner choose one side each.
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Then, you have a debate, you try to support your side and argue against your partner’s
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points.
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Third, here’s a useful exercise: take a task two question and write two practice essays
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on opposite sides.
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For example, look at this question.
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To practise, write two essays.
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The first argues that climate change is the most serious environmental problem facing
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humanity, and the second argues that other environmental issues are equally serious.
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Sound like a lot of work?
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It is!
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But, to score seven or higher in task two, you need detailed, well-supported ideas in
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your essay.
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There’s no short cut.
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A question: what score will you get if your essay is not 100% on topic?
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IELTS examiners have a term: ‘on-topic, off-task’.
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They use this for essays which are in the right general area, but which don’t answer
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the question directly.
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Such essays are limited to band four for TA, and five for C&C, *maximum.* This problem
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applies to many of the IELTS essays we see from our students.
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You must train yourself to read the question carefully.
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Think about *every single word*.
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For example, look at the task two you saw just now.
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Before you can even think about this question, you need to think about some of the ideas.
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For example, what do ‘serious’ and ‘important’ mean here?
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What does it mean for one environmental problem to be more serious than another?
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What are ‘other environmental issues’?
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These are not simple questions.
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We often see IELTS students who start writing without thinking about these things.
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Then, they write an on-topic, off-task essay.
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It’s easy to do.
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You might be watching this thinking: “That wouldn’t happen to me!”
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It might.
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It’s one of the biggest and most common problems we see.
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Look at a task two question.
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Now, look at a different version.
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Can you see the difference?
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In the task two instructions, it matters whether a word is singular or plural.
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For example, if the task asks you to describe ‘the main problem’, then you need to focus
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on one, and only one, problem.
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If the task asks you to describe ‘problems’, then you should include at least two.
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The same is true with other words you’ll see in many IELTS questions, like ‘benefits’,
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‘advantages’, ‘disadvantages’, and so on.
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Pay attention to whether the word is singular or plural.
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Stronger answers – band eight or nine – tend to be longer, especially in task two.
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It’s quite difficult to write a full, well-developed essay answer in only 250 words.
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Remember also that there’s no upper limit.
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Of course, you need to be careful that your essay is well-organised, with logical paragraphing
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and a clear progression from the beginning to the end.
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So, if you’re aiming for higher scores – 7.5 or above – you should probably be aiming
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to write a longer response in task 2.
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Writing more allows you to develop your ideas in more depth and
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use a wider range of vocabulary -
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both of which are necessary for the highest band.
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Sometimes, you’ll hear IELTS advice like ‘your ideas don’t matter, so long as they’re
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relevant’, or ‘it doesn’t matter if what you write is true or not’.
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We might even have said similar things in the past!
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This advice is true to a point; if your target is band six, then sure, this advice is fine.
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If you’re aiming for higher scores – seven and higher – then you can’t think like
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this.
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Your ideas matter.
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Not all relevant ideas are equal.
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Ideas which are more focused, more detailed, and better-supported are better for your TA
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score.
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If you’re aiming for band seven plus, you should approach your task two essay in this
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way: imagine you’re writing for someone who has the opposite opinion to you, and you
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*really* want to convince them to change their mind.
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We sometimes see questions about academic task one like: “How do I deal with a bar
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chart question?”
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“What do I do with a map question?”
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And so on.
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Actually, you can approach all academic task one questions the same way.
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Imagine you’re writing for someone who can’t see the chart, or the map, or whatever.
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Now, imagine that this person is going to read what you’ve written, and try to draw
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the chart.
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Can this imaginary person do it?
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Can they recreate the chart, using only what you’ve written?
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If they can, then you’ve written a high-scoring answer, at least for TA and probably C&C.
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So, don’t overthink it.
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Write your answer with this idea in your head.
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Your task one writing will improve immediately.
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We’ve seen this work with many students!
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Wait, what?
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Only one task one tip?
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IELTS students don’t generally have so many problems with task one, either academic or
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general.
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And, the problems they do have are relatively easy to fix.
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So yes, we only have one major task one tip.
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But OK, here are two quick bonus tips for task one.
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For task one general, the most common problem we see is tone – meaning how formal or informal
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your language is.
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People either write in an inappropriate tone – in most cases, this means using language
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which is too formal for the task – or, they mix formal and informal language in their
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answer.
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For high task one scores, your tone needs to be both appropriate and consistent.
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For task one academic, learn some phrases to describe statistics and figures.
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Many academic task ones are quite similar: you need to describe trends and data.
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This requires a limited range of language, which you can – and should – prepare for.
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For example, do you know any words which have the same meaning as ‘increase’?
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What’s the difference between ‘rise’ and ‘raise’?
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Finding the answers to these questions will help you to write a better task one answer
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in the academic writing exam.
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That’s all.
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Thanks for watching!
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See you next time!
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