Write Professional Emails in English | Step-by-Step

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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How much time do you spend sitting at your desk worried about
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๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ฑ…์ƒ์— ์•‰์•„ ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ๋งŽ์€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด์‹ญ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ
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clicking that send button on an email? Is your email clear?
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? ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
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Is your grammar accurate? Is it easy to understand,
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ์ •ํ™•ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‰ฝ๊ณ 
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professional and polite?
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์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๋ฉฐ ๊ณต์†ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
00:15
Perhaps you regularly use a translation tool,
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์•„๋งˆ๋„ ์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ
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but you're still not sure. In this Confident English lesson today,
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ํ™•์‹คํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ด Confident English ์ˆ˜์—…์—์„œ
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I want to help you write stress-free, worry-free emails in English.
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์ €๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค ์—†๊ณ  ๊ฑฑ์ • ์—†๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋•๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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I'm going to share with you seven tips plus sentence starters.
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7๊ฐ€์ง€ ํŒ๊ณผ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‹œ์ž‘์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:32
You can immediately begin using to write professional emails in English.
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:50
Before we get started, just in case this is your first time here,
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์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์ฒ˜์Œ ์˜ค์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๋ฅผ ๋Œ€๋น„ํ•˜์—ฌ
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let me quickly introduce myself. I'm Annemarie with Speak Confident English.
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๊ฐ„๋‹จํžˆ ์ œ ์†Œ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š” Speak Confident English์˜ Annemarie์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:59
Everything I do is designed to help you get the confidence you want for your
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ์ผ์€ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด
01:03
life and work in English.
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ์‚ถ๊ณผ ์ผ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์„ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋•๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๊ณ ์•ˆ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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One way I do that is with my weekly Confident English lessons where I share my
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ด ์ˆ˜์—…์—์„œ์™€ ๊ฐ™์ด
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top fluency and confidence-building strategies as well as training and
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์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์œ ์ฐฝํ•จ๊ณผ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ๊ตฌ์ถ• ์ „๋žต, ํ›ˆ๋ จ ๋ฐ ์˜์‚ฌ
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communication skills, just like in this lesson today. So while you're here,
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์†Œํ†ต ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ฃผ๊ฐ„ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ YouTube์—์„œ
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make sure to give this lesson a thumbs up on YouTube and subscribe to the Speak
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์ด ๋ ˆ์Šจ์— ์ข‹์•„์š”๋ฅผ ๋ˆ„๋ฅด๊ณ  Speak
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Confident English YouTube channel so you never miss one of my Confident English
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Confident English YouTube ์ฑ„๋„์„ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ œ Confident English ๋ ˆ์Šจ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๋†“์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ํ•˜์„ธ์š”
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lessons. Before we get to the first tip for easy to write emails in English,
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. ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์— ๋„๋‹ฌํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์—
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let's talk about what professional emails should be.
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์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ด์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
01:36
Your emails should be clear, concise, polite,
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ •์ค‘
01:41
and productive. In other words,
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ƒ์‚ฐ์ ์ด์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰,
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emails that you send for work purposes should be easy to read and
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ์ฝ๊ธฐ ์‰ฌ์›Œ์•ผ ํ•˜๋ฉฐ
01:49
they should get the job done. Whether the job of the email is to inform,
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์ž‘์—…์„ ์™„๋ฃŒํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ์—ญํ• ์ด ์ •๋ณด ์ œ๊ณต,
01:53
negotiate, propose, or make a request.
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ํ˜‘์ƒ, ์ œ์•ˆ ๋˜๋Š” ์š”์ฒญ์ธ์ง€ ์—ฌ๋ถ€.
01:57
Unlike emails to friends and family,
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์นœ๊ตฌ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ€์กฑ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๊ณผ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ
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professional emails have standards we need to follow.
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—๋Š” ๋”ฐ๋ผ์•ผ ํ•  ํ‘œ์ค€์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:03
Whether you're writing an email to your boss,
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์ƒ์‚ฌ์—๊ฒŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์“ฐ๋“ ,
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a potential new client you'd like to impress a colleague in another country,
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋‚˜๋ผ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ๋™๋ฃŒ์—๊ฒŒ ๊นŠ์€ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ž ์žฌ์ ์ธ ์ƒˆ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์ด๋“ ,
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a human resources manager about a job opportunity or an employer about a
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์ฑ„์šฉ ๊ธฐํšŒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ธ์‚ฌ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž์—๊ฒŒ , ์ทจ์—… ๋ฉด์ ‘์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ์—๊ฒŒ
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job interview,
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02:18
the emails you send in these situations represent you and perhaps
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“ , ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ๊ท€ํ•˜๋ฅผ ๋Œ€ํ‘œํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„๋งˆ๋„
02:23
represent the company you work for.
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๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ๊ทผ๋ฌดํ•˜๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋Œ€ํ‘œํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:25
What you say is going to leave an impression by writing an email
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02:30
that is clear, concise, polite, and productive.
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๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์˜ˆ์˜ ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ณ  ์ƒ์‚ฐ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์€ ๊นŠ์€ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ๋‚จ๊ธธ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:33
You are ensuring clear and effective communication.
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๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜์„ ๋ณด์žฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:38
So let's get right into tip number one.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
02:41
Use a simple specific subject line.
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๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์ œ๋ชฉ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:45
As I'm sure you know, when you open your email inbox every day,
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์•„์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ, ๋งค์ผ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋ฐ›์€ ํŽธ์ง€ํ•จ์„ ์—ด๋ฉด ๋ชจ๋“  ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„
02:49
you do a quick scan through all the emails,
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๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ›‘์–ด๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
02:52
and there are certain ones that jump out to you,
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02:54
certain emails you want to open.
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.
02:56
Those tend to have clear specific subject lines.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ํŠน์ • ์ œ๋ชฉ์„ ๊ฐ–๋Š” ๊ฒฝํ–ฅ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:01
You know exactly what the email is about or the subject line captures
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ œ๋ชฉ์ด
03:06
your attention.
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๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ
03:07
No matter who you're communicating to in a professional email,
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๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์™€ ํ†ต์‹ ํ•˜๋“  ๊ด€๊ณ„์—†์ด
03:12
it's important to have a subject line that is going to tell your reader
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๋…์ž์—๊ฒŒ
03:17
exactly what the email's about.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ์•Œ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ œ๋ชฉ์„ ๊ฐ–๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:19
Doing this increases the likelihood that your reader will open and read
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋…์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์—ด์–ด ์ฝ๊ณ 
03:24
your email and respond as well.
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์‘๋‹ตํ•  ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ์ด ๋†’์•„์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:26
So let's take a look at a quick example of what not to do and what to do
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง์•„์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋Œ€์‹  ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:31
instead.
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.
03:32
Rather than simply use the words meeting request in a subject line,
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์ œ๋ชฉ ์ค„์— ์š”์ฒญ ํšŒ์˜๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋Œ€์‹  ์ผ์ • ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์›”์š”์ผ์— ๋งŒ๋‚˜๋ผ๊ณ 
03:37
you can make it more specific by saying, meet Monday about schedule change.
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๋งํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:43
This subject line is not a complete sentence.
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์ด ์ œ๋ชฉ์€ ์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:46
If I were writing this in an email, I might say,
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋กœ ์ด ๊ธ€์„ ์“ด๋‹ค๋ฉด
03:49
can you meet on Monday to talk about a schedule change?
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์›”์š”์ผ์— ๋งŒ๋‚˜์„œ ์ผ์ • ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
03:53
But I want to make this subject line as clear and short as
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด ์ œ๋ชฉ ์€ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์งง๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ
03:58
possible, so I'm focusing on the keywords,
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04:01
the most important element of my email. Before we go on to tip number two,
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์š”์†Œ์ธ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์œผ๋กœ ๋„˜์–ด๊ฐ€๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์ œ๋ชฉ์˜
04:06
here are a few more great examples of subject lines.
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋” ์ข‹์€ ์˜ˆ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:10
Suggestion for your presentation, answer to your question about pricing plans,
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ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜ ์ œ์•ˆ, ์š”๊ธˆ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‹ต๋ณ€,
04:15
two ideas to solve budget issue, update on software bug,
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์˜ˆ์‚ฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด, ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์›จ์–ด ๋ฒ„๊ทธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์—…๋ฐ์ดํŠธ,
04:19
new user stats now available.
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์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ํ†ต๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:22
Each one of those says exactly what the email is about so your reader knows what
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๊ทธ๋“ค ๊ฐ๊ฐ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ๋งํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋…์ž๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
04:27
to expect. Now, I don't know about you,
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. ์ด์ œ ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋ชจ๋ฅด์ง€๋งŒ
04:30
but I like to write my subject line last.
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์ œ๋ชฉ ์ค„์„ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:33
I say what I need to say in my email and make sure that I know exactly what
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‚ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋งํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋งํ•˜๊ณ 
04:38
the focus or purpose of the email is,
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ์ดˆ์ ์ด๋‚˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•œ
04:41
and then I use that information to help me write that clear,
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๋‹ค์Œ ๊ทธ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ 
04:45
concise subject line.
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๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•œ ์ œ๋ชฉ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:47
Tip number two is use greetings always.
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๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:51
This one seems obvious,
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์—ฐํ•ด ๋ณด์ด์ง€๋งŒ
04:53
but you might be surprised how many emails get sent in a work
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์ž‘์—… ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์—์„œ ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง ์—†์ด ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ๋งŽ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์ „์†ก๋˜๊ณ 
04:58
environment without an appropriate greeting,
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05:00
and an email without a greeting might appear rude or too familiar.
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์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์ด ์—†๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๋ฌด๋ก€ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์นœ์ˆ™ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€์— ๋†€๋ž„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž ์‹œ ํ›„์— ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๊ณผ
05:05
I'm going to share a few examples with you in just a moment.
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:09
All of them are ideal for the workplace,
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๋ชจ๋‘ ์ง์žฅ์—์„œ, ๋ชจ๋ฅด๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ
05:12
for contacting or reaching out to someone you don't know,
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์—ฐ๋ฝํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์„ ์ทจํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ,
05:15
requesting information about services or products,
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์„œ๋น„์Šค ๋˜๋Š” ์ œํ’ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜,
05:19
or aiming to connect with a new potential client. Of course,
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์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ž ์žฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ๊ณผ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ด์ƒ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌผ๋ก  ์ง์žฅ
05:23
if you're communicating outside of work with coworkers, you know well,
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๋ฐ–์—์„œ ๋™๋ฃŒ,
05:27
friends or family, we can be far more casual.
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์นœ๊ตฌ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์กฑ๊ณผ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ์บ์ฃผ์–ผํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์„
05:31
We can even eliminate a greeting. But in the workplace,
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์—†์•จ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ง์žฅ์—์„œ
05:34
when we're writing professional emails, always, always,
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๋•Œ ํ•ญ์ƒ,
05:39
always include a greeting.
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์„ ํฌํ•จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:41
The first on our list and the most common is, hello, a simple hello.
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๋ชฉ๋ก์˜ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ์ด์ž ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”, ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:46
After that, we typically include someone's name, and I have to tell you,
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๊ทธ ๋‹ค์Œ์—๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ํฌํ•จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:50
I'm an American. I live in the United States. We tend to be rather informal,
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์ €๋Š” ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์ธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ € ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ ์‚ด์•„์š” . ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‹ค์†Œ ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆฌ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝํ–ฅ์ด ์žˆ์–ด์„œ
05:55
so most of the time if we're writing to an individual,
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๊ฐœ์ธ์—๊ฒŒ ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
05:59
we'll say hello with their first name. But of course,
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์ด๋ฆ„์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ฌผ๋ก  ์ข€
06:02
if I want to be even more formal and show respect,
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๋” ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์กด๊ฒฝ์‹ฌ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด
06:06
I can use someone's title and their last name. For example, Ms.
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์˜ ์งํ•จ๊ณผ ์„ฑ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด Ms.
06:11
Fowler or Mr. Williams.
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Fowler ๋˜๋Š” Mr. Williams์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:14
A second common greeting for professional emails and one that is more formal
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง ๊ณผ ์ข€ ๋” ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆฐ
06:18
is to use the word dear,
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์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์€ ์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ
06:20
followed by someone's first name or their title and their last name.
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๋’ค์— ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„ ์ด๋‚˜ ์งํ•จ๊ณผ ์„ฑ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:24
So Dear Laura, Dear Dr. Sloan, Dear Ms. Williams,
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” Laura, ์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” Dr. Sloan, ์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” Ms. Williams,
06:30
you'll typically see this used in very formal emails,
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์„œ์‹ ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฒฉ์‹ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:33
almost like a business letter, for example,
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06:36
an email offering a job position for a more casual tone,
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06:40
you can certainly use the word high in a professional email followed by
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ high๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด ๋’ค์—
06:44
someone's first name. And lastly,
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ
06:47
we can use to whom it may concern or dear. Plus,
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์†Œ์ค‘ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€
06:51
the job title that you're writing to,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ง์œ„๋Š”
06:54
I recommend only using this last one.
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์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์งํ•จ๋งŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ
06:57
If you cannot find the name of the person that you're writing to,
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์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ฐพ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
07:01
it is always best to personalize your greeting with someone's first or last
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์ด๋‚˜ ์„ฑ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์„ ๊ฐœ์ธํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:05
name, but if you can't find it,
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ฐพ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
07:07
you could certainly use to whom it may concern or Dear Hiring manager,
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ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋˜๋Š” ์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” ์ฑ„์šฉ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž,
07:12
dear Human resources manager, and now, tip number three,
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์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” ์ธ์‚ฌ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž, ์ด์ œ ์„ธ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์œผ๋กœ
07:18
follow the KISS principle in the body of your email.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์— ์žˆ๋Š” KISS ์›์น™์„ ๋”ฐ๋ฅด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ด์ „์— KISS๋ผ๋Š” ์•ฝ์–ด๋ฅผ
07:22
If you've never heard the acronym KISS before,
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๋“ค์–ด๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์—†๋‹ค๋ฉด
07:25
it stands for keep it short and simple. As I'm sure you know,
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Keep it short and simple์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์•„์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ
07:30
no one really wants to spend 10 minutes trying to read through an
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์•„๋ฌด๋„ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ฝ์œผ๋ ค๊ณ  10๋ถ„์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ดํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:34
email.
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.
07:35
Long complex sentences with multiple paragraphs in an email
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์ด ํฌํ•จ๋œ ๊ธธ๊ณ  ๋ณต์žกํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€
07:40
is a sure way to lose your reader's attention.
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๋…์ž์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ์žƒ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ํ™•์‹คํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:43
It also leads to more miscommunication because important details
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๋˜ํ•œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์งง๊ณ  ๋‹จ์ˆœํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์ •๋ณด๊ฐ€ ์†์‹ค๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ์˜์‚ฌ ์†Œํ†ต์ด ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:48
can get lost to keep your email short and simple. Here are five recommendations.
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. ๋‹ค์Œ์€ ๋‹ค์„ฏ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๊ถŒ์žฅ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:53
Number one, use short sentences. Number two,
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์ฒซ์งธ, ์งง์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š” . ๋‘˜์งธ,
07:57
use simple grammar and simple sentence structures. Number three,
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๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์…‹์งธ,
08:02
use short words if you can. Four, avoid long paragraphs.
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๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๋ฉด ์งง์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋„ท์งธ, ๊ธด ๋‹จ๋ฝ์„ ํ”ผํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
08:07
And number five, use bullet points for lists or key details.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์„ฏ์งธ, ๋ชฉ๋ก์ด๋‚˜ ์ฃผ์š” ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์— ๊ธ€๋จธ๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ
08:12
If you've ever worried about using complex grammar or difficult
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๋ณต์žกํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ด๋‚˜ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•œ ์ ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด
08:17
vocabulary in an email,
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08:19
I hope this makes you feel a little bit more relaxed because the best strategy
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ํŽธ์•ˆํ•ด์กŒ์œผ๋ฉด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
08:23
is to keep it as simple as possible. By doing so,
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08:27
not only are you avoiding potential grammar mistakes and frustrations,
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๋Œ€์‹ ์— ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค, ์นœ์• ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋ผ,
08:31
but you're also making it far more easier for your reader to quickly read
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์ €๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ž˜ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ถŒ์žฅ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ์ ์–ด์„œ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:36
and understand the email that you've sent.
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08:38
Let me give you an example of what not to do and what to do.
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๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ์ œ๋ชฉ,
08:43
Instead, I could send an email like this, dear Sarah,
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์‹œ์ž‘์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์„ ํฌํ•จํ•˜์—ฌ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง ๊ณผ
์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ธฐ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์—
08:48
I'm writing with recommendations on how to best write an email in English,
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๋‹ซ๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ํฌํ•จํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ 
08:51
and I want to share several with you, including a clear, clear subject line,
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์ž ์žฌ์ ์ธ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:56
the importance of starting with a professional greeting and making the purpose
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ํ•ด๋‹น ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ด๊ณ  ์ด
08:59
of your email clear. Before you click the send button,
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๋Œ€์•ˆ์„ ์ฝ๋Š”์ง€ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์‚ฌ๋ผ์—๊ฒŒ,
09:02
you'll also want to make sure you've included a closing and double check your
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ž˜ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๊ถŒ์žฅ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:07
email for any potential errors.
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—๋Š” ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ์ œ๋ชฉ, ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง,
09:09
Compare how that email looks and reads to this
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๋ชฉ์  ๋˜๋Š” ์š”์ฒญ ์ง„์ˆ , ๊ณต์†ํ•œ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํฌํ•จ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ
09:13
alternative. Dear Sarah,
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09:16
I have some recommendations on how to best write emails in English.
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๋ณด๋‚ด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ๊ต์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ ์ค‘
์–ด๋Š ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์ฝ๊ณ  ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ์‰ฌ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ
09:20
These include a clear subject line, a professional greeting,
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? ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์งง๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ
09:24
a statement of purpose or request, and a polite closing. Lastly,
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๋„ค ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์„ ์—ผ๋‘์— ๋‘์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:29
it's important to proofread before you click send,
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09:31
which one of those was much easier for you to read and understand
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๋ชฉ์ ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
๋…์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์—ฌ๋Š” ์ˆœ๊ฐ„ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ผ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:36
immediately? Definitely the second one. While you're writing that short,
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€
09:40
simple email, you want to keep tip number four in mind.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด
09:44
Make your purpose or request clear.
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09:47
The moment your reader opens your email, they're going to start doing one thing.
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์ทจํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์กฐ์น˜ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜๋Š” ์‘๋‹ต์„ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•ด๋‹น ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋งค์šฐ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์Šค์บ”ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:51
They're going to start scanning that email very quickly to identify the purpose
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๊ทธ ์ •๋ณด๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋„๋ก
09:55
of the email and to identify any steps they are supposed to
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค
10:00
take or any responses that you're expecting.
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๋˜๋Š” ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ์‹๋ณ„ํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”
10:03
That information needs to be extremely clear.
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ํฌํ•จํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
10:07
To help you think about how to do that,
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10:09
I've identified a few common scenarios for writing emails
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์ž ์žฌ์ ์ธ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜์— ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น์„ ์‹œ๋„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ
์ž์‹ ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
10:14
or a few common purposes,
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10:16
and I've included some sample sentences you can use to get you started.
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์ž์‹ ์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€ ๋ฐํžˆ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๋ฟ๋งŒ
์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๊ทธ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ด๋””์„œ ์–ป์—ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ฐํžˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
10:21
If you're reaching out to a potential contact or trying to do some networking,
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10:25
you may likely be introducing yourself in an email if that's the case.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ฃผ์†Œ๋Š” ์–ด๋””์„œ ์–ป์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”
๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์˜ˆ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์˜ˆ,
10:30
Not only do you want to state who you are,
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10:32
but it's also helpful to state where you got that individual's
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์ œ ์ด๋ฆ„์€ Annemarie์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š” Speak Confident English์—์„œ ๊ทผ๋ฌดํ•˜๊ณ 
10:37
information.
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์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ Susan์—๊ฒŒ์„œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์–ป์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:38
How did you hear about them or where did you get their email address?
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ž‘์—…ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์˜ ์ž ์žฌ์ ์ธ ํŒŒํŠธ๋„ˆ๋กœ ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์ถ”์ฒœํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
10:42
So here are a couple of examples you could use. Example number one,
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. ๊ทธ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด
์ €๋Š” ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค€ ๊ฐœ์ธ์„ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์‹๋ณ„ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
10:46
my name's Annemarie. I'm with Speak Confident English,
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10:49
and I got your name from Susan.
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. ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ
10:51
She recommended you as a potential partner on a project I'm working
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๋‚˜๋Š” ์ฆ‰๊ฐ์ ์ธ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋‚˜ ๊ต๊ฐ์„ ํ˜•์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:56
on. With that example,
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๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์˜ต์…˜์€
10:58
I've immediately identified the individual who helped me make this
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์ œ ์ด๋ฆ„์ด Annemarie์ด๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ฐธ๊ณ ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ท€์‚ฌ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ป์€
11:02
connection. By doing that,
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11:04
I'm helping to establish some immediate trust or rapport.
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๋‹ค์Œ ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ์ง„์ˆ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:08
A second option might be,
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์ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋” ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•„์š”ํ•œ
11:10
my name's Annemarie and I got your contact information from your company's
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๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€ ๋ช…์‹œํ•œ ํ›„ ๋‹ค์Œ์œผ๋กœ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์€ ๊ธ€์„
11:15
website I'm writing in reference to,
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์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ชฉ์ ๊ณผ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋ฐํžˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:18
and then you would continue to state your purpose,
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด
11:20
which we'll talk more about right now.
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์ง€๋‚œ ๋ชฉ์š”์ผ์— ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹  ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์œผ๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŠน์ • ๋‚ ์งœ๋ฅผ
11:23
The next thing you want to do after stating who you are in an email if it's
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์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด
11:27
necessary to do that, is to state your purpose, the reason you're writing.
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์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ์— ๋ณด๋‚ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋‹ต์žฅ์„ ์“ฐ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
11:32
For example,
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4์›” 13์ผ์— ๋ณด๋‚ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋‹ต์žฅ์„ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:33
I'm writing in response to your inquiry from last Thursday,
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์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ์‘๋‹ตํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š”
11:38
or you might use a specific date. For example,
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ์‘๋‹ตํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒฌ์ ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:41
I'm writing in response to the email you sent last week,
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11:44
or I'm writing in response to the email you sent on April 13th.
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๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ป๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜๋Š” ํŠน์ • ์„œ๋น„์Šค ๋˜๋Š” ์ œํ’ˆ์„ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
11:49
I'd like to respond to your inquiry about, or I'd like to,
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. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ
11:53
to respond to your email about, or I'd like to get a quote on,
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ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ์‹œ์ž‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด
11:58
I'd like to get pricing information on,
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, ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‹œ์ž‘ ๋‹จ์–ด์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์„œ๋ฉด์œผ๋กœ ์ „์ฒด ๋ชฉ๋ก์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•œ
๋‚˜์˜ Speak Confident English ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์—์„œ ์ด ํŠน์ • ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:01
and then you might identify the specific service or product you're inquiring
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about.
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If you want more examples of effective sentence starters for stating your
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. ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ์ž์‹ ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•œ
ํ›„ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ
12:10
purpose,
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12:11
I recommend that you visit this particular lesson at my Speak Confident English
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, ๋ชฉ์ ๊ณผ
12:15
website where I've provided a fuller list in writing with sentence
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๊ธฐํƒ€ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•œ ํ›„์—๋Š”
์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ „ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:20
starters.
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12:20
You can begin using right away after you introduce yourself in your email if
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์‹ ์†ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์‘๋‹ตํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:25
necessary, and after you state your purpose,
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์ •๋ณด์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์„์ง€๋„ ๋ชจ๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:28
plus any other important details,
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์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚ด์–ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ฝ์–ด์ค€ ๊ฒƒ์— ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:30
it's important to also thank the individual you're writing too.
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๋‹ค์Œ์€ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์‰ฌ์šด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:34
You might be thanking them for promptly replying.
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์ œ๊ณตํ•ด์ฃผ์‹  ์ •๋ณด์— ๊ฐ์‚ฌ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ œ ์š”์ฒญ์— ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ์‘๋‹ตํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:37
You might be thanking them for information.
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12:40
You might thank them for your time in reading your email.
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์‹ ์†ํ•œ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์— ๊ฐ์‚ฌ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๋‚ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:44
Here are a few easiest sentences you could use.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์™„๋ฃŒํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์—
์ตœ์ข… ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํด๋ฆญ ์œ ๋„ ๋ฌธ์•ˆ์œผ๋กœ ๋๋‚ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:46
Thank you for the information you provided.
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12:49
Thank you for responding to my request so quickly.
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. ๋…์ž๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•ด์ฃผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋Š”๊ฐ€? ํด๋ฆญ ์œ ๋„
12:52
Thank you for your prompt reply. Thank you for your time.
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๋ฌธ์•ˆ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋…์ž์—๊ฒŒ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋…์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์•Œ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:56
And then before you finish,
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12:58
you want to add any final remarks or end with a call to
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. ํšŒ์‹ ,
์ •๋ณด ๊ณต์œ , ์ฒจ๋ถ€ ํŒŒ์ผ ์ „์†ก์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
13:03
action. What is it that you want your reader to do?
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ํ–‰๋™ ์ด‰๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด,
13:07
A call to action is basically telling your reader what you expect them or want
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13:11
them to do. Are you asking them to reply,
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ํšŒ์‹ ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:15
to share information with you, to send you an attachment?
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์ œํ’ˆ ๋˜๋Š” ์„œ๋น„์Šค์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž์„ธํ•œ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:18
Whatever that call to action is, make sure that it's clear. For example,
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ํ•ด๋‹น ํšŒ์˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ท€ํ•˜์—๊ฒŒ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ์ง€ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
์ด๋“ค ๊ฐ๊ฐ์€ ๋…์ž์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:23
I look forward to receiving your reply.
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13:26
I look forward to getting more information about,
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๋‹ค์„ฏ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ์„ ๋“œ๋ฆด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:29
and then the product or service.
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์„ ํฌํ•จํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ
13:31
Please let me know if that meeting time works for you.
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง ์—†์ด ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋„ ํฌํ•จํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:34
Each of those tells the reader exactly what you're waiting for.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋์€ ๊ฐ‘์ž‘์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ์•ฝ๊ฐ„ ๋ฌด๋ก€ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋Š๊ปด์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:39
It's time for tip number five.
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13:41
Just like you want to always include a greeting,
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ์—๋Š” ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์•ˆ๋ถ€ ์ธ์‚ฌ,
13:45
you always want to include a closing as well without one.
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๋”ฐ๋œปํ•œ ์•ˆ๋ถ€ ์ธ์‚ฌ ๋˜๋Š” ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋น„๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ์–ด์กฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์•ˆ๋ถ€ ์ธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ํฌํ•จ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:49
The end of the email feels abrupt and even slightly rude.
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์กฐ์‹ฌํ•ด, ์ž˜ ๋ถ€ํƒํ•ด, ๋˜๋Š” ์ตœ์„ ์„ ๋‹คํ•ด ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:54
Some common formal professional closings include, best regards,
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ฒ˜์Œ 5๊ฐ€์ง€ ํŒ์„ ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด
13:59
warm regards, or simply regards for a more informal tone.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ •์ค‘
14:03
You could use take care, best wishes, or all the best.
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ƒ์‚ฐ์ ์ด๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ธฐ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์ด ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋” ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
14:09
By following those first five tips for writing a professional email in English,
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์—ฌ์„ฏ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŒ, ๋ช…ํ™•์„ฑ๊ณผ ์ •ํ™•์„ฑ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰
14:14
you're ensuring that your email is clear, concise, polite,
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ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋‚ด์–ด ์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:19
and productive.
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14:20
But there are two more things we want to do before clicking that send button.
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ฐ ๋‹จ์–ด์— ์ฃผ์˜๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ์šธ์ด๊ณ 
14:25
Tip number six, review your email for clarity and accuracy.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ๋งํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋” ์ž˜ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:30
One of the most effective ways you can do this is to read your email aloud.
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์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ๋“ฃ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
14:35
Doing that will ensure you're paying attention to each word and it will give you
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์ดํ•ด๊ฐ€ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์‰ฝ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋˜ํ•œ ๋ถˆํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
14:40
the opportunity to better reflect on what you've said in the email.
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.
14:44
It's easier to hear errors or identify sentences that
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ œ๊ฑฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์ •๋ณด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:49
don't quite make sense or don't work.
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๊ทธ ์™ธ์—๋„ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•,
14:51
It's also a helpful way to determine whether there are sentences that are
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๊ตฌ๋‘์  ๋ฐ ์ฒ ์ž์˜ ์ •ํ™•์„ฑ์„ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ
14:56
unnecessary.
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14:57
Maybe there are details you can remove to keep your email concise.
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์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ต์ • ๋˜๋Š” ํŽธ์ง‘ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ํ™•์‹ ์ด ์„œ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”๋‹ค๋ฉด
15:02
In addition to all of that, you also want to ensure accuracy with your grammar,
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์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ํŽธ์ง‘ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ
15:07
your punctuation, and your spelling. Now,
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๊ทธ ์ค‘ ๋‹ค์ˆ˜๋Š” ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์˜ต์…˜์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์ •ํ™•ํ•œ์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋งค์šฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
15:11
if you're not sure about your own proofreading or editing skills,
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ
15:14
I recommend using an online editing tool. There are several available online,
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ํŒ ์ผ๊ณฑ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋Š”
15:19
many of which have free options and are very effective for making sure
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์„œ๋ช…์„ ํฌํ•จํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์„œ๋ช…์€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋ฉฐ ์ตœ์†Œํ•œ
15:24
that your emails are accurate. And lastly,
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„๊ณผ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ฃผ์†Œ๋ฅผ ํฌํ•จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
15:28
tip number seven for a professional email in English,
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15:31
include a signature.
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์ ์ ˆํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ,
15:33
Your signature is what you typically see at the end of a business email,
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ํšŒ์‚ฌ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ๋งํฌ, ํšŒ์‚ฌ ๋งํฌ, ์†Œ์…œ ๋ฏธ๋””์–ด ๊ณ„์ •
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and it includes someone's name and their email address at the very minimum.
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๋“ฑ์„ ํฌํ•จํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ
์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ 7๊ฐ€์ง€ ํŒ๊ณผ
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If it's appropriate, you could also include a phone number,
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a link to a company website, links to your company, social media accounts,
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Speak Confident English ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ
์—์„œ ์ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š” .
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and so on. And with that,
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you have seven simple tips to write a professional email in English plus
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์ „์ฒด ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ž‘์„ฑ๋œ ๋ ˆ์Šจ์„ ์ฐพ์„ ์ˆ˜
์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‹œ์ž‘ ์˜ˆ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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multiple sentence starters. You can immediately begin using.
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์ด ๊ฐ•์˜๊ฐ€ ๋„์›€์ด ๋œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Don't forget to visit this lesson at the Speak Confident English website.
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ YouTube์—์„œ ์ด ๊ฐ•์˜์— ์ข‹์•„์š”๋ฅผ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
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You'll find the lesson written in full,
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์•„๋ž˜์— ๋Œ“๊ธ€์„ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ๋Œ“๊ธ€์„ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ
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and there are more examples of sentence starters there for you.
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YouTube์—์„œ ์ด ์ฑ„๋„์„ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
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If you found this lesson helpful, I would love to know.
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์ €์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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You can tell me by giving this lesson a thumbs up here on YouTube.
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๋‹ค์Œ Confident English ์ˆ˜์—…์—์„œ ๋ต™๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Leave a comment below, and while you're at it,
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don't forget to subscribe to this channel on YouTube.
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Thank you so much for joining me,
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and I look forward to seeing you for your next Confident English lesson.
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์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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