The Right and Wrong Ways to End a Professional Email in English

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hi I'm Anne Marie with Speak Confident English and welcome to your Confident
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” Speak Confident English์˜ Anne Marie์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Confident
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English Wednesday lesson. Now most weeks we do focus on skills that are essential
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English ์ˆ˜์š”์ผ ์ˆ˜์—…์— ์˜ค์‹  ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ™˜์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ์ฃผ์— ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š”
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for speaking English with confidence and fluency but this week we're going to
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์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ธ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์— ์ดˆ์ ์„ ๋งž์ถ”์ง€ ๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ์ฃผ์—๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ
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shift our focus a little bit and work on writing, specifically writing emails and
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์˜ ์ดˆ์ ์„ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„ ์˜ฎ๊ฒจ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ , ํŠนํžˆ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ์™€
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how to close or finish an email. Now just a quick note: if emailing is something
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋‹ซ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋๋‚ด๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์ฐธ๊ณ  ์‚ฌํ•ญ: ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด
00:33
very useful to you in your English skills - maybe you email often in English
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์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์— ๋งค์šฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ์ง์žฅ์—์„œ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž์ฃผ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:38
at work. I do have several other lessons on the topic of emails such as Seven
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.
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Rules for Professional Emails and How to Avoid Other Common Mistakes and you can
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ 7๊ฐ€์ง€ ๊ทœ์น™ ๋ฐ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ํ”ผํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฐ•์˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ
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find all of those lessons also include links to those other lessons below this
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๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฐ•์˜์—๋Š” ์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์•„๋ž˜์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฐ•์˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋งํฌ๋„ ํฌํ•จ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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video. But let's focus today on the right and wrong way to close an email. This is
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. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ์˜ณ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ์ดˆ์ ์„ ๋งž์ถ”๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€
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the final impression someone will have of you and there are definitely right
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ–๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ตœ์ข… ์ธ์ƒ ์ด๋ฉฐ ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ์˜ณ๊ณ 
01:08
and wrong ways to do it. And we'll look at two situations: situations that are
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๊ทธ๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:13
more business professional or formal and some more casual, very friendly ways to
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๋ณด๋‹ค ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆฐ ์ƒํ™ฉ๊ณผ ์ข€ ๋” ์บ์ฃผ์–ผํ•˜๊ณ  ์นœ๊ทผํ•˜๊ฒŒ
01:20
end an email. Now two quick rules about emails: 1. always use a closing. Always.
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋น ๋ฅธ ๊ทœ์น™ : 1. ํ•ญ์ƒ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์–ธ์ œ๋‚˜.
01:29
It is considered unprofessional, maybe even rude, if you don't include a closing.
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๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํฌํ•จํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ณ  ๋ฌด๋ก€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ„์ฃผ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:34
If it's your mom, if it's your best friend who is an English speaker or
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์—„๋งˆ, ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์นœํ•œ ์นœ๊ตฌ ๋˜๋Š”
01:39
someone that you email multiple times a day, then maybe you could avoid using a
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ํ•˜๋ฃจ์— ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋ฒˆ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ํ”ผํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
01:46
closing. But in every other email you want to look professional
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. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด์ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ๋Š”
01:50
you want to look friendly, so use a closing. And the second rule is your
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์นœ๊ทผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๊ทœ์น™์€
01:55
closing should match the formality of the email. If you're writing a business
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ํด๋กœ์ง•์ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ํ˜•์‹๊ณผ ์ผ์น˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
02:02
email to a new client you should use a closing that is appropriate for a
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์ƒˆ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์—๊ฒŒ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋ฉฐ,
02:07
business email and if you're writing to your new English-speaking neighbor then
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์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ด์›ƒ์—๊ฒŒ ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
02:13
you can use a more casual closing. Let's imagine a
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๋ณด๋‹ค ์บ์ฃผ์–ผํ•œ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:19
more formal situation first: perhaps you are sending an email to arrange a date
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์ข€ ๋” ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๋จผ์ € ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค. ๋ฉด์ ‘ ๋‚ ์งœ์™€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ์ •ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
02:25
and a time for a job interview or you are going to meet a brand-new client. It
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์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ณ ๊ฐ์„ ๋งŒ๋‚  ์˜ˆ์ •์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:31
is a business professional email. Here are a few great ways to end that email:
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๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ „๋ฌธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:38
kind regards. Always professional, very friendly. Regards. Short, direct, but still
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๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ณ  ๋งค์šฐ ์นœ์ ˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ์•ˆ ์ธ์‚ฌ. ์งง๊ณ  ์ง์ ‘์ ์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ
02:47
appropriate. Warm regards. Again very friendly but honestly this one is maybe
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์ ์ ˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋œปํ•œ ์•ˆ๋ถ€. ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๋งค์šฐ ์นœ์ ˆํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์†”์งํžˆ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€
02:56
best used when you already know the person. It's still a formal email, it's a
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์ด๋ฏธ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์„ ๋•Œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ž˜ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด๊ณ 
03:02
formal business contact but you've already met them before.
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๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฏธ ์ „์— ๋งŒ๋‚œ ์ ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:06
And finally sincerely. This one sometimes for people feels a little bit too formal
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ์ง„์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋•Œ๋•Œ๋กœ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:14
its more common in a business letter but if you're writing to a total stranger
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๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์„œ์‹ ์—์„œ ๋” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋‚ฏ์„  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
03:19
for example, you're writing about a job interview, it's okay to be really formal
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, ์ทจ์—… ๋ฉด์ ‘์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ๋„ ์ •๋ง ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ ค๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:25
even in an email and sincerely could be appropriate. Now if you're sending an
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์ง„์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ ์ ์ ˆํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ์ž˜
03:32
email to someone for work who you know well, you've met them several times but
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์•„๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋ฒˆ ๋งŒ๋‚ฌ์ง€๋งŒ
03:38
it's still a work email, we don't need to be so formal. We can be a little bit more
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์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆด ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ์บ์ฃผ์–ผํ•  ์ˆ˜
03:43
casual but we still want to be professional as well so here are a few
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์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€
03:48
examples: best or best regards. Again we could use warm regards. This is for someone
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์˜ˆ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋”ฐ๋œปํ•œ ์•ˆ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ์ „ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€
03:56
you already know. Or even cheers. Now this one is interesting because it's more
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด๋ฏธ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š” ์‹ฌ์ง€์–ด ๊ฑด๋ฐฐ. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€
04:03
common among British English speakers or Australian English speakers. To be honest
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์˜๊ตญ์‹ ์˜์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž๋‚˜ ํ˜ธ์ฃผ์‹ ์˜์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ์‚ฌ์ด์—์„œ ๋” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กญ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์†”์งํžˆ
04:08
I never use this closing. It's not natural to me but it is to many English
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์ €๋Š” ์ด ํด๋กœ์ง•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ € ์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ์ง€ ์•Š์ง€๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์˜์–ด
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speakers so if it feels natural to you then feel free to use it.
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์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋Š๊ปด์ง€์‹ ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ž์œ ๋กญ๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
04:18
And finally, if it's Friday and you're writing to the people you know in your
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ, ๊ธˆ์š”์ผ์ด๊ณ  ์‚ฌ๋ฌด์‹ค์—์„œ ์•„๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด
04:23
office end your email with have a weekend. Everyone loves to be reminded
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋๋‚ด๊ณ  ์ฃผ๋ง์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด์„ธ์š”. ๋ชจ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์€ ์ฃผ๋ง์ด ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋‹ค๊ฐ€์™”์Œ์„ ์ƒ๊ธฐ์‹œ์ผœ ์ฃผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ
04:30
that the weekend is almost here so you could use that as well. Those are all
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์€ ๋ชจ๋‘
04:36
fantastic ways to end an email that sounds professional and friendly but now
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์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ณ  ์นœ๊ทผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋๋‚ด๋Š” ํ™˜์ƒ์ ์ธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์ด์ œ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด์ง€
04:44
let's look at some examples that are not correct. These are examples that you
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์•Š์€ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋‹ค์Œ์€
04:49
should avoid using in your emails. To be really honest, they're just not
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง์•„์•ผ ํ•  ์˜ˆ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์†”์งํžˆ ๋งํ•ด์„œ
04:55
appropriate for professional situations. Yours truly or yours faithfully. This
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์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—๋Š” ์ ํ•ฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง„์‹ค๋กœ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒƒ ๋˜๋Š” ์ถฉ์‹คํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒƒ. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€
05:05
just feels too personal or too intimate. Have a blessed day. With this word
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๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์นœ๋ฐ€ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋Š๊ปด์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ถ•๋ณต๋ฐ›์€ ํ•˜๋ฃจ ๋˜์„ธ์š”. ์ด
05:14
'blessed' it has a little bit of a religious feeling to it and
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'์ถ•๋ณต'์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด์—๋Š” ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ์ข…๊ต์ ์ธ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ์žˆ๊ณ 
05:19
religion is not appropriate for a business professional situation, so it is
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์ข…๊ต๋Š” ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ „๋ฌธ ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ์ ํ•ฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ
05:25
best to avoid this closing. Thanks or regards when you spell it as an
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์ด ํ์‡„๋ฅผ ํ”ผํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:34
abbreviation, as I have here, not appropriate. We don't abbreviate closings
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์•ฝ์–ด๋กœ ์ฒ ์ž๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ ๋˜๋Š” ์•ˆ๋ถ€ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋Š” ์ ์ ˆํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ์ข…๊ฒฐ์„ ์ถ•์•ฝํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:41
in professional emails. So you might be wondering: do I really need to use a
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. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ
05:47
closing every time I send an email? Most of the time, yes. But there's one
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ๋•Œ๋งˆ๋‹ค ํด๋กœ์ง•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€
05:54
exception. Imagine that you're at work and you send an email to the same person
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์˜ˆ์™ธ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ง์žฅ์— ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋งค์ผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
06:01
every day and maybe you've sent them an email and now it is a chain email. A
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์•„๋งˆ๋„ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋ƒˆ๊ณ  ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์—ฐ์‡„ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:08
chain email is when there are many different responses on the same email.
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์ฒด์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ๋™์ผํ•œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‘๋‹ต์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:13
Maybe you ask a question, someone responded, then you gave your response,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋Œ€๋‹ตํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋Œ€๋‹ต์„ ํ•˜๊ณ 
06:19
they asked another question and it just continued. And now there are 20 emails
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๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ณ„์†๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ
06:24
inside this one email. That's a chain email. Okay, after the first few emails
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์ด ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์•ˆ์— 20๊ฐœ์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒด์ธ ๋ฉ”์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒ˜์Œ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐœ์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ธ ํ›„์—๋Š”
06:33
you can start to stop using a closing. Honestly, that's okay. It gets a little
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ํด๋กœ์ง• ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์ค‘๋‹จํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์†”์งํžˆ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:39
bit too much to be honest but that's really the only
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์†”์งํžˆ ๋งํ•ด์„œ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์œ ์ผํ•œ
06:43
exception. Again the goal is to look professional all the time and a closing
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์˜ˆ์™ธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ฉฐ
06:48
in your email will help you do that. And that is it! You now have all the examples
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์•ผ! ์ด์ œ
06:56
that you need for professional, friendly closings in an email and some examples
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ณ  ์šฐํ˜ธ์ ์ธ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ์— ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์˜ˆ์™€ ํ”ผํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ–๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:01
that you should avoid. So now I'd like to hear from you: if you email in English
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. ์ด์ œ ์ €๋Š” ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
07:07
regularly - either just for fun with your personal contacts or professionally - what
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(๋‹จ์ง€ ๊ฐœ์ธ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜์™€ ์žฌ๋ฏธ๋กœ ๋˜๋Š” ์ง์—…์ ์œผ๋กœ)
07:13
continues to be the most challenging for you? I know that it can be stressful,
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๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ์ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ? ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์ขŒ์ ˆํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์••๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ๋ง์„
07:17
frustrating, it takes time to think about the right things to say, so what is the
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์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ฑธ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด
07:23
most challenging for you? I'd love to hear your thoughts and your comments. And,
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๊ฐ€์žฅ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ์ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ๊ณผ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ 
07:28
as always, you can share with me in the comment section just below this video. I
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์–ธ์ œ๋‚˜์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์•„๋ž˜์— ์žˆ๋Š” ๋Œ“๊ธ€ ์„น์…˜์—์„œ ์ €์™€ ๊ณต์œ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋‚˜๋Š”
07:33
do read and respond to every comment so feel free to let me know what is
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๋ชจ๋“  ๋Œ“๊ธ€์„ ์ฝ๊ณ  ์‘๋‹ตํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ
07:39
challenging or frustrating for you when it comes to emails in English. And with
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ๋ฌด์—‡์ด โ€‹โ€‹ํž˜๋“ค๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ขŒ์ ˆ๊ฐ์„ ์ฃผ๋Š”์ง€ ์–ธ์ œ๋“ ์ง€ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ 
07:45
that, have a fantastic week. Enjoy your Wednesday and I will see you next week
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ํ™˜์ƒ์ ์ธ ํ•œ ์ฃผ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‚ด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ฆ๊ฑฐ์šด ์ˆ˜์š”์ผ ๋˜์„ธ์š”. ๋‹ค์Œ ์ฃผ
07:50
for your Confident English lesson.
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์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ต™๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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