How to write a letter: Find the Mistakes!

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Hi. I'm Rebecca from engVid, and this lesson will help you to write better letters.
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Whether you need to write a letter for your IELTS exam, or at work, or in life in general,
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this lesson will help you because we're going to focus on eight common letter-writing mistakes.
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Okay? Let's see if you know what they are, and also how to correct them. Okay.
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Number one: "I look forward to see you.",
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"I look forward to see you."
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What's wrong with that? Well, this is a very common error, actually. Most people don't realize that they're
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making it, but it's a really important thing to correct. So, it should be not:
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"I look forward to see you." But: "I look forward to
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seeing you.",
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"I look forward to seeing you.", "I look forward to meeting you.",
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"I look forward to discussing these ideas with you." Right?
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Whatever verb you put here, you need to say it or write it with "ing".
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Remember that. Okay.
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Next, number two:
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"Tanks your letter." Okay?
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This person has written:
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"Tanks your letter."
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Now, the person actually wants to say:
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"Thanks", but many people make a mistake, first of all,
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in the spelling of this word.
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It does have an "h" in it,
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so it should be: "Thanks",
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and then there's another mistake. Right now it says: "Thanks your letter."
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But that's not correct. It should be: "Thanks",
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what's the right preposition? "Thanks",
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"Thanks for your letter." Okay? Or:
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"Thank you for your letter." Okay. Next, number three:
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"Please to give my regard to Mr. Smith.",
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"Please to give my regard to Mr. Smith."
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Okay. There are two mistakes, here. See if you can find them. Okay. So,
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the first one is right here.
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We don't say: "Please to give", "Please to write", "Please something".
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No. We just say: "Please give", "Please reply". Right?
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"Please respond", "Please ask".
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Don't say: "to ask" or anything like that.
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"Please give my regard" is not right.
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It should be
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"regards".
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"Please give my regards to Mr. Smith." All right? We can't say "regard"
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just like that, without the "s", so make sure you add an "s" there.
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Number four: "I am interesting your products.",
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"I am interesting your products."
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That's not right. We need to say, what? Can you find the mistake?
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Here.
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"I am interested", okay?
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"I am interested", your products are interesting. So the thing you're talking about is with
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the "ing". The product is interesting, the book is interesting, the movie is interesting.
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Okay? But when we talk about my feelings or somebody's feelings about that, we have to
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say that with the "ed". "I am interested", "I am excited", okay? Like that. But there's
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still one other small mistake, now. Now it says:
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"I am interested your products."
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So this part is right: "I am interested", but we need to have a preposition after that.
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What is it? "I am interested
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in",
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"I am interested in your products." Okay? Good.
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Number five:
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"When I will be in London, I'll call you."
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Okay?
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"When I will be in London, I'll call you."
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In many languages, this would... This kind of structure would be correct, but
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in English, it's not, because there are really two parts to this sentence. Right? This one:
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"When I will be in London",
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and then the other part: "I'll call you".
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So I'll help you to find the mistake by telling you that
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this part of the sentence is actually fine.
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"I'll call you" is short for "I will call you",
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that's fine, but in this part of the sentence
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which has a conditional word-all right?-we do not put the future tense. We write, here,
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we use, here, the present simple tense. So, instead of saying: "When I will be in London",
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we say: "When I"...
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"When I am in London" or "When I'm in London, I'll call you." Okay?
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So when you have a sentence like that in the future and you're going to... You have two
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parts that have future in one section, in the other section don't use the future tense,
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just use present simple. And it doesn't matter what the order is. It's the same principle
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if the sentence was: "I'll call you", right?
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"I'll call you when I'm in London."
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So even if we change the order, the principle stays the same. Okay.
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Number six: "It was pleasure to meet you."
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This one's almost right, but not completely right.
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So, what's wrong, here?
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It should be: "It was
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a pleasure".
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Okay? We need to have that article "a".
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"It was a pleasure to meet you.",
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"It was a pleasure to see you again."
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And so on.
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Number seven: "We must to inform the client.",
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"We must to inform the client."
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Well, that's wrong. In this case we don't have to add something;
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we need to take something out. What is it?
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We need to take out the word
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"to". So, after a modal like that, "must", we can't use "to".
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Not: "We must to inform", just: "We must inform the client.",
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"We should inform the client.",
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"We could inform the client."
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All those kind of words-right?-"could", "should", "must",
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we don't need to say "to". So just: "We must inform the client." Good.
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And the last one, look at it carefully. It says:
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"Yours sincerely," the words are right,
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but there is still a mistake there. Can you find the mistake?
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"Yours sincerly,"
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this word is one of the most misspelled words in the English language.
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So, I hope you're not making that mistake.
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So the correct spelling of "sincerely" is...
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Okay? Sincere, just like the word "sincere"
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has an "e" at the end, keep that "e" when you add "ly". Okay?
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S-i-n-c-e-r-e-l-y.
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Many people leave out the "e". All right? So make sure you're not one of them, especially if
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you sign your letters saying: "Sincerely," or: "Yours sincerely," which is a very common
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way to end a general letter or a general business letter. Okay?
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So make sure that you are not making these very common mistakes. If you want to make
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sure that you understand this... These mistakes really well and that you don't make them,
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please go to our website at www.engvid.com.
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There you can do a quiz on this subject, and also
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watch hundreds of other videos that will help you to improve your English much faster.
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Okay?
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Thanks for watching. Good luck with your English.
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Bye for now.
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