10 GREAT Tips to Improve English Writing Skills for non-native English speakers

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Hi there, this is Harry and welcome back to advanced English lessons with Harry, where
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we try to help you to get a better understanding and how to use English in a better way. Whether
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it's in conversational English, business English, use of phrasal verbs, adjectives, whatever
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it happens to be, we're here to help you.
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And today we're going to do something a little bit different. Quite a few of you have been
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asking recently about how can you, how can they improve their writing skills. As I always
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tell students speaking and writing skills are very, very different. Two very different
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skill sets altogether. When you're speaking, it's, of course important to be correct and
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polite. But often when we speak something, it's forgotten about quite quickly. Unfortunately,
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when we write something, it's there on record. Particularly if we're using email, or some
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other form of text, it's there for people to see, and they can read it several times.
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And therefore mistakes become a little bit more obvious. And we have to be really, really
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careful. And we also have to be really careful how we write, so we might be misinterpreted.
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Of course, we can be misinterpreted when we speak. But again, when it's written down,
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it's a little bit more in your line of view, and people can comment and remark on it. So
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there are different skills needed. When we're speaking to people, we're often speaking to
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our friends and colleagues and making little mistakes is not really so important as long
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as we are fluent. When we're writing, it can be a formal report, it can be a letter for
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a job interview, whatever it happens to be, we really have to be more accurate, we have
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to be accurate with our spelling, punctuation. But we also have to be careful with the sort
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of words that we use.
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Now, there are lots and lots of platforms available and the apps to to help you. I mean,
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two of them will be just Google Translate and Grammarly. Lots of you use them. I know
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that and they can be very useful at times, but be really, really careful. Okay, because
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particularly with Google Translate, it will give you a literal translation. And with English,
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there are so many different words you can use. And if you've been watching and listening
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to my particular lessons over the last wee while, you will begin to understand that there
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are lots of synonyms for different words, but not all of them can be used in substitution.
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So you have to be really careful with literal translations because they can look a little
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bit silly, a little strange, and not what you perhaps intended when you use it. Okay,
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with Grammarly. Usually it's correct. But I have noticed because I use it just to check
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in with my students that from time to time, it can actually throw up the wrong answer.
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There may be little twists and variations that you have and unless you're a native speaker,
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you won't know what they are. So again, just be careful if you use Grammarly. So my recommendation
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is not to use either of them. To struggle on at the beginning, to... If you make mistakes,
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okay, you make mistakes. But when you get corrected by somebody prep... professional
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teacher, well, then you're more likely to remember rather than relying on Grammarly,
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or Google translate. Okay.
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So I've got a 10-point plan here that will improve your writing, it will help you to
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improve your writing beyond what you would have expected. It takes time, but a lot of
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the students that I help and I have a specific course that I do with them, that after a few
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weeks and a few exercises that I give them, you'd be surprised really, really surprised
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how quickly their written skills and the writing they do can improve and quite dramatically.
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So number one, start with short and simple sentences. I mean, this sounds really, really
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school-type approach, but it really does work. Lots of people come to me and they want to
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write really complex sentences or when they do send me a sentence, there's no full stop,
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there's no ending to it, it goes on and on. And the problem with that is if you don't
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have a proper control on those sentences, you lose control of it. You lose the point
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that you're trying to say and there'd be many, many more grammar mistakes than you had intended.
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So, the very beginning until you get a little bit more professional in your writing, start
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with short and simple sentences or short simple structure, okay. And then you can build up.
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And then when you build up, you will see where you can make improvements and where you can
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make it a little bit more complex. But start with short simple and I have this K I S S
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keep it short and simple. Keep it short and simple K I S S A general rule of thumb that
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I use. If you want to state some facts, give some facts then use short sentences. You know,
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if you're giving data, use short sentences. If you want to describe something like the
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cow in the filed or the dog in the park, you can use longer sentences because you're going
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to use a lot more adjectives to describe what you see. The long green shoots of new spring
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grass, okay. Or the short-legged barking dog, you know. Whatever it might be, you're going
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to use a lot more descriptive words. And therefore with those type of descriptions, you can afford
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to use longer sentences. But when you're using facts, the population of the country is 1.5
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million. Full stop. There are 50% of the population employed, and 30% of the population under
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the age of 18. Full stop. Short, simple sentences. Facts.
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Okay, moving on to point number two. Focus on getting your sentences correct. And brush
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up on your grammar. So really, really important at a very early stage to eliminate grammar
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mistakes. If you eliminate the grammar mistakes, then you can move on start building those
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complex sentences that we spoke about, you can start adding adjectives. But if you've
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got a lot of grammar mistakes, like the wrong preposition, not using the articles or using
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the wrong tense, then, you know, no matter how far you go, your English written English
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will always be poor. So we want to eliminate those mistakes at a very early stage. So focus
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on getting the correct grammar in all of your sentences. Make sure if you're going to use
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the present perfect, that is the right tense to use. If you're using the present continuous
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if the right tense to use. And as I said, before you get away with it when you're speaking,
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your won't get away with it when you're writing.
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Number three, read as much and as often as you can. Apart from enjoyment, you will see
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and understand the structure of sentences, you'll see and understand the difference between
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a sentence in the written format and a sentence in the spoken format. Okay, you'll get to
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understand how people vary, how you begin a sentence to change the way it's written
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to make it more enjoyable for the reader, to make it more interesting to write and to
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avoid repetition. So read as much and as often as you can. Of course books in English, if
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you're writing in English, so to see how authors do it. But don't... don't read classic books
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so much. I mean, they're really beautiful books by Charles Dickens, or Bronte or whoever
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it might be that you've got an interest in, by all means read them. But remember that
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you're writing now in the 21st century, so the books you should be reading, if you want
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to improve on your written skills, should be those books that were also written in the
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20th and 21st centuries, because, you know, it's really show you modern English, modern
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conversational English, how we use reported speech and other aspects and it's really,
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really important to, to read, to look at and to learn, okay.
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What you can also do point number four is to keep a diary. Okay? Now, the diary is really
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important. And this will help you to write short stories in English. So if you keep a
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diary, you get used to writing. So it might be a diary, just a few sentences about what
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you do every day. Or it might be a diary about what you see every day. But it's a great way
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to practice. Now, it might be handwritten diary or... but of course, you can use modern
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technology, and you can record it as a Word documents and makes life a little bit easier.
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But it's just something that you can refer back to. And something you can use when you
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want to write short stories. So you should always try and keep a notepad handy when you're
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reading a book or you're looking at the Internet. Because you might want to write down or to
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capture really interesting sentences in the book that you hadn't heard of. Or a group
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of words or collocation that you've seen that the author has used that might be quite interesting
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for you. So you can record that, write it down, and you can use it later on. Okay, and
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this is called sentence mining. Okay, so to sentence mining is to find interesting collocations,
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find interesting groups of words, find interesting combinations and sentences that you could
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use to your advantage later on. We'll say, sentence mining. Keep that in your diary and
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keep a notepad where you can keep a record.
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Number five, avoid translating from your native or mother tongue into English. This always
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causes problems. What it causes is a hesitation. It also causes you to use incorrect words
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And then you stop and you start and you get no fluency. So try to think in English, okay.
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It might take you a little bit longer again, often, when we're doing written exercises
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with my students, I ask them, How long did it take you to write that? And, you know,
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if I've given them a short story to write or an essay of a couple of 100 words, it shouldn't
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really take more than 25 to 30 minutes, but often, it will take the early learners 40-45-50
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minutes, 60 minutes, that's okay. Don't worry about the time it takes at the beginning,
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it's much more important to get it accurate, okay. But the more you practice to think in
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English, then the less time you will take to write it. So you'll start thinking and
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using the words. You'll start thinking and using the collocations. You'll start thinking
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and putting the correct structure on your sentences. So try to avoid thinking in your
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native tongue. Try to think in English writing English, speaking English, thinking English.
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Okay.
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Number six. Now, here's an important point when you're writing, particularly from a business
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perspective, if you're writing a proposal, or if you're writing a memo, or you're writing
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a position paper, whatever it happens to be, be aware of the audience who's going to read
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it. When I was a bit younger, and I was writing, I was always have in mind that I'd expect
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the most senior person in my office, my boss or his boss, to read. And they may not, of
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course, but I always imagined that they would be reading it. And therefore I'd want to write
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the best I could possibly write, not just to scribble down something, not just to throw
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a few words together, but to write something as clearly and as specific as I could be.
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Okay, so I would focus on the grammar, I would focus on making sure that I had the correct
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structure in my sentence, I would focus on avoiding repetition, because... and, and also
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punctuation, my old boss really, really really didn't like bad punctuation. So to make sure
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that you focus on those things, to expect that the person, the most important person
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that's in your office, you expect them to read it. And that will help you to focus and
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produce better written papers, better written documents, better written emails, okay.
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Number seven, this is important, particularly in writing, we have to be really, really careful
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about the language that we use. Now, I don't mean here about good and bad language and
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swear words, of course. You shouldn't use them, particularly in a written format. But
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the register, okay. Whether we're talking about formal or informal, really, really important,
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okay. If we're writing a business proposal, a business paper, we should always write it
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in a formal way. If we're replying to a client, unless the client has asked us to be informal,
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then we should be more formal than informal. If we're writing emails to a colleague and
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the next floor, well, then, of course, we can be informal in that way, we don't have
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to write everything so formal. So be aware and focused on the level or lack of formality,
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in your written papers, in your written emails, in your written letters, whatever it might
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be, just be really, really conscious of that. Be conscious of how you address somebody,
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you know, if it's somebody you don't know, and you don't know the name, "Dear Sir." If
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it's somebody that you're... If you're writing a letter of complaint, then it's going to
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be "Yours faithfully" at the end. Not, you know, not best wishes or anything like that.
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So really be conscious of who you're writing to, be conscious of why you're writing to
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them, and be conscious of whether it's going to be formal, or informal, and get that right
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and correct structure.
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When we're talking about structure, point number eight, is to make sure that you do
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actually have a structure in mind. You know, often when people start to write, they just
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start writing. And they have no idea who they're going to write to, why they're writing to
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them, and more importantly, how they're going to structure it. So have a think about it
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before you write before you put pen to paper foot before you type anything, think about
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the reasons why you're writing this email, is it a letter of complaints? So what should
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be the the sense of it, okay, that the temperature of your of your letter, or you're writing
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a letter to congratulate somebody, so how should you write that? If you're writing an
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invitation, how should you write that? Okay, so, really think about it. And then when you're
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thinking about that, what should be the tone? Is it formal or informal? Is it pleasant?
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Is it complaining? Are you going to be really strong or they're going to be soft words,
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how are you going to write that. So when you get that in your mind, then you can start
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writing. And you'll find that there'll be a much better flow of words, because you will
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have given it some thought. So, have in mind that you're going to have an introduction.
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For example, if we're going to write a letter of complaint, we want to tell the person at
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the very beginning, why we are writing to them, we are writing to you to complain about
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something, okay? Then tell them what you're complaining about. Tell them why you're complaining,
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it didn't work, when you bought it, you took it back to the shop, they wouldn't replace
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it, etc, etc. So set out particularly and specifically what your complaints are. And
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then when you come to the end, tell them specifically what you want to happen, I want this product
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to be replaced, I want it to be replaced, immediately, I want my money back, I want
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whatever you want, you have to set it out and tell them okay, and then you sign it,
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and you may give them instruction, I would expect to get a reply within two days, within
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three days, by next week. Tell them exactly when you expect to get a response. So when
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you have that in your mind, and you can picture it in your mind, it's much easier for you
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to set it out on paper because you can see it. Okay, so don't go into something blindly.
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Think about it. Think about the words, think about the tone, think about the the tense,
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and then committed to paper, okay, and then you're in a much better shape.
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Now, when you've written something like that, particularly if it's a letter of complaint,
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what I would suggest is that you write it, and then you walk away from it for 30 minutes,
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go back to it and read it and see, are you happy with the way you've written it because
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you might have written it much too formal, or you might have written it in a much more
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hurtful tone they intended, or you might it might be too harsh, okay, so what you don't
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want us to write something, press the button and send it without checking it because there
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are bound to be mistakes. And particularly if it's not your native language, okay, so
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you should really give yourself a little bit of time to check it, to read it. And then
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to send it particularly if you're talking about job offers, if you're writing a covering
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letter for a job interview, or a covering letter for a position or a place and university,
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don't please don't write it and expect that they will be happy. If it's full of mistakes,
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I wouldn't if I got it. And I doubt that the university will be happy because, you know,
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they're going to assess you on your English ability and if your written letter gone into
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them is badly written, but it's not going to reflect so well on you. Okay.
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Now, point number nine then is to perhaps take an English class. If you need one to
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work on some of these points that I've mentioned. Indeed, you could do with a second pair of
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eyes to look at your written work, somebody that can help you somebody can set you assignments.
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What I do with the students I have I start them off, as I said, with some simple English,
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I get them to write sentences that will enable me to identify and point out mistakes, and
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then I'm able to structure how the future written lessons should go. Okay, so then when
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I've gone on from this simple examples, I might give them just four words. For example,
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there was a bird sitting on the wall. Then I ask them just to write a little story around
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that 80 words - 100 words. And you'd be surprised the mistakes people make, you'd be surprised
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how they lack adjectives describe what the bird looked like. But then we can build up
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so we correct the first six or seven sentences increase or improve the adjectives we use.
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And then after several attempts, we have a really good descriptive passage or short story
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to describe the birds sitting on the wall. Or the man standing beside the lamppost outside
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the house. Yeah, so just simple situations, but enables you to write in a professional
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way, after a while, in a structured way. After a while you've avoided repetition. This is
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the really, really key problem with writing is how much repetition there is. And the reason
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why there is a need for repetition is the fact that the vocabulary is limited. If you
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don't have more adjectives, or more verbs or nouns, well, of course, there's going to
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be repetition and it's not your fault. It just, you need a teacher, that's going to
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help you. Not to use change, change, change, think think think persuade, persuade, persuade,
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you have to use other words to change, to alter, to amend, to adjust, to think, to contemplate,
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to mull over. You need other words, other expressions that will help you to write in
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a much better clear and informed way. So that's number nine. Take an English class with a
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recognised teacher and have another person review that work. Particularly, if it's a
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job application, if it's an application for a university course these are really the critical
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times when you want your written English to be as good as it possibly can.
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And the final point, feel free in the lessons to make mistakes. If you don't make mistakes,
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you don't make anything, I absolutely guarantee. Everybody who started off certainly with me
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in their in their written English, I allow them the flexibility to just write and write
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don't worry about mistakes, mistakes and be corrected. The problem is if you don't have
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any thoughts, any ideas to start with all the issues about repetition, all the issues
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about unknown words, all the issues, but wrong prepositions, don't worry about it, put them
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down, see how you feel. And then the teacher will help you to improve that, how to squeeze
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out those little mistakes that you make. And you'll you'll begin to enjoy your writing,
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you'll begin to see for yourself, where you have repetition, you'll begin to self correct.
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And those are the really key critical steps that you'll have to take when you want to
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improve your writing.
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Okay, so that's my 10-point plan how you can improve your basic writing skills. They're
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not and it isn't rocket science, a lot of it is common sense, but unless you know it,
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you can't do it. Okay, so you have to apply it. So have a look at the 10 points that I've
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made. If you need any help, if you want any suggestions, please come back to me. Really,
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really important, as I said, is to read as much as you can. It's great to read. They
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don't have to be huge books, but just to read on a frequent and regular basis, it will really
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help you. Okay.
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So I hope that this particular lesson, and my 10-point plan will help you. I look forward
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to reading your good English in the future. If you need anything else, please ask me you
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can contact me on www.englishlessonviaskype. Very happy to help you and very happy to hear
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from you. And as always, join me for the next lesson.
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