POWER Writing - Write ANYTHING in English Easily (Essays, Emails, Letters Etc.)

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

00:00
Do you often find it difficult to write things?
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ์ข…์ข… ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
00:04
Like emails, letters or essays?
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ, ํŽธ์ง€ ๋˜๋Š” ์—์„ธ์ด์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ?
00:07
Do you sit down to write something and then realize you donโ€™t know what to write?
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์•‰์•„์„œ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์จ์•ผํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊นจ๋‹ซ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
00:12
If your answer is yes, then this lesson will help you to overcome exactly these problems
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋Œ€๋‹ต์ด ์˜ˆ๋ผ๋ฉด, ์ด ์ˆ˜์—…์€
00:19
because Iโ€™m going to teach you a very simple trick that you can use to write anything easily,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ๋น ๋ฅด๊ณ  ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์š”๋ น์„ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์ณ์ค„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ๊ทน๋ณตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:26
quickly and effectively.
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00:28
This is a process used by the best writers in the world and itโ€™s called the POWER writing
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ์„ธ์Šค ์ด๋ฉฐ POWER ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๊ณ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:34
method.
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00:35
You can use it to write emails for work, essays for your English exam, you can use it for
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์—…๋ฌด์šฉ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ, ์˜์–ด ์‹œํ—˜์šฉ ์—์„ธ์ด,
00:41
letters, business reports, blog posts, stories โ€“ basically, anything that you need to write.
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ํŽธ์ง€, ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ณด๊ณ ์„œ, ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ, ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ ๋“ฑ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:48
But you might be asking โ€“ why is it called POWER writing?
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค โ€“ ์™œ POWER ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ถˆ๋ฆฌ๋Š”๊ฐ€?
00:52
Well, POWER refers to the five stages of the writing process: Prepare, Organize, Write,
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POWER๋Š” ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๊ณผ์ •์˜ 5๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ์ค€๋น„, ๊ตฌ์„ฑ, ์“ฐ๊ธฐ,
01:00
Evaluate and Review.
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ํ‰๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ ๊ฒ€ํ† ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋ƒ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:03
This is the order you will follow and it will allow you to write without getting stuck by
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋”ฐ๋ฅผ ์ˆœ์„œ์ด๋ฉฐ
01:09
focusing on one task at a time.
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ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์— ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์ž‘์—…์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋ง‰ํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์ค„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:12
So letโ€™s start with the first stage โ€“ prepare.
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ์ค€๋น„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:16
Before you write anything at all, you must prepare for it.
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๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์ค€๋น„๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
01:20
This is because the reason we often struggle to write is that we donโ€™t have enough ideas
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์ข…์ข… ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐ ์–ด๋ ค์›€์„ ๊ฒช๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š”
01:26
when we put pen to paper.
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์ข…์ด์— ํŽœ์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์—†๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:28
So the most important task of writing is to come up with good points before you write.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์˜ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ณผ์ œ๋Š” ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์ข‹์€ ์ ์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:35
So this is the very first stage โ€“ before you write a single sentence, youโ€™re going
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์ „์—
01:40
to collect ideas.
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ง‘ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:42
And hereโ€™s how you do it: You take your paper and pen (or you can do this on your
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๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข…์ด์™€ ํŽœ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ (๋˜๋Š”
01:48
computer if you wish), and you note down anything that comes to mind.
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์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ์—์„œ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Œ) ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋– ์˜ค๋ฅด๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ธฐ๋กํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
01:53
Donโ€™t criticize your ideas โ€“ donโ€™t leave out or discard anything.
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋น„ํŒํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค โ€“ ์•„๋ฌด ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋นผ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
01:58
Whatever you get, write it down.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์–ป๋“  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ ์–ด ๋‘์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:01
Donโ€™t worry about organizing your ideas โ€“ weโ€™ll do that in the next stage.
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด ์ •๋ฆฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์—์„œ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:06
Also, donโ€™t worry about grammar, spelling or punctuation โ€“ remember we just want ideas
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๋˜ํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ์ฒ ์ž ๋˜๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค . ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‹จ์ง€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์›ํ•  ๋ฟ์ด
02:13
so if there are mistakes, no problem.
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๋ฏ€๋กœ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋”๋ผ๋„ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:16
And keep doing this until you have no more ideas.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋” ์ด์ƒ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์—†์„ ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ๊ณ„์†ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค .
02:20
As an interesting note, this process of coming up with ideas is called brainstorming.
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ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กญ๊ฒŒ๋„ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ด ๊ณผ์ •์„ ๋ธŒ๋ ˆ์ธ์Šคํ† ๋ฐ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:26
OK, letโ€™s look at an example of how to do this.
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์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
02:31
Letโ€™s say youโ€™re in an English exam, and you have to write an email of complaint.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์˜์–ด ์‹œํ—˜์„ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ณ  ํ•ญ์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๊ฐ€์ •ํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
02:36
Hereโ€™s your task: You recently purchased an item online, but you are not happy with
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ž„๋ฌด๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ตœ๊ทผ์— ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ์œผ๋กœ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ์„ ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ–ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๋งŒ์กฑ์Šค๋Ÿฝ์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
02:42
it.
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. ์‡ผํ•‘ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ
02:43
Write an email of complaint to the manager of the shopping website: say what you bought,
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๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž์—๊ฒŒ ๋ถˆ๋งŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค . ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ•œ ์ œํ’ˆ,
02:49
why you are not happy with it, and what action you expect them to take.
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๋งŒ์กฑํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ , ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์ทจํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜๋Š” ์กฐ์น˜๋ฅผ ๋งํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ
02:54
So letโ€™s start by collecting some ideas for this.
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ง‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
02:58
So what kinds of things can we buy online?
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ์—์„œ ์–ด๋–ค ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ๋ฌผ๊ฑด์„ ์‚ด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
03:01
We can buy clothes, we can buy computers, phones, books and so on.
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜ท์„ ์‚ด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ , ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ, ์ „ํ™”๊ธฐ, ์ฑ… ๋“ฑ์„ ์‚ด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:06
Letโ€™s think of some more specific ideas โ€“ I like computers, so letโ€™s talk about
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์ข€ ๋” ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค . ์ €๋Š” ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ฉ์‹œ๋‹ค
03:12
them.
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03:13
You can buy a laptop.
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๋…ธํŠธ๋ถ์„ ์‚ด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:14
Actually, you can also buy computer parts like a monitor, a mouse or a keyboard.
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์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋ชจ๋‹ˆํ„ฐ, ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค ๋˜๋Š” ํ‚ค๋ณด๋“œ์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ ๋ถ€ํ’ˆ๋„ ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:18
For this task, Iโ€™m going to go with a mouse because itโ€™s easy.
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์ด ์ž‘์—…์—์„œ๋Š” ์‰ฝ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:23
Now if I bought a mouse, what problems might I have with it?
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์ด์ œ ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ•˜๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ค ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊ธธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ?
03:27
I think the most common one that people face is with one of the two buttons โ€“ letโ€™s
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์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์ง๋ฉดํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐœ์˜ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:32
pick the right-click button, but you can also have trouble with the scroll wheel โ€“ thatโ€™s
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์˜ค๋ฅธ์ชฝ ํด๋ฆญ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์Šคํฌ๋กค ํœ ์— ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ”๋กœ
03:38
the wheel in the middle.
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๊ฐ€์šด๋ฐ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ํœ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:40
So I bought a mouse and maybe just two days later, the right-click button started having
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ์ƒ€๊ณ  ์•„๋งˆ ๋ถˆ๊ณผ ์ดํ‹€ ํ›„์— ์˜ค๋ฅธ์ชฝ ํด๋ฆญ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์— ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊ธฐ๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:45
problems.
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.
03:46
But Iโ€™m going to say that now itโ€™s been a week and the button has just stopped working.
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์ผ์ฃผ์ผ์ด ์ง€๋‚ฌ๊ณ  ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์ด ์ž‘๋™์„ ๋ฉˆ์ท„์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:52
You can see that Iโ€™m just using my imagination.
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋‹จ์ง€ ๋‚ด ์ƒ์ƒ๋ ฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:56
I want to add some more details, so letโ€™s say the scroll wheel is also having some problems.
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์ข€ ๋” ์ž์„ธํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์Šคํฌ๋กค ํœ ์—๋„ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๊ฐ€์ •ํ•ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:02
What problems can it have?
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์–ด๋–ค ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
04:04
Well, if I try to scroll in one direction, it actually makes the screen go the wrong
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๊ธ€์Ž„, ํ•œ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์œผ๋กœ ์Šคํฌ๋กคํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋ฉด ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ™”๋ฉด์ด ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ
04:09
way.
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๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:10
So we have our problems now.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:13
But what do we want the shopping website to do?
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์‡ผํ•‘ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
04:16
We can say give me my money back โ€“ thatโ€™s called a refund, or we could ask for a replacement.
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋ˆ์„ ๋Œ๋ ค๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฅผ ํ™˜๋ถˆ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ต์ฒด๋ฅผ ์š”์ฒญํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:22
I like that idea.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•œ๋‹ค.
04:24
Now when they give me a new item, they will want the old one back.
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์ด์ œ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋‚˜์—๊ฒŒ ์ƒˆ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ์„ ์ค„ ๋•Œ ์ด์ „ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์›ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:29
So Iโ€™ll have to return the defective unit.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ฒฐํ•จ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ์žฅ์น˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜ํ™˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:31
That means the mouse thatโ€™s not working.
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์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:34
Alright, we are done collecting ideas.
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์ž, ์•„์ด๋””์–ด ์ˆ˜์ง‘์„ ๋งˆ์ณค์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:37
And here in just two minutes, we have all the information we need to write our email.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹จ 2๋ถ„ ๋งŒ์— ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:44
Notice that as I was brainstorming, I came up with lots of ideas โ€“ I collected everything
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๋ธŒ๋ ˆ์ธ์Šคํ† ๋ฐ์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๋งŽ์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋– ์˜ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฃผ๋ชฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
04:49
that came to mind without leaving anything out.
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์•„๋ฌด๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋น ๋œจ๋ฆฌ์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋– ์˜ค๋ฅด๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ชจ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
04:53
And then I expanded on the important ideas.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ํ™•์žฅํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„
04:58
It can be very helpful to talk out loud during this stage like I was doing โ€“ try to have
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์—์„œ ํฐ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋งค์šฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:03
an imaginary conversation and you will find it easier to generate ideas.
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์ƒ์ƒ์˜ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ๋„ํ•˜๋ฉด ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋” ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:08
Also, itโ€™s good to use paper and pen for this exercise rather than your computer.
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๋˜ํ•œ ์ด ์—ฐ์Šต์€ ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ์ข…์ด์™€ ํŽœ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:15
This way, you can draw a mind map like the one you see on the screen โ€“ it can really
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ํ™”๋ฉด์— ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์ธ๋“œ ๋งต์„ ๊ทธ๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:19
help you to be creative.
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์ฐฝ์˜๋ ฅ์„ ๋ฐœํœ˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ •๋ง ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:21
OK, once you have the ideas you need, you move on to the second stage, which is Organize.
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์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:29
The goal of this stage is to produce an outline for what youโ€™re going to write.
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์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„์˜ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ๊ฐœ์š”๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:34
That is, youโ€™re going to structure your ideas in a logical manner.
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์ฆ‰, ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌ์กฐํ™”ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:38
So throughout this stage, you should keep asking yourself this question โ€“ โ€œHow do
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„ ์ „์ฒด์—์„œ "๋…์ž๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์•ˆ๋‚ดํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?"๋ผ๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„์† ๋˜์ ธ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:44
I guide my reader?โ€
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05:46
Think of yourself as a tour guide โ€“ imagine that youโ€™re taking your reader through a
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์ž์‹ ์„ ์—ฌํ–‰ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋…์ž๋ฅผ
05:51
tour of a great place โ€“ that great place is your writing.
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๋ฉ‹์ง„ ์žฅ์†Œ๋กœ ์•ˆ๋‚ดํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๊ทธ ๋ฉ‹์ง„ ์žฅ์†Œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:55
So, what should the reader read first?
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋…์ž๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๋จผ์ € ์ฝ์–ด์•ผ ํ• ๊นŒ์š”?
05:58
What should he or she read next?
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๋‹ค์Œ์— ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์ฝ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
06:00
And what should your reader read last?
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๋…์ž๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์ฝ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
06:03
So in this stage, the first thing you do is go to the ideas youโ€™ve collected, and select
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์€ ์ˆ˜์ง‘ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•˜์—ฌ
06:09
the best ones.
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๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:11
After that, you take those ideas and arrange them in the most logical sequence.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ์ˆœ์„œ๋กœ ๋ฐฐ์—ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:17
So here, weโ€™re back with our ideas for the complaint email.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ๋ถˆ๋งŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ๋Œ์•„์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
06:21
Itโ€™s easy to see which ideas we want to keep โ€“ the mouse, the right-click button
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๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค, ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜ค๋ฅธ์ชฝ ํด๋ฆญ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ,
06:26
with its two problems, the scroll-wheel, and the request to replace it.
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์Šคํฌ๋กค ํœ , ๊ต์ฒด ์š”์ฒญ ๋“ฑ ์–ด๋–ค ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€์ง€ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:31
When you do this on paper, you can underline the ideas you are selecting.
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์ข…์ด์— ์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•  ๋•Œ ์„ ํƒํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด์— ๋ฐ‘์ค„์„ ๊ธ‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
06:36
So, now, how do we organize these points?
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์ž, ์ด์ œ ์ด ํฌ์ธํŠธ๋“ค์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ๊นŒ์š”?
06:39
Well first, I want to say that I bought a mouse online, it has two problems โ€“ one
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๋จผ์ € ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ์—์„œ ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š”
06:46
is that the right mouse button started having issues two days later, or two days after it
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๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค ์˜ค๋ฅธ์ชฝ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์ด ์ดํ‹€ ํ›„ ๋˜๋Š” ๋„์ฐฉํ•œ ์ง€ ์ดํ‹€ ํ›„์— ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ๊ณ 
06:52
arrived, and now itโ€™s been a week and itโ€™s stopped working completely.
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์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์ผ์ฃผ์ผ์ด ์ง€๋‚ฌ๊ณ  ์ž‘๋™์ด ๋ฉˆ์ท„๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™„์ „ํžˆ.
06:56
Then Iโ€™d like to mention the scroll wheel.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์Šคํฌ๋กค ํœ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:59
Itโ€™s making the screen go in the wrong direction.
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ํ™”๋ฉด์ด ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:02
And finally, I want the company to replace the mouse, and I can return the defective
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ๊ต์ฒดํ•ด ์ฃผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์› ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฒฐํ•จ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๋งˆ์šฐ์Šค๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜ํ’ˆํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:07
one.
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.
07:08
This is the outline weโ€™re going to follow for this email.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ๋”ฐ๋ฅผ ๊ฐœ์š”์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:11
A good outline should have all the ideas that you need, and it should be well-organized.
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์ข‹์€ ๊ฐœ์š”๋Š” ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋‹ด๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ž˜ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:18
I think this is a pretty good outline, so with this, we move on to stage three โ€“ write.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฝค ์ข‹์€ ๊ฐœ์š”๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ด๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ 3๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:25
This is where youโ€™re actually going to put pen to paper.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํŽœ์„ ์ข…์ด์— ๋Œ€๋Š” ๊ณณ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:29
That is, youโ€™re going to take the ideas in your outline and write full sentences for
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์ฆ‰, ๊ฐœ์š”์—์„œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์™€ ์ „์ฒด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:35
them.
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07:36
Treat this as only your first draft.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์œผ๋กœ ์ทจ๊ธ‰ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
07:38
That means, just focus on writing full sentences without worrying too much about grammar, vocabulary,
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์ฆ‰, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ์–ดํœ˜, ์ฒ ์ž ๋˜๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค
07:45
spelling or punctuation.
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07:47
Just go with the flow and write out some sentences.
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ํ๋ฆ„์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๋‚˜์ค‘์—
07:50
You can come back and correct the mistakes later.
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๋Œ์•„์™€์„œ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
07:53
Now, if youโ€™re writing in an exam, then you need to try to write correct sentences
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์ด์ œ ์‹œํ—˜์„ ์น˜๋ฅด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์—†๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ดˆ์•ˆ์—์„œ ์ •ํ™•ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์“ฐ๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ด์•ผ
07:59
in your first draft because you donโ€™t have time, but in all other situations, leave the
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋Š”
08:05
corrections for later.
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๋‚˜์ค‘์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ˆ˜์ •์„ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ ๋‘์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
08:06
Sometimes, as youโ€™re writing, you might think of some additional ideas to include
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๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š” ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋ฉด์„œ ํฌํ•จํ•  ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
08:12
or you might want to remove something or move ideas around, thatโ€™s OK โ€“ itโ€™s a natural
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๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ฑฐํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ณณ์œผ๋กœ ์˜ฎ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:18
part of the process.
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ํ”„๋กœ์„ธ์Šค์˜ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:19
Alright, letโ€™s go back to our outline and write some full sentences.
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์ž, ๊ฐœ์š”๋กœ ๋Œ์•„๊ฐ€์„œ ์ „์ฒด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
08:26
So here I have the outline that we created (Iโ€™ve added a few words here and there to
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ๋“  ๊ฐœ์š”๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค (์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‰ฝ๋„๋ก ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์ €๊ธฐ ๋ช‡ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
08:31
make it easy to understand).
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).
08:34
The first point I want to mention is my purpose for writing.
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์š”์ ์€ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ชฉ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:38
So I can take this idea and put it in a sentence like this: โ€œI am writing to complain about
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ €๋Š” ์ด ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•„๋“ค์—ฌ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
08:44
a computer mouse I purchased recently from your webpage.โ€
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.
08:48
There are some mistakes in this sentence, but thatโ€™s on purpose.
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์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ผ๋ถ€๋Ÿฌ ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:51
Donโ€™t worry about them for now.
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์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
08:53
OK, so just like this, we need to take all of the other ideas and put them in sentences.
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์ž, ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ๋„ฃ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž ์‹œ
09:00
Iโ€™m going to show you my first draft in a moment but I want you to think about how
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ํ›„ ์ œ ์ดˆ๊ณ ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์—ฌ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์ง€๋งŒ
09:05
you would write sentences for these ideas.
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์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์“ธ์ง€ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด์…จ์œผ๋ฉด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:08
Pause the video, think about it then play the video again and check.
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๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์ผ์‹œ์ •์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ ํ›„ ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์žฌ์ƒํ•˜์—ฌ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
09:14
Alright, here it is.
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์ž, ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:18
You might notice that there are errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation, and there
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ์ฒ ์ž ๋ฐ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์— ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ณ 
09:22
also some poor word choices.
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์ผ๋ถ€ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ๋„ ์žˆ์Œ์„ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:24
Thatโ€™s OK (we can come back to them).
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค(๋‹ค์‹œ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค). ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ๋Š” ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ดˆ์•ˆ
09:27
Remember that weโ€™re only trying to produce a first draft here.
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๋งŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š” .
09:32
But you can already see that our email is coming together nicely.
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์ž˜ ๊ฒฐํ•ฉ๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Œ์„ ์ด๋ฏธ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:36
And now that we have a draft, we move on to the next stage โ€“ evaluate.
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์ด์ œ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:43
This is the stage where you check your work.
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์ž‘์—…์„ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:46
This is also called proofreading.
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์ด๋ฅผ ๊ต์ •์ด๋ผ๊ณ ๋„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:48
There are four things you need to look at: vocabulary, grammar, spelling and punctuation.
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์‚ดํŽด๋ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋„ค ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ์–ดํœ˜, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ์ฒ ์ž ๋ฐ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ .
09:55
First, you check if you have used the right words to express your ideas.
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๋จผ์ € ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
10:00
Then you check to see if there are any grammatical mistakes you need to correct.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
10:06
After that, you check if you have spelled all the words correctly, and finally you look
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ์ฒ ์ž๊ฐ€ ์ •ํ™•ํ•œ์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ
10:12
at your punctuation (that is periods, commas, question marks etc.) and make any corrections
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๊ตฌ๋‘์ (๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ, ์‰ผํ‘œ, ๋ฌผ์Œํ‘œ ๋“ฑ)์„ ๋ณด๊ณ  ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
10:18
that are necessary.
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10:20
Alright, weโ€™re back to our first draft.
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์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:24
Before I make any corrections to this, I want you to try doing that.
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์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด ๋ณด์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:28
There are a total of eight errors in this email โ€“ two in vocabulary, two in grammar,
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์ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—๋Š” ์ด 8๊ฐœ์˜ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์–ดํœ˜ 2๊ฐœ, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• 2๊ฐœ,
10:35
two in spelling and two errors in punctuation.
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์ฒ ์ž 2๊ฐœ, ๊ตฌ๋‘์  2๊ฐœ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:38
Stop the video, try to correct them, then play the video again and check.
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๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์ค‘์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์žฌ์ƒํ•˜๊ณ  ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:43
OK, letโ€™s talk about vocabulary and word choice first.
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์ข‹์•„, ๋จผ์ € ์–ดํœ˜์™€ ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜์ž .
10:51
In the first line, Iโ€™ve said โ€˜webpageโ€™ โ€“ this should be website.
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ค„์—์„œ '์›นํŽ˜์ด์ง€'๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:55
Because a webpage is just an individual page โ€“ the company is the website.
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์›นํŽ˜์ด์ง€๋Š” ๊ฐœ๋ณ„ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์ผ ๋ฟ์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:01
And in the very last line, Iโ€™ve said โ€˜delivery guyโ€™.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งจ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์ค„์— ' ๋ฐฐ๋‹ฌ์›'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์–ด์š”.
11:04
This sounds a little casual, and also the person delivering the replacement might be
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„ ์บ์ฃผ์–ผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๋ฉฐ ๊ต์ฒดํ’ˆ์„ ๋ฐฐ๋‹ฌํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋„ ์—ฌ์„ฑ์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
11:09
female.
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11:10
So itโ€™s more professional to say โ€˜delivery personโ€™.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ '๋ฐฐ๋‹ฌ์›'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
11:14
These are the changes I made in word choice.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ์—์„œ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•œ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:17
Letโ€™s talk about grammar โ€“ Notice Iโ€™ve written โ€˜the scroll wheel have startedโ€™
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค. ์ œ๊ฐ€ '์Šคํฌ๋กค ํœ ์ด ์‹œ์ž‘๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค'๋ผ๊ณ  ์ผ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์— ์œ ์˜ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
11:23
โ€“ โ€˜scroll wheelโ€™ is a singular noun, so it should be โ€˜hasโ€™.
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'์Šคํฌ๋กค ํœ '์€ ๋‹จ์ˆ˜ ๋ช…์‚ฌ์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ 'has'์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:28
And where we make the request for the replacement, it says โ€˜if you could sentโ€™ โ€“ it should
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๊ต์ฒด ์š”์ฒญ์„ ํ•  ๋•Œ '๋ณด๋‚ด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:33
be โ€˜sendโ€™.
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'๋ณด๋‚ด์„ธ์š”'์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:34
Letโ€™s move on to spelling.
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๋งž์ถค๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ๋„˜์–ด ๊ฐ‘์‹œ๋‹ค.
11:37
The first error is โ€˜writingโ€™ โ€“ it has an extra โ€˜tโ€™.
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋Š” '์“ฐ๊ธฐ'์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ถ”๊ฐ€ 't'๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:40
And the second is โ€˜immediatelyโ€™ which is missing the โ€˜eโ€™.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋Š” 'e'๊ฐ€ ๋น ์ง„ 'immediately'์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:45
And finally, letโ€™s look at punctuation โ€“ the first error is that there is a period (or
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋Š” ์™„์ „ ๋’ค์— ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ(๋˜๋Š”
11:51
full-stop) missing after completely.
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๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ)๊ฐ€ ๋ˆ„๋ฝ๋œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:53
And then, after โ€˜I would appreciate itโ€™ there is a comma which should not be there.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  '๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค' ๋’ค์—๋Š” ์—†์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ์‰ผํ‘œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:59
How many of these errors did you identify โ€“ let me know in the comments.
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์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜ ์ค‘ ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ๋งŽ์€ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•˜์…จ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ? ๋Œ“๊ธ€๋กœ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
12:03
Now, as I was reading this draft, I realized that in a real email, you would give details
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์ด์ œ ์ด ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ์‹ค์ œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋กœ ์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊นจ๋‹ฌ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:10
of your order.
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.
12:11
So I quickly came up with some imaginary order details and put them and the end (before the
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚˜๋Š” ์žฌ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ์ƒ์ƒ์˜ ์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋‚ด๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋“ค๊ณผ ๋ (๋งˆ๊ฐ ์ „)์„ ๋„ฃ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:17
closing).
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12:18
And I also thought it would be useful to say โ€œsee order details belowโ€ in parentheses
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ฒ˜์Œ์— ๊ด„ํ˜ธ(๋˜๋Š” ๋‘ฅ๊ทผ ๊ด„ํ˜ธ) ์•ˆ์— "์•„๋ž˜ ์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์ •๋ณด ์ฐธ์กฐ"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์œ ์šฉํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:24
(or round brackets) right at the beginning.
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12:27
So here we have our final draft, and it looks pretty good to me.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ตœ์ข… ์ดˆ์•ˆ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ๊ฝค ์ข‹์•„ ๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:31
So now, we go on to the final stage โ€“ review.
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์ด์ œ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ๊ฒ€ํ† ์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:36
OK by now, you will have a pretty good piece of writing thatโ€™s almost ready to go out
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์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ์„ธ์ƒ์— ๋‚˜์˜ฌ ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋œ ๊ฝค ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์„ ๊ฐ–๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:42
into the world.
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.
12:43
But before that, itโ€™s always a good idea to go over it one final time to make sure
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ ์ „์— ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜์—ฌ
12:49
that it reads well.
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์ž˜ ์ฝํžˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:51
You do this to check that what you have written has the intended effect on the reader (that
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ๋…์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์˜๋„ํ•œ ํšจ๊ณผ(์ฆ‰,
12:57
is the effect that you want).
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์›ํ•˜๋Š” ํšจ๊ณผ)๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:59
If youโ€™re in an exam situation or youโ€™re writing a quick email at work, all you need
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์‹œํ—˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ์ฒ˜ํ•ด ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ง์žฅ์—์„œ ๋น ๋ฅธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
13:04
to do is just give it a read before you hand in your paper or hit the send button.
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๋ณด๊ณ ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ œ์ถœํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ธฐ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ๋ˆ„๋ฅด๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์ฝ๊ธฐ๋งŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:10
But if you have time, or if youโ€™re writing something longer (like a report or a story),
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋” ๊ธด ๋‚ด์šฉ(์˜ˆ: ๋ณด๊ณ ์„œ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ)์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ฆ‰์‹œ
13:16
then the best practice is to not review it immediately.
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๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
13:20
This is because after you finish writing, your mind will still be full of the same ideas.
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์นœ ํ›„์—๋„ ๋งˆ์Œ์€ ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ โ€‹โ€‹๊ฐ™์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋“ ์ฐจ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:26
Instead, you should leave it and come back to it the next day (or, at least, after a
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๋Œ€์‹ , ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋‘์—ˆ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‚ (๋˜๋Š” ์ ์–ด๋„
13:32
few hours).
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๋ช‡ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ํ›„์—) ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋Œ์•„์™€์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:33
This way, you will look at it with a fresh pair of eyes and it will be easier to notice
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ˆˆ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ 
13:38
any last-minute corrections that you need to make.
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„์— ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋” ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์•Œ์•„์ฐจ๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
13:42
When you review, itโ€™s good to read it out loud and not just silently in your head, so
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๋ณต์Šตํ•  ๋•Œ ๋จธ๋ฆฌ ์†์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ ๋‚ด์–ด ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์•ผ
13:48
you can check if your writing sounds natural.
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๊ธ€์ด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:51
And finally, if you can, ask someone else to read it and give you their feedback (just
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ, ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฝ๊ณ  ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ถ€ํƒํ•˜์„ธ์š”(๋‹จ์ง€
13:57
donโ€™t do this in an exam).
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์‹œํ—˜์—์„œ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”).
13:59
If youโ€™ve gotten this far, then congratulations, you have now used the POWER writing process
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ์™”๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ถ•ํ•˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ POWER ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํ”„๋กœ์„ธ์Šค๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ
14:05
to easily, quickly and effectively produce a written work.
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์‰ฝ๊ณ  ๋น ๋ฅด๊ณ  ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
14:09
Now, in this lesson, I showed you how to do this with an email but remember that this
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์ด์ œ ์ด ๊ฐ•์˜์—์„œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋กœ ์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ๋“œ๋ ธ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด
14:15
process works in the same way for anything that you need to write.
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ํ”„๋กœ์„ธ์Šค๋Š” ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ์ž‘์—…์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋™์ผํ•œ ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘๋™ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š” .
14:19
Alright, letโ€™s do a quick recap of what weโ€™ve learned in this lesson.
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์ž, ์ด๋ฒˆ ๊ฐ•์˜์—์„œ ๋ฐฐ์šด ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํžˆ ์š”์•ฝํ•ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:25
You begin the writing process with the Prepare stage.
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์ค€๋น„ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์—์„œ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๊ณผ์ •์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
14:29
This is where you collect or brainstorm ideas.
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ง‘ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋ธŒ๋ ˆ์ธ์Šคํ† ๋ฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณณ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:33
You then organize your ideas into an outline that you can use to write.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฐœ์š”๋กœ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:37
Then you go on to the Write stage where you expand your outline into full sentences and
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ๊ฐœ์š”๋ฅผ ์ „์ฒด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ํ™•์žฅํ•˜๊ณ 
14:43
produce your first draft.
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:46
After this, you Evaluate or proofread the draft to correct any errors.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ต์ •ํ•˜์—ฌ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:51
Finally, you review what youโ€™ve written to see if it reads naturally and make sure
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ฝํžˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ 
14:57
itโ€™s fully ready to go out into the world.
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์„ธ์ƒ์— ๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋˜์—ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
15:01
Once you get good at applying the POWER writing process, you will find that writing anything
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POWER ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํ”„๋กœ์„ธ์Šค๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์ ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „๋ณด๋‹ค
15:06
is easier, more systematic and more enjoyable than ever before.
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๋” ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์ด๋ฉฐ ์ฆ๊ฒ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
15:11
Alright, if you liked this video, give it a thumbs-up by hitting the like button.
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์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“œ์…จ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ข‹์•„์š” ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ ์ข‹์•„์š”๋ฅผ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
15:15
If youโ€™re new to my channel, subscribe by clicking the subscribe button to get my latest
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๋‚ด ์ฑ„๋„์„ ์ฒ˜์Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๊ตฌ๋… ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์—ฌ
15:21
lessons right here on YouTube.
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YouTube์—์„œ ๋‚ด ์ตœ์‹  ๊ฐ•์˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
15:24
Happy learning and I will see you in another lesson soon.
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