Business Email: How to Turn a Complaint into a Suggestion

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English with Jennifer


์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hi everyone. I'm Jennifer from Englishย  with Jennifer. If you've been following me,ย ย 
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„. ์ €๋Š” ์˜์–ด๊ถŒ์˜ Jennifer์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ €๋ฅผ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•˜์‹  ๋ถ„์ด๋ผ๋ฉด
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then you know that I recently traveled to Paris.ย  It was a wonderful trip overall. I'm here back inย ย 
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ตœ๊ทผ ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์—ฌํ–‰ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค์„ ์•„์‹ค ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฉ‹์ง„ ์—ฌํ–‰์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š” ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ๋งค์‚ฌ์ถ”์„ธ์ธ ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:13
Massachusetts, and as you can see I'm at my desk.ย  There's something I'd like to share with you.ย ย 
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. ๋ณด์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ์ €๋Š” ์ œ ์ฑ…์ƒ์— ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:18
Well, if you'd followed me, you know that thereย  were a couple of problems that came up during theย ย 
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๊ธ€์Ž„์š”, ์ €๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์˜ค์…จ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์—ฌํ–‰ ์ค‘์— ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•„์‹ค ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:24
trip. And well, the first one has been resolved.ย  It was with Lufthansa. When we arrived in Paris,ย ย 
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฃจํ”„ํŠธํ•œ์ž์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์— ๋„์ฐฉํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ,
00:32
we did not receive our luggage, and it wasย  delayed. It wasn't lost. It was delayed.ย ย 
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์ˆ˜ํ•˜๋ฌผ์„ ๋ฐ›์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฐฐ์†ก์ด ์ง€์—ฐ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์žƒ์–ด๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€์—ฐ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:37
It was back in Frankfurt. It took time toย  reach us in Paris. Even when it was in Paris,ย ย 
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ํ”„๋ž‘ํฌํ‘ธ๋ฅดํŠธ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์—์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์—๊ฒŒ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ฑธ๋ ธ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์— ์žˆ์„ ๋•Œ์—๋„
00:42
I waited three days to receive my suitcase, andย  my children had to wait five days to receiveย ย 
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๋‚˜๋Š” ์—ฌํ–‰๊ฐ€๋ฐฉ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด 3์ผ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ธ๊ณ , ์•„์ด๋“ค์€ ์—ฌํ–‰๊ฐ€๋ฐฉ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด 5์ผ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ค์•ผ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:50
theirs. During that time, we did incurย  some expenses. We had to buy toiletries,ย ย 
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. ๊ทธ ๊ธฐ๊ฐ„ ๋™์•ˆ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋ฐœ์ƒํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์„ธ๋ฉด๋„๊ตฌ์™€ ์˜ท์„ ์‚ฌ์•ผ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
00:55
some clothing. And today here back at home, Iย  was able to submit my receipts and a requestย ย 
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ง‘์— ๋Œ์•„์™€์„œ ์˜์ˆ˜์ฆ๊ณผ ํ™˜๊ธ‰ ์š”์ฒญ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ œ์ถœํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์šด์ด
01:03
for reimbursement, so fingers crossed andย  perhaps I will be reimbursed. But of course,ย ย 
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์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™˜๊ธ‰์„ ๋ฐ›๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ฌผ๋ก 
01:10
the important thing is that we did receiveย  our luggage before our trip ended. And I'mย ย 
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์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์—ฌํ–‰์ด ๋๋‚˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์ง์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ 
01:16
happy to say that once we came back to Boston,ย  our luggage arrived as well, so we were able toย ย 
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๋ณด์Šคํ„ด์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค์ž๋งˆ์ž ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์ง๋„ ๋„์ฐฉํ•ด์„œ
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leave the airport with our suitcases here inย  Boston. Now the second thing that came up wasย ย 
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ ๋ณด์Šคํ„ด์—์„œ ์—ฌํ–‰๊ฐ€๋ฐฉ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ๊ณตํ•ญ์„ ๋– ๋‚  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์†Œ์‹์„ ์ „ํ•ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒŒ ๋˜์–ด ๊ธฐ์ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ด์ œ ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋กœ ๋‚˜์˜จ ๊ฒƒ์€
01:30
a fine in the Paris Metro. And I accept that whenย  you break a rule, there's a consequence. It stillย ย 
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ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ ์—์„œ์˜ ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทœ์น™์„ ์–ด๊ธฐ๋ฉด ๊ทธ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ๋”ฐ๋ฅธ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ์ธ์ •ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜๋„
01:38
is upsetting a little bit because it was somethingย  that could have been avoided if we had known aboutย ย 
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์–ด๊ธฐ๊ฒŒ ๋œ ๊ทœ์น™์„ ์•Œ์•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ํ”ผํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋˜ ์ผ์ด์—ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์กฐ๊ธˆ ์†์ƒํ•˜๋„ค์š”
01:44
the rule that we ended up breaking. So this isย  not about anger. It's not about venting. I'veย ย 
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. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ถ„๋…ธ์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ†ตํ’์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:52
I had my moments later at the hotel to complainย  to sympathetic hotel staff, who listened to me,ย ย 
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๋‚˜๋Š”ย ย  ๋‚˜์ค‘์— ํ˜ธํ…”์—์„œ ๋‚ด ๋ง์„ ๋“ค์–ด์ค€ ๋™์ •์‹ฌ ๋งŽ์€ ํ˜ธํ…” ์ง์›์—๊ฒŒ ๋ถˆํ‰ํ•  ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๊ฐ€์กŒ์œผ๋ฉฐ,
01:58
and they told me their stories about being findย  as well. But what I decided to do, actually at theย ย 
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๊ทธ๋“ค๋„ ๋‚˜์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ ค์ฃผ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋กœ ๊ฒฐ์ •ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€
02:05
urging of one of the hotel staff members, was toย  write. And it's really not about complaining. It'sย ย 
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ํ˜ธํ…” ์ง์› ์ค‘ ํ•œ ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ถŒ์œ ๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋ถˆํ‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:13
more about making a suggestion at this point. Iย  want to be constructive. This is not about beingย ย 
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์ด ์‹œ์ ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ฑด์„ค์ ์ธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Š”
02:19
critical, but being constructive because I reallyย  believe that I am not alone in this experience.ย ย 
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๋น„ํŒ์ ์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๊ฑด์„ค์ ์ธ ํƒœ๋„๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ์ €๋Š” ์ด ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ํ˜ผ์ž๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ •๋ง๋กœ ๋ฏฟ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:26
In fact, I saw this happen to other tourists,ย  and I believe that it's something that could beย ย 
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์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ผ์ด ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด์•˜๋Š”๋ฐ, ํ”ผํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
02:32
avoided. It could be reduced if, you know, furtherย  action were taken by the RATP. That's the Parisย ย 
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. RATP๊ฐ€ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์กฐ์น˜๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•˜๋ฉด ์ด ๊ธˆ์•ก์ด ์ค„์–ด๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ
02:40
metropolitan transport system or something likeย  that...transport system or transit system. Theย ย 
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์ˆ˜๋„๊ถŒ ๊ตํ†ต ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์ด๋ผ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ์™€ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ...๊ตํ†ต ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์ด๋‚˜ ๋Œ€์ค‘๊ตํ†ต ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์ด์ฃ .
02:46
RATP. And I want to emphasize, by the way, thatย  the majority of workers were very kind, helpful,ย ย 
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RATP. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ €๋Š” ๋Œ€๋‹ค์ˆ˜์˜ ์ง์›์ด ๋งค์šฐ ์นœ์ ˆํ•˜๊ณ  ํ˜‘์กฐ์ ์ด๋ฉฐ
02:53
patient. A lot of them spoke English, and evenย  when they didn't, they were so patient as I triedย ย 
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์ธ๋‚ด์‹ฌ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋“ค ์ค‘ ๋‹ค์ˆ˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ–ˆ๊ณ , ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋„ ์ œ๊ฐ€
02:59
with my limited French to explain things that Iย  needed, so they were there ready to help. It was,ย ย 
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์ œํ•œ๋œ ํ”„๋ž‘์Šค์–ด๋กœ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•  ๋•Œ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์ฐธ์„์„ฑ์ด ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค„ ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:05
overall, a very positive experience, but weย  did get fined our final night because we didn'tย ย 
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์ „๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด์—ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์œ ํšจํ•œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์ด ์—†์—ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ฐค์— ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์„ ๋ฌผ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:13
have a valid ticket. So, I had one. My son hadย  one. My daughter had one, but on the way out,ย ย 
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. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚˜๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ ์•„๋“ค์ด ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ์–ด์š” . ์ œ ๋”ธ์ด ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ์—
03:18
she had thrown it away. There's trash bins inย  the metro, and she threw her ticket away. Andย ย 
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๋ฒ„๋ ธ์–ด์š”. ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ ์— ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐํ†ต์ด ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ๋ฒ„๋ ธ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ 
03:25
as we were exiting, they checked for tickets. Sheย  didn't have one, and they were so no-nonsense. Itย ย 
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ๋•Œ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ํ™•์ธํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒŒ ์—†์—ˆ๊ณ  ์ •๋ง ๋ง๋„ ์•ˆ ๋˜๋Š” ์ผ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€
03:31
was like, "Cash or credit card? You pay a fine. 50ย  euros." So, we did. I believe that other touristsย ย 
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'ํ˜„๊ธˆ์ธ๊ฐ€์š”, ์‹ ์šฉ์นด๋“œ์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์„ ๋‚ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 50 ์œ ๋กœ'์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ๋“ค์ด
03:39
have been....not believe...I know have been finedย  for this, are probably being fined even today,ย ย 
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......๋ฏฟ์ง€ ๋ชปํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค...์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์ด ๋ถ€๊ณผ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์•„๋งˆ๋„ ์˜ค๋Š˜๋„ ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์ด ๋ถ€๊ณผ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:45
and will continue to be fined for this violationย  because we're simply not aware. So again, I wantย ย 
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ์•Œ์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ด ์œ„๋ฐ˜์œผ๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ๊ณ„์† ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์ด ๋ถ€๊ณผ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ
03:54
to be constructive and offer a suggestion. So,ย  what we're going to look at together is an emailย ย 
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๊ฑด์„ค์ ์ธ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณผ ๊ฒƒ์€
04:00
that I drafted. In fact, I sent it off alreadyย  via the RATP website, and just to be sure thatย ย 
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‚ฌ์‹ค ์ด๋ฏธ RATP ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ๋ณด๋ƒˆ๊ณ , ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด
04:07
someone receives it, I also submitted it viaย  private message on Facebook. So, it's my hopeย ย 
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Facebook์˜ ๋น„๊ณต๊ฐœ ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋กœ๋„ ์ œ์ถœํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ
04:14
that someone will receive the suggestion andย  take it into consideration. My goal right nowย ย 
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๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ๋ฐ›์•„๋“ค์ด๊ณ  ๊ณ ๋ คํ•ด์ฃผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‚ด ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ์ด ๋‚ด์šฉ์„
04:20
is to share it with you because perhaps it willย  be useful for you to see how I approached this.ย ย 
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ์— ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ ‘๊ทผํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:27
How did I organize it and what kind of wording didย  I use to offer my suggestion? Let's take a look.ย ย 
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์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์–ด๋–ค ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ๋‚˜์š”? ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๋ณด์ž.
04:36
Okay. Let's look at the overallย  organization. First, we have a greeting.ย ย 
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์ข‹์•„์š”. ์ „์ฒด ์กฐ์ง์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋จผ์ € ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:42
I wrote a lot, so it's broken intoย  paragraphs. I always suggest that.ย ย 
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๋งŽ์ด ์ผ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜๋ˆด์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ €๋Š” ํ•ญ์ƒ ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์ œ์•ˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:48
Closing. Signature. You can tell by the closingย  this is a formal email: Best regards. However,ย ย 
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ํ์‡„. ์„œ๋ช…. ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ž„์„ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ
04:55
I did not use the highest level of formality. Iย  could have used "Dear Sir or Madam." I don't knowย ย 
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์ตœ๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์ค€์˜ ๊ฒฉ์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 'Dear Sir or Madam'์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:00
who's going to be reading this; however, in mostย  business correspondence today, "hello" is fine.ย ย 
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๋ˆ„๊ฐ€ ์ด ๊ธ€์„ ์ฝ์„์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์˜ค๋Š˜๋‚  ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์„œ์‹ ์—์„œ๋Š” 'hello'๊ฐ€ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:06
It's acceptable. It's polite. It's certainlyย  more concise, so I believe that "hello" worksย ย 
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ—ˆ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ์˜๋ฐ”๋ฅด๋‹ค. ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ๋” ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ด ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋Š” "hello"๊ฐ€ ์ž˜ ์ž‘๋™ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:12
in this situation just fine. I also decided toย  open up immediately -- state my purpose: What'sย ย 
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. ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋˜ํ•œ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ๋ฌธ์„ ์—ด๊ธฐ๋กœ ๊ฒฐ์ •ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ๋ฐํžˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
05:18
my intention? Why am I writing this? I give someย  background information, and I start with a littleย ย 
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๋‚ด ์˜๋„๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์™œ ์ด ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฑธ๊นŒ? ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฐฐ๊ฒฝ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๊ณ 
05:23
bit of positive before I get to the main issue. Iย  explained the issue in detail. Right around hereย ย 
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์ฃผ์š” ๋ฌธ์ œ์— ๋„๋‹ฌํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์„ค๋ช…ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—์„œ
05:29
is where I start to make a call to action. It'sย  a suggestion. I repeat that request at the end,ย ย 
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ํ–‰๋™ ์ด‰๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ์•ˆ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์— ํ•ด๋‹น ์š”์ฒญ์„ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ
05:37
so that's the basic approach I used. Again,ย  you'll see a level of formality here. I use noย ย 
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•œ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ์ ‘๊ทผ ๋ฐฉ์‹์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ, ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ๋„ ์–ด๋Š ์ •๋„ ํ˜•์‹์ ์ธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋Š”
05:45
contractions. I use polite language like "I wouldย  like to." Okay. Let's read through. Hello. I wouldย ย 
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์ˆ˜์ถ•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋Š” "ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ •์ค‘ํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ข‹์•„์š”. ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด์ž. ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
05:52
like to offer a suggestion based on my recent tripย  to Paris from the 15th to the 21st of August 2023.ย ย 
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์ตœ๊ทผ 2023๋…„ 8์›” 15์ผ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ 21์ผ๊นŒ์ง€ ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•œ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๋ฐ”ํƒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:00
A quick note here is if I were writingย  to an American company, I would have usedย ย 
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์ฐธ๊ณ ๋กœ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์— ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์“ด๋‹ค๋ฉด
06:04
month-day-year. Since my reader is in Europe, Iย  decided to use the more common format in Europe,ย ย 
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์›”-์ผ-๋…„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋…์ž๊ฐ€ ์œ ๋Ÿฝ์— ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์œ ๋Ÿฝ์—์„œ ๋” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ํ˜•์‹์ธ
06:11
which is day or yeah, day-month-year. So,ย  I'm trying to meet them halfway here. Fromย ย 
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์ผ ๋˜๋Š” ์ผ-์›”-์—ฐ๋„๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ๋กœ ๊ฒฐ์ •ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ฏค์—์„œ ๋งŒ๋‚˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:18
the 15th through the 21st of August. Okay. Myย  two teenage children and I navigated the Parisย ย 
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8์›” 15์ผ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ 21์ผ๊นŒ์ง€. ์ข‹์•„์š”. ์‹ญ๋Œ€ ์ž๋…€ ๋‘ ๋ช…๊ณผ ์ €๋Š”
06:25
Metro for the first time. On the whole, ourย  experience was positive. Metro workers wereย ย 
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์ฒ˜์Œ์œผ๋กœ ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ ์„ ์ด์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์€ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Metro ์ง์›์€
06:30
patient when helping us purchase the necessaryย  tickets. Over the course of our seven-day stay,ย ย 
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ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“ ๊ตฌ๋งค๋ฅผ ๋„์™€์ค„ ๋•Œ ์ธ๋‚ด์‹ฌ์„ ๋ณด์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . 7์ผ๊ฐ„์˜ ์ฒด๋ฅ˜ ๊ธฐ๊ฐ„ ๋™์•ˆ
06:35
we bought a combination of tickets, includingย  Paris Visite and single-use tickets. However,ย ย 
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” Paris Visite ํ‹ฐ์ผ“๊ณผ 1ํšŒ์šฉ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ํฌํ•จํ•œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“ ์กฐํ•ฉ์„ ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜
06:43
while safety rules are clearly visible to metroย  users, the rules of ticket usage are not. No oneย ย 
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์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ  ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์•ˆ์ „ ๊ทœ์น™์ด ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜์ง€๋งŒ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“ ์‚ฌ์šฉ ๊ทœ์น™์€ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ญ์—์„œ
06:51
explained the need to have tickets upon exiting aย  station. We learned the hard way. On the eveningย ย 
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๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ๋•Œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค์„ ์•„๋ฌด๋„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:58
of the 20 August 2023 -- again I'm using that moreย  more common format in Europe -- while exiting atย ย 
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2023๋…„ 8์›” 20์ผ ์ €๋… -- ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ์œ ๋Ÿฝ์—์„œ ๋” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ํ˜•์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. --
07:08
Alma-Marceau (that's a station), we were stoppedย  by security and requested to present our tickets.ย ย 
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Alma-Marceau(์—ญ)์—์„œ ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ ๋ณด์•ˆ ๊ฒ€์ƒ‰๋Œ€์— ์˜ํ•ด ๋ฉˆ์ถฐ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋ผ๋Š” ์š”์ฒญ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:15
It was our final night in Paris, andย  we had bought single-use tickets.ย ย 
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ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์—์„œ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ฐค์ด์—ˆ๊ณ  ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ผํšŒ์šฉ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ๊ตฌ์ž…ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:21
I had retained my ticket, as had my son, but myย  daughter had just thrown hers away in a trashย ย 
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๋‚˜๋Š” ์•„๋“ค๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€๋กœ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ๋ณด๊ด€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๋”ธ์€ ๋ฐฉ๊ธˆ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ  ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐํ†ต์— ๋ฒ„๋ ธ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:27
can in the metro. Since she could not presentย  a valid ticket, she was immediately fined 50ย ย 
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. ์œ ํšจํ•œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ฆ‰์‹œ 50
07:32
euros. We had to present my daughter's passportย  for the ticket to be written up. I paid the fineย ย 
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์œ ๋กœ์˜ ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์ด ๋ถ€๊ณผ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด ๋”ธ์˜ ์—ฌ๊ถŒ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์„
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by cash and received a receipt, and here sinceย  I looked at the online form, by the way, there'sย ย 
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ํ˜„๊ธˆ์œผ๋กœ ๋‚ด๊ณ  ์˜์ˆ˜์ฆ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์–‘์‹์„ ๋ณด๋‹ˆ โ€‹โ€‹๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ
07:43
no option to upload or make an attachment, so I'mย  writing some of the details from the ticket here.ย ย 
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์—…๋กœ๋“œ๋‚˜ ์ฒจ๋ถ€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜ต์…˜์ด ์—†์–ด์„œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“ ๋‚ด์šฉ ์ค‘ ์ผ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ์ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:52
Later on the way back into the station, we sawย  more tourists being stopped and fined for theย ย 
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๋‚˜์ค‘์— ์—ญ์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ์— ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ์ด ๊ฐ™์€ ์ด์œ ๋กœ ์ •์ง€๋˜๊ณ  ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์ด ๋ถ€๊ณผ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด์•˜์œผ๋ฉฐ
07:58
same reason, which gave the strong impressionย  that tourists are targeted for this infraction.ย ย 
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์ด๋Š” ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ์ด ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์œ„๋ฐ˜์˜ ๋Œ€์ƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์ฃผ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:03
While we recognize that we violated a rule ofย  the RATP, we wish to emphasize that we were notย ย 
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” RATP ๊ทœ์น™์„ ์œ„๋ฐ˜ํ–ˆ์Œ์„ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ํ•ด๋‹น
08:09
aware that the rule existed. I later spoke withย  a metro cashier at Porte de Clichy (that's anotherย ย 
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๊ทœ์น™์ด ์กด์žฌํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค์€ ๋ชฐ๋ž๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜์ค‘์— Porte de Clichy(๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์—ญ)์—์„œ ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ  ๊ณ„์‚ฐ์›๊ณผ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜๋ˆด๊ณ 
08:16
station), and she pointed to a set of rulesย  in small print at the far end of the lobby.ย ย 
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๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ๋กœ๋น„ ๋งจ ๋์— ์ž‘์€ ๊ธ€์”จ๋กœ ์ ํžŒ ์ผ๋ จ์˜ ๊ทœ์น™์„ ๊ฐ€๋ฆฌ์ผฐ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
08:22
I suspect that few tourists see those rules;ย  we certainly did not. What tourists see isย ย 
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๊ทœ์น™์„ ์•„๋Š” ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ์ด ๊ฑฐ์˜ ์—†์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ์ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“ ์นด์šดํ„ฐ
08:29
the information posted around theย  ticket counter regarding pricing.ย ย 
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์ฃผ๋ณ€์— ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋œ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์ •๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:34
We also see information posted around the ticketย  machines, on the platforms, and in the trains. Ifย ย 
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๋˜ํ•œ ๋งคํ‘œ๊ธฐ, ํ”Œ๋žซํผ, ๊ธฐ์ฐจ ์ฃผ๋ณ€์— ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋œ ์ •๋ณด๋„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
08:41
you wish to inform all passengers of the rules,ย  then I strongly recommend posting the rules alongย ย 
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๋ชจ๋“  ์Šน๊ฐ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ทœ์น™์„ ์•Œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ชจ๋“  ๋งคํ‘œ๊ธฐ์—์„œ
08:47
with a visual aid (e.g., meaning "for example" --ย  a hand holding a ticket) at every ticket machineย ย 
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์‹œ๊ฐ์  ์ž๋ฃŒ(์˜ˆ: "์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด" - ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ๋“ค๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์†)์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜
08:55
with the reminder in French and other commonย  languages of visiting tourists: "old on to yourย ย 
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ํ”„๋ž‘์Šค์–ด ๋ฐ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ์–ธ์–ด๋กœ ์•Œ๋ฆผ๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๊ทœ์น™์„ ๊ฒŒ์‹œํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ์˜ ๊ณตํ†ต ์–ธ์–ด: "
09:02
validated ticket at all times." Or "Please retainย  your validated ticket until you exit the metro."ย ย 
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ์œ ํšจํ•œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”." ๋˜๋Š” " ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ ์—์„œ ๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ์œ ํšจํ•œ ํ‹ฐ์ผ“์„ ๋ณด๊ด€ํ•˜์„ธ์š”."
09:09
Paris is a favorite tourist destination, andย  thousands of us enjoy visiting your wonderfulย ย 
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ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ๊ธฐ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ด€๊ด‘์ง€์ด๋ฉฐ, ์ˆ˜์ฒœ ๋ช…์˜ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ฉ‹์ง„ ๋„์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฆ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
09:15
city. Unfortunately, the experience of being finedย  for a rule that we were not aware of affects ourย ย 
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. ๋ถˆํ–‰ํ•˜๊ฒŒ๋„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์•Œ์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ทœ์น™์œผ๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์„ ๋ถ€๊ณผ๋ฐ›์€ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์€
09:21
impression of Paris and the quality of our stay.ย  If you wish for tourists to follow the rules,ย ย 
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ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ธ์ƒ๊ณผ ์ˆ™๋ฐ•์˜ ์งˆ์— ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ์ด ๊ทœ์น™์„ ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด
09:28
the RATP must take greater measures to educateย  us. Fining passengers who are often unaware ofย ย 
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RATP๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ต์œก์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋” ํฐ ์กฐ์น˜๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๊ทœ์ •์„ ์ž˜ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๋Š” ์Šน๊ฐ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์„ ๋ถ€๊ณผํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€
09:35
the rules is not the best means. Thankfully,ย  we had plenty of other encounters with kindย ย 
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์ตœ์„ ์˜ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ๋ง™๊ฒŒ๋„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ง€ํ•˜์ฒ  ์•ˆํŒŽ์—์„œ ์นœ์ ˆํ•œ ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์ง€์•ต๋“ค๊ณผ์˜ ๋งŒ๋‚จ์„ ๋งŽ์ด ํ†ตํ•ด
09:41
Parisians inside and outside of the metroย  that offset this negative experience, butย ย 
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์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ถ€์ •์ ์ธ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ์ƒ์‡„ํ–ˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ๋„์‹œ์˜ ์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์›€์„ ์ฆ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ๊ฐ์ƒํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋„์ฐฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ด€๊ด‘๊ฐ๋“ค ์‚ฌ์ด์—์„œ
09:48
it is unnecessary to make this a common experienceย  among tourists, who arrive with the wish to enjoyย ย 
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์ด๊ฒƒ์„ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค ํ•„์š”๋Š” ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:54
and appreciate the beauty of your city. I hopeย  you will take my suggestion into consideration toย ย 
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10:00
improve the service and experience of the RATP.ย  Thank you for your attention. Best regards, me.
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RATP์˜ ์„œ๋น„์Šค์™€ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ œ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•˜์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:29
That's all for now. Please remember to like andย  share the video if you found the lesson useful. Asย ย 
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์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ•์˜๊ฐ€ ์œ ์ตํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋™์˜์ƒ์— ์ข‹์•„์š”๋ฅผ ๋ˆ„๋ฅด๊ณ  ๊ณต์œ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
10:36
always, thanks for watching and happy studies!ย  Follow me on Instagram, Facebook, Twitter,ย ย 
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์–ธ์ œ๋‚˜์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์ฆ๊ฑฐ์šด ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์„ธ์š”! Instagram, Facebook, Twitter, Patreon์—์„œ ์ €๋ฅผ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”
10:43
and Patreon. And don't forget to subscribeย  here on YouTube. Turn on those notifications.
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. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ YouTube์—์„œ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ํ•ด๋‹น ์•Œ๋ฆผ์„ ์ผœ์„ธ์š”.
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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