How to Write for an ESL Test - Samples and Best Advice for English Learners

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μ•„λž˜ μ˜λ¬Έμžλ§‰μ„ λ”λΈ”ν΄λ¦­ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄ μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ²ˆμ—­λœ μžλ§‰μ€ 기계 λ²ˆμ—­λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

00:00
Hello!
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μ•ˆλ…•ν•˜μ„Έμš”!
00:01
How's it going?
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μ–΄λ–»κ²Œλ˜κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
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Welcome to Go Natural English.
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Go Natural English에 μ˜€μ‹  것을 ν™˜μ˜ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:03
I have a great question from an audience member, Yasa.
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청쀑인 Yasaμ—κ²Œ 쒋은 질문이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€ .
00:06
Yasa asked, "How should I write for my English test?"
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Yasaκ°€ "μ˜μ–΄ μ‹œν—˜μ€ μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ 써야 ν•˜λ‚˜μš”?"라고 λ¬Όμ—ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:12
So, Yasa, I want to help you out but I want to let you know that I'm not your classroom
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 야사야, λ„ˆλ₯Ό 도와주고 μ‹Άμ§€λ§Œ λ‚˜λŠ” λ„ˆμ˜ λ‹΄μž„
00:18
teacher and probably you have a test from your English teacher, right?
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μ„ μƒλ‹˜μ΄ μ•„λ‹ˆκ³  μ•„λ§ˆλ„ λ„ˆλŠ” μ˜μ–΄ μ„ μƒλ‹˜μ—κ²Œ μ‹œν—˜μ„ λ°›μ•˜κ² μ§€ ?
00:23
So, make sure that, as for any case, you are aware of what your teacher's asking for.
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λ”°λΌμ„œ μ–΄λ–€ κ²½μš°λ“  μ„ μƒλ‹˜μ΄ 무엇을 μš”κ΅¬ν•˜λŠ”μ§€ μ•Œκ³  μžˆλŠ”μ§€ ν™•μΈν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
00:30
Make sure that you have the correct assignment and the directions for your writing test,
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μž‘λ¬Έ μ‹œν—˜μ— λŒ€ν•œ μ˜¬λ°”λ₯Έ κ³Όμ œμ™€ μ§€μ‹œ 사항을 가지고 μžˆλŠ”μ§€ ν™•μΈν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
00:35
but in general, for English as a second language test, I would recommend a few things.
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κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ 일반적으둜 제2μ™Έκ΅­μ–΄λ‘œμ„œμ˜ μ˜μ–΄ μ‹œν—˜μ˜ 경우 λͺ‡ 가지λ₯Ό ꢌμž₯ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:41
So, of course, number one -- be aware of the directions for writing.
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ¬Όλ‘  첫 λ²ˆμ§ΈλŠ” 글을 μ“°λŠ” λ°©ν–₯을 μ•Œκ³  μžˆμ–΄μ•Ό ν•œλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:46
Number two -- keep it simple.
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두 번째 -- λ‹¨μˆœν•˜κ²Œ μœ μ§€ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€. κ΅μ‚¬μ—κ²Œ κΉŠμ€ 인상을 남기기 μœ„ν•΄ μžμ‹ μ—κ²Œ μ΅μˆ™
00:48
Don't use big words that you're not really comfortable with, or you're not really familiar
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ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šκ±°λ‚˜ μ΅μˆ™ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ€ κ±°μ°½ν•œ 단어λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ§€ λ§ˆμ„Έμš”
00:53
with just to try to impress the teacher.
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.
00:56
You're probably not going to impress them.
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당신은 μ•„λ§ˆ κ·Έλ“€μ—κ²Œ κΉŠμ€ 인상을 남기지 λͺ»ν•  κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:59
It might be awkward or you might use them in a wrong way.
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μ–΄μƒ‰ν•˜κ±°λ‚˜ 잘λͺ»λœ λ°©μ‹μœΌλ‘œ μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:03
So, keep it simple.
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λ”°λΌμ„œ κ°„λ‹¨ν•˜κ²Œ μœ μ§€ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
01:04
Use words that you already know how to use.
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μ‚¬μš© 방법을 이미 μ•Œκ³  μžˆλŠ” 단어λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:07
Same thing goes for grammar.
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문법도 λ§ˆμ°¬κ°€μ§€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:09
Keep your sentences short.
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λ¬Έμž₯을 짧게 μœ μ§€ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
01:12
It's good to vary the length, some short, some longer, and use transitions but don't
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길이λ₯Ό λ‹€μ–‘ν•˜κ²Œ λ³€κ²½ν•˜κ³  μΌλΆ€λŠ” 짧게, μΌλΆ€λŠ” 길게 ν•˜κ³  μ „ν™˜μ„ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ’‹μ§€λ§Œ 단지
01:17
try to make a really, really long sentence just because you think it's going to look
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λ¬Έμž₯이 더 λ˜‘λ˜‘ν•΄ 보일 것이라고 μƒκ°ν•΄μ„œ 정말 정말 κΈ΄ λ¬Έμž₯을 λ§Œλ“€λ €κ³  ν•˜μ§€ λ§ˆμ„Έμš”
01:21
smarter.
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. 그렇지
01:22
It's not.
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μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:23
It's going to be a run-on sentence and you'll have points subtracted for bad grammar.
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κ³„μ†λ˜λŠ” λ¬Έμž₯이 될 것이고 잘λͺ»λœ λ¬Έλ²•μœΌλ‘œ 인해 감점을 λ°›κ²Œ 될 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:28
Third -- use organization.
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μ…‹μ§Έ - 쑰직을 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
01:29
I mentioned transitions before, also use paragraphs for each separate idea.
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이전에 μ „ν™˜μ— λŒ€ν•΄ μ–ΈκΈ‰ν–ˆμœΌλ©° 각 κ°œλ³„ 아이디어에 λŒ€ν•œ 단락도 μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:35
Break it into a new paragraph.
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μƒˆ λ‹¨λ½μœΌλ‘œ λ‚˜λˆ„μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
01:37
So, those are three simple tips that will make your writing and English so much better.
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이것듀은 λ‹Ήμ‹ μ˜ μž‘λ¬Έκ³Ό μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 훨씬 더 ν–₯μƒμ‹œν‚¬ 수 μžˆλŠ” μ„Έ 가지 κ°„λ‹¨ν•œ νŒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:43
Simple is good.
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λ‹¨μˆœν•œ 것이 μ’‹μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λ €λŠ”
01:44
Remember, be confident in the words that you want to use and keep it simple, clear, organized,
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단어에 μžμ‹ κ°μ„ κ°–κ³ 
01:52
and easy for your teacher to read.
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ꡐ사가 읽기 μ‰½κ²Œ λ‹¨μˆœν•˜κ³  λͺ…ν™•ν•˜λ©° μ²΄κ³„μ μœΌλ‘œ μœ μ§€ν•΄μ•Ό ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:54
I swear, as a teacher myself, your teacher will really appreciate it.
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λ§Ήμ„Έν•˜κ±΄λŒ€ μ„ μƒλ‹˜μœΌλ‘œμ„œ λ‹Ήμ‹ μ˜ μ„ μƒλ‹˜μ€ 정말 κ³ λ§™κ²Œ 생각할 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:59
I hope this was helpful, and if you want to learn more about the go Natural English way
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이것이 도움이 λ˜μ—ˆκΈ°λ₯Ό 바라며 μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό μœ μ°½ν•˜κ²Œ ν•˜λŠ” go Natural English 방법에 λŒ€ν•΄ 더 μ•Œκ³  μ‹Άλ‹€λ©΄
02:04
of becoming fluent in English, visit gonaturalenglish.com.
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gonaturalenglish.com을 λ°©λ¬Έν•˜μ„Έμš”. λ°©λ¬Έ
02:08
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만 ν•˜μ…”λ„ 무료 eBook을 λ“œλ¦¬κ³  프리미엄 μ½”μŠ€λ₯Ό λ³΄μ—¬λ“œλ¦¬κ³  μ‹ΆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:14
Thanks so much for watching.
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μ‹œμ²­ν•΄ μ£Όμ…”μ„œ κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:16
Bye for now.
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