How to WRITE in a foreign language to become FLUENT (even as a beginner)

45,281 views ใƒป 2023-11-05

English with Veronika Mark


์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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I think most of you can relate to this you canย  read you can speak but when it comes to writingย ย 
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๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ๋ถ„๋“ค์ด ์ด ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๊ณต๊ฐํ•˜์‹ค ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฝ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๊ด€ํ•ด์„œ๋Š”
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you just don't know how to do it and where toย  start you feel like you forget all the wordsย ย 
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์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€, ์–ด๋””์„œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด์‹ค ๋ฟ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ชจ๋“  ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ
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immediately and grammar don't even get me startedย  on that I completely understand how you feel andย ย 
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์ฆ‰์‹œ ์žŠ์–ด๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๋„ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋Š๋ผ์‹ค ๋ฟ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜์„ธ์š”ย ์ €๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„์„ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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that's why in this video I'm going to talk aboutย  how to write in a foreign language at any levelย ย 
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด ๋™์˜์ƒ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ์ˆ˜์ค€์—์„œ ์™ธ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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even if you're a beginner I'm learning Englishย  Spanish and Chinese and the way I writing theseย ย 
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์ดˆ๋ณด์ž๋ผ๋„ ์ €๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด์™€ ์ค‘๊ตญ์–ด, ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ด ์–ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์€
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languages is obviously a little bit differentย  because I have a different level of proficiencyย ย 
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๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ์ €๋Š”
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in each language in English I feel extremelyย  confident I can write you know whatever it isย ย 
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ๊ฐ ์–ธ์–ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋Šฅ์ˆ™๋„๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค๋ฅด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ
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I'm thinking about and I don't need a dictionaryย  in Spanish um the grammar is complicated sometimesย ย 
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์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋Š” ์Œ ๊ฐ€๋” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ด ๋ณต์žกํ•ด์š”
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I need to use a dictionary in Chinese I alwaysย  have to use a dictionary because I have to makeย ย 
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์ค‘๊ตญ์–ด ์‚ฌ์ „์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด์š” ํ•ญ์ƒ ์‚ฌ์ „์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด์š”
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sure that I write the characters correctly theย  tools that I use for all these languages are theย ย 
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๋ฌธ์ž๋ฅผ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์จ์•ผ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์–ธ์–ด์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋„๊ตฌ๋Š”
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same first of all I use my notion template thatย  I talked about in my previous video if you wantย ย 
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์šฐ์„  ๋™์ผํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ €๋Š” ์ด์ „ ๋™์˜์ƒ์—์„œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ฐœ๋… ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์›ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด
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to you can click this link and check it outย  right now I like to journal on my computerย ย 
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์ด ๋งํฌ๋ฅผ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์—ฌ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์ง€๊ธˆ ์ €๋Š” ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ์—์„œ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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the most in English because this way I can alsoย  practice my typing speed like improve my typingย ย 
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ํƒ€์ž ์†๋„๋„ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํƒ€์ดํ•‘ ์†๋„๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด
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speed and right now I'm trying to learn how toย  touch type in English basically it's when you'reย ย 
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์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ํ„ฐ์น˜ ํƒ€์ดํ•‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅ ์ค‘์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ
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typing without looking at your keyboard and I'mย  trying to type faster and basically this way I'mย ย 
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ํ‚ค๋ณด๋“œ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ํƒ€์ดํ•‘ํ•  ๋•Œ ๋” ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํƒ€์ดํ•‘ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์ค‘์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์‹์œผ๋กœ
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improving my English I'm improving improvingย  my typing speed and that's why I use my notionย ย 
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์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํƒ€์ดํ•‘ ์†๋„๊ฐ€ ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ๋” ๋น ๋ฅธ
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template in English if you're curious the websiteย  that I use to learn how to type faster is calledย ย 
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ํƒ€์ดํ•‘ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๊ฐ€
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typingclub.com I really like it the second toolย  I use is my regular paper notebook it's prettyย ย 
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Typingclub.com์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋„๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ง ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข…์ด ๋…ธํŠธ ๊ฝค
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small so I can carry it with me anywhere theย  reason why I like to use my paper notebook myย ย 
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์ž‘์•„์„œ ์–ด๋””๋“ ์ง€ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋‹ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š” ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข…์ด ๋…ธํŠธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  ์ œ
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journal is because this way I can journal inย  bed comfortably or at least for me it's moreย ย 
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์ผ๊ธฐ์žฅ์€ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์นจ๋Œ€์—์„œ ํŽธ์•ˆํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š” ์ ์–ด๋„ ๋‚˜์—๊ฒŒ๋Š”
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comfortable this way and I feel like I don't haveย  any distractions because sometimes I just like Iย ย 
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์ด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ๋” ํŽธ์•ˆํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋ถ„์ด ์ข‹์•„์š” ์ฃผ์˜๊ฐ€ ์‚ฐ๋งŒํ•ด์ง€์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ๊ฐ€๋”์€
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don't want to stare at my computer you know andย  also usually I journal in English and in Russianย ย 
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์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ณ๋‹ค๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๋•Œ๋„ ์žˆ๊ณ , ๋Œ€๊ฐœ๋Š” ์˜์–ด์™€ ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ์•„์–ด๋กœ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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here because Russian is my native language and Iย  usually write my thoughts like especially afterย ย 
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์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ์•„์–ด๋Š” ์ œ ๋ชจ๊ตญ์–ด์ด๊ณ  ์ €๋Š” ๋Œ€๊ฐœ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:16
I had a conversation with my therapist so it'sย  like very personal and very sometimes it's likeย ย 
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์น˜๋ฃŒ์‚ฌ์™€ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋‚˜๋ˆด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š”
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a very difficult thing that I'm trying to describeย  here so obviously if I were to write all of theseย ย 
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๋งค์šฐ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ์ผ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์•„์„œ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์ด ๋ชจ๋“ 
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thoughts in Spanish or in Chinese for example Iย  don't know it would be very difficult because theย ย 
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์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋‚˜ ์ค‘๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ์“ด๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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level of proficiency I have in these languages isย  not as high and when I journal on my computer Iย ย 
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์–ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋Šฅ์ˆ™ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•˜๋Š” ์ˆ˜์ค€์ด ๊ทธ๋‹ค์ง€ ๋†’์ง€ ์•Š๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋งค์šฐ ์–ด๋ ค์šธ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ๋กœ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ
02:38
always use quillbot to enhance my writing becauseย  quillbot shows me all the mistakes I made and itย ย 
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ํ•ญ์ƒ ํ€ผ๋ด‡์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ํ€ผ๋ด‡์€ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ €์ง€๋ฅธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€
02:43
changes my sentences if need it it's important forย  me to make sure that there are no errors relatedย ย 
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๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‚ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋ฐ”๊พธ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์™ธ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ
02:48
to spelling grammar or punctuation when I journalย  in foreign languages when I use quilo as my Chromeย ย 
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์ €๋„๋งํ•  ๋•Œ ์ฒ ์ž๋ฒ•์ด๋‚˜ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ๊ณผ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Quilo๋ฅผ Chrome ํ™•์žฅ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ Google Docs
02:55
extension it gets easier for me to journal onย  Google Docs or a no because this way quillbotย ย 
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์—์„œ ์ €๋„๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์‰ฌ์›Œ์ง€๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. quillbot์€
03:02
checks my writing instantly and corrects all theย  mistakes for example here is one of my journalย ย 
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๋‚ด ๊ธ€์„ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ชจ๋“  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ๋‚ด ์ผ์ง€ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜
03:07
entries in English and here are all the mistakesย  that quillbot noticed there and corrected now Iย ย 
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์ด๋ฉฐ Quillbot์ด ๊ฑฐ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ์•Œ์•„์ฐจ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋Š”
03:12
want to use their paraphraser tool and make myย  sentence sound more [Music] fluent amazing rightย ย 
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๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ์˜์—ญ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‚ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋” ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋‚˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. [์Œ์•…] ์œ ์ฐฝํ•˜๊ณ  ๋†€๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:21
Quil bot's website has a lot of other tools asย  well that help me become more confident and moreย ย 
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Quil ๋ด‡์˜ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ์—๋Š” ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋” ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์„ ๊ฐ–๊ณ 
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fluent in English and in a lot of other languagesย  I'll give you a few more examples of how I use qubย ย 
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์˜์–ด์™€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋งŽ์€ ์–ธ์–ด์— ๋” ์œ ์ฐฝํ•ด์ง€๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋„๊ตฌ๋„ ๋งŽ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๋™์˜์ƒ ํ›„๋ฐ˜๋ถ€์—์„œ ์ œ๊ฐ€ qub๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋” ์•Œ๋ ค๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:34
later in this video but if you want to check itย  right now the link is in the description so nowย ย 
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์œผ์‹œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…์— ๋งํฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ๋‹ˆ
03:39
let's talk about how I actually practice writingย  the first thing I do is I choose my resource thatย ย 
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ํ•˜๋Š” ์ผ์€ ์˜๊ฐ์„ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:46
I'm going to get inspiration from because let'sย  be real sometimes you just open your journal andย ย 
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์ผ๊ธฐ์žฅ์„ ํŽผ์น˜๋ฉด ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ
03:53
you're like and now what what am I supposed toย  write like I have no idea I have no motivationย ย 
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๊ฐ™์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์จ์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋™๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฐ์ด ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:59
no inspiration ation my mind is blank so in thoseย  moments I use a resource for example first I watchย ย 
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๋งˆ์Œ์ด ํ…… ๋น„์–ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๊ทธ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋จผ์ € ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:05
a YouTube video and then I Journal my thoughtsย  based on this YouTube video for example or Iย ย 
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YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์ด YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜์œผ๋กœ ๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋กœ ์“ฐ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
04:12
read an article online and then I can answer someย  questions related to this article or I can justย ย 
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์˜จ๋ผ์ธ์—์„œ ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์€ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐฉ๊ธˆ
04:18
write I just read this article and here are myย  thoughts let's say that I read this article inย ย 
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์ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์—ˆ๊ณ  ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋Š”
04:23
English first and now I want to respond to allย  of these questions and a great tip for you isย ย 
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๋จผ์ € ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑ๋˜์—ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ด์ œ ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ต๋ณ€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์€ ํŒ์€
04:28
you can always TR translate this website soย  that's why I only use this website with Dailyย ย 
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์–ธ์ œ๋“ ์ง€ ์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ TR๋กœ ๋ฒˆ์—ญํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ €๋Š” ์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ Daily์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜๋งŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:34
News to practice English and Spanish becauseย  I can just translate the text to Spanish yesย ย 
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๋‰ด์Šค์—์„œ๋Š” ์˜์–ด์™€ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šต ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ…์ŠคํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋กœ ๋ฒˆ์—ญํ•ด์ค˜ ์˜ˆ
04:41
sometimes there are mistakes but it's totally fineย  because I can just use one resource and read dailyย ย 
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๊ฐ€๋” ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ธฐ๋Š” ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ „ํ˜€ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๋งŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ๋งค์ผ ์ด
04:47
news in all of these languages before I actuallyย  start journaling I have to make sure that I haveย ย 
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๋ชจ๋“  ์–ธ์–ด๋กœ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ฅผ ์ฝ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ผ์ง€๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์—
04:51
all my translation tools ready and usually I useย  deep L the Deep L translator because it's veryย ย 
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๋ชจ๋“  ๋ฒˆ์—ญ ๋„๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ์ค€๋น„๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ค€๋น„๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š” Deep L ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งค์šฐ
04:57
accurate and it's just you know a lot of peopleย  around the world stand by this translation toolย ย 
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์ •ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„์˜ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์ด ๋ฒˆ์—ญ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์ง€์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:04
quillbot also has a translator and I sometimes useย  Spanish dictionary if I am practicing journalingย ย 
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Quillbot์—๋„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ผ์ง€๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•  ๋•Œ ๊ฐ€๋” ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด ์‚ฌ์ „์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:11
in Spanish I really like Spanish dictionaryย  for like specific words and then I basicallyย ย 
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์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ •๋ง ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠน์ • ๋‹จ์–ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด ์‚ฌ์ „ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ
05:16
begin with the first question what are yourย  thoughts on sober October obviously first Iย ย 
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์งˆ๋ฌธ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ƒ‰์ •ํ•œ 10์›”์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ๋จผ์ €
05:21
need to read the article but then I move on toย  this first question and I just stir journalingย ย 
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๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ด ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์œผ๋กœ ๋„˜์–ด๊ฐ€์„œ
05:26
whether it's in my paper journal or in my computerย  computer I just start writing down my thoughtsย ย 
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๋‚ด ๋…ผ๋ฌธ ์ €๋„์— ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์ €๋„์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š” ๋‚ด ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ์— ๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์ ๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:32
it's important to remember however that when Iย  journal in English I feel very confident and Iย ย 
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ๋งค์šฐ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ์ƒ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ์ˆ ์—
05:38
can write a whole paragraph on sober October andย  all the thoughts I have related to alcohol and allย ย 
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์ทจํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ 10์›”์—๋Š” ์ „์ฒด ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ๊ณผ ์ˆ ๊ณผ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:43
of that but when I write in Spanish obviouslyย  I don't have this level of proficiency yet soย ย 
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ๋Š” ๋‹น์—ฐํžˆ ์•„์ง ์ด ์ •๋„ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ
05:49
it's fine I just write whatever I can write likeย  don't be too harsh on yourself the goal here isย ย 
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋ญ๋“  ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ฐ€ํ˜นํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ž์ฑ…ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ์˜ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š”
05:56
to just practice journaling and have a great timeย  if I don't know a specific word let's say mint Iย ย 
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์ผ๊ธฐ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ณ  ์ฆ๊ฑฐ์šด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠน์ • ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ชจ๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋ฏผํŠธ๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ์‹œ๋‹ค
06:02
don't know how to say mint in Spanish I obviouslyย  use my dictionary and I Google and then I use thisย ย 
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์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋กœ ๋ฏผํŠธ๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์–ด์š” ๋‹น์—ฐํžˆ ์‚ฌ์ „์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  Google์—์„œ ๊ฒ€์ƒ‰ํ•œ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด
06:08
word I try not to just like if I'm journaling inย  Spanish like use some English words like createย ย 
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๋กœ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด ์ผ์ง€์— ์ด Spang English๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜์–ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
06:14
this Spang English in my journal it's not reallyย  my goal my goal is to improve my Spanish andย ย 
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์‚ฌ์‹ค ๋‚ด ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:20
that's why I do use a dictionary when a journalย  once I finish writing my answer I either ask myย ย 
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์ „์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ต์„ ๋‹ค ์“ด ํ›„์—๋Š”
06:26
teacher for help you know to check my mistakesย  or I just input all of this into quillbot andย ย 
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์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์—๊ฒŒ ๋„์›€์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜, ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ quillbot์— ์ž…๋ ฅํ•˜๋ฉด
06:33
quillbot checks my writing and makes sure that Iย  don't have any mistakes the paraphraser tool isย ย 
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quillbot์ด ๋‚ด ๊ธ€์„ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์—ญ ๋„๊ตฌ๋Š”
06:39
available in many different languages so I canย  use it in English and in Spanish as well whileย ย 
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๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์–ธ์–ด๋กœ ์ œ๊ณต๋˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์˜์–ด์™€ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋กœ๋„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:44
writing I inevitably notice new words right newย  words and maybe even grammar structures and thenย ย 
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๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ ๋‚˜๋Š” ํ•„์—ฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด, ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด, ์‹ฌ์ง€์–ด ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ตฌ์กฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ์•Œ์•„์ฐจ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚˜์„œ ์ด
06:50
I input all of this into an because I want to knowย  how to say mint in Spanish so I want to rememberย ย 
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๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋กœ ๋ฏผํŠธ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ
06:57
this word and for me to remember this word successย  successfully and to be able to recall this word Iย ย 
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์ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๊ณ  ์ด ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ฑ๊ณต์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด
07:02
need to use a space repetition system and afterย  I finish writing if I feel like it I might goย ย 
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๊ณต๊ฐ„ ๋ฐ˜๋ณต ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๊ธ€์„ ๋งˆ์นœ โ€‹โ€‹ํ›„ ์›ํ•  ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
07:09
deeper into this topic I might watch an additionalย  YouTube video about alcohol for example in Spanishย ย 
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์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋” ๊นŠ์ด ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐˆ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์ŠคํŽ˜์ธ์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ์•Œ์ฝ”์˜ฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:15
because obviously this topic is connected to theย  topic of alcohol drinking maybe like going to barsย ย 
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์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” ์ˆ  ๋งˆ์‹œ๋Š” ์ฃผ์ œ์™€ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„๋งˆ๋„ ์ˆ ์ง‘์— ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:22
and uh this is actually where your proficiencyย  comes from when you choose a topic and if you'reย ย 
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์–ด ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•  ๋•Œ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋Šฅ์ˆ™ํ•จ์—์„œ ๋‚˜์˜ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ฉฐ, ๋งŒ์•ฝ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด
07:29
interested in this topic you go very deep youย  know you dig deep you find as much informationย ย 
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์ฃผ์ œ์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋งค์šฐ ๊นŠ์ด ํŒŒ๊ณ ๋“ค๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŽ์€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ป์„
07:35
as you can and you learn all of these new wordsย  but it only works if you're actually interestedย ย 
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์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ฐฐ์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋งŒ ํšจ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:42
in this topic because it's something that helpedย  me a lot with my English because a few years agoย ย 
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์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” ์ œ ์˜์–ด์— ๋งŽ์€ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜์—ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ช‡ ๋…„ ์ „
07:46
I was very interested in nutrition and insteadย  of looking for all of this information in Russianย ย 
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์ €๋Š” ์˜์–‘์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ๋งŽ์•˜๊ณ  ๋Œ€์‹  ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ์•„์–ด๋กœ ์ฐพ๋Š” ์ค‘
07:52
my native language I decided to look for all ofย  this information in English yes at the beginningย ย 
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๋‚ด ๋ชจ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผย  ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ฐพ๊ธฐ๋กœ ๊ฒฐ์ •ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋„ค, ์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š”
07:58
it was challenging because there were lots ofย  words I didn't know but then a few months in Iย ย 
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•„์„œ ์–ด๋ ค์› ์ง€๋งŒ ๋ช‡ ๋‹ฌ์ด ์ง€๋‚˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ €๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ
08:04
was like I'm fine I feel confident I know all ofย  these words and I also feel like I have a lot ofย ย 
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๊ฐ™์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์•„ ๋‚œ ์ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค์„ ๋‹ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ™•์‹ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋˜ํ•œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋งŽ์€ ์ง€์‹์„ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋Š๋‚Œ๋„ ๋“ค์–ด
08:10
knowledge right a lot of knowledge on this topicย  I feel confident I can talk about it and then Iย ย 
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08:17
decided to choose a different topic maybe I don'tย  know flowers because I became very interested inย ย 
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์ €๋Š” ๊ฝƒ์„ ๋ชจ๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๊ฝƒ์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ๋งŽ์•„์กŒ๊ณ 
08:23
different flowers and again I was learning moreย  and more words and just more information on thisย ย 
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๋‹ค์‹œ ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ ์  ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋‹จ์–ด์™€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ๊ธฐ
08:30
topic so this is how I usually write as you canย  see I don't just Journal about my day becauseย ย 
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๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋ณดํ†ต ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๊ธ€์„ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ณด์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ์ €๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ํ•˜๋ฃจ ์ผ์ง€๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒ๋ฉด
08:37
sometimes I clearly don't know what to talk aboutย  I feel like I haven't done anything today and ifย ย 
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๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์•„๋ฌด๊ฒƒ๋„ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ค๊ณ ,ย ย  ๊ธ€์„
08:43
I start writing I haven't done anything todayย  it's just too boring like sometimes using allย ย 
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์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋ฉด ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์•„๋ฌด๊ฒƒ๋„ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š” ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด
08:48
of these resources helps me to get started toย  give me a little bit more motivation and to startย ย 
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์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ง€๋ฃจํ•  ๋ฟ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๋™๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ถ€์—ฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด
08:55
writing but I also wanted to share this one thingย  that for me personally it's important importantย ย 
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์ด ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์œผ๋กœ
08:59
to prioritize input over output and obviouslyย  journaling is a form of output because even whenย ย 
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์ถœ๋ ฅ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ž…๋ ฅ์„ ์šฐ์„ ์‹œํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ์ €๋„๋ง์€ ์ถœ๋ ฅ์˜ ํ•œ ํ˜•ํƒœ๋ผ๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:07
I don't have enough time I'm busy I'm stressed Iย  try to focus on the input for example listening toย ย 
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๋ฐ”์  ๋•Œ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ๋“ฃ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ž…๋ ฅ์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด
09:13
something or watching something because it's moreย  important and sometimes it's not as difficult forย ย 
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋•Œ๋กœ ์ผ๊ธฐ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š”
09:20
me to get started right because journaling isย  hard writing in a foreign language is difficultย ย 
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์™ธ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ทธ๋‹ค์ง€ ์–ด๋ ต์ง€ ์•Š๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค
09:26
speaking a foreign language is difficult ofย  course if you want to you know you have toย ย 
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์™ธ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค ๋ฌผ๋ก ย  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด
09:31
practice journaling if something you're interestedย  in if you want to improve your writing skills theย ย 
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๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ์ผ๊ธฐ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉดย  ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด
09:36
same thing with speaking skills if you want toย  improve your speaking skills you actually needย ย 
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๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ
09:39
to practice speaking but to be able to have a goodย  level of proficiency and the language you have toย ย 
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๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ข‹์€ ์ˆ˜์ค€์˜ ๋Šฅ์ˆ™๋„์™€ ์–ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ–์ถ”๋ ค๋ฉด
09:48
spend enough time on the input reading listeningย  and watching something in this language don'tย ย 
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์ž…๋ ฅ์— ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํ•œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ํˆฌ์žํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฝ๊ณ  ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ์ด ์–ธ์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:54
forget to give kbot a try by clicking the link inย  the description it has a lot of different writingย ย 
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๋งํฌ๋ฅผ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์—ฌ kbot์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ์„ค๋ช…์—๋Š”
10:00
tools to help you enhance your writing and correctย  all of your mistakes you can try their website andย ย 
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ชจ๋“  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋„๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ด๋‹น ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด๊ณ 
10:06
install their Chrome extension the link will beย  down in the description if you like this videoย ย 
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Chrome ํ™•์žฅ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์„ ์„ค์น˜ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“œ์‹œ๋ฉด ์„ค๋ช…์— ๋งํฌ๊ฐ€ ํ‘œ์‹œ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:10
make sure to give it a thumbs up and subscribeย  to my channel and I'll see you in my next
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๊ผญ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ข‹์•„์š”๋ฅผ ๋ˆ„๋ฅด๊ณ  ๋‚ด ์ฑ„๋„์„ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋‹ค์Œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์—์„œ ๋ต™๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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