Get a new job: Vocabulary & grammar for your RESUME & COVER LETTER

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hello.
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
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My name is Emma, and in today's video I am going to talk about resumes and cover letters,
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์ œ ์ด๋ฆ„์€ ์— ๋งˆ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์˜์ƒ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ,
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and the vocabulary and grammar you can use on both.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์–ดํœ˜์™€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
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So in this video I am going to talk to you about some things that you should do for your
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ๋Š” ์ž๊ธฐ
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cover letter and resume-some verbs you should use, some grammar that's really good to use,
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์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๋•Œ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ, ์ฆ‰ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋™์‚ฌ, ์ •๋ง ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ข‹์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•,
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and, you know, some vocabulary-and I'm also going to talk about things you shouldn't do
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์–ดํœ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง์•„์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋„ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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on your cover letter or resume.
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.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
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So this video is mainly about grammar and vocabulary.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๋ฒˆ ์˜์ƒ์€ ์ฃผ๋กœ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ์–ดํœ˜์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ์˜์ƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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So let's get started.
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์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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So, first of all, when you're writing a cover letter and/or a resume, you want to be very
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ฌด์—‡๋ณด๋‹ค ๋จผ์ € ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ ๋ฐ/๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๋•Œ ๋งค์šฐ
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professional.
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์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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So this means that you want to make sure that, you know, you're presenting yourself in a
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด
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very professional way.
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๋งค์šฐ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ž์‹ ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Your writing should be formal, instead of informal.
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๊ธ€์€ ๋น„๊ณต์‹์ ์ด์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ํ˜•์‹์ ์ด์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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So, what do I mean by that?
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋ฌด์Šจ ๋œป์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด
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Well, for example, in your cover letter or resume, you should not use contractions.
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์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์ถ•์•ฝํ˜•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Contractions are words, like: "I'm", "I'll", "can't", "don't".
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์ถ•์•ฝํ˜•์€ "I'm", "I'll", "can't", "don't"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
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These are all examples of contractions, and they should not be used in a cover letter
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์ด๋“ค์€ ๋ชจ๋‘ ์ถ•์•ฝํ˜•์˜ ์˜ˆ์ด๋ฉฐ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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or resume.
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. ์ž๊ธฐ
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You should also not use slang in a cover letter or resume; words, like: "cool", "screw up",
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์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์†์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . "๋ฉ‹์ง€๋‹ค", "๋ง์ณ์ง€๋‹ค",
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"killed".
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"์ฃฝ์—ˆ๋‹ค"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด. ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๋•Œ ํ”ผํ•ด์•ผ ํ• 
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There's a whole bunch of different slang words that you should avoid when you're writing
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๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์†์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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a cover letter or resume.
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.
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Another thing you should try to avoid - words, like: "really", "very", "totally".
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ํ”ผํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์€ "์ •๋ง", "๋งค์šฐ", "์™„์ „ํžˆ"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
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So if you want to say that you're really hardworking or you're, you know...
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋งŒ์•ฝ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ •๋ง๋กœ ์—ด์‹ฌํžˆ ์ผํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ๋‹น์‹ ์€...
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You're totally right for this position - these words will make you sound unprofessional.
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด ์ง์ฑ…์— ์ „์ ์œผ๋กœ ์˜ณ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
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So you do not want to use words, like: "very", "really", or "totally".
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ "๋งค์šฐ", "์ •๋ง" ๋˜๋Š” "์™„์ „ํžˆ"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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They're great in conversation, but when you're writing something like a resume or cover letter,
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๋Œ€ํ™”๋Š” ์ž˜ ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ๋•Œ๋Š” ์ž˜
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they're not good words to use.
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์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay.
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์ข‹์•„์š”.
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You should not use idioms.
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์ˆ™์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
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So, idioms are expressions that we use a lot in conversation.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ˆ™์–ด๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋Œ€ํ™”์—์„œ ๋งŽ์ด ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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So, for example, you might say: "Oh, I passed my test with flying colours", which means
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, "์˜ค, ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ฉ‹์ง€๊ฒŒ ์‹œํ—˜์„ ํ†ต๊ณผํ–ˆ์–ด"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€
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you did really well, or, you know: "My old job was a piece of cake", meaning it was very
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ •๋ง ์ž˜ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š” "๋‚ด ์ด์ „ ์ง์—…์€ ์‹์€ ์ฃฝ ๋จน๊ธฐ์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ
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easy.
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์‰ฌ์› ๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:38
Idioms are great in conversation, but they are not good in cover letters or resumes.
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๊ด€์šฉ๊ตฌ๋Š” ๋Œ€ํ™”์—๋Š” ์ข‹์ง€๋งŒ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์—๋Š” ์ ํ•ฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
02:46
They're not professional, so do not use idioms in your resume or cover letter.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์— ๊ด€์šฉ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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You also want to be very polite in your resume or cover letter.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋˜ํ•œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ ๋งค์šฐ ์˜ˆ์˜ ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:56
So, expressions like...
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์€...
02:58
Or, you know, saying: "I want", "I want this job because" is not really polite.
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๋˜๋Š” "I want", "I want this job because"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์˜ˆ์˜๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:05
"I want" is a very strong...
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"I want"๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค...
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It's very strong, so it's better to use a more polite form of that, such as: "I would
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๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ "I would
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appreciate" or "I would like".
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thank" ๋˜๋Š” "I would like"์™€ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ •์ค‘ํ•œ ํ˜•ํƒœ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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These have pretty much the same meanings, but this is very strong, so we don't use it
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์ด๋“ค์€ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ
03:23
on a resume or a cover letter; whereas these are more polite so they're better to use in
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—๋Š” ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด ์ด๋“ค์€ ๋” ์ •์ค‘ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:30
a cover letter.
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.
03:32
So this was a little bit about how to make your resume or the language in your resume
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ
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and cover letter more professional; now we're going to learn more about great vocabulary
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๋ฐ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์˜ ์–ธ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•œ ์–ดํœ˜
03:42
to use and great grammar to use.
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์™€ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ๋ฐฐ์šธ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:44
Okay, so let's talk about vocabulary on your resume and cover letter.
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์ž, ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์˜ ์–ดํœ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
03:49
Vocabulary is very important.
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์–ดํœ˜๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:51
It can make you look very smart, very professional, and also very confident.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ๋งค์šฐ ๋˜‘๋˜‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋งค์šฐ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ด๋ฉฐ ๋˜ํ•œ ๋งค์šฐ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ด๊ฒŒ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:56
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
03:57
So the words you choose can really help you in this way.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์„ ํƒํ•œ ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:03
So it's important to really think about what words you want to use.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์–ด๋–ค ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€์ง€ ์ •๋ง๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:08
So, one thing to think about is if you've found a job advertisement and you've seen
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณผ ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ตฌ์ธ ๊ด‘๊ณ ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•˜๊ณ 
04:15
the job description, and it's a job you want to apply for, they often will have keywords
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๊ตฌ์ธ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ง€์›ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ง์—…์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ์ข…์ข…
04:20
in the advertisement.
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๊ด‘๊ณ ์— ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:22
They might say that they are looking for somebody who is hardworking, or maybe somebody who
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์—ด์‹ฌํžˆ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ,
04:28
knows Microsoft Office, or is a strong communicator.
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Microsoft Office๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•„๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:33
Whatever they say in the job description, it's a good idea to take that same vocabulary
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๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์ง์—… ์„ค๋ช…์—์„œ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๋งํ•˜๋“ , ๋™์ผํ•œ ์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ
04:38
and use it in your resume and cover letter, because you really want to show you're a good
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ •๋ง๋กœ ์ž˜
04:44
match and that your skills match the skills required for this job, or your experiences
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์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด ์ด ์ง์—…์— ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ๊ณผ ์ผ์น˜ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. , ๋˜๋Š” ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ์ง์—…์— ํ•„์š”ํ•œ
04:51
match the experience required for the job.
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๊ฒฝํ—˜๊ณผ ์ผ์น˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
04:55
So try to find keywords from job advertisements if you can.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ตฌ์ธ ๊ด‘๊ณ ์—์„œ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์œผ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค .
04:59
Sometimes there is no job advertisement, and that's okay because there's a lot of other
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๊ตฌ์ธ ๊ด‘๊ณ ๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ผ์ด ๋งŽ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:05
things you can do.
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05:08
When you're applying for a job and you're writing your resume or cover letter, a really
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์ง์—…์— ์ง€์›ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๋•Œ ์ •๋ง
05:13
good idea is to use power verbs.
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์ข‹์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ์€ ๋™๋ ฅ ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:16
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
05:17
So, what's a power verb?
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ํŒŒ์›Œ ๋™์‚ฌ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
05:19
A power verb is a verb that has a very strong-sounding meaning.
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ํž˜ ๋™์‚ฌ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๋™์‚ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:25
So they're often used in cover letters and resumes, and I'll give you an example of one.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:32
Look at these two sentences: "I made my company better.", "I improved my company."
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์ด ๋‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค: "๋‚˜๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋” ์ข‹๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.", "๋‚˜๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œ์ผฐ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."
05:39
Both of these sentences have the same meaning, but one of them is better than the other for
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์ด ๋‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—๋Š” ๋‘˜ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚ซ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:44
a resume or a cover letter.
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05:47
Which one do you think is the better sentence?
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์–ด๋–ค ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋” ๋‚ซ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”?
05:50
This is the better sentence, because "improved" is a power verb; it's a stronger verb and
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ "improved"๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•œ ๋™์‚ฌ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋” ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๋™์‚ฌ์ด๊ณ 
05:56
it makes you sound like a better candidate.
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๋‹น์‹ ์„ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ํ›„๋ณด์ž์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ณด์ด๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:58
So, if you're interested in learning more about power verbs, I actually have a whole
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ํŒŒ์›Œ ๋™์‚ฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋” ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์•Œ์•„๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ
06:03
video about power verbs and a resource for you to look at.
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ํŒŒ์›Œ ๋™์‚ฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ „์ฒด ๋น„๋””์˜ค์™€ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:07
So, these are something that can really help improve your writing in resumes and cover
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ๋“ค์€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ •๋ง๋กœ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:12
letters.
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06:14
Another thing a lot of people do in their resume or cover letter is they write things
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๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์— ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ์€
06:19
like: "I feel" or "I believe".
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"๋‚˜๋Š” ๋Š๋‚€๋‹ค" ๋˜๋Š” "๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ฏฟ๋Š”๋‹ค"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:22
"I believe I'm the best person for this job.
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"์ €๋Š” ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ด ์ผ์— ์ ์ž„์ž๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:25
I feel my skills are a good match for this company."
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์ œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด ์ด ํšŒ์‚ฌ์— ์ž˜ ๋งž๋Š”๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."
06:29
These words are not confident or strong words.
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์ด ๋ง์€ ์ž์‹ ๋งŒ๋งŒํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๋ง์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:32
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
06:33
When you use the word: "I feel" or "I believe", you don't really sound so confident in what
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"๋‚˜๋Š” ๋Š๋‚€๋‹ค" ๋˜๋Š” "๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ฏฟ๋Š”๋‹ค"๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๊ทธ๋‹ค์ง€ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋“ค๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:39
you're saying, so these words are not good to use on your cover letter.
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. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š” ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ์— ์ ํ•ฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:44
Okay, so I'm going to cross these off.
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์ข‹์•„์š”, ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ง€์šฐ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:47
Better things to say is: "I am confident that"...
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๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๋ง์€: "๋‚˜๋Š” ํ™•์‹ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค"...
06:51
So, for example: "I am confident that I am the best person for this position.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด: "๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ด ์ง์ฑ…์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ™•์‹ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:58
I am certain that I can help your company prosper", or whatever you want to say.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฒˆ์˜ํ•˜๋„๋ก ๋„์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ™•์‹ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค " ๋˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ.
07:05
"I am confident" and "I am certain" make you sound like a stronger, confident person who's
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"๋‚˜๋Š” ํ™•์‹ ํ•œ๋‹ค"์™€ "๋‚˜๋Š” ํ™•์‹ ํ•œ๋‹ค"๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์ด ์ง์—…์— ์ง€์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋” ๊ฐ•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ณด์ด๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:12
applying for this job.
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. ์–ดํœ˜์—
07:15
Another key point when we're talking about vocabulary is: Don't use the same verbs or
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๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๋•Œ ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์š”์ ์€ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ™์€ ๋™์‚ฌ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”
07:21
the same words again, and again, and again.
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07:24
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
07:25
So, for example, if you used the word "improved", you shouldn't use that ten times on your resume
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด "ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋œ"์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์— ์ด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ 10๋ฒˆ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:31
and cover letter.
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07:32
They want to see different words.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
07:35
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
07:36
So this is where a thesaurus can really help you to find other words to talk about your
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹œ์†Œ๋Ÿฌ์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ •๋ง๋กœ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ณณ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:45
experiences.
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07:47
So, don't be repetitive, but also know the words you use well.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง๊ณ  ์ž˜ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋„ ์•Œ์•„ ๋‘์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
07:55
A lot of students will...
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๋งŽ์€ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด...
07:57
Or a lot of people will think: "Oh, you know what?
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๋˜๋Š” ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:00
I want to sound really smart on my resume.
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08:03
And here's this big, long word - oh, it looks like a very smart word; I'm going to use it."
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; ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."
08:09
But the problem is they might not know all the meanings of the word or how to use the
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ๋ชจ๋“  ์˜๋ฏธ๋‚˜ ๋‹จ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ
08:14
word, so then it doesn't look good on your resume or cover letter.
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ ๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:17
So it's better to use words you know or to find out the full meanings of words before
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ์ „์ฒด ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ์•Œ์•„๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
08:24
you use them on your cover letter or resume.
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08:27
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
08:28
So that's just a little bit about the vocabulary of resumes and cover letters; next, we're
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์ด์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์˜ ์–ดํœ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ์œผ๋กœ ์ž๊ธฐ
08:32
going to talk about the grammar of cover letters and resumes.
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์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์˜ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:35
Okay, so now let's talk a little bit about grammar you will find on resumes and cover
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์ข‹์•„์š”, ์ด์ œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ ์ฐพ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค
08:41
letters.
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08:42
One good tip for both of these is you should use the active voice, and not the passive
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์ด ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ชจ๋‘์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ข‹์€ ํŒ์€ ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹Œ ๋Šฅ๋™ํƒœ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
08:50
voice.
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08:51
So, what do I mean by this?
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
08:52
Well, I have an example of two sentences that have the same meaning, but one of them is
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๊ธ€์Ž„, ๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๋‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š”
08:58
in the active voice and the other is in the passive voice.
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๋Šฅ๋™ํƒœ์ด๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š” ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:02
So the first sentence is: "I increased sales", and the second sentence is: "Sales were increased
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ "๋งค์ถœ์„ ๋Š˜๋ ธ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค"์ด๊ณ  ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ "๋งค์ถœ์„ ๋Š˜๋ ธ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
09:10
by me".
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"์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:11
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
09:12
So which one is better for a cover letter or a resume?
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ์ค‘ ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์ข‹์„๊นŒ์š”?
09:17
This one would be the better one, because it's using the active voice.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋Šฅ๋™ํƒœ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:23
You want to start with a subject, like "I", and then a verb: "increased".
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"I"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ฃผ์–ด๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋™์‚ฌ "increased"๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:30
So this is very different from here where we don't have a subject.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ฃผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š” ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์™€ ๋งค์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
09:35
"Sales"...
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"์˜์—…"...
09:36
Well, we don't use "I" as the subject.
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๊ธ€์Ž„, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” "๋‚˜"๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์–ด๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:39
"Sales were increased by me", so do not use the passive voice.
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"๋งค์ถœ์€ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋Š˜์—ˆ๋‹ค"์ด๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
09:46
In cover letters, we like to use full sentences.
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ํ‘œ์ง€์—์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:50
This is very different from in resumes where we like to use bullet points, and we don't
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธ€ ๋จธ๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ 
09:56
use full sentences.
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์ „์ฒด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ๋งค์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:58
So let's look at an example of these differences.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ฐจ์ด์ ์˜ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:01
"In 2013, I won the Gold Service Award."
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"2013๋…„์— ๊ธˆ์ƒ์„ ์ˆ˜์ƒํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ."
10:07
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
10:08
So this might be something you might see on a cover letter.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์—์„œ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:10
You might talk about a job you've had or an award you've won, but notice how my sentence
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง„ ์ง์—…์ด๋‚˜ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์–ป์€ ์ƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ์ œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ฃผ์–ด
10:17
has the subject, which is "I", and the verb: "won", so it's a full sentence.
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"I"์™€ ๋™์‚ฌ "won"์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€์— ์ฃผ๋ชฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”, ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์™„์ „ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:23
Now, this is very different from what we would see on a resume.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์—์„œ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:28
On a resume we use bullet points, so we use something like this little circle, and then
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์—๋Š” ๊ธ€๋จธ๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ด ์ž‘์€ ์›๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ 
10:33
we'd say something like: "answered inquiries from customers", as an example.
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด "๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ฌธ์˜์— ๋‹ต๋ณ€"๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:39
We're not using a full sentence here.
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ๋Š” ์ „์ฒด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:41
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
10:42
On a resume you wouldn't say: "I answered inquiries from customers.
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋งํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. " ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ฌธ์˜์— ๋‹ต๋ณ€ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:48
I maintained records.
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๊ธฐ๋ก์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ
10:51
You know, I served a lot of different customers' food."
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์ €๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ์Œ์‹์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."
10:55
You wouldn't say things like that; you wouldn't use the word "I".
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋ง์„ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์€ "๋‚˜"๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:59
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
11:00
So on a resume we don't use "I"; we just take the verb and start from the verb, and then
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์—๋Š” "I"๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋™์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•˜๊ณ  ๋™์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ ๋‹ค์Œ
11:06
say what we did.
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•œ ์ผ์„ ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:08
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
11:09
So this is very different in terms of cover letter, grammar, and resume grammar.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์ธก๋ฉด์—์„œ ๋งค์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—
11:17
Another key point when we're talking about resumes and cover letters is I told you before
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๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๋•Œ ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์š”์ ์€
11:22
that it's not good to be repetitive with vocabulary and to reuse the same words; it's the same
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์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜๋ณต ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์žฌ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ „์— ๋ง์”€๋“œ๋ฆฐ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:28
with grammar.
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๋„ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€๋‹ค.
11:31
In your cover letter you don't want to say...
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์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์—์„œ ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š์€...
11:34
To use the same sentence structure for each sentence.
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๊ฐ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋™์ผํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:38
So, for example, it would be very boring to read a cover letter that said, you know: "I
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด "์ €๋Š”
11:46
was a customer service representative.
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๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:48
I maintained records.
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์ €๋Š” ๊ธฐ๋ก์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š”
11:50
I did this.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์„ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๊ฒƒ์„ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:51
I did that.
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11:52
I answered calls.
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์ €๋Š” ์ „ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:54
I, you know, helped clients."
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์ €๋Š”, ๊ณ ๊ฐ์„ ๋„์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."
11:57
You need to change the grammar.
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐ”๊ฟ”์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:59
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
12:00
So it's good to have some past tense, some simple past tense, some present perfect tenses
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ, ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ, ํ˜„์žฌ ์™„๋ฃŒ ์‹œ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:06
if you can.
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.
12:08
You know, you can change the ordering of the sentence.
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๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ์ˆœ์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๊ฟ€ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ์žฅ ์‹œ์ž‘ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์—
12:11
You know, you can use gerunds at the beginning of the sentence.
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๋™๋ช…์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•˜์—ฌ
12:14
There's a whole bunch of different types of things you can do in order to have a more
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๋ณด๋‹ค ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กœ์šด ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์ผ์ด ๋งŽ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
12:20
interesting cover letter by changing the grammar.
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12:24
So don't use the same grammar structure for each sentence.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ฐ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋™์ผํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค .
12:29
Okay, great.
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์ข‹์•„, ์ข‹์•„.
12:32
So this is a little bit...
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„... ์ž๊ธฐ
12:33
A quick overview about grammar about cover letters and resumes.
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์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ„๋žตํ•œ ๊ฐœ์š”์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:36
There was one other thing I wanted to say, and that's in terms of tense.
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๋˜ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹œ์ œ์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž๊ธฐ
12:43
When we're thinking about cover letters and resumes, you'll notice that a lot of things
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์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•  ๋•Œ ๋งŽ์€ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด
12:47
are going to be in the past tense, so a lot of things are going to have "ed" on them,
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๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ๋กœ ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:53
or you know, you might have an irregular verb that's in the past tense form, and that's
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๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ ํ˜•ํƒœ์˜ ๋ถˆ๊ทœ์น™ ๋™์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ
12:59
great when we're talking about past experience.
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๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๋•Œ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:02
But on resumes and cover letters, you can also talk about present experience.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—๋Š” ํ˜„์žฌ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋„ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:06
So you might see a lot of your job experience in the past tense, but you can also use the
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ๋กœ ์ง์—… ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๋งŽ์ด ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ
13:13
present tense, too.
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ํ˜„์žฌ ์‹œ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:14
So, for example, if right now in my current job I answer inquiries from customers on the
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ํ˜„์žฌ ์ง์žฅ์—์„œ ์ „ํ™”๋กœ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ฌธ์˜์— ๋‹ตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
13:21
telephone, I could change this to: "answer" and get rid of the "ed" if it's something
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"๋‹ต๋ณ€"์œผ๋กœ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ผ์ธ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ "ed"๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ฑฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
13:28
I do now.
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13:29
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
13:30
So, be careful with your grammar.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์— ์ฃผ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
13:33
Make sure that, you know, if you're talking about the present, you use the present tense;
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ํ˜„์žฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ํ˜„์žฌ ์‹œ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:38
and if you're talking about the past or past experience, you use the past tense.
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๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:42
All right.
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€.
13:43
So now I'm going to tell you my final tip for resumes and cover letters.
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์ด์ œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ํŒ์„ ์•Œ๋ ค๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
13:47
Okay, so imagine you have finished writing your resume and your cover letter, and you're
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์ž, ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ ์ž‘์„ฑ์„ ๋งˆ์น˜๊ณ  ์ถœ๋ฐœํ• 
13:52
ready to go.
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์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
13:54
I have a question for you: Did you edit your resume and cover letter?
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์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜์…จ๋‚˜์š”?
13:59
Because this is also a very important step.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋˜ํ•œ ๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:02
A lot of the times people don't look over their cover letters and resumes carefully,
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๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์˜ ๊นŠ๊ฒŒ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ 
14:08
and they might have a spelling mistake or grammar mistakes, maybe they've used the wrong
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์ฒ ์ž๋‚˜ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:13
word, and this looks really bad when you're applying for a job.
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์ง์—….
14:17
A lot of employers, when they see a mistake on a resume or cover letter, they won't even
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๋งŽ์€ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๋“ค์ด ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ์—์„œ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•˜๋ฉด
14:24
read the rest of it; they'll just throw it immediately into the garbage and they'll look
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๋‚˜๋จธ์ง€ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ฝ์ง€๋„ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฆ‰์‹œ ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐํ†ต์— ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ 
14:29
at somebody else's resume or cover letter.
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋ณผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:32
So it's very, very important that you do not have any mistakes on your cover letter or
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์— ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋งค์šฐ ๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋ฉฐ
14:38
resume, and that's why you should edit it.
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, ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:41
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
14:42
So, first of all, make sure you check the spelling.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์šฐ์„  ๋งž์ถค๋ฒ•์„ ์ž˜ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:47
Are there any mistakes here?
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
14:49
You know, you can use spellcheck, but also look at it yourself.
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๋งž์ถค๋ฒ• ๊ฒ€์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ง์ ‘ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
14:54
How's the grammar?
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ์–ด๋•Œ?
14:55
Do you have any grammar mistakes?
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
14:58
You know, you can think about tense, you know: Did I use the past tense correctly?
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์‹œ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์ œ๋ฅผ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
15:04
You know, there...
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์žˆ์ž–์•„, ์ €๊ธฐ...
15:06
Did I use punctuation correctly?
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ผ๋‹ˆ?
15:09
You know, did I put periods where there's supposed to be periods?
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ณณ์— ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๋ฅผ ๋„ฃ์—ˆ๋‚˜์š” ?
15:11
Did I put a comma where there's supposed to be commas?
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์‰ผํ‘œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ณณ์— ์‰ผํ‘œ๋ฅผ ๋„ฃ์—ˆ๋‚˜์š”?
15:13
So really think about grammar and punctuation, and if you have any mistakes there.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฑฐ๊ธฐ์— ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
15:19
You can also think about format.
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ํ˜•์‹์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
15:22
You know, how does the resume or cover letter look?
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋‚˜ ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋Š” ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฒผ๋‚˜์š”?
15:26
Did you put the date in the right place?
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๋‚ ์งœ๋ฅผ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์œ„์น˜์— ์ž…๋ ฅํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
15:28
Did you put your name in the right place?
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์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์œ„์น˜์— ์ž…๋ ฅํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
15:30
Does everything line up okay?
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๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ž˜ ์ •๋ ฌ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
15:32
Or maybe you have some bullet points here, and some bullet points there.
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์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๊ธ€๋จธ๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐํ˜ธ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ €๊ธฐ์— ๊ธ€๋จธ๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐํ˜ธ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
15:36
Does it look messy?
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์ง€์ €๋ถ„ํ•ด ๋ณด์ด๋‚˜์š”?
15:38
So it's very important to ask yourself these questions, and to look very carefully at your
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ์—๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ,
15:44
cover letter and resume once you've finished writing them.
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์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ์™€ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ์„ ๋งˆ์นœ ํ›„์—๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ์ฃผ์˜ ๊นŠ๊ฒŒ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์•„์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค
15:48
Once you've done that, look at it again; check again.
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ํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
15:52
A lot of the times you'll find a spelling mistake on the first time, and then you'll
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๋งŽ์€ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ฒ˜์Œ์— ๋งž์ถค๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋กœ
15:57
find more spelling mistakes the second time you look at it.
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๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋งž์ถค๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
16:00
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
16:01
So it's important to look at your resume and cover letter many times to make sure there's
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋ฒˆ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์—ฌ
16:05
no mistakes.
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์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:08
Once you finish looking at it, have someone else check it.
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๋ณด๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚˜๋ฉด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒŒ ํ™•์ธ์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
16:12
If you have...
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๋งŒ์•ฝ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด...
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You know, maybe you have a brother who can help you or a friend, or your old English
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๋‹น์‹ ์„ ๋„์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํ˜•์ œ๋‚˜ ์นœ๊ตฌ, ๋˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์˜› ์˜์–ด
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teacher.
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์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์ด ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:19
You know, if you know somebody who can check over your resume, ask them to do it.
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์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
16:25
And the more people who look at it, the better.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ๋งŽ์„์ˆ˜๋ก ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:27
The more feedback you can get, and the more mistakes can be caught this way.
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๋” ๋งŽ์€ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์žก์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:31
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
16:32
So very important step: Check your resume carefully, and edit it for any mistakes.
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๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„: ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์˜ ๊นŠ๊ฒŒ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
16:38
All right.
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€.
16:40
So, I want to thank you for watching this video.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด ์˜์ƒ์„ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์”€์„ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:43
I hope you found it very helpful for your search for a job.
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์ทจ์—… ์ค€๋น„์— ๋งŽ์€ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜์…จ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:47
I'd like to first say that we have a lot of great resources that can really help with
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๋จผ์ € ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์ผ ์— ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•œ ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๋ง์”€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
16:52
these types of things.
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.
16:54
I mentioned earlier about a resource to do with power verbs.
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์•ž์—์„œ ํŒŒ์›Œ ๋™์‚ฌ์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
16:58
Power verbs are great for your resume and cover letter; and if you're interested in
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ํŒŒ์›Œ ๋™์‚ฌ๋Š” ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ์™€ ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ์ ํ•ฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
17:03
learning more, you can look in our description for the link about power verbs.
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์ž์„ธํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์œผ์‹œ๋ฉด ํŒŒ์›Œ ๋™์‚ฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋งํฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
17:08
I really recommend you do this.
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด๊ฒƒ์„ ์ •๋ง๋กœ ์ถ”์ฒœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด ์ฑ„๋„์„
17:11
You can also subscribe to my channel.
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๊ตฌ๋…ํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
17:12
There, I have a lot of other resources on interviews, cover letters, resumes, vocabulary,
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๊ทธ๊ณณ์—๋Š” ์ธํ„ฐ๋ทฐ, ์ปค๋ฒ„ ๋ ˆํ„ฐ, ์ด๋ ฅ์„œ, ์–ดํœ˜,
17:19
grammar, and many other things.
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋งŽ์€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
17:21
So, this can also help you while you're preparing to search and find a job.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๊ตฌ์ง ๋ฐ ๊ตฌ์ง์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ์—๋„ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ €ํฌ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ www.engvid.com์„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด
17:28
You can also practice what we've learned in this video by visiting our website at www.engvid.com.
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์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ ๋ฐฐ์šด ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
17:35
There, you can actually take our quiz to see how much you understood of this video and
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ํ€ด์ฆˆ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ด ๋น„๋””์˜ค๋ฅผ ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ์ดํ•ดํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ๋น„๋””์˜ค
17:41
to practice some of the concepts we discussed in it.
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์—์„œ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•œ ๊ฐœ๋… ์ค‘ ์ผ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
17:45
All right?
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€? ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ
17:46
So, I want to thank you again for watching; and until next time, take care.
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๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋‹ค์Œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„๊นŒ์ง€ ์กฐ์‹ฌํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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