Your English Coach: How to show your expertise in a pitch.

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Business English with Christina


์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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All right. Welcome back for part three of this special series,
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€.
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all about helping you to improve your English at work fast
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with a business English coach. And that's me. In this episode,
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๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด ์ฝ”์น˜์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ง์žฅ์—์„œ ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ์ด ํŠน๋ณ„ ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ 3๋ถ€๋กœ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค์‹  ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ™˜์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜์•ผ. ์ด ์—ํ”ผ์†Œ๋“œ์—์„œ๋Š”
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you'll learn how to finish your elevator pitch or your introduction that we
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started working on in parts one and two of this series,
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์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ 1๋ถ€์™€ 2๋ถ€์—์„œ ์ž‘์—…ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ ์—˜๋ฆฌ๋ฒ ์ดํ„ฐ ํ”ผ์น˜ ๋˜๋Š” ์†Œ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ์™„๋ฃŒํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ 
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and we'll show you how you can share your experience that you
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bring and ask what you want so that you get it,
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๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜จ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด
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whether it's maybe a new job, a promotion in your company,
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์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ง์—…์ด๋“ , ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ์˜ ์Šน์ง„์ด๋“ ,
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a new client for your business, whatever. You ready? Let's go.
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๋‹น์‹  ์‚ฌ์—…์˜ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ณ ๊ฐ์ด๋“ , ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋“  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์–ป๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹  ์ค€๋น„? ๊ฐ‘์‹œ๋‹ค.
00:40
Hi, I'm your English coach, Christina,
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”, ์ €๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ์ฝ”์น˜์ธ ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šคํ‹ฐ๋‚˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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and welcome to Business English with Christina,
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where we solve your business English problems fast.
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด ์ฃผ๋Š” Business English with Christina์— ์˜ค์‹  ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ™˜์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:48
And remember, if you missed parts one and two,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  1๋ถ€์™€ 2๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋†“์ณค๋‹ค๋ฉด
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definitely go back and watch them,
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๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ๋Œ์•„๊ฐ€์„œ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
00:54
but also go ahead and sign up for my newsletter because I am
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๋˜ํ•œ ์ œ๊ฐ€
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organizing a special,
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interactive workshop totally free on November 18th,
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11์›” 18์ผ์— ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ํŠน๋ณ„ ๋Œ€ํ™”์‹ ์›Œํฌ์ˆ์„ ์กฐ์งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ œ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
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and I would love for you to come and learn with me. You just have to go and sign
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์™€์„œ ๋‚˜์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ฐ€์„œ
01:10
up so I can send you the invitation. All right,
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๊ฐ€์ž…๋งŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ดˆ๋Œ€์žฅ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ž,
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so in the last two videos,
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์ง€๋‚œ ๋‘ ๊ฐœ์˜ ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ
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we saw that you need an elevator pitch or an introduction because it
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š”
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shows your competencies, your strengths, your skills,
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์—ญ๋Ÿ‰, ๊ฐ•์ , ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ 
01:24
and also because you can use it in very
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๋˜ํ•œ ๋งค์šฐ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์—˜๋ฆฌ๋ฒ ์ดํ„ฐ ํ”ผ์น˜ ๋˜๋Š” ์†Œ๊ฐœ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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many different business situations,
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which makes it a very valuable tool to have in your business
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๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค
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English toolkit. And of course,
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์˜์–ด ํˆดํ‚ท์— ํฌํ•จํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ๊ท€์ค‘ํ•œ ๋„๊ตฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ฌผ๋ก 
01:39
this is something that we native speakers do also because we know that
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ๋“ค์ด ํ•˜๋Š” ์ผ์ด๊ธฐ๋„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:44
it's going to help us to have more successful business conversations
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ๋” ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์ธ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
01:49
in many different situations. Now, if you watched those other videos,
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. ์ด์ œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋น„๋””์˜ค๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ฒญํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์†Œ๊ฐœ๋กœ
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you know that you can start your elevator pitch with a simple introduction like
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์—˜๋ฆฌ๋ฒ ์ดํ„ฐ ํ”ผ์น˜๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ๊ณ„์‹ค ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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this, Hi, I'm Christina. It's so nice to meet you.
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”, ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šคํ‹ฐ๋‚˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŒ๋‚˜์„œ ๋ฐ˜๊ฐ‘์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:02
And then you say what? You do something like,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋‹น์‹ ์€ IT ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ํŒ€์„ ์ฑ„์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„
02:06
I'm a human resources manager specializing in recruiting diverse teams for
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์ „๋ฌธ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ธ์  ์ž์› ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
02:11
IT companies. Okay?
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. ์ข‹์•„์š”?
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So once you have that first part of your introduction,
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์˜ ์ฒซ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๋๋‚˜๋ฉด
02:17
you're ready to talk about the value that you can bring to other people.
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์น˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:22
Now, you can talk about your experience,
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์ด์ œ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜,
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how many years you have been in business,
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์‚ฌ์—…์— ์ข…์‚ฌํ•œ ๊ธฐ๊ฐ„,
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maybe a recent achievement an important innovation,
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์ตœ๊ทผ์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณผ, ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ํ˜์‹ 
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whatever really puts the spotlight on you.
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๋“ฑ ๊ท€ํ•˜์—๊ฒŒ ์ŠคํฌํŠธ๋ผ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:36
For a lot of people,
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๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด๋ฃฌ
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it can feel quite scary or just uncomfortable, really,
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really pointing out the skills, the competencies,
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๊ธฐ์ˆ , ์—ญ๋Ÿ‰,
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the achievements that you've done.
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์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ง€์ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ƒ๋‹นํžˆ ๋‘๋ ต๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋ถˆํŽธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋Š๊ปด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:48
It's not something that comes natural to a lot of people,
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๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์ผ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—
02:52
and that's why it's even more important to actually take the time to
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์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„๋‚ด์–ด
02:57
prepare it in advance.
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์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋”์šฑ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:58
And you wanna pick something that really shows the type
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์€
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of expertise, like what you can do for your,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ „๋ฌธ ์ง€์‹ ์œ ํ˜•์„ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:07
I would say your target audience. Maybe this is the person listening to you,
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ชฉํ‘œ ์ฒญ์ค‘์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„๋งˆ๋„ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ง์„ ๊ฒฝ์ฒญํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ,
03:11
your potential clients a company that you want to work for,
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ž ์žฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ, ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ผํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ํšŒ์‚ฌ,
03:15
the department that you want to get a promotion to,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์Šน์ง„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๋ถ€์„œ
03:19
et cetera. For example,
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๋“ฑ์ผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด,
03:21
if you work for a company or as a consultant for several
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ํ•œ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์ผํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์˜ ์ปจ์„คํ„ดํŠธ๋กœ ์ผํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด
03:25
companies, you might say something like this,
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:28
I've been a human resources manager for over seven years,
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์ €๋Š” 7๋…„ ๋„˜๊ฒŒ ์ธ์‚ฌ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž๋กœ ์ผํ–ˆ๊ณ 
03:32
and I've recruited entire teams for small and growing companies.
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์ž‘๊ณ  ์„ฑ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ์˜ ์ „์ฒด ํŒ€์„ ์ฑ„์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:37
And if you run your own small business that provides services to
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ธฐ์—… ์— ์„œ๋น„์Šค๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์†Œ๊ทœ๋ชจ ๊ธฐ์—…์„ ์šด์˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด
03:42
other businesses, you might talk about a recent project that you worked on.
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์ตœ๊ทผ์— ์ž‘์—…ํ•œ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:46
Our company specializes in helping businesses with their public relations.
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋Š” ๊ธฐ์—…์˜ ํ™๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋•๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ „๋ฌธ์œผ๋กœ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:51
We just finished helping Ecor create a community outreach program and
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” Ecor๊ฐ€ ์ง€์—ญ ์‚ฌํšŒ ๋ด‰์‚ฌ ํ™œ๋™ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ๊ณผ
03:56
a PR campaign to promote it.
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์ด๋ฅผ ํ™๋ณดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ PR ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ง‰ ๋งˆ์ณค์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:58
And maybe you have a great idea that will help the company or the department
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด๋ฏธ ์ผํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋‚˜ ๋ถ€์„œ์— ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ข‹์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ๊ณ 
04:02
that you're already working for,
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,
04:04
and you wanna show that you've got the expertise,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ „๋ฌธ ์ง€์‹์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์˜
04:07
you've got what it takes to really carry out your big idea.
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ํฐ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์‹คํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Œ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:12
My team and I have been working on new and innovative medical equipment that is
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ ํŒ€๊ณผ ์ €๋Š”
04:17
small enough to move from lab to lab,
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์—ฐ๊ตฌ์‹ค์—์„œ ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์‹ค๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•˜๊ธฐ์— ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํžˆ ์ž‘์€ ์ƒˆ๋กญ๊ณ  ํ˜์‹ ์ ์ธ ์˜๋ฃŒ ์žฅ๋น„๋ฅผ ์—ฐ๊ตฌํ•ด ์™”์œผ๋ฉฐ ๊ฐ€์žฅ
04:20
and we've just completed our latest design for our biggest client. So you
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ํฐ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ตœ์‹  ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ๊ธˆ ์™„๋ฃŒํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ
04:24
see the idea is really to pick just one thing that is,
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰,
04:29
I would say, exemplary of your expertise,
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ์ง€์‹,
04:32
your skills or the type of accomplishments that you can achieve for
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๊ธฐ์ˆ  ๋˜๋Š”
04:37
your clients, your employer, or whoever you're speaking to.
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๊ณ ๊ฐ, ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋‹ฌ์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ฑ์ทจ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ๋ชจ๋ฒ”์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:42
And now it's time to ask for what you want.
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์ด์ œ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•  ๋•Œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:46
Now of course, this is always going to be different depending on your situation,
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๋ฌผ๋ก  ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ•ญ์ƒ ๋‹ค๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜
04:51
but here are some ideas. If you're looking for a position in a company,
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์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์ผ์ž๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด Core๊ฐ€ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š”
04:55
you might say,
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04:56
I find the work amazing Core does to be inspiring,
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๋†€๋ผ์šด ์ž‘์—…์ด ์˜๊ฐ์„ ์ฃผ๊ณ 
05:00
and I'd love the chance to put my experience to work for your company.
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์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ๋‚ด ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๊ท€์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
05:04
Or if you're at a networking event and you would love to be connected to someone
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๋˜๋Š” ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น ํ–‰์‚ฌ์— ์ฐธ์„ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ง์ฑ…์„ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ๋˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด
05:09
who can help you to find the position you're looking for, you might say,
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05:14
I'm really inspired with the work. Amazing core.
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์ด ์ผ์— ์ •๋ง ์˜๊ฐ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋†€๋ผ์šด ์ฝ”์–ด.
05:17
Would you be able to put me in touch with someone on the Human resources team?
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์ธ์  ์ž์› ํŒ€์˜ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์™€ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
05:22
And if you're a small business owner or a consultant offering your service to
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์†Œ๊ธฐ์—… ์†Œ์œ ์ฃผ์ด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ธฐ์—…์— ์„œ๋น„์Šค๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์ปจ์„คํ„ดํŠธ๋ผ๋ฉด
05:26
another business, you can say, I'm really inspired with the work.
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์ด ์ž‘์—…์— ์ •๋ง ์˜๊ฐ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:30
Amazing Core does.
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์–ด๋ฉ”์ด์ง• ์ฝ”์–ด๊ฐ€ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:31
My team and I would love to help you create the kind of public relations
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์ €ํฌ ํŒ€๊ณผ ์ €๋Š”
05:35
campaign that will allow your business to grow. Or maybe you're,
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค๊ฐ€ ์„ฑ์žฅํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ์ข…์˜ ํ™๋ณด ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฏธ ์ผํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋•๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด
05:39
you're ready to actually suggest an idea that maybe you and your team
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๊ท€ํ•˜์™€ ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ํŒ€์ด
05:44
can carry out to help the company where you already work. In this case,
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์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ œ์•ˆํ•  ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ์ด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
05:49
you can say something like this,
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05:52
I suggest creating a new design for our latest model that would help our clients.
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๊ณ ๊ฐ์—๊ฒŒ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ตœ์‹  ๋ชจ๋ธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋””์ž์ธ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ์•ˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:57
Diagnose illnesses in more remote areas.
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๋” ๋จผ ์ง€์—ญ์˜ ์งˆ๋ณ‘์„ ์ง„๋‹จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:00
And I feel our department has the skills to do that. All right,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ๋ถ€์„œ์—๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:04
so first of all,
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์šฐ์„  ์ˆ˜๊ณ ํ•˜์…จ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:06
good job and congratulations because now you know how to share your value,
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์ถ•ํ•˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ฐ€์น˜, ์ „๋ฌธ์„ฑ, ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ๊ณ 
06:11
your expertise, your experience,
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06:14
and to ask what you want at the end of your pitch.
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ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์ด ๋๋‚  ๋•Œ ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:18
But actually, that's not yet the end of your pitch.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ๋Š” ์•„์ง ํ”ผ์น˜์˜ ๋์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์ด ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์„ฑ๊ณตํ• 
06:22
There's still one more thing that you need to do to double your chances
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ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ๋‘ ๋ฐฐ๋กœ ๋†’์ด๋ ค๋ฉด ์•„์ง ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์ด ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋” ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:27
that your pitch will actually be a success.
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.
06:30
But I'm gonna save that for the fourth and final
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ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ
06:35
video in this series. So be sure to sign up,
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์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ๋„ค ๋ฒˆ์งธ์ด์ž ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋น„๋””์˜ค๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ €์žฅํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ
06:40
subscribe to my channel so that you get that final part of this series.
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์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ œ ์ฑ„๋„์„ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
06:45
And you can go like to the end of your pitch,
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ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์ด ๋๋‚  ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€
06:48
you complete your pitch,
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ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ์™„๋ฃŒํ•˜๊ณ 
06:50
be sure to sign up for my newsletter down below the video
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๋™์˜์ƒ ์•„๋ž˜์— ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‚ด ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๋ฉด
06:55
so that you can get the final part of this series,
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์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜
06:59
and then also your invitation to that free interactive workshop for
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์žˆ๊ณ  ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์ธํ„ฐ๋ž™ํ‹ฐ๋ธŒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ดˆ๋Œ€๋„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:04
after your pitch. All right, and as always,
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ํ”ผ์น˜ ํ›„ ์›Œํฌ์ƒต. ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์–ธ์ œ๋‚˜์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ
07:08
thank you for coming to the end of this video,
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์ด ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:11
coming to the end of part three in this special series.
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์ด ํŠน๋ณ„ ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ 3๋ถ€๋„ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ๊ณง
07:15
Very much looking forward to getting to part four with you
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4๋ถ€์—์„œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋งค์šฐ ๊ณ ๋Œ€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:20
very soon. And yeah, I will see you next time. See ya.
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋„ค, ๋‹ค์Œ์— ๋ต™๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ์— ๋ด.
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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