Student Life – Academic writing

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I live with my boyfriend
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and his family in Southport
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and I'm studying Childhood and Youth
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Studies via distance learning.
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Living with the boys,
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I get to spend quite a lot of time
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with them.
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I try and do a bit of reading
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with them as well,
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where they don't feel that pressure
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to like, I have to do well
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or do this, but
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just try and enjoy things.
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My sister, she's
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16 years younger than me,
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and seeing her develop
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right before my eyes,
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I became so fascinated,
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and so I thought,
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"Do you know what, I want
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to know more,"
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and then I
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embarked on a module
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with my university,
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from there it developed
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into what is now
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my Childhood degree.
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My boyfriend's kidneys failed
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when he was about 22
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and he's been on dialysis since,
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so he goes Monday,
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Wednesdays and Friday evenings
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after work,
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so he comes home
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from work, quickly
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gets changed and
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I take him to dialysis.
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I've also been suffering
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with fibromyalgia for
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the last five or six years now.
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When your
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nervous system doesn't respond
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as it should:
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it's sending pain signals to
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your brain.
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So it affects my whole body,
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as it were, but mainly my back,
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and my fingers,
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they start to hurt.
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I get like fibro-fog,
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so I can't concentrate.
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Tried all the medication
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that I could,
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I got a bit of side effects
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with quite a few of
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them: anxiety, depression,
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so I don't take
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any medication now,
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and I started running
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as well,
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and when I was more active,
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it seemed to keep the pain
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at bay for a bit longer,
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so now I'm more
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focussed on doing things that
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are natural and that
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won't be as harmful to
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my body.
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I think distance learning
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with my fibromyalgia
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has been good for me:
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it's more flexible,
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and also I'm not as anxious
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because I know that
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what I miss, I can
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always make up.
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On the bad days I
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sort of have to
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email my tutor and say,
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"Can I just have an extension?" and
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they've always known,
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because every time I
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register for a new module,
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they're told that
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I've got this condition so
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just be a bit more supportive, I suppose.
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So in my modules my assignments
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were mainly just,
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your normal 3000-word assignments.
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I used to use the P-E-E format
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to do my assignments and it's
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point, example and explanation.
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So any time you make a point,
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you have to have an example,
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and you have to explain how it
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relates to the question.
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So I used that literally
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religiously with all my assignments,
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and it helped me just stay on track.
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I always had a plan.
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So I'd split up the word count
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so if it's four paragraphs
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then I'm going to do 400 words here
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400 there, 200 for the intro,
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200 for the conclusion. I had
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a little list of like words
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I could use,
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just to jog my memory
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'cos when you're writing
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an assignment, you can't think
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of all those things,
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and if I wanted to
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add another point,
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there would be 'additionally',
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'furthermore' or if I was
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contrasting that point,
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'however'
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or…
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Each time I did an assignment
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I'd pin up my list of words,
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my plan and everything else,
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and little key words or
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like bubble points
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of what I needed to put in
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so any time I got
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stuck, I'd just think,
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"Right, look at your plan."
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'Cos I used to write
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trigger words as well,
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so for each paragraph,
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there were trigger words –
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things I'd have to include which
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I got from the assignment sheet.
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Whenever I needed help,
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whenever I was stuck
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with my assignment,
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I'd email my tutor and
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then I'd say
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'Can we arrange a call?'
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and within less than a day,
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literally, she'd come
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back to me.
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I did enjoy academic writing,
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I think more so in the end
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because I was starting to get
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a grasp of it.
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My top tips to anyone
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who was starting to do
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academic writing,
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I would say:
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be patient;
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don't be so hard on yourself.
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You can't possibly get it
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from the beginning,
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but be open to feedback,
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and also, just give it a go.
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Go the distance.
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