How to write a PERSONAL STATEMENT for university or college

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Hi, welcome to www.engvid.com , I'm Adam. In today's video, I'm going to talk to you
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about writing a personal statement. Now, a personal statement is one of the documents
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that you will have to submit to a university when you're applying for admission there.
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Not all schools want it, but most schools do want some form of written document from
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you to apply with. Now, personal statement is just one type of document, but that's the
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type I'll talk about today. I'll mention the other types, but that will be a separate video
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for them, because it's a different approach to each one. So, before you do - before you
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do - before you start writing your personal statement, you have to be ready. Now, what
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this means is you can't write a personal statement the night before. You can't write it a week
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before. Some people spend anywhere from six months to a year preparing their personal
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statement. Now, personally, I don't think you need a year, you just need to work hard
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for awhile, but you need more than a week, okay? There's a lot of work to do, I'm going
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to show you some of the things you need to keep in mind, we're going to look at six different
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things you need to understand about the personal statement, but this is such an important document,
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such an important piece of paper, that you have to spend time on it. You have to know
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what's involved, okay? So, we're going to start with that.
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First of all, know the parameters. Now, what does this mean? I've seen lots of people;
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I've seen lots of examples of personal statements where the people did not get onto the school's
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website and find out what they actually need to do. They didn't look at the instructions.
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They didn't look at the limits. They didn't look at anything. They just started writing
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a personal statement, okay? What they didn't understand is what font size can you use?
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Usually the school will tell you, they will give you some instructions about what you
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can and can't do, okay? If you think, oh, I don't have enough to write, I'll use a 14
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font, a size 14 font, to fill up the pages, okay, they - the admissions committee, the
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people who read this, they will see a 14 font - garbage, you're done, you're not getting
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into this school. They didn't even read one word yet. They saw you couldn't follow instructions,
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you obviously can't be a good student - goodbye, okay? Know the font. Know the spacing. Do
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they want double-spaced or single-spaced? Some of them don't care, they say you can
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write double or single, but make sure you know. If they want double-spaced, send them
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double-spaced personal statement. If they want single, make it single. Some of them
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will tell you how - the margins, they want one inch each side. They want two inches on
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the top and bottom, one inch on each side. Make sure you format your personal statement
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the way they want it. If you don't, it means you can't follow instructions, and this is
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for a personal statement. How are you going to do when your teachers give you instructions,
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right? You can't follow these basic instructions? You won't follow your teachers' instructions,
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they don't want you at their school, you're done, they haven't even read your personal
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statement yet.
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Now, very, very important. Some of them will give you a word limit. Some of them will say
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no more than 1000 words. Some will say no more than 1250 words. Some of them will say
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900 words. Make sure you know what the limit of words is. Now, they might not give you
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a word limit. They might give you a character limit. Character means like, each letter and
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space and period and comma, each one of these is a character. A 900 character usually includes
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spaces, so make sure when your final draft is ready, you do not have more than 900 characters.
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Now, again, don't sit there counting each one. Make sure you do this on Word or some
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sort of word processor that can count for you, okay? And you can look at the top of
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the tabs in Word, for example, and there'll be a place that says word count. There will
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also show you character count. Make sure you don't go over your limit. Some of them will
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just give you a page limit. No more than two double-spaced pages. Okay. No more than one
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single spaced page, it's almost the same thing, but again, know how much you need to write,
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don't go beyond it. If they're giving you two pages, don't write half a page. If they're
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giving you one page, don't write a page and a half. Generally, I say anywhere between
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a page and a quarter to a page and a half should be enough. That's usually the standard,
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but again, every school will have their own instructions. Make sure you know what they
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want. Make sure you give them what they want. Okay?
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Now, some of them will just say "Write a personal statement", basically, why do you want to
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come to this school, or why do you want to join this program. Others will give you a
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very specific question, okay? If they give you a question, make sure you answer that
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question. Make sure that you build your - you construct or organize your personal statement
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around that question. If you ignore the question, you're - again, you're ending up in the rejection
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file, you know, you aren't getting admitted. Now, keep in mind, the personal statement
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is not the only thing they're looking at, but if you have very good grades, very good
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extracurricular activities, very good volunteering but you still have a terrible personal statement,
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all those things might not help you. On the other hand, if you have so-so grades and so-so
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everything else but your personal statement is amazing, that could actually get you into
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university. Very important document, okay? And sometimes, you will have everything the
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same, they'll - let's say there's five seats in a class, in a particular course. There
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are ten people, each of them have basically the same grades, the same experience, the
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same volunteer experience, etc. What's going to make the difference between who gets in
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and who doesn't? The personal statement, okay? Don't underestimate the value of this document.
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Now, the next thing, and this where a lot of people make a mistake. Do they actually
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want a personal statement, okay? Or, do they want a statement of intent, or a statement
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of purpose? Call it both ways. Do they want an essay? Do they want a personal statement
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of intent? Make sure you understand what it is they're asking for. A personal statement
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and a statement of intent are not the same thing, okay? This - the way you write this
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and the way you write this are different, okay, and that's why I said I'll make a different
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video for the statement of intent because, right now, we're just concentrating on the
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personal statement. So, let's take this question and go to the next step.
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So, we're taking about a personal statement. What is the first thing you have to notice
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about personal statement? First thing you have to notice is that they want a person.
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It's personal, okay? What they don't want to know is they don't want to know what are
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you, they want to know who are you. They want to see the person. They want to see the personality,
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okay? They want to see the person that's going to be coming into their classrooms and interacting
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with other students, interacting with faculty, interacting with school staff, somebody who
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can lead, somebody who can work hard and succeed and go on to give the school a good reputation
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once they enter the working world. So, they want to see a person.
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Now, what does this mean? They want to know your personality. They want to know, what
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have you done or - that shows who you are. They don't want to know what's on your transcripts.
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They see your transcripts. They know what's on your transcripts. Don't tell them that
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in the personal statement. Again, you can take out highlights. I was in the top 3% of
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my class in whatever, sure. That's not on your transcript, necessarily. But don't tell
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them I took this, this, and that course and I got A's in everything. Yeah, they know,
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they can see your transcript. Don't tell them that here. They don't want to see a student.
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They want to see a person. Okay? And I'll say that many times. If you have to submit
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a CV or a resume, don't tell them what you've done in terms of work or volunteer experience.
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They can see it in the resume. They can see it in the CV. Show them the person, don't
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show them the worker. Show them the person, don't show them the student, okay? All of
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that, they have other documents for. Again, all they want to see is the person.
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Now, you're asking, okay, yeah, I understand, you've said it enough times, but I could tell
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you that - I've said it to people ten times, and they still didn't do it. Very, very important
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to make sure they see a person, okay? They want to see uniqueness. They want to see some
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sort of imagination, okay, they want to see creativity. If you go online, if you do a
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Google search, or Bing or Yahoo or whatever search engine you use and you put "personal
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statement samples", the internet's full of them. Read some of these. You will read examples
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of what not to do and you will read examples of what to do. I once read a sample of a girl
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who got into all the ivy league schools. How did she organize her personal statement? She
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basically put all of her information into a story about going to Costco. For those of
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you who don't know, Costco is a huge supermarket in the States and Canada and everywhere. She
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compared her life and she compared her academic career and her work experience to a shopping
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trip to Costco. Now, you're thinking, well, that's a little bit strange. Yeah, it is a
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little bit strange, but it worked, and what did it show the most? That she was thinking
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outside the box. So, this is very important. Think outside the box, be creative, be original,
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be fresh. The people who are going to be reading your statement, they're going to be sitting
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in a room, they're going to have a stack of statements, okay? It's extremely boring work,
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but they have to do it, and the more boring your personal statement, the more average
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it is, the more bland it is, the more unoriginal it is, the more tired you're making them and
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a little bit more angry you're making them. Don't make them angry, give them something
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fresh, wake them up. As soon as you've woken them up, you already have an advantage in
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your admissions process, okay? Very, very important. Be a person. Don't be a student.
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Don't be a worker.
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Now, I'm going to talk a bit more about how you should do this, especially the introduction
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paragraph is super important. We're going to talk about that soon enough.
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Okay, so now, as I mentioned, time, right? So, your next step is to plan. Now, you have
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to plan your - you have to plan your overall approach to the personal statement. So, what
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you have to do is you have to find your theme or your arc. This is an arc, basically, right?
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So, this is what is holding your whole personal statement together and then all the information's
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going to come under this, under the arc, and it's all connecting to one central idea, and
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that's why I also call it a theme. Like, if you're into sports, that could be your theme.
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If you're a refugee from somewhere and you're looking for a better life and you're looking
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for a second chance, that's your theme. Or, another way to look at it is your "in". The
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one thing that lets you into the story and then you build your story from there, right?
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Very, very important to have this theme. You're not going to just list down random information.
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You're going to tell a story, okay, and that's what you're looking for. You're looking for
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the plot of the story of who you are and you're going to present that to the admissions committee,
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the people who are reading it. Again, I can't stress this enough, take time to do it. And
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you'll be surprised, I've helped lots of students write personal statements, okay, and it's
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amazing to me. Like, they always send me their first draft and I always - almost always send
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them back an email and I say, "Yeah, we're going to have to start from the beginning,
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because you're not doing what a personal statement is. You're not telling me a story, you're
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giving me facts, a lot of the facts which I can get from your other documents, okay,
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so we're going to start from scratch." And what I do is I create a list of questions
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for them, and what you can do is create a list of questions for yourself. But be very
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broad with your questions, okay? Make sure you ask all the who, what, when, where, how,
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which, etc., why, why do you want to come to this school? Why do you want to study this?
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When did you know you wanted to study this? So, you're applying, for example, to medical
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school, okay? Why are you applying to medical school? Why do you want to be a doctor? Did
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somebody push you to be a doctor? Did you ever have an experience at a doctor's office
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where you came out and you said "You know what? This is what I want to be, this is what
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I want to do with my life." What is that point in your life, that light bulb switched on
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and you realized this what you want to study? If you're going into business, why? Why do
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you want to go into business? Do you want to be rich? Okay, good. You're not going to
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say that on your personal statement. What you can say is why do you want to be rich?
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Do you want to make lots of money so that you can help poor people? Do you want to make
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lots of money so that you can control the world? Do you want to be president? Always
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ask one more question. Whatever your answer is, go a little bit more. Again, very important,
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I want you to dig deep into yourself. Don't be afraid of asking yourself these questions,
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okay? Now, when I help students write a personal statement, I send them minimum fifteen questions,
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sometimes thirty questions, and I'm not going to use all the answers in the personal statement,
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I'm not going to ask them to do that, but I want them to think. I want them to find
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that little piece of information, that little piece of their history to build a story around,
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okay? I want them to find their theme, okay?
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Ask non-typical questions. Don't say "Why do you want to be doctor?" Okay, obviously,
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that's a question you need to think about, but I want you to think, "Why do you want
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to help people? Why does seeing somebody sick become unsick make you feel good? How does
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it make you feel good? What situation - what example, what experience in your life has
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helped you understand that feeling about yourself?" Okay? Lots of questions. Give non-typical
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answers to typical questions. Even if you're - in your list of questions, you have very
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typical questions, "Why do you want to go to this school?", look for non-typical answers.
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Why do you want to go to MIT? Well yeah, it's the best technical school in the world, but
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why MIT? Why this particular school? There are lots of good technical schools. Well,
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MIT has, on-campus they have this particular building where you can do this, that, and
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that. Be very, very specific with your answers. Now, all the details you're going to collect
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are going to help you come up with your theme, with your arc, the one thread that goes through
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all this information and connects it all together, the one thing that helps you create a story,
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okay? Because, again, they have your transcript, they have your CV, they want to know who you
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are as a person, okay?
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Think of it like this: when you get to university, you're going to meet lots of new people and
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you're going to meet new classmates, new teachers, new people who are not your classmates but
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go to your school, in your dormitory, you'll meet them at the cafeteria, whatever. You're
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going to start interacting with people. People are going to want to know, who are you? Do
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I want to be friends with you? Why do I want to be friends with you? Well, tell them here.
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Tell them in the personal statement. Make the admissions committee, people, want to
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be friends with you, because you're a special person, okay? And don't think - sorry, one
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last point before I go on - everybody thinks they're special, which is fine. Everybody
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is special, but if everybody is special, nobody is special. Right? So, don't assume that everybody
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is basically different and you're the one special one, okay?
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Another thing that a lot of people forget, and I forgot to mention this before too, you're
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not the only one applying. The admissions committee is reading a lot of these things.
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What makes you stand out? Okay? What makes you different from the other people? So, I
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had one student. She was applying to a program that, on average, every year, they had 700
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people applying, 700 applicants, for 25 seats in the program. So, one of the questions I
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asked her, "What makes you better, or what makes you more qualified, or what makes you
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a better candidate than 675 other people?", okay? That's what she had to think about and
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come up with an answer the beset she could and then we worked through it and got her
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theme, okay?
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Now, you have your plan, you have your theme, you're ready to go. Are you going to start
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researching the school? Not yet, you can start thinking about your introduction. All of the
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other details will come later, because I want you to establish your theme, I want you to
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establish your story, that's happening in the introduction, okay? The introduction is
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what is going to make or break your personal statement. This is where you catch the reader's
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attention, you hold it, and make them want to go on to read the other important information.
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So, you need a hook. You need that first sentence to just grab the reader's attention and hold
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it, and that comes in the first sentence. Now, I've seen lots of personal statements
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where somebody says, "My name is Bill Smith and I really want to go to your school." No.
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Terrible sentence. Why? A: They have your whole application package, they know your
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name. They know you want to apply to this school because you sent an application. They
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know you want to go here. Don't tell them the obvious. You're writing a story, grab
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their attention. Give them something unique, okay? I had one - I helped one person write
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a statement. I found out she liked sports. That was her hook. We started straight with
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the sports analogy. What makes successful people successful? In sports, it's their ability
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to win, it's their ability to play in a team and to strategize, to have a target and work
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hard to reach it. Again, I'm obviously paraphrasing here, but that's the key point. We used sports
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as her theme. Sports is a very good theme, by the way, if you're into sports. But, again,
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if you're going to use sports, make sure that your CV has a lot of sports stuff on it. She
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was on two university teams, so it was very good. I think she was captain of one and won
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a championship with another.
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Now, what should you not do? So again, don't state your name. Don't state your hometown,
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don't state your area of study. My name is Bill Smith, I'm from Florida, and I study
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Economics. They know all that! Don't waste words and time on your personal statement.
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Now, if any of this information is part of your story. Let's say your name is - you have
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some strange name, and from your country. Let's say you're not an English speaker. Your
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name in your country is a regular, everyday name, but when you come to America, your name
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is very strange, okay, or has a different meaning. So that name is part of what shapes
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your personality, it's part of what you experience as a person. Then, yes, talk about your name.
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But, again, don't say "My name is...". Make sure that that name has a link to your overall
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personality and your overall goals. Same with hometown. If you're from a county like, if
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you're a refugee from a country, then yeah, you can say "I'm from this place and I had
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to run away from there to start a new life here, and this is why I'm applying...", etc.
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If this information is relevant to the story of who you are, use it. If it's not, leave
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it out. If it's just plain information, they don't need it. They already have it, okay?
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And even if it is a part of your story, try to incorporate it a little bit later in the
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essay, in the body, or if it's central, then yeah, use it in the introduction as well.
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Don't state your interest in the school. Again, you applied. They know, okay? Now, I - I shouldn't
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have to say this, but I do have to say it. Don't flatter them. "I'm applying to your
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school because you're the best in the world and you have the best teachers and the best
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graduates and I want to be a part of that." They don't need to know that. They know. They
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know how good they are. Yes, you can mention rankings, you can mention how good the state
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of the art equipment and reputation in the body. Don't do it in the introduction. Don't
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flatter them, don't fawn. Don't, ah, I so much want to go to MIT, it's such a great
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school. I love you guys, you're the best! No, they don't need to know any of that. They
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know they're the best, that's why you're applying there. Do not beg. I really, really need to
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come to your school because if I don't, my parents will kill me. They don't care, and
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you're not getting into this school because if that's your main reason for coming here,
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you're not going to be a good student. You're coming here because you have something to
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offer them. Don't make it like they have something to give you. It's always about you helping
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the school, not the other way around, okay? The school needs to want you to come there,
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because why? Because you have something to offer. You're a leader, you're going to make
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your classmates work harder. You have fresh ideas. You're going to help everybody be better.
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If you're saying, "I want to come there, I want to improve my English, I want to get
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the best degree in the world, I want to make lots of money.", you're not getting into this
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program. Okay?
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Don't plead, which basically means the same as beg, please, please, please. Don't explain
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anything. If you had a bad score in one of your grades, don't explain it in the introduction.
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You can bring it up later as part of the story. It could be like, "I had somebody in my family
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passed away", or "Somebody in my family became really sick and I had to take care of them,
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which is why this particular class, I did badly in, because I didn't have time to study,
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but after everything was resolved, you'll notice that my marks went straight back up
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to A's, so it was a difficult time, but it made me stronger." Again, take the bad, make
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it into good, but don't give an excuse. Nobody wants excuses, they want results, okay? Don't
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justify anything. Don't say that, oh, my school isn't the best in the country, but my school
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doesn't have the best reputation, but I promise you that I'm a very good and hard worker.
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Don't tell them that. Show them that, and we'll talk about show, don't tell. Again,
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don't give excuses, any of that stuff.
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And I'm just going to mention very quickly. Whatever your theme is and whatever your introduction
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is, make it in such a way that whenever you get to your last paragraph, your conclusion
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paragraph, you can somehow tie it all together and make like, a nice, tight circle and you
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have a nice package, a full, complete story. Okay?
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So, we know what a POS is, we know what our instructions are, we know how to plan, we
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have our introduction more or less lined out, we have our theme. What's next?
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Okay, so now we're going to look at the next couple of points. Now, before I go on, the
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thing about the introduction. Once you've more or less written it, you have your idea,
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your theme, you've put it in - into a way you can start your essay, your personal statement,
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you're not done with it. This is not the final draft. This is just to get you an idea so
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that then you can go onto the next part. You're going to do research, and this is very, very
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important. I mean, every step is very important, but this is super important, because the school
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needs to know that you know why you're applying to this school. I hope this makes sense. They
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don't want you to apply because you're applying to every program and every school in the country
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that offers it. You're applying to this program for a reason. Now, how are they going to understand
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that you really want to come to this program? Because you will now what you're talking about
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when you're applying. You will do the research. You will read everything on the website about
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the school and about the program. You're not going to read the pages of the other faculties
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because it's not important, but about the school in general, about the students, about
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the general place itself, the campus life, where it is, why it's famous, what's good
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about it, what's bad about it, and of course, everything about your area of study, you're
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going to read about. And you're going to read other things. You're going to read the rankings,
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okay? Where does this school rank in the world, or in the country, for this particular program?
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You're going to read reviews, like, what do ex-students say? What do other people say
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about this school, about this program? You're going to read whatever news you can find about
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this school and this program, okay? Throughout your research, you're going to collect key
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words. Now, you have to pay attention. What words keep coming up when - in this particular
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school? What words do you see regularly on the website? What words do you see regularly
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when this program is discussed, right? Make a collection of these. You're going to try
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to use some of these words in your personal statement. That's how they know that you know
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what you're talking about. That's how they know that you've done the research. You can
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say, and a lot of people say this, "I really want to go to your school because you have
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state of the art equipment and you're world-famous." Really? How do you know that? You can say
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that about most schools these days, right? Don't tell me, show me.
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So, this is a very key idea in writing. Don't tell me anything, show me. Show me that you
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understand. Show me that you know something about the school. Don't say "Oh yeah, I know
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about your school." Okay, anybody could say that, not anybody could show that they know
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something. Get those key words, make sure you use them. If you're going to talk about
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state of the art equipment or state of the art laboratories, show me that you have a
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real concrete example. Like, this particular school has the new whatever system. Put that
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into your personal statement so they know that you have done some research, okay?
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What is their pride and joy, okay? When this school promotes itself, what's the thing they
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concentrate on the most? What makes them the most proud of themselves? What makes them
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very happy to talk about themselves? Find that out, make sure that you incorporate that
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into your writing, okay? Again, all you're doing is you're showing them that you have
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done the research and you have a real reason to apply there. It's not just because you're
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applying to every school, hoping to get into one, okay? And never mention that that's what
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you're doing, if that's what you're doing.
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Incorporate all of this into your theme. Now, you're not going to just randomly throw all
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of this information into your personal statement. You're going to connect it to the part of
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the story that is you, okay? How do these ideas, how do these key words connect to your
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personal story? And, again, never forget, even once you're past the introduction, never
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forget that this is still a personal statement. This is still a story of who you are, and
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you're connecting yourself to the school. You're showing how your story and the school's
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story are compatible, okay, that's what you're trying to show them. Your story makes you
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a good fit for this school. That's why you have something to offer them, and, of course,
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they have something to offer you. Make sure that relationship is clear. Make sure that
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compatibility is clear, okay? Then, once you have all this, go back to your introduction,
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re-write it in a way that's going to set up the rest of the information that's going to
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come in the body of the personal statement. Make sure your introduction is brief. Don't
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make it too long, don't give too many details, brief. Establish the hook, establish the story,
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make it impressive, and then get into the details.
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Now, one thing you can do, once you have your theme in the introduction and you know all
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the things you want to mention in your body, then create a sort of storyline that you can
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connect each paragraph has a different point. So, this is your main theme, and then there's
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a subtheme, subtheme, subtheme, subtheme, sorry, and then you're going to connect all
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of the information that you learned about the school and all the information about yourself
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into that subtheme, into those subthemes and the story.
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Once you've done all this, and again, I'm making it much more simple than it is. You
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need to see a lot of sample statements to know how to write them well. I'm not going
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to talk to you about grammar, I'm not going to talk to you about sentence structures,
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about vocabulary. Again, remember, this is not an English test, this is a test to see
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your ability to express yourself, but again, it's more about showing who you are.
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But, having said that, when you finish writing it, okay, that is your first draft. You will
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have many drafts. You shouldn't submit anything until you've gone at least four, five, six
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drafts deep, okay? You're going to re-write, you're going to edit, and then you're going
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to edit some more, and then you're going to edit some more. And then, you're going to
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give it to a friend that you trust, or to a professional, somebody who you know can
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look at it and see all the things that you missed and give you feedback and then you're
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going to re-write and then you're going to edit some more, okay?
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Now, you're going to have many drafts. By the end, you should have zero spelling mistakes,
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zero grammar mistakes, zero punctuation, capitalization, word usage, zero mistakes anywhere, because
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any mistake shows carelessness, and you don't want to be careless. You want to be meticulous;
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you want to be perfect so that they know that you took this very seriously and you're going
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to put the same effort into your studies. At the end of the day, schools want to admit
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students who will succeed, because when a student succeeds, the school succeeds. When
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you graduate from this school and you go get a good job and you start making connections
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and networking all over the place and people ask you, "Oh, where did you go to school?"
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and you say "Oh, I went to this school", this school looks good, okay? That's what they
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want. They want you to be successful and then go promote them, because they made you successful,
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okay? Show them that you're not careless, have zero mistakes in it.
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And, again, make every single word work for you. Every word should have a purpose. Every
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sentence should be saying something, so be moving the story along. It should be creating
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a full picture of who you are, what you can offer the school, why you think the school
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can offer you something in return, and the relationship you're going to have. And, ideally,
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find someone you trust, someone who is good with the language, who is good at writing,
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good with English, get them to put fresh eyes on this thing. You will read this thing 100
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times, 200 times. Mistakes, you're not going to see them because you've read it so many
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times, you know in your head what should be there. If it's not there, you're not going
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to see it anymore. Get somebody with fresh eyes to read it for you, give you feedback,
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make corrections, etc. And again, re-write, edit, edit, edit. Don't be afraid to hire
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a professional editor, okay? There are people, there are agencies that do only this. Again,
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it might not be very cheap, but it's worth it because this is basically the story of
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you. This is what the admissions committee is going to decide your future on, this piece
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of paper, okay, or this statement. Make sure it's perfect, make sure it's telling a story,
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make sure it's impressive.
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Now, I'll give you an example. I helped a young woman apply to medical school, okay?
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So, she sent me her first draft, and I, again, I told her no, we have to start from scratch,
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here's a list of questions, answer me. From all the answers that she sent me, I wrote
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her - I helped her write, sorry, a completely new personal statement, because there was
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information in there that was super valuable that she didn't even think to include. She
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didn't think to include the sports that she participated in. Her grandmother was the first
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woman to graduate from a medical school in her original country. That is very important.
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Why? Because it shows that you have a legacy to live up to. It shows that you come from
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a family where education is very important. It shows that you are determined; you want
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to live up to your grandmother's reputation. You want to be the next in the line of family
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members who accomplished something. It shows determination. The school - the admissions
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committee, they want to see that you're determined, that you're motivated, that you're going to
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succeed. This story helps them see that, because you have a reason to do it, right? She didn't
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even think to include this, originally. I helped her include that in her story. So,
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get somebody to give you feedback. It's very, very important, okay?
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Now, if you go to www.engvid.com , there's a quiz there, although it's not really a quiz,
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it's more of a review of the main steps that you have to keep in mind. Go there, think
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of it as a checklist of what you need to do when you're preparing your personal statement.
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Now, a lot of you who are watching this video are not applying to university, you're not
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going to apply to university, but keep in mind that all the points made here can and
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do apply to you. If you're applying to a job and you have to send a CV or a resume and
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a cover letter, the cover letter is the same idea. You have to sell yourself. You're not
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selling the resume, they will look at your resume, they will get all the details of your
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experience. The cover letter is where you show them a person, okay? Treat the same way
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as the personal statement. Show them a person, show them why they want you, okay, why they
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need to hire you, why they would be losing if they didn't hire you. What can you offer
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them, and what can they offer you, make sure that relationship is clear, and that's why
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all of these notes apply to lots of people out there, okay?
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If you have any questions, please go to www.engvid.com again, there's a comment section. You can
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also visit my website, www.editorproof.com , you can find out more information about
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what you need to do with a personal statement or if you need some help with that. If you
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like the video, please subscribe to my channel on YouTube and come again soon for more good
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videos. I'll see you then.
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