Writing in English: Comma Splices & 4 easy ways to fix them

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μ•„λž˜ μ˜λ¬Έμžλ§‰μ„ λ”λΈ”ν΄λ¦­ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄ μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ²ˆμ—­λœ μžλ§‰μ€ 기계 λ²ˆμ—­λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

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Hi there. My name is Emma, and today we have a slightly advanced lesson. So for some of
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μ•ˆλ…•ν•˜μ„Έμš”. 제 이름은 Emma이고 μ˜€λŠ˜μ€ μ•½κ°„ κ³ κΈ‰ μˆ˜μ—…μ΄ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ”°λΌμ„œ 일뢀
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you beginners, this might be a little too advanced. So what we're going to talk about
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μ΄ˆλ³΄μžμ—κ²ŒλŠ” 이것이 λ„ˆλ¬΄ 고급일 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ μš°λ¦¬κ°€ 이야기할 것은
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are comma splices. So before I begin explaining what a comma splice is, I want to do a little
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콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€κ°€ 무엇인지 μ„€λͺ…ν•˜κΈ° 전에 μ•½κ°„μ˜ ν€΄μ¦ˆλ₯Ό ν’€κ³  μ‹ΆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
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quiz. So I have four sentences up here. I want you to read them. We'll read them together,
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. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 여기에 λ„€ 개의 λ¬Έμž₯이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‚˜λŠ” 당신이 그것듀을 읽기λ₯Ό λ°”λžλ‹ˆλ‹€. μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 그것듀을 ν•¨κ»˜ 읽을 것이고,
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and I want you to tell me in which sentences do I use a comma correctly, and in which sentences
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μ–΄λ–€ λ¬Έμž₯μ—μ„œ μ‰Όν‘œλ₯Ό μ˜¬λ°”λ₯΄κ²Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜κ³  μ–΄λ–€ λ¬Έμž₯μ—μ„œ
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have I made a mistake. So question number one, "Black bears are beautiful, they have
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μ‹€μˆ˜λ₯Ό ν–ˆλŠ”μ§€ 말해주기λ₯Ό λ°”λžλ‹ˆλ‹€. 첫 번째 μ§ˆλ¬Έμ€ "검은 곰은 μ•„λ¦„λ‹΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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shiny coats." Question number two, "I love watching movies, I hate watching TV." Number
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털은 λ°˜μ§μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€." 두 번째 μ§ˆλ¬Έμ€ "λ‚˜λŠ” μ˜ν™” λ³΄λŠ” 것을 μ’‹μ•„ν•˜κ³  TV λ³΄λŠ” 것은 μ‹«μ–΄ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€."μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ„Έ
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three, "My friend, comma, a student at the University of Toronto, comma, lives on campus."
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번째, "λ‚΄ 친ꡬ 콀마, ν† λ‘ ν†  λŒ€ν•™κ΅ 학생, μ½€λ§ˆκ°€ μΊ νΌμŠ€μ— μ‚΄κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€."
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And number four, "I watched soccer yesterday, comma, it was boring." So take a second, look
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그리고 λ„€ 번째, "μ–΄μ œ 좕ꡬ λ΄€λŠ”λ°, 콀마, μ§€λ£¨ν–ˆμ–΄." κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‹ˆ μž μ‹œ μ‹œκ°„μ„ λ‚΄μ–΄
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at them, figure out which ones you think are correct and incorrect. So number one, this
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그것듀을 μ‚΄νŽ΄λ³΄κ³  μ–΄λ–€ 것이 옳고 κ·Έλ₯΄λ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•˜λŠ”μ§€ μ•Œμ•„λ‚΄μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€ . 첫째, 이
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sentence is incorrect. In this sentence, we have an example of a comma splice. So pretty
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λ¬Έμž₯은 ν‹€λ ΈμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이 λ¬Έμž₯μ—λŠ” 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€μ˜ μ˜ˆκ°€ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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much, just to give you some background, what a comma splice is, is when we have two sentences,
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μ•½κ°„μ˜ λ°°κ²½ 지식을 μ œκ³΅ν•˜κΈ° μœ„ν•΄ μ‰Όν‘œ μ—°κ²°μ΄λž€ 두 개의 λ¬Έμž₯이 μžˆλŠ” κ²½μš°μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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so each sentence has a subject and a verb, second part has a subject and a verb, and
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각 λ¬Έμž₯μ—λŠ” 주어와 동사가 있고, 두 번째 λΆ€λΆ„μ—λŠ” 주어와 동사가 μžˆλŠ”λ°, 두 λ¬Έμž₯을
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they're incorrectly put together with just a comma. So look at number two, "I love watching
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잘λͺ» μ‘°ν•©ν•œ κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλƒ₯ μ‰Όν‘œλ‘œ. 두 번째λ₯Ό λ³΄μ„Έμš”. "μ˜ν™” λ³΄λŠ” 건 μ’‹μ•„
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movies, comma, I hate watching TV." So in this case, again, we've made the same mistake.
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, μ‰Όν‘œ, TV λ³΄λŠ” 건 μ‹«μ–΄." 이 κ²½μš°μ—λ„ μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 같은 μ‹€μˆ˜λ₯Ό μ €μ§ˆλ €μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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So this sentence is incorrect. We have a complete sentence, "I love watching movies." If I put
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이 λ¬Έμž₯은 ν‹€λ ΈμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. "λ‚˜λŠ” μ˜ν™” λ³΄λŠ” 것을 μ’‹μ•„ν•΄."λΌλŠ” μ™„μ „ν•œ λ¬Έμž₯이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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a period here, it could stand alone. Second sentence, "I hate watching TV." It has a subject
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여기에 λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ₯Ό λ„£μœΌλ©΄ λ‹¨λ…μœΌλ‘œ μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 두 번째 λ¬Έμž₯, "λ‚˜λŠ” TV λ³΄λŠ” 것이 μ‹«μ–΄." μ£Όμ–΄
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and a verb, it's a sentence, but we've just put a comma between them, they're incorrectly
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와 동사가 있고 λ¬Έμž₯μ΄μ§€λ§Œ κ·Έ 사이에 μ‰Όν‘œλ₯Ό λ„£μ—ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 잘λͺ»
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combined. Number three, "My friend, comma, a student at the University of Toronto, comma,
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κ²°ν•©λœ κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ„Έ 번째, "λ‚΄ 친ꡬ 콀마, ν† λ‘ ν†  λŒ€ν•™κ΅ 학생, μ½€λ§ˆκ°€
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lives on campus." This sentence is actually correct. So this one, you can give a big check
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μΊ νΌμŠ€μ— μ‚΄κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€." 이 λ¬Έμž₯은 사싀 λ§žμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이것은 큰 확인 ν‘œμ‹œλ₯Ό ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
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mark. We're not making a comma splice mistake. We don't have two separate sentences in here
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. μš°λ¦¬λŠ” μ‰Όν‘œ μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€ μ‹€μˆ˜λ₯Ό 저지λ₯΄κ³  μžˆλŠ” 것이 μ•„λ‹™λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ—¬κΈ°μ—λŠ” μ‰Όν‘œλ‘œ κ²°ν•©λœ 두 개의 κ°œλ³„ λ¬Έμž₯이 μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
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combined with a comma. Finally, number four, "I watched soccer yesterday, comma, it was
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. λ§ˆμ§€λ§‰μœΌλ‘œ 4λ²ˆμ€ "μ–΄μ œ 좕ꡬ λ΄€λŠ”λ°, μ‰Όν‘œ,
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boring." Do you think this is a case of a comma splice? Well, if you look at it, you
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μž¬λ―Έμ—†λ”λΌ." 이것이 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€μ˜ 경우라고 μƒκ°ν•˜μ‹­λ‹ˆκΉŒ ? κΈ€μŽ„, 당신이 그것을 λ³Έλ‹€λ©΄, 당신은
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have the subject, "I", the verb in the first sentence. In the second sentence, you have
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첫 번째 λ¬Έμž₯의 동사인 μ£Όμ–΄ "I"λ₯Ό 가지고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€ . 두 번째 λ¬Έμž₯μ—λŠ” 주어인
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"it", which is a subject, and a verb. So again, you have two separate sentences that have
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"it"κ³Ό 동사가 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‹€μ‹œ λ§ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ,
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just been combined with a comma. Now, comma splices are some of the most common mistakes
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방금 μ‰Όν‘œλ‘œ κ²°ν•©λœ 두 개의 별도 λ¬Έμž₯이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 자, 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λŠ”
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I see in writing, both with ESL students and with native speakers. They're very easy to
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μ œκ°€ 글을 μ“Έ λ•Œ ESL 학생과 원어민 λͺ¨λ‘μ—κ²Œ λ³΄μ΄λŠ” κ°€μž₯ ν”ν•œ μ‹€μˆ˜ 쀑 μΌλΆ€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€ . 그듀은 λ§Œλ“€κΈ°κ°€ 맀우 μ‰½μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
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make. Students often, they don't recognize them. They know they're a mistake, but in
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. 학생듀은 μ’…μ’… 그듀을 μΈμ‹ν•˜μ§€ λͺ»ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€ . 그듀은 μžμ‹ μ΄ μ‹€μˆ˜λΌλŠ” 것을 μ•Œμ§€λ§Œ,
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their own writing, they just don't see them. And so it's important when you do any piece
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μžμ‹ μ˜ κΈ€μ—μ„œλŠ” 그것을 보지 λͺ»ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ
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of writing, double check. Make sure you're not making this type of mistake.
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글을 μ“Έ λ•Œ λ‹€μ‹œ ν•œ 번 ν™•μΈν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이런 μ’…λ₯˜μ˜ μ‹€μˆ˜λ₯Ό ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šλ„λ‘ ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.
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So in this video, we're going to talk about four different ways to fix a comma splice.
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이 λΉ„λ””μ˜€μ—μ„œλŠ” 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λ₯Ό κ³ μΉ˜λŠ” λ„€ 가지 λ‹€λ₯Έ 방법에 λŒ€ν•΄ 이야기할 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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Okay? Now, the very first way is very simple. So like I said, a comma splice is when you
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μ’‹μ•„μš”? 이제 첫 번째 방법은 맀우 κ°„λ‹¨ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ œκ°€ λ§ν–ˆλ“―μ΄ 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λŠ”
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put two sentences together with just a comma. So because we have two sentences, the simplest
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μ‰Όν‘œ ν•˜λ‚˜λ§ŒμœΌλ‘œ 두 λ¬Έμž₯을 μ—°κ²°ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 두 개의 λ¬Έμž₯이 있기 λ•Œλ¬Έμ— 이것을 λ°”λ‘œμž‘κΈ° μœ„ν•΄ κ°€μž₯ κ°„λ‹¨ν•œ
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thing to do, if I want to make this correct, is turn this comma into a period, and then
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일은 이 μ‰Όν‘œλ₯Ό λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ‘œ λ°”κΎΈκ³ 
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just make "they" a capital. So now the sentence becomes, "Black bears are beautiful. They
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"they"λ₯Ό λŒ€λ¬Έμžλ‘œ λ§Œλ“œλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이제 λ¬Έμž₯은 "검은 곰은 아름닡닀. 그듀은
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have shiny coats." They're two separate sentences. This is the easiest way to correct a comma
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λ°˜μ§μ΄λŠ” 털을 가지고 μžˆλ‹€." 그것듀은 두 개의 λ³„κ°œμ˜ λ¬Έμž₯μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이것은 μ‰Όν‘œ μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λ₯Ό μˆ˜μ •ν•˜λŠ” κ°€μž₯ μ‰¬μš΄ λ°©λ²•μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€
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splice.
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.
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Another alternative is using a coordinating conjunction. So what are coordinating conjunctions
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또 λ‹€λ₯Έ λŒ€μ•ˆμ€ λ“±μœ„ 접속사λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€ . κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‹€μ‹œ λ“±μœ„ μ ‘μ†μ‚¬λŠ” λ¬΄μ—‡μž…λ‹ˆκΉŒ
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again? These are what are known as "FANBOYS". So "FAN" stands for "for", "and", "nor", "but",
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? 이듀은 "FANBOYS"둜 μ•Œλ €μ§„ κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "FAN"은 "for", "and", "nor", "but", "
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"or", "yet", and "so". These are what are known as coordinating conjunctions. You can
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or", "yet", "so"λ₯Ό μ˜λ―Έν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이듀은 μ‘°μ • μ ‘μ†μ‚¬λ‘œ μ•Œλ €μ§„ κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 당신은
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remember them, "FANBOYS". If you use one of these -- and remember, it has to make sense
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그듀을 κΈ°μ–΅ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€, "FANBOYS". 이 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš© ν•˜κ³  κΈ°μ–΅ν•œλ‹€λ©΄
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in the context of the sentence. This is another way to deal with comma splices.
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λ¬Έμž₯의 λ§₯λ½μ—μ„œ μ˜λ―Έκ°€ μžˆμ–΄μ•Ό ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이것은 μ‰Όν‘œ μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λ₯Ό μ²˜λ¦¬ν•˜λŠ” 또 λ‹€λ₯Έ λ°©λ²•μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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So if I look at the sentence, "I love watching movies. I hate watching TVs." I can choose
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "λ‚˜λŠ” μ˜ν™” λ³΄λŠ” 것을 μ’‹μ•„ν•œλ‹€ . λ‚˜λŠ” TVλ₯Ό λ³΄λŠ” 것을 μ‹«μ–΄ν•œλ‹€."λΌλŠ” λ¬Έμž₯을 보면.
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a "FANBOY". "I love watching movies, but I hate watching TV." And it's important to notice
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"FANBOY"λ₯Ό 선택할 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. "λ‚˜λŠ” μ˜ν™” λ³΄λŠ” 것을 μ’‹μ•„ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ TV λ³΄λŠ” 것은 μ‹«μ–΄ν•œλ‹€." 그리고
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the comma stays. We don't remove the comma when we're using these "FANBOYS". So that's
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μ‰Όν‘œκ°€ λ¨Έλ¬΄λŠ” 것을 μ•Œμ•„μ°¨λ¦¬λŠ” 것이 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μš°λ¦¬λŠ” μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ "FANBOYS"λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•  λ•Œ μ‰Όν‘œλ₯Ό μ œκ±°ν•˜μ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이것이
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the second way we can correct a comma splice. Like I said, number three was correct. There's
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콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λ₯Ό μˆ˜μ •ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” 두 번째 λ°©λ²•μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‚΄κ°€ λ§ν–ˆλ“―μ΄ μ„Έ λ²ˆμ§Έκ°€ μ •ν™•ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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nothing we have to do with that one.
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μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 그것과 아무 관련이 μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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A third way to correct a comma splice is to use what's known as a "semicolon". So a semicolon
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μ‰Όν‘œ μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λ₯Ό μˆ˜μ •ν•˜λŠ” μ„Έ 번째 방법은 "μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ "을 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ μ€ μ΄λ ‡κ²Œ
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is a piece of punctuation that looks like this. So it has a dot at the top and a comma
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생긴 κ΅¬λ‘μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€ . λ”°λΌμ„œ 상단에 점이 있고
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at the bottom. So we use semicolons when we have an idea, and we add to that idea with
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ν•˜λ‹¨μ— μ‰Όν‘œκ°€ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ”°λΌμ„œ μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 아이디어가 μžˆμ„ λ•Œ μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ μ„ μ‚¬μš© ν•˜κ³  κ·Έ 아이디어에
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a further linked idea. So for example, "Black bears are beautiful. They have shiny coats."
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더 μ—°κ²°λœ 아이디어λ₯Ό μΆ”κ°€ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 예λ₯Ό λ“€μ–΄, "검은 곰은 μ•„λ¦„λ‹΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 그듀은 λ°˜μ§μ΄λŠ” 털을 가지고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€."
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Now, this idea about shiny coats, it might be linked to the reason why they're beautiful.
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λ°˜μ§μ΄λŠ” μ½”νŠΈμ— λŒ€ν•œ 생각은 μ½”νŠΈκ°€ μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ μ΄μœ μ™€ 연결될 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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So if this is sort of an added idea, we can use a semicolon. So, "Black bears are beautiful."
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λ”°λΌμ„œ 이것이 μΌμ’…μ˜ μΆ”κ°€ 아이디어라면 μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ μ„ μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€ . κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "흑곰은 아름닡닀."
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Semicolon. And you don't need a capital after a semicolon. So it can go back to being a
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μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ . 그리고 μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘  λ‹€μŒμ— λŒ€λ¬Έμžκ°€ ν•„μš”ν•˜μ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€ . κ·Έλž˜μ„œ μ†Œλ¬Έμžλ‘œ λŒμ•„κ°ˆ 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
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small letter. "They have shiny coats." So this is the third way to correct a comma splice
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. "그듀은 λΉ›λ‚˜λŠ” μ½”νŠΈλ₯Ό 가지고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€." 이것이 μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ μ„ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ—¬ 콀마 μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€λ₯Ό μˆ˜μ •ν•˜λŠ” μ„Έ 번째 λ°©λ²•μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€
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using a semicolon.
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The final way is to use dependent clauses, transitions for dependent clauses. Now, I
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λ§ˆμ§€λ§‰ 방법은 μ’…μ†μ ˆ, μ’…μ†μ ˆμ— λŒ€ν•œ μ „ν™˜μ„ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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know that sounds a little bit complicated, but when you see what I mean, it's very easy.
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쑰금 λ³΅μž‘ν•˜κ²Œ λ“€λ¦°λ‹€λŠ” 것을 μ••λ‹ˆλ‹€. ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ μ œκ°€ μ˜λ―Έν•˜λŠ” λ°”λ₯Ό μ•Œλ©΄ 맀우 μ‰½μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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We can use words -- use this example -- like "because", "since", "when", "if". These words
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"μ™œλƒν•˜λ©΄", "이후", "μ–Έμ œ", "λ§Œμ•½"κ³Ό 같은 단어λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이 단어듀은
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help the sentence to become two sentences -- sorry, an independent clause and a dependent
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λ¬Έμž₯이 λ…λ¦½μ ˆκ³Ό μ’…μ†μ ˆμ˜ 두 λ¬Έμž₯이 λ˜λ„λ‘ λ„μ™€μ€λ‹ˆλ‹€
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clause. So now, "Black bears are beautiful because" -- and we also need "they" -- "they
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. 이제 "검은 곰이 μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ μ΄μœ λŠ”" -- 그리고 μš°λ¦¬λŠ” "κ·Έλ“€"도 ν•„μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€ -- "그듀은
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have shiny coats." "Black bears are beautiful since they have shiny coats." "Black bears
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λ°˜μ§μ΄λŠ” 털을 가지고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€." "흑곰은 λ°˜μ§μ΄λŠ” 털을 가지고 μžˆμ–΄μ„œ μ•„λ¦„λ‹΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€." "검은 곰은
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are beautiful when they have shiny coats." "Black bears are beautiful if they have shiny
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λ°˜μ§μ΄λŠ” 털을 가지고 μžˆμ„ λ•Œ μ•„λ¦„λ‹΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€." "흑곰은 윀기 λ‚˜λŠ” 털을 가지고 있으면 μ•„λ¦„λ‹΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
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coats." And again, with "because", "since", "when", "if", you don't need a comma. So whereas
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." 그리고 λ‹€μ‹œ "λ•Œλ¬Έμ—", " 이후", "μ–Έμ œ", "만일"μ—λŠ” μ‰Όν‘œκ°€ ν•„μš”ν•˜μ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ”°λΌμ„œ
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for the fanboys, for "for", "and", "nor", "but", or "yet", "so", you need a comma here.
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팬보이의 경우 "for", "and", "nor", " but" λ˜λŠ” "yet", "so"μ—λŠ” μ‰Όν‘œκ°€ ν•„μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
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For "because", "since", "when", "if", we don't use a comma. So again, four ways to deal with
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"because", "since", "when", "if"μ—λŠ” μ‰Όν‘œλ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‹€μ‹œ λ§ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, μ‰Όν‘œ 연결을 μ²˜λ¦¬ν•˜λŠ” λ„€ 가지 방법은
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comma splices -- period, semicolon, one of our fanboys, or making the second part of
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λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œ, μ„Έλ―Έμ½œλ‘ , 팬보이 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜ λ˜λŠ” λ¬Έμž₯의 두 번째 뢀뢄을 μ’…μ†μ ˆ
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the sentence into a dependent clause. So "because", "since", "when", "if".
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둜 λ§Œλ“œλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "λ•Œλ¬Έμ—", "이후", "μ–Έμ œ", "λ§Œμ•½".
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Thank you for watching this video. For more practice with comma splices, please feel free
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이 λΉ„λ””μ˜€λ₯Ό μ‹œμ²­ν•΄ μ£Όμ…”μ„œ κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‰Όν‘œ μŠ€ν”ŒλΌμ΄μŠ€μ— λŒ€ν•œ 더 λ§Žμ€ μ—°μŠ΅μ„ μ›ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄
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to visit us at www.engvid.com, where you can do our test on this. Take care until next
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www.engvid.com을 λ°©λ¬Έν•˜μ—¬ 이에 λŒ€ν•œ ν…ŒμŠ€νŠΈλ₯Ό ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‹€μŒ μ‹œκ°„κΉŒμ§€ μ‘°μ‹¬ν•˜μ„Έμš”
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