My TOP 5 Writing Tips (for all levels)

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Hello.
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My name is Emma, and in today's video I am going to teach you some great writing tips.
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These tips are for both academic writing and non-academic writing.
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Okay?
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So it's for writing in general.
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Now, this video is going to be in two parts, because I have so many tips, so I'm going
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to give five tips in this video and five tips in the next video.
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Okay, so let's get started.
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So, there are so many different ways...
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Or so many different types of writing we do in our lives; we write emails, we write essays
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if we're a student, we might write a Facebook post, or we might write a resume or a cover letter.
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So it's very important to develop your writing skills because you will be writing throughout
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your life a lot.
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So let's look at my first tip.
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My first tip is: It's very important to think about the genre of what you're writing.
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"Genre" is a very fancy word that pretty much means type.
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So, a genre of writing might be an essay, or it might be a cover letter, or an email,
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or a tweet.
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These are all different genres, and each one of these has a different expectation on what
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you should include and how you should write it.
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So it's very important, first step is: Know the genre or know the type, and know what
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is expected of you.
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Also important in this is knowing your audience, or thinking about your audience.
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So, for example, if you write an email, the language you're going to use and the way you're
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going to write will be different if you write an email to your friend versus an email to
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your boss.
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So it's important to think about: "Who are you writing to?" because this is going to
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help you decide what to write and how to write it.
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Same with, you know, if you are on Twitter and you write a tweet, or on Facebook a Facebook
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post, you know, it's important to think about your audience.
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You know, are you writing this post for friends to see, or is this a post your boss might
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see, or members of the public?
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You know, and that could be a problem.
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So it's important to think about, especially with this and on other social media, too:
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Audience.
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Who will see this and what will they think about it, and what are their expectations?
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You know, some people work for companies where they're responsible for social media, so it's
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important, too, the type of wording they use when they're writing on Facebook.
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If you work at a company and you're writing for your company, it's going to be different
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than if you're writing for your friends.
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Same with an essay.
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An essay has a certain structure, you know, it's supposed to be a certain amount of pages,
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it has a certain organization to it, and so knowing what's expected of you when you write
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an essay will help you because it's going to be very different than, for example, a
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Facebook post.
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Same with in business, business reports.
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Understanding the format of a business report is important if this is something you're going
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to be writing, and thinking about your audience.
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Same with executive summaries, which is a type of thing businesspeople write.
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If you're not in business you might not ever write one of these, but if you are in business
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you need to realize that audience is important because professionals are going to be reading
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this, and these people are busy, so, you know, knowing your audience and knowing what is
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expected of you is the very first step to good writing.
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Let's look at some other tips.
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Okay, so we've talked about genre or the type of writing you're doing, and part of this
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is knowing the expectations for how long what you write should be.
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Okay?
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So you want to know a bit about length expectations before you start writing.
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This is really important, especially in university where you often have a number of pages you're
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allowed to write.
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It's important, you know, in the workplace because sometimes, you know, you can't write a lot.
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And it's important, you know, on Twitter because you have a certain number of characters you
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can use.
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So length is very important because that's going to help you decide what to include in
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your writing.
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Okay, so let's look at this a bit more.
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When I was younger I used to think long, meaning a lot of writing, was always better, but this
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is not the case.
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You know, the more you write, maybe you can include more detail, but a lot of the times
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the person or your audience who's reading what you write does not have a lot of time,
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and so they don't want to read long pieces of work.
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Okay?
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So it's important to know expectations.
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So, for example, I have here the word "short" and "long", and so this is kind of like the
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scale.
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If you write a tweet it's going to be something short; a Facebook post might be a little bit
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longer; a paragraph, you might write something like five sentences if in school you have
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to write a paragraph on something; an email might be a little bit longer than this; a
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cover letter you might use a full page; a resume maybe you might use two pages but nothing
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more; and then you might write an essay which might be 5 pages, 10 pages, depending; and
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then maybe a report which might be 50 pages-who knows?-depending on what's expected.
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So my main point here is that different types of writing have different expectations with
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length, and it's really important to follow those expectations.
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For students who are writing the TOEFL or the IELTS, you only can use a certain number
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of words, so this is very important for you to know and to really think about.
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How are you going to get your message across using the right amount of words?
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This is a key word we often talk about in good writing, and that's "concise".
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So when you are concise, it means you say something with as few words as possible, but
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still getting the meaning across.
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So you are communicating your idea, but you're doing it in a short way, as short as you can
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while still keeping the idea there.
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So, in different cultures you have different rules about this.
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In some cultures longer is better.
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In English-speaking cultures usually we really want to get to the point, so we want something to be...
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We want to communicate our idea, but we want it to be in a concise way, so using our words
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very carefully so we don't use too many words.
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So main point here: Know how long something you're writing should be, and paying attention
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to this when you write.
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All right?
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Now let's look at my next tip.
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Okay, so my third point might be one of the most important points in this lesson, and
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that is: When you write something, very important to plan or to think about what you will say
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before you write it.
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This is something a lot of people don't do because they're busy, they feel like they
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don't have a lot of time, or you know, they just don't have any ideas.
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And the thing is, though, that this will really help improve your writing.
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Okay?
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And it doesn't matter what you're writing; planning out an email can be important, just
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like planning out an essay can be important.
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So let's think about some ways we can plan out what we want to write.
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There are...
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There are different ways to do this.
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Some people like to make a plan by brainstorming.
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So, for example, imagine you were writing a paragraph about cats, so you might have
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your subject or your key idea here, and then you might think about: "Okay, what's something
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about cats?
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Hmm.
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They make great pets", and then you might write some stuff about that.
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Maybe they're quiet, so they make a good pet.
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They're cheap.
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Okay?
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And so the thing is just getting out your ideas.
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Okay?
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And then you can organize your ideas better.
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Or maybe, you know, you're thinking: "Okay, cats, they eat food.
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What kind of food do they eat?"
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So you can do the same thing with reports.
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You can think about: "Okay, what's the main ideas that I need to talk about in this report?"
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You know, where you just kind of brainstorm in advance.
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I usually do that when I write reports, and I find it very helpful actually, just to get
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my ideas down on paper, and then I organize them.
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So, this is one method.
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Another thing you can do is you can just write down everything, just like this, with a dash.
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So, for example, if I was writing about cats in a paragraph, I might just start thinking...
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Writing anything I think: "Quiet, cute, Grumpy Cat", okay?
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And I might just write down all the ideas I have.
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Now, of course, you're probably not writing an essay or a paragraph on cats; you're probably
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writing something very different, but the idea is the same.
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Okay?
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The idea being it's important to plan, and these are different, great ways to get out
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your ideas, and to think about them before you actually write.
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Sometimes if you're writing an essay you might think in advance about your thesis or what your...
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The main topic and the main argument of your essay is going to be.
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So, for example, cats are better than dogs.
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Maybe that's something I want to argue in an essay.
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And then I might organize based on ideas, so I might write, you know, my first main
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idea: "They're cleaner", and then I might put some details about that.
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My second main idea is that they're great for apartments, and then I might write some
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examples or some reasons why.
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So, my main point is all of these can work.
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Find what's...
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What helps you in terms of planning.
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There's many different ways to plan what you're going to write, but the most important thing
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is to plan and to take some time to think about what you want to say in advance, because
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it will really help your writing.
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And it's very obvious when somebody hasn't planned what they're going to write, because
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everything's disorganized and it's hard to follow.
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Planning makes it easier for the audience to understand you.
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Now let's look at another tip for how to write better.
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Okay, so remember I said that it's very important to think about the type of writing you're
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doing, and your audience or who's going to read it?
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One of the reasons why this is important is because depending on the type of writing,
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you're going to write either in a formal way or an informal way.
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Okay?
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And I'll explain why this is important to know and how it affects your writing.
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So first let's talk about what that means.
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Well, when you write something formally, this means that we choose certain words and certain
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types of sentences, and we write a certain way, and we write this way because our audience
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or the people who are going to read this are usually people from work so we want to be
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professional, so we write formally when we're being professional.
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We might write this way to strangers or customers.
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Okay?
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If we work somewhere and we need to write an email, we might use this type of language,
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formal language.
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And we also use formal language in high school, in university, in college when we're writing
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for an assignment or for our homework, or something that our teacher or professor will
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read.
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Okay?
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So we use formal writing mainly in work settings and in academic or school settings.
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Now, this is different from informal writing.
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Informal writing is the type of writing you will be doing with your friends, so maybe
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for example a text message, that's informal; you might use this type of writing when you're
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talking to children or writing something for children; and also on social media, so if
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you write a tweet or a Facebook post, usually you'll be using informal language; and also
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with your family, too, you usually use informal language.
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So, I have here some examples of genres or types of writing that you might use the formal
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version or the informal version.
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So, under formal we have essays, if you do that at university or high school, it would
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be formal; a cover letter, if you want to get a job and you have to write a cover letter
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then this is going to be formal language you use; a report, if you work at a company and
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you have to write reports, you'll be using formal language; or emails to customers you'll
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be using formal language.
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And there's a lot more; this is just some examples.
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For informal, if you write a postcard to your family you'll be using informal language;
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a text message would be informal; an email to your friend you would use informal language;
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or maybe a birthday card.
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Okay?
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So it's important to think in advance what kind of language you're going to use.
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Okay, so how can we make something formal or informal with our language?
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There's a couple of ways to do this.
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The first thing you need to think about is the words you're going to use or your vocabulary.
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So, different words either fit into the formal category or informal category.
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So, for example, if we were talking about a lot of something and we want to be informal,
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we might use the word "lots".
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So this is an example of an informal word: "lots"; we'd use this with our friends.
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If we want to be a bit more formal, we're writing, you know, at the university level,
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we might use the word "many"; this word is formal, whereas "lots" is more informal.
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Okay?
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Or same with if we're writing an email and at the very end of the email we sign our name,
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we usually say something like "From", but we don't use the word "From".
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We can say "Cheers" if we're writing an email, we can say, you know: "Cheers.
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Emma", this would be informal.
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Or if, you know, we're in a business and we need to be more serious and formal, we might
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say something like: "Regards" or "Kind regards".
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Same with different words, like: "Sorry".
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"Sorry" is a little bit more informal, whereas the word "apologize" is more formal.
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So, it's very important when you're choosing your words because a lot of words fit either
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into this category or this category, and some words fit into both.
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It's good to know the level of formality for the words you're using.
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Now, if you're having a lot of trouble with this and you're thinking: "How am I going
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to know if the word is formal or informal?"
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There's a quick tip you can try; it doesn't always work, but in general, longer words
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in English are often more formal.
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So, the longer words are usually in this category.
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It's not always the case, but just if you really don't know, it's a good way to guess.
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And they're usually...
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They come from Latin.
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So, for anyone who's watching who's from France, from Spain, or South America, or Italy, or
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who speaks a Latin-based language, if you have a word that's similar in your language,
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it probably is a formal word in English or it's probably something you can use in a formal setting. Okay?
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So usually the shorter words are the more informal words.
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So now let's look at some other ways we can look at formality; formal versus informal.
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Okay, so when we're talking about formal and informal writing, another thing to think about
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is contractions.
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So, what's a contraction?
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A contraction is a short form of a pronoun, like: "I", "you", "he", "she", "we"; and usually
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part of a verb, like: "am", "would", "will".
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So, the short form is, in this example: "I am" becomes "I'm".
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"I'm" is a contraction.
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Or: "you would" can become "you'd", and that's a contraction.
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"We will" becomes "we'll" for short, and that's a contraction.
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So, contractions have an apostrophe here, and it's where some of the parts of this word
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we just remove and so it becomes "will".
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So, these contractions, and there's many in English, we use them in informal writing.
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So if you're texting someone, if you're writing an email to a friend - this will make you
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sound more informal.
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Now, compare this to if you're writing an essay or a thesis at university, or you're
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writing a report - we don't want to use contractions because these are informal.
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So, if we're writing something formal, we would use something more like this; we do
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not use contractions for formal writing.
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Okay?
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So that's another reason why we need to know what we're writing in advance, because we
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want to decide if we'll use contractions or not.
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My next point is about sentence types and sentence lengths.
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When we're talking about formal versus informal, you'll find things that are usually informal
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are short.
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We usually use shorter sentences.
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And in formal writing, you'll find sentences tends to be longer. Okay?
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So, we can call this...
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For informal we can talk about simple sentences, for example, a simple sentence: "Students
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are stressed."
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It's a short sentence that if you know about clauses, it only has one clause; if you don't
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know about clauses, don't worry.
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The point is it's shorter.
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Now, compare this to something more complex.
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"When a student begins university, they often report feeling stressed."
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This is more of a complex sentence, it's longer, and you'll notice there's a comma in the middle
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of it breaking it up into two clauses; and again, if you don't understand clauses, that's
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okay.
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The main point here is this, complex or longer is usually in formal writing, whereas simple
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structures or simple sentences are more informal.
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And again, you know, it's not always the case, but in general you'll find longer sentences
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or more complex sentences are more formal.
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You'll also find informal writing we use relative clauses more.
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So, if you don't know what a relative clause is, that's okay.
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These are, for example, they use the word: "who", "which", "that", "when" within the
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sentence.
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So, an example of a relative clause would be: "Jane Goodall, who works with chimpanzees,
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is a wonderful woman."
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So, if you don't know about relative clauses, I recommend looking this up.
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In this video we don't have enough time to talk about them, but they can really help
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your writing, especially if you're writing something in a formal situation.
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All right, now let's look at some more tips on how to improve our writing.
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Okay, so the last thing I'm going to say about formal writing versus informal writing, and
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I'm talking a lot about this because it's actually a very important part of writing,
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is I'm going to talk a little bit about slang, swear words, exaggeration words, and text
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words, and when to use them.
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So, slang, it's words we use with our friends, words like: "cool", I was going to say "groovy"
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but nobody says that anymore, so, you know, there's all sorts of different types of slang.
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It's a word that's very popular or an expression that's popular, but it's not a formal expression.
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So, "cool" is a really good one, or "awesome": "That's awesome".
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So, slang we use informally.
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Same with swear words.
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Okay?
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So if you say a bad word, you know, sometimes you might say something to your friend, you
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might use different swear words when you talk to your friends, hopefully not with strangers,
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but with people you know well, but you would not use swear words in a formal writing situation.
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So maybe you might use it in a text, but you wouldn't use it in a formal writing situation.
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Also exaggeration words.
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What's an exaggeration word?
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"Very" is a good example.
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"He is very funny", "She is very pretty", "He is really handsome", "He's totally hot",
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okay?
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So these types of words: "very", "really", "totally", we usually save these for informal
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writing.
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So if you're in university and you want to say something is "very", don't use the word
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"very"; there are better words, like, you know...
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There are a lot of other words you can use as opposed to these ones.
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Another thing I wanted to say is there's a lot of words we use now, they're short forms
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of words, like, for example: "lol" for "laugh out loud", "b4" for "before", "LMAO" for "laugh
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my ass off", these are words we use informally.
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Okay?
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We do not use these in formal writing, so it's important in formal writing to always
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spell out the word correctly, to use proper spelling, and to avoid some of these words
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you might be seeing a lot on the internet or in text messaging or on Facebook.
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Okay, so we've covered about formal and informal writing.
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My last tip for this video is about the importance of using variety in what you're writing.
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So what do I mean by "variety"?
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Well, sometimes when people write, they have certain words that they use again and again
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and again, and so there's not a lot of variety in their choice of words.
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Or you might have somebody else who uses the same sentence structure; maybe they learned
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the present perfect and they love the present perfect because it took them forever to learn
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it, so now they use the present perfect in each sentence.
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So this is not good because we really want variety in what we write, because we want
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it to be interesting.
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If you use something too much, it makes what you're writing look boring.
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So, let's look at an example.
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I have here a sentence: "Sales have increased.
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They have increased for many reasons.
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The increase is because people increasingly like spending money."
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Can you tell me: Which word did I use too much?
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If you said "increase", you're correct.
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I used it one, two, three, four.
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Okay, so that's too much in a piece of writing.
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There are a lot of other words we could be using instead of "increase".
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We could be using, you know: "go up", "rise".
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There are a lot of other words.
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And if you're not sure of another word for "increase", a good idea is to check a thesaurus.
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There are a lot of online thesauruses that can help you add variety to your word choice.
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So if you make this kind of mistake where you reuse the same word again and again and
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again, try to learn some other words that have the same meaning.
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This will really help your writing and make it more interesting.
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The other thing I wanted to say is that we just talked about how you want variety in
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words.
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You also want variety in sentence types.
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So you want to make sure that, you know, sometimes you use long sentences, and sometimes you
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use short sentence, sometimes you use, you know, maybe words like: "although", "when",
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"despite", "in spite of", and sometimes you might have something a bit simpler.
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So instead of reusing the same sentence type and the same sentence structure, try to use
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different tenses and different structures in the sentences you write.
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Yeah, so different tenses and try to have different sentence lengths.
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That will make your writing more interesting.
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So, thank you for watching this video.
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I know we covered a lot today, and I have a lot more writing tips coming soon.
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So, we've covered a lot and there's a lot of things you can practice, so I invite you
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to come visit our website at www.engvid.com, and there, you can practice what you've learned today.
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I also invite you to subscribe to my channel; there, you will find a whole bunch of other
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resources on different grammar points, you know, especially if you're interested in how
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to add variety, different videos on vocabulary, on writing, on pronunciation, and all sorts
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of other topics.
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So I invite you to check that out.
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Thank you for watching; and until next time, take care.
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