8 WAYS TO IMPROVE YOUR WRITTEN ENGLISH

220,170 views ・ 2018-04-23

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Hey guys welcome to my channel in this video
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I'm gonna give you eight tips on how to write emails and essays and letters
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Like an American so if you're willing to improve your writing, please continue watching this video
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Back to San Francisco that might change
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This number one be direct again American people are very relaxed when I was dealing a lot with British people
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I noticed that their email would be like that but the whole point can be minimized to two or three sentences your goal is to
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Talk about what you want to talk in two or three sentences in an email and again be relaxed
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Relax
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It doesn't matter if you ask how are you or are you doing people?
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Don't really do that in emails and I was surprised with my investor is fly to me
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They say hey marina when I first saw this I'm like really to use hey in a formal email
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But it turns out that yes, Americans are so relaxed they even use hey informal emails. They use a lot of contractions
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they use of a lot of idioms self be prepared to write like an American and
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Another advice have a really clear call to action. This is called CTA. What are you asking for?
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What is the purpose of this email make sure that the person gets it right away when you are writing in American English?
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Make sure you're using active voice instead of using passive voice passive voice is when I say
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Baybridge was built by an American government. This is a phrase
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I would use if I'm doing a tour of San Francisco
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But if I'm writing an email I would use active voice the American government
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Instructed the builders to build the bay bridge for example tip number three and this can relate to your
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Spoken English as well, please please. Please do not over explain. Hey, don't explain it
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Just clarify if you feel that you're asking a question
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don't give people answers just ask that question if you feel that you cannot explain a
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phenomena without coming up with 50 examples then maybe your description of the phenomena is wrong so
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as concise as you can
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Tip number four when you're writing a formal email or an essay please refrain from writing there is of there are for example
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There are a lot of students in San Francisco basically there are
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Here is just a filler word because you don't have to use it students come to study in San Francisco
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That's a much better written sentence refrain from using Paris and there are serious
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Tip number five some more words that you should refrain from using and these words really very so and a lot
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I'll give you a couple of examples
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She's really beautiful
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instead of she's gorgeous gorgeous
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What sounds more American to you where she's gorgeous try to use words that are strong in their meaning instead of using really very?
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So etc next tip is using
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Strong verb and by strong verbs I mean a verb that can it comprises a verb and a noun
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and I will give you a list below this video an
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Example is to give definition
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Is a lot of words, but you can just say to define again?
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You're just
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Comprising everything in just one word and this is called a strong verb so if you want to sound more American
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And if you want your written speech to be really
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Use this from the burbs if you can say that somebody was better in competition. You can just say he dominated the competition
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Instead of saying he was better
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Or if something became bigger you can say it expanded by the way guys if you're writing an essay right now
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Or if you're raising money in America
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Or if you if you're trying to get into American University and doing a lot of writing
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I would really recommend fluent dot Express
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This is an app that my team, and I develop fluent Express you go there
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You upload your text in English and you get instant correction by native speakers?
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Who would make sure that you sound as American as you can we're going to take care of all your grammar and?
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Stylistic mistakes so that native speakers wouldn't tell the year from a foreign country
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Tip number seven sometimes I look at my email
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And I realize that every single sentence starts with I I am writing to ask you for this
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I wanted to update you on my pro
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I am writing to update you on my progress
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I was wondering if you could I
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Wanted to tell you and this is just III bow looks so weird so the solution that I came up with for myself is
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Introducing bullet points here on my update, and I just go in bullets
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I don't have to start every sentence or over and over again introduce bullet points and make sure you are
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Double checking your email double-checking your essay and look for those smaller things like when you start every sentence which I?
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Another very important aspect is how you finish your email in America
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we usually put kind regards best regards to talk to you soon comma
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marina McGill Co also another cool tip if you want to impress somebody for example if you're reaching out to a
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university and you're asking for
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Financially you want to mention something that would make them interested in you so for example what I've done
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There was an article about me like making moves in tech in my email signature
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I gave a link to that article and I wrote
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In regards Marina McGill Co one of the 16 email powders making moves in tech you can do the same
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I always link to my YouTube channels for example if you have any articles published that you published or have been published about use you
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Can mention them in your signature?
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If you're writing an informal email in America
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Or if you're texting an American or maybe you follow American vloggers and Instagram
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American people use a lot of contractions in their written English and now we're gonna learn the most popular ones I
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DK. I don't know
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Lol laughing out loud you can write lol with something's really funny
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OMG. Oh my god. This is something is really exciting or really surprising. Oh
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BRB be right back when you want somebody to wait for you for a moment
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Wi d what are you doing if you want to make last-minute plans and asking your friends?
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What is he doing right now, and if he is able to join you for something LMK. Let me know
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bTW by the way
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bTW of my name is TV a
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Asked me anything, and this is something when you're like doing a video answer your questions
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I can tell you AMA in comments below, and I will answer your questions in the next video Q&A is not an acronym
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But it's common to use n instead of aunt Q&A question and answers
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And this is a part of you know a formal conference when you can ask a speaker a question FAQ
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I know it sounds a little funny
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But this is frequently asked questions the section of the website where you give answers to the commonly asked questions
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TV and to be honest be honest s MH
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Shaking my head. This is international of I'm not approving that s mhm
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BFF best friends forever
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GF
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girlfriend
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boyfriend
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IMHO, I've seen a lot of those and recently found out the meaning in my humble opinion this means that in my opinion you don't
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Have to consider that so in my humble opinion, okay, Kimi
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IMHO and BD no big deal no problem. It's no big deal and BD
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TL DR. I've seen a lot of those on Facebook so for example if you're writing a really long post and
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Do you think that a lot of your followers don't have that much attention you want to give them like a short description?
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Too long didn't read. This is the exact meaning of this four letters if you're writing a long text
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You will give a couple of sentences at the beginning of it with a short description, and you would read TL DR
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IRL in real life, why would you guys actually meet IRL?
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xoxo kiss hug kiss hugs
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BYOB, this is so American bring your own beer when you organize the body you can ask your friends to bring drinks because you would
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Not be providing them
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DIY do it yourself
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No
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DIY do it yourself DM. This is direct message you can DM me on Instagram direct message be
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FYI
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for your information
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fYI
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TVC to be confirmed for example if you do not know the place where you're meeting you can write TBC if the place is
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TBC the places to be confirmed
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aka
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Also known as Marina McGill, Co aka lingua, Marina and the last one pretty common
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ASAP people also say ASAP as soon as possible
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Bye officer, and if you're writing an urgent email to somebody you can put in the subject
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This is si ap it's very urgent
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Thank you so much for watching this video up to the very end if you enjoyed it write down your most
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Favorite acronym and please like this video if it was useful share it with your friends
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Who are also studying American English and don't forget to subscribe to this channel?
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I will see you in the next videos and follow me on Instagram lingua marina. See you soon. Bye
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