Learning English? Find Out Why Writing is Cool and Important When Learning English

45,509 views ・ 2020-10-27

Learn English with Bob the Canadian


μ•„λž˜ μ˜λ¬Έμžλ§‰μ„ λ”λΈ”ν΄λ¦­ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄ μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ²ˆμ—­λœ μžλ§‰μ€ 기계 λ²ˆμ—­λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

00:00
- Hi, Bob the Canadian here.
0
200
1310
- μ•ˆλ…•, μ—¬κΈ° μΊλ‚˜λ‹€μΈ λ°₯.
00:01
Welcome to part three of what I am calling
1
1510
2610
00:04
the Why Series for English Learners.
2
4120
2580
μ˜μ–΄ ν•™μŠ΅μžλ₯Ό μœ„ν•œ Why μ‹œλ¦¬μ¦ˆμ˜ 3뢀에 μ˜€μ‹  것을 ν™˜μ˜ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 1
00:06
If you remember, in part one I talked about
3
6700
2350
λΆ€μ—μ„œ μ €λŠ”
00:09
why reading was an important thing to do
4
9050
2630
00:11
when you're learning the English language.
5
11680
1690
μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 배울 λ•Œ 읽기가 μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ΄μœ μ— λŒ€ν•΄ μ΄μ•ΌκΈ°ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:13
In part two, I talked about why listening
6
13370
2500
2λΆ€μ—μ„œλŠ” μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 배울 λ•Œ λ“£κΈ°κ°€ 쒋은 μ΄μœ μ— λŒ€ν•΄ μ΄μ•ΌκΈ°ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
00:15
is a good thing to do
7
15870
990
00:16
when you're learning the English language.
8
16860
1820
.
00:18
This is part three and it's called Why Write.
9
18680
2700
이것은 파트 3이고 Why Write라고 ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
00:21
In this portion of this series I'll talk about
10
21380
2540
이 μ‹œλ¦¬μ¦ˆμ˜ 이 λΆ€λΆ„μ—μ„œλŠ” μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό λ°°μš°λ©΄μ„œ
00:23
why it's important to do writing practice
11
23920
3110
μž‘λ¬Έ μ—°μŠ΅μ„ ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ™œ μ€‘μš”ν•œμ§€μ— λŒ€ν•΄ μ΄μ•ΌκΈ°ν•˜κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
00:27
as you're learning the English language.
12
27030
1550
. μ—¬λŸ¬λΆ„μ΄
00:28
I'll talk about some cool things you can do,
13
28580
2710
ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” λͺ‡ 가지 멋진 일에 λŒ€ν•΄ μ΄μ•ΌκΈ°ν•˜κ³ , κΈ€μ“°κΈ°λ₯Ό μ—°μŠ΅ν•  수 μžˆλŠ”
00:31
I'll talk about ways you can practice your writing,
14
31290
2420
방법에 λŒ€ν•΄ 이야기
00:33
and I'll talk about why writing is important
15
33710
2400
ν•˜κ³ , μš°λ¦¬κ°€ μ˜μ–΄λΌκ³  λΆ€λ₯΄λŠ” 이
00:36
when you're learning this fun and cool language
16
36110
2190
재미있고 멋진 μ–Έμ–΄λ₯Ό 배울 λ•Œ κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ΄μœ μ— λŒ€ν•΄ 이야기할 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€
00:38
we call English.
17
38300
1530
.
00:39
(upbeat music)
18
39830
2583
(κ²½μΎŒν•œ μŒμ•…)
00:47
Well, hello and welcome to this English lesson
19
47150
2410
음, μ•ˆλ…•ν•˜μ„Έμš”. 이 μ˜μ–΄ μˆ˜μ—…μ— μ˜€μ‹  것을 ν™˜μ˜ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 배울 λ•Œ
00:49
where I'm going to talk about why writing
20
49560
2060
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ΄μœ μ— λŒ€ν•΄ 이야기할 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€
00:51
is an important thing to do
21
51620
1800
00:53
when you're learning the English language.
22
53420
1450
.
00:54
Before we get started though,
23
54870
1330
ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ μ‹œμž‘ν•˜κΈ° 전에,
00:56
if this is your first time here
24
56200
1800
이곳이 처음이라면 빨간색 ꡬ독 λ²„νŠΌμ„
00:58
don't forget to click that red subscribe button
25
58000
2250
ν΄λ¦­ν•˜λŠ” 것을 μžŠμ§€ λ§ˆμ„Έμš”.
01:00
and give me a thumbs up if this video helps you learn
26
60250
2420
이 λΉ„λ””μ˜€κ°€
01:02
just a little bit more English.
27
62670
1570
μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 쑰금 더 λ°°μš°λŠ” 데 도움이 λœλ‹€λ©΄ μ €μ—κ²Œ μ’‹μ•„μš”λ₯Ό λˆŒλŸ¬μ£Όμ„Έμš”.
01:04
So writing, it's not always the most exciting thing to do
28
64240
4100
λ”°λΌμ„œ κΈ€μ“°κΈ°λŠ” μ˜μ–΄μ™€ 같은 μ–Έμ–΄λ₯Ό 배울 λ•Œ 항상 κ°€μž₯ ν₯미둜운 일이 μ•„λ‹™λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:08
when you're learning a language like English,
29
68340
1970
01:10
it can be kind of hard, but it's super important.
30
70310
3430
λ‹€μ†Œ μ–΄λ €μšΈ 수 μžˆμ§€λ§Œ 맀우 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ 정말 μ€‘μš”ν•˜λ‹€κ³ 
01:13
The first reason I think that writing is really important
31
73740
3240
μƒκ°ν•˜λŠ” 첫 번째 μ΄μœ λŠ” κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€
01:16
is that it's one of the few things you do that connects
32
76980
3290
01:20
a whole bunch of different things
33
80270
1970
01:22
in your body and your mind.
34
82240
1920
μ—¬λŸ¬λΆ„μ˜ λͺΈκ³Ό λ§ˆμŒμ— μžˆλŠ” λ‹€μ–‘ν•œ 것듀을 μ—°κ²°ν•˜λŠ” λͺ‡ μ•ˆ λ˜λŠ” 일 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜μ΄κΈ° λ•Œλ¬Έμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:24
When you are writing, especially if you're using a pen,
35
84160
3280
글을 μ“Έ λ•Œ, 특히 νŽœμ„ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” 경우
01:27
you are physically using your hand,
36
87440
3060
물리적으둜 손을 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜κ³ ,
01:30
you are thinking about what you want to write,
37
90500
2960
μ“°κ³  싢은 것을 μƒκ°ν•˜κ³ ,
01:33
and you are seeing what you're writing with your eyes.
38
93460
3100
μ“°κ³  μžˆλŠ” 것을 눈으둜 보고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:36
This is very powerful when you are learning something.
39
96560
3650
이것은 무언가λ₯Ό 배울 λ•Œ 맀우 κ°•λ ₯ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€ .
01:40
You don't often get to connect your mind, your vision,
40
100210
4260
마음, μ‹œκ°,
01:44
and your physical ability to write at the same time.
41
104470
3680
신체적 λŠ₯λ ₯을 λ™μ‹œμ— μ—°κ²°ν•˜λŠ” κ²½μš°λŠ” λ§Žμ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:48
And I think that connection
42
108150
2200
그리고 κ·Έ 연결이
01:50
helps you remember things better.
43
110350
2050
사물을 더 잘 κΈ°μ–΅ν•˜λŠ” 데 도움이 λœλ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
01:52
I think that writing, especially with a pen,
44
112400
2210
μ €λŠ” 특히 펜으둜 글을 μ“°λŠ” 것이
01:54
I know writing on a computer is fun as well,
45
114610
2840
μ»΄ν“¨ν„°μ—μ„œ μ“°λŠ” 것도 μž¬λ―Έμžˆλ‹€λŠ” 것을 μ•Œκ³ 
01:57
but I do think writing things out by hand
46
117450
2430
μžˆμ§€λ§Œ
01:59
with a pen or pencil is just really cool
47
119880
2850
νŽœμ΄λ‚˜ μ—°ν•„λ‘œ μ†μœΌλ‘œ 무언가λ₯Ό μ“°λŠ” 것은
02:02
because of all of the things that it connects
48
122730
2670
그것이 μ—°κ²°λ˜λŠ” λͺ¨λ“  것듀 λ•Œλ¬Έμ— 정말 멋지닀고 μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:05
and because all the things that you will be doing at once
49
125400
3120
당신이 그것을 ν•  λ•Œ 당신이 ν•œ λ²ˆμ— ν•  λͺ¨λ“  일
02:08
when you're doing it.
50
128520
1610
.
02:10
I think we can all agree that repetition is a great way
51
130130
3220
λ‚˜λŠ” 우리 λͺ¨λ‘ 반볡이 무언가λ₯Ό μ•”κΈ°ν•˜λŠ” 쒋은 λ°©λ²•μ΄λΌλŠ” 데 λ™μ˜ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€
02:13
to memorize things.
52
133350
1480
.
02:14
If you read something more than once,
53
134830
1740
무언가λ₯Ό 두 번 이상 읽으면
02:16
it's easier to remember what you read.
54
136570
2160
읽은 λ‚΄μš©μ„ κΈ°μ–΅ν•˜κΈ°κ°€ 더 μ‰½μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:18
If you say something over and over again,
55
138730
2640
무언가λ₯Ό λ°˜λ³΅ν•΄μ„œ λ§ν•˜λ‹€ 보면,
02:21
it's easier to remember what you've said.
56
141370
2290
λ§ν•œ λ‚΄μš©μ„ κΈ°μ–΅ν•˜κΈ°κ°€ 더 μ‰¬μ›Œμ§‘λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:23
If you listen to something repeatedly,
57
143660
2380
무언가λ₯Ό λ°˜λ³΅ν•΄μ„œ λ“€μœΌλ©΄
02:26
it's easier to remember it.
58
146040
1310
κΈ°μ–΅ν•˜κΈ°κ°€ 더 μ‰½μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:27
But I think writing and repetition when you are writing
59
147350
3880
ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ 글을 μ“Έ λ•Œ μ“°λŠ” 것과 λ°˜λ³΅ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ•”κΈ°ν•˜λŠ”
02:31
is the most powerful way to memorize things.
60
151230
4510
κ°€μž₯ κ°•λ ₯ν•œ 방법이라고 μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:35
I know for myself when I was a kid,
61
155740
2370
λ‚΄κ°€ 어렸을 λ•Œ,
02:38
when I was in elementary school, we had memory work,
62
158110
2920
λ‚΄κ°€ μ΄ˆλ“±ν•™κ΅μ— μžˆμ—ˆμ„ λ•Œ , μš°λ¦¬λŠ” μ•”κΈ° μž‘μ—…μ„ ν–ˆκ³ ,
02:41
we had to memorize things every week.
63
161030
2400
μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 맀주 무언가λ₯Ό μ™Έμ›Œμ•Ό ν–ˆλ‹€λŠ” 것을 슀슀둜 μ••λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:43
And if I wrote out my memory work 10 times or 20 times,
64
163430
5000
그리고 λ‚΄ κΈ°μ–΅ μž‘μ—…μ„ 10번 λ˜λŠ” 20번 μž‘μ„±ν•˜λ©΄
02:48
I would then remember it, I would have it memorized.
65
168740
2580
κΈ°μ–΅ν•˜κ³  μ•”κΈ°ν•˜κ²Œ λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:51
So I do think repetition works with reading
66
171320
3300
κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚˜λŠ” 반볡이 읽기
02:54
and with speaking and with listening,
67
174620
1910
, λ§ν•˜κΈ°, 듣기에 νš¨κ³Όκ°€ μžˆλ‹€κ³  생각
02:56
but I think with writing it is exceptionally powerful.
68
176530
3410
ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ μ“°κΈ°μ—λŠ” 맀우 κ°•λ ₯ν•˜λ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
02:59
If you learn a new word and you write it out 10 times,
69
179940
3030
μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 단어λ₯Ό 배우고 그것을 10번 μ“°λ©΄
03:02
you will probably remember the meaning of the word,
70
182970
2550
μ•„λ§ˆ κ·Έ λ‹¨μ–΄μ˜ 의미λ₯Ό κΈ°μ–΅ν•  것이고
03:05
you'll remember how to spell the word,
71
185520
1960
03:07
and if you can even add in there
72
187480
1890
03:09
writing it out in a sentence,
73
189370
1820
λ‹¨μ–΄μ˜ μ² μžλ„ κΈ°μ–΅ν•  κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:11
you'll even remember how to use it.
74
191190
1670
μ‚¬μš© 방법도 κΈ°μ–΅ν•  κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:12
So the second thing that I think is awesome about writing
75
192860
3410
κ·Έλž˜μ„œ μ œκ°€ μƒκ°ν•˜λŠ” κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜ 두 번째 멋진 점은
03:16
is that it is a powerful tool to memorize new things
76
196270
3970
μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 것을
03:20
by writing them out more than once.
77
200240
2660
ν•œ 번 이상 μ¨μ„œ μ•”κΈ°ν•  수 μžˆλŠ” κ°•λ ₯ν•œ λ„κ΅¬λΌλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 글쓰기에 λŒ€ν•΄
03:22
The third thing that I think is awesome about writing
78
202900
3020
μ œκ°€ μƒκ°ν•˜λŠ” μ„Έ 번째 멋진 점은
03:25
is that it's a precursor to speaking,
79
205920
3820
그것이 λ§ν•˜κΈ°μ˜ μ „μ‘°λΌλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:29
a precursor is something that comes before something else.
80
209740
3650
μ „μ‘°λŠ” λ‹€λ₯Έ 것보닀 λ¨Όμ € μ˜€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:33
Speaking in another language like English
81
213390
2220
μ˜μ–΄μ™€ 같은 λ‹€λ₯Έ μ–Έμ–΄λ‘œ λ§ν•˜λŠ” 것은
03:35
can be challenging.
82
215610
1430
μ–΄λ €μšΈ 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:37
Writing is similar to speaking
83
217040
2570
μ“°κΈ°λŠ”
03:39
except that it is much slower
84
219610
2320
훨씬 느리고
03:41
and you can think for longer periods of time
85
221930
2820
03:44
before you express yourself.
86
224750
1990
μžμ‹ μ„ ν‘œν˜„ν•˜κΈ° 전에 더 였랜 μ‹œκ°„ λ™μ•ˆ 생각할 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 점을 μ œμ™Έν•˜λ©΄ λ§ν•˜κΈ°μ™€ μœ μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:46
So the third thing that I think is really cool about writing
87
226740
3160
μ œκ°€ μƒκ°ν•˜κΈ°μ— κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜ μ„Έ 번째 μž₯점은
03:49
is that it's a way to express yourself in English.
88
229900
4200
μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ μžμ‹ μ„ ν‘œν˜„ν•˜λŠ” λ°©λ²•μ΄λΌλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
03:54
But it's a much more relaxing and comfortable
89
234100
3320
κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ μŠ€νŠΈλ ˆμŠ€κ°€ 적기 λ•Œλ¬Έμ— 훨씬 더 νŽΈμ•ˆν•˜κ³  νŽΈμ•ˆν•˜λ©° 더
03:57
and maybe easier way to do it because there's less stress.
90
237420
2940
μ‰¬μš΄ λ°©λ²•μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€ .
04:00
So the third cool thing about writing,
91
240360
2550
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜ μ„Έ 번째 멋진 점은
04:02
it's an awesome precursor
92
242910
2050
04:04
to learning how to speak in English.
93
244960
2920
μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ λ§ν•˜λŠ” 방법을 배우기 μœ„ν•œ 멋진 μ „μ‘°μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜
04:07
The fourth thing that's really cool about writing is that
94
247880
2600
λ„€ 번째 멋진 점은 글을
04:10
you can stop and you can go back and read over
95
250480
3180
λ©ˆμΆ”κ³  λ‹€μ‹œ λŒμ•„κ°€μ„œ
04:13
what you've written.
96
253660
1330
μ“΄ λ‚΄μš©μ„ λ‹€μ‹œ 읽을 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:14
This is similar to number three,
97
254990
1460
이것은 3번과 λΉ„μŠ·ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:16
I know where I said writing was a precursor to speaking,
98
256450
3810
μ €λŠ” κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ λ§ν•˜κΈ°μ˜ 전쑰라고 μ œκ°€ μ–΄λ””μ—μ„œ λ§ν–ˆλŠ”μ§€ μ••λ‹ˆλ‹€ .
04:20
but there's something incredibly powerful and cool
99
260260
2600
κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜
04:22
about the fact that you can express an idea
100
262860
3030
아이디어λ₯Ό ν‘œν˜„ν•  수 있고
04:25
and then you can stop when you're writing,
101
265890
2480
글을 μ“°λŠ” λ™μ•ˆ 멈좜 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 사싀에 λŒ€ν•΄ 믿을 수 없을 μ •λ„λ‘œ κ°•λ ₯ν•˜κ³  멋진 것이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:28
you can go back and read over what you've written,
102
268370
3540
당신이 μ“΄ 것을 λ‹€μ‹œ 읽으면 이미 μ“΄ 것을 λ°”νƒ•μœΌλ‘œ
04:31
and then you can form new ideas
103
271910
2510
μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 아이디어λ₯Ό ν˜•μ„±ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€
04:34
based on what you already wrote.
104
274420
2160
.
04:36
That's very hard to do in a conversation.
105
276580
2430
그것은 λŒ€ν™”μ—μ„œ 맀우 μ–΄λ ΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:39
You can't record your conversation
106
279010
2180
λŒ€ν™”λ₯Ό λ…ΉμŒν•œ
04:41
and then say to someone, "Just a minute,
107
281190
1687
λ‹€μŒ λ‹€λ₯Έ μ‚¬λžŒμ—κ²Œ "잠깐만"
04:42
"let's pause the conversation
108
282877
2100
04:44
"while I listen to what I just said
109
284977
2370
λ‚΄κ°€ 방금 ν•œ 말을 λ“€μœΌλ©΄μ„œ "
04:47
"so I can form my next thought."
110
287347
1643
λ‹€μŒ 생각을 정리할 수 μžˆλ„λ‘" λŒ€ν™”λ₯Ό μΌμ‹œ μ€‘μ§€ν•˜μžκ³  말할 μˆ˜λŠ” μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
04:48
So there's something really cool about writing
111
288990
2330
04:51
in the fact that you can stop,
112
291320
2020
멈좜 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 사싀, 당신이
04:53
you can read over what you've written,
113
293340
2490
μ“΄ 것을 λ‹€μ‹œ 읽을 수 있고,
04:55
and then you can form more ideas or new ideas
114
295830
3260
그런 λ‹€μŒ 더 λ§Žμ€ μ•„μ΄λ””μ–΄λ‚˜ μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 아이디어λ₯Ό ν˜•μ„±ν•˜μ—¬
04:59
to continue your writing.
115
299090
1110
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°λ₯Ό 계속할 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:00
It's just a really cool aspect of writing.
116
300200
2630
그것은 κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜ 정말 멋진 μΈ‘λ©΄μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:02
One of the things that's unique to writing
117
302830
2210
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜ λ…νŠΉν•œ 점 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜λŠ”
05:05
as opposed to speaking is that
118
305040
2320
λ§ν•˜κΈ°μ™€ λ°˜λŒ€λ˜λŠ”
05:07
you can go back and correct things.
119
307360
2570
것은 λ’€λ‘œ λŒμ•„κ°€μ„œ μˆ˜μ •ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:09
Usually when you're writing something,
120
309930
2050
일반적으둜 글을 μ“Έ λ•Œ
05:11
you work on it until it's perfect
121
311980
2630
05:14
before anyone else will read it.
122
314610
2230
λ‹€λ₯Έ μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ 읽기 전에 μ™„λ²½ν•΄μ§ˆ λ•ŒκΉŒμ§€ μž‘μ—…ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:16
So when you're writing an email to someone
123
316840
2010
λ”°λΌμ„œ λˆ„κ΅°κ°€μ—κ²Œ 이메일을 μ“°κ±°λ‚˜
05:18
or when you're writing a letter, you can always go back,
124
318850
3150
νŽΈμ§€λ₯Ό μ“Έ λ•Œ μ–Έμ œλ“ μ§€ λŒμ•„κ°€μ„œ
05:22
read over things and make corrections.
125
322000
2930
읽고 μˆ˜μ •ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:24
You can look up words in the dictionary,
126
324930
2120
μ‚¬μ „μ—μ„œ 단어λ₯Ό 찾을 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:27
you can learn how to form better phrases or sentences.
127
327050
4640
더 λ‚˜μ€ κ΅¬λ¬Έμ΄λ‚˜ λ¬Έμž₯을 λ§Œλ“œλŠ” 방법을 배울 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:31
You can look at whether you made any spelling mistakes.
128
331690
3160
λ§žμΆ€λ²• 였λ₯˜κ°€ μžˆλŠ”μ§€ 확인할 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:34
There's something really cool about the fact that
129
334850
2050
λ­”κ°€ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:36
it lets you reflect on what you've written,
130
336900
2680
당신이 λ¬΄μ—‡μ„ν–ˆλŠ”μ§€ 반영 ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 사싀에 λŒ€ν•΄ 정말 멋진 ritten,
05:39
it lets you find errors in what you've written,
131
339580
3030
그것은 당신이 μž‘μ„±ν•œ κ²ƒμ—μ„œ 였λ₯˜λ₯Ό 찾을 수 있게 ν•΄μ£Όλ©° ,
05:42
and it lets you correct all of those errors
132
342610
2390
05:45
before anyone else is going to read it.
133
345000
2360
λ‹€λ₯Έ μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ 그것을 읽기 전에 λͺ¨λ“  였λ₯˜λ₯Ό μˆ˜μ •ν•  수 있게 ν•΄μ€λ‹ˆλ‹€.
05:47
I know when I write an email in French,
134
347360
2380
ν”„λž‘μŠ€μ–΄λ‘œ 이메일을 μž‘μ„±ν•  λ•Œ ν”„λž‘μŠ€μ–΄λ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” μΉœκ΅¬μ—κ²Œ 보내기 전에
05:49
I love the fact that I can go back and read over my email
135
349740
4370
λŒμ•„κ°€μ„œ λ‚΄ 이메일을 읽고
05:54
and make some corrections before I send it
136
354110
2290
λͺ‡ 가지 μˆ˜μ •μ„ ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 사싀을 μ’‹μ•„ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€
05:56
to my French speaking friend.
137
356400
1870
.
05:58
That's something that's really cool about writing.
138
358270
2100
그것은 글쓰기에 λŒ€ν•΄ 정말 멋진 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
06:00
Again, that's very hard to do in a conversation.
139
360370
3250
λ‹€μ‹œ λ§ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, 그것은 λŒ€ν™”μ—μ„œ ν•˜κΈ°κ°€ 맀우 μ–΄λ ΅μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
06:03
The sixth thing that's really cool about writing
140
363620
2310
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ 정말 멋지고
06:05
and it's kind of unique to writing is that
141
365930
2290
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°λ§Œμ˜ κ³ μœ ν•œ μ—¬μ„― 번째 점은
06:08
you can get feedback on what you've written
142
368220
3140
06:11
from another person or a computer
143
371360
1930
λ‹€λ₯Έ μ‚¬λžŒμ΄λ‚˜ 컴퓨터,
06:13
or a piece of software or a web page.
144
373290
2620
μ†Œν”„νŠΈμ›¨μ–΄ λ˜λŠ” μ›Ή νŽ˜μ΄μ§€μ—μ„œ μž‘μ„±ν•œ λ‚΄μš©μ— λŒ€ν•œ ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ 얻을 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
06:15
What I mean by that is this,
145
375910
1730
μ œκ°€ μ˜λ―Έν•˜λŠ” λ°”λŠ”
06:17
you can write something in English
146
377640
2480
μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ 무언가λ₯Ό μž‘μ„±ν•œ
06:20
and then you can have someone who is a proficient
147
380120
3040
λ‹€μŒ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό μœ μ°½ν•˜κ²Œ
06:23
English speaker, someone who speaks English really well,
148
383160
3330
κ΅¬μ‚¬ν•˜λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒ, μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 정말 μž˜ν•˜λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ΄
06:26
you can have them read it over for you
149
386490
2420
당신을 μœ„ν•΄ 그것을 읽고
06:28
and give you some suggestions and corrections.
150
388910
3020
λͺ‡ 가지 μ œμ•ˆκ³Ό μˆ˜μ • 사항을 μ œκ³΅ν•˜λ„λ‘ ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. .
06:31
You could do this with speaking as well,
151
391930
2170
당신은 λ§ν•˜κΈ°μ—λ„ 이것을 ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
06:34
you could speak and record yourself
152
394100
2250
당신이 λ§ν•˜κ³  λ…ΉμŒν•œ
06:36
and then have someone listen to it
153
396350
1610
λ‹€μŒ λˆ„κ΅°κ°€κ°€ 그것을 λ“£κ³ 
06:37
and give you some feedback.
154
397960
1870
λ‹Ήμ‹ μ—κ²Œ μ•½κ°„μ˜ ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ 쀄 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
06:39
But writing is certainly something where it's very easy
155
399830
3250
κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ κΈ€μ“°κΈ°λŠ” 무언가
06:43
to quickly write something, make some corrections yourself,
156
403080
3970
λ₯Ό λΉ λ₯΄κ²Œ μž‘μ„±ν•˜κ³  직접 μˆ˜μ •ν•œ λ‹€μŒ λ‹€λ₯Έ
06:47
and then send it to someone else to get some feedback
157
407050
3270
μ‚¬λžŒμ—κ²Œ 보내 ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ λ°›κ±°λ‚˜ μž‘μ„±ν–ˆλŠ”μ§€ μ—¬λΆ€λ₯Ό λ³΄μ—¬μ£ΌλŠ”
06:50
or put it into some sort of piece of computer software
158
410320
4210
μΌμ’…μ˜ 컴퓨터 μ†Œν”„νŠΈμ›¨μ–΄μ— λ„£λŠ” 것이 맀우 μ‰¬μš΄ λΆ„μ•Όμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
06:54
that will show you if you've made any spelling mistakes
159
414530
2570
철자 였λ₯˜
06:57
or grammar mistakes.
160
417100
930
λ˜λŠ” 문법 였λ₯˜. 글쓰기에 μžˆμ–΄
06:58
So the sixth thing that's really cool and important
161
418030
2920
정말 멋지고 μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ—¬μ„― 번째 점은 μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ μžμ‹ μ„ ν‘œν˜„ν•˜λŠ”
07:00
about writing is it's one of the easiest ways
162
420950
2410
07:03
to get feedback on how you're expressing yourself
163
423360
4060
방법에 λŒ€ν•œ ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ μ–»λŠ” κ°€μž₯ μ‰¬μš΄ 방법 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜λΌλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€
07:07
in English.
164
427420
1080
.
07:08
The seventh thing that's really awesome about writing is
165
428500
3400
κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ—μ„œ 정말 멋진 일곱 번째 점은
07:11
it allows you to start small and then end up with something
166
431900
4100
μž‘κ²Œ μ‹œμž‘ν•˜μ—¬
07:16
that's really big.
167
436000
1280
정말 큰 κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ 끝낼 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
07:17
What I mean by that is this,
168
437280
1780
μ œκ°€ μ˜λ―Έν•˜λŠ” λ°”λŠ”
07:19
when you want to write something in English,
169
439060
2650
μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ 무언가λ₯Ό μ“°κ³  싢을 λ•Œ 쒅이에
07:21
you can just put some ideas down on a piece of paper,
170
441710
3450
λͺ‡ 가지 아이디어λ₯Ό 적은
07:25
then you can write what we call an outline.
171
445160
2650
λ‹€μŒ μš°λ¦¬κ°€ κ°œμš”λΌκ³  λΆ€λ₯΄λŠ” 것을 μ“Έ 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
07:27
You can kind of organize your ideas.
172
447810
2570
아이디어λ₯Ό 정리할 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
07:30
Then you can write a first draft
173
450380
2100
그런 λ‹€μŒ 첫 번째 μ΄ˆμ•ˆμ„ μž‘μ„±ν•˜μ—¬
07:32
so you can get your thoughts into written form
174
452480
2870
생각을
07:35
in sentences and paragraphs.
175
455350
2060
λ¬Έμž₯κ³Ό λ‹¨λ½μ˜ μ„œλ©΄ ν˜•μ‹μœΌλ‘œ κ°€μ Έμ˜¬ 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
07:37
Then you can get some feedback like we mentioned before,
176
457410
2750
그런 λ‹€μŒ 이전에 μ–ΈκΈ‰ν•œ 것과 같은 ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ 받을 수
07:40
and then eventually you will have something that's just
177
460160
2660
있고 κ²°κ΅­μ—λŠ”
07:42
really well-written and really big.
178
462820
3250
정말 잘 μž‘μ„±λ˜κ³  정말 큰 것을 κ°–κ²Œ 될 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
07:46
So it's cool that you can start small with writing
179
466070
3410
λ”°λΌμ„œ κΈ€μ“°κΈ°λ‘œ μž‘κ²Œ μ‹œμž‘ν•œ
07:49
and then eventually end up with something
180
469480
2070
λ‹€μŒ κ²°κ΅­μ—λŠ” 잘 μž‘μ„±ν•œ κΈ€λ‘œ 끝날 수 있으며
07:51
that you've written well
181
471550
1270
07:52
and that's very, very big or very, very long.
182
472820
3230
맀우 ν¬κ±°λ‚˜ 맀우 κΈ΄ 글을 μž‘μ„±ν•  수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 것은 멋진 μΌμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. λŒ€ν™”
07:56
Hard to do that again in a conversation, isn't it?
183
476050
2400
μ—μ„œ λ‹€μ‹œ ν•˜κΈ° νž˜λ“€μ£ ?
07:58
You can't say to someone,
184
478450
1357
λˆ„κ΅°κ°€μ—κ²Œ
07:59
"Let's start the conversation by expressing some ideas
185
479807
3150
" λͺ‡ 가지 아이디어λ₯Ό ν‘œν˜„ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ λŒ€ν™”λ₯Ό μ‹œμž‘ν•˜μž" 그런
08:02
"and then let me organize those ideas
186
482957
2170
λ‹€μŒ κ·Έ 아이디어λ₯Ό 정리할 수 있게 ν•΄μ£Όμ„Έμš” "
08:05
"and then we'll slowly create a larger conversation."
187
485127
3183
그러면 천천히 더 큰 λŒ€ν™”λ₯Ό λ§Œλ“€κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€"라고 말할 수 μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:08
But one of the cool things about writing,
188
488310
2120
κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜ 멋진 점 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜λŠ”
08:10
you can start small and eventually end up with something
189
490430
3040
μž‘κ²Œ μ‹œμž‘ν•˜μ—¬ κ²°κ΅­μ—λŠ”
08:13
you're just really proud of.
190
493470
1960
정말 μžλž‘μŠ€λŸ¬μ›Œν•  λ§Œν•œ λ¬΄μ–Έκ°€λ‘œ 끝날 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:15
I love the fact that writing is permanent.
191
495430
3220
λ‚˜λŠ” κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ μ˜κ΅¬μ μ΄λΌλŠ” 사싀을 μ’‹μ•„ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:18
When you write something on a post-it note
192
498650
2030
ν¬μŠ€νŠΈμž‡μ— 무언가λ₯Ό 적어
08:20
and you stick it on a wall, it's there for a very long time.
193
500680
3980
벽에 뢙이면 μ•„μ£Ό μ˜€λž«λ™μ•ˆ κ·Έ μžλ¦¬μ— μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 쒅이에
08:24
When you write something on a piece of paper
194
504660
2430
무언가λ₯Ό 적고
08:27
and maybe you tape it on the dash of your car,
195
507090
3080
μžλ™μ°¨ κ³„κΈ°νŒμ— ν…Œμ΄ν”„λ‘œ 뢙여두면
08:30
it's there for you to see for a very long time.
196
510170
2970
μ•„μ£Ό μ˜€λž«λ™μ•ˆ λ³Ό 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:33
So something really cool about writing
197
513140
2450
글쓰기에 λŒ€ν•΄ 정말 멋진 점은
08:35
is that it's fairly permanent.
198
515590
2350
그것이 μƒλ‹Ήνžˆ μ˜κ΅¬μ μ΄λΌλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:37
That's different than speaking again,
199
517940
1810
그것은 λ‹€μ‹œ λ§ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒκ³ΌλŠ” λ‹€λ¦…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:39
I mean, you can record yourself,
200
519750
1720
제 말은, μ—¬λŸ¬λΆ„μ΄ μžμ‹ μ„ λ…ΉμŒν•  수
08:41
but when you write something,
201
521470
1890
μžˆμ§€λ§Œ, 무언가λ₯Ό μ“Έ λ•Œ
08:43
you physically put it in your world,
202
523360
3530
물리적으둜 그것을 μ—¬λŸ¬λΆ„μ˜ 세상에 λ‘λŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:46
it's physically there for you to see.
203
526890
2360
그것은 μ—¬λŸ¬λΆ„μ΄ λ³Ό 수 μžˆλ„λ‘ 물리적으둜 거기에 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
08:49
So if you've ever done this,
204
529250
1410
κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이런 일을 ν•΄λ³Έ 적이 μžˆλ‹€λ©΄
08:50
if you've ever bought a pack of post-it notes
205
530660
2630
ν¬μŠ€νŠΈμž‡ ν•œ νŒ©μ„ μ‚¬μ„œ λͺ¨λ“  ν¬μŠ€νŠΈμž‡μ—
08:53
and put English words on every post-it note
206
533290
2230
μ˜μ–΄ 단어λ₯Ό 적어
08:55
and put them up all over your house,
207
535520
2030
집 여기저기에
08:57
you've done some writing that is now permanent
208
537550
2800
뢙인 적이 μžˆλ‹€λ©΄ 영ꡬ적
09:00
and it ties into the fact that you can now read
209
540350
2400
이며 이제
09:02
all those post-it notes as you walk by them.
210
542750
2380
ν¬μŠ€νŠΈμž‡ μ˜†μ„ μ§€λ‚˜κ°ˆ λ•Œ λͺ¨λ“  ν¬μŠ€νŠΈμž‡μ„ 읽을 수 μžˆλ‹€λŠ” 사싀과 μ—°κ²°λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€ . κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ˜
09:05
So another thing that's just awesome about writing
211
545130
3240
또 λ‹€λ₯Έ 멋진 점은
09:08
is it's permanent, it becomes part of your world,
212
548370
3680
그것이 μ˜κ΅¬μ μ΄λΌλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 그것은 λ‹Ήμ‹ μ˜ μ„Έκ³„μ˜ 일뢀가 되고,
09:12
it's something that you can see
213
552050
1830
09:13
whenever you walk by it during your day.
214
553880
2850
당신이 ν•˜λ£¨ λ™μ•ˆ 걸을 λ•Œλ§ˆλ‹€ λ³Ό 수 μžˆλŠ” κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
09:16
Writing has beauty.
215
556730
2160
κΈ€μ—λŠ” 아름닀움이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
09:18
There's something beautiful about a poem,
216
558890
2460
μ‹œμ—λŠ” μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ 것이 있고, λ…Έλž˜μ˜ κ°€μ‚¬μ—λŠ”
09:21
there's something beautiful about the lyrics to a song,
217
561350
3260
μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ 것이 있고,
09:24
there's something beautiful about writing down a good idea
218
564610
3480
09:28
on a piece of paper so that you can see it again later.
219
568090
3350
λ‚˜μ€‘μ— λ‹€μ‹œ λ³Ό 수 μžˆλ„λ‘ 쒋은 아이디어λ₯Ό 쒅이에 적어 λ‘λŠ” 것에도 μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ 것이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
09:31
There's something beautiful about putting a reminder
220
571440
3080
09:34
of something like you should smile every day
221
574520
3200
맀일 웃어야 ν•œλ‹€λŠ” 생각을
09:37
on a piece of paper.
222
577720
833
쒅이에 μ λŠ” 것은 μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ μΌμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
09:38
So writing has beauty, I think this is just awesome.
223
578553
3937
κ·Έλž˜μ„œ κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ—λŠ” 아름닀움이 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ €λŠ” 이것이 정말 ꡉμž₯ν•˜λ‹€κ³  μƒκ°ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. κΈ€λ‘œ
09:42
It's one of the things where when you express yourself
224
582490
2860
μžμ‹ μ„ ν‘œν˜„ν•  λ•Œ μžμ‹ μ˜
09:45
in writing, you can kind of express some of your emotions,
225
585350
4110
감정을 μ–΄λŠ 정도 ν‘œν˜„ν•  수 있고 μžμ‹ λ§Œμ˜ λ°©μ‹μœΌλ‘œ μžμ‹ μ„
09:49
you can kind of express yourself in your own way,
226
589460
3580
ν‘œν˜„ν•  수 있고
09:53
and in that you are showing your own beauty in the writing.
227
593040
3590
κΈ€μ—μ„œ μžμ‹ μ˜ 아름닀움을 보여쀄 수 μžˆλŠ” 것 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
09:56
So it's just an awesome way to express yourself and to show
228
596630
4070
λ”°λΌμ„œ μžμ‹ μ„ ν‘œν˜„ν•˜κ³ 
10:00
your own beauty and the beauty of the language.
229
600700
2500
μžμ‹ μ˜ 아름닀움과 μ–Έμ–΄μ˜ 아름닀움을 λ³΄μ—¬μ£ΌλŠ” 멋진 λ°©λ²•μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
10:03
Anyways, thank you so much for watching this
230
603200
2380
μ–΄μ¨Œλ“  κΈ€μ“°κΈ°κ°€ μ™œ μ€‘μš”ν•œμ§€μ— λŒ€ν•œ 이
10:05
small English lesson on why writing is important.
231
605580
2800
μž‘μ€ μ˜μ–΄ μˆ˜μ—…μ„ μ‹œμ²­ν•΄μ£Όμ…”μ„œ 정말 κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€ .
10:08
I'm Bob the Canadian, if you are new here,
232
608380
2560
μ €λŠ” μΊλ‚˜λ‹€μΈ λ°₯μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이곳에 처음 μ˜€μ…¨λ‹€λ©΄
10:10
please click that red subscribe button below
233
610940
1760
μ•„λž˜ 빨간색 ꡬ독 λ²„νŠΌμ„ 클릭
10:12
and give me a thumbs up if this video helped you learn
234
612700
2350
ν•˜κ³  이 λΉ„λ””μ˜€κ°€ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 쑰금 더 λ°°μš°λŠ” 데 도움이 λ˜μ—ˆλ‹€λ©΄ 엄지척을 ν•΄μ£Όμ„Έμš”.
10:15
just a little bit more English,
235
615050
1050
10:16
and share this video with a friend
236
616100
2070
μΉœκ΅¬κ°€ μžˆλ‹€λ©΄ 이 λΉ„λ””μ˜€λ₯Ό μΉœκ΅¬μ™€ κ³΅μœ ν•˜μ„Έμš”.
10:18
if you have a friend who is learning English,
237
618170
2250
μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 배우고 μžˆλŠ” 친ꡬ,
10:20
and if you have a little bit more time,
238
620420
1280
그리고 μ‹œκ°„μ΄ 쑰금 더 μžˆλ‹€λ©΄
10:21
why don't you stick around and watch another video.
239
621700
2563
λ‹€λ₯Έ λΉ„λ””μ˜€λ₯Ό μ‹œμ²­ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ ν•¨κ»˜ μ§€λ‚΄λŠ” 것이 μ–΄λ•Œμš”?
이 μ›Ήμ‚¬μ΄νŠΈ 정보

이 μ‚¬μ΄νŠΈλŠ” μ˜μ–΄ ν•™μŠ΅μ— μœ μš©ν•œ YouTube λ™μ˜μƒμ„ μ†Œκ°œν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ „ 세계 졜고의 μ„ μƒλ‹˜λ“€μ΄ κ°€λ₯΄μΉ˜λŠ” μ˜μ–΄ μˆ˜μ—…μ„ 보게 될 κ²ƒμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 각 λ™μ˜μƒ νŽ˜μ΄μ§€μ— ν‘œμ‹œλ˜λŠ” μ˜μ–΄ μžλ§‰μ„ 더블 ν΄λ¦­ν•˜λ©΄ κ·Έκ³³μ—μ„œ λ™μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λΉ„λ””μ˜€ μž¬μƒμ— 맞좰 μžλ§‰μ΄ μŠ€ν¬λ‘€λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ˜κ²¬μ΄λ‚˜ μš”μ²­μ΄ μžˆλŠ” 경우 이 문의 양식을 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜μ—¬ λ¬Έμ˜ν•˜μ‹­μ‹œμ˜€.

https://forms.gle/WvT1wiN1qDtmnspy7