IELTS Writing: The 3 Essay Types

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Hi. Welcome to engVid.
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I'm Adam.
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Today's lesson is an IELTS lesson, so as usual, I'll be speaking a little bit faster than
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normal, give you a little bit of listening practice.
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And today we're going to look at specifically the essay types, the types of essays you're
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going to have to come across for those of you taking the IELTS test in the writing section
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task two, the independent essay.
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I'm going to talk about the types of essays, and a very general idea, a very general discussion
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about how to approach, generally again, the essay.
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I want to make...
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Talk about templates, but I'll do that a little bit later.
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So first of all, the main thing to remember, you have essentially three types of essays
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that you're going to come across on the IELTS writing test.
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You're going to have an essay that asks for an opinion, you're going to have an essay
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that does not ask for an opinion, and then you're going to have a hybrid, you're going
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to have a combination of the two.
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Okay?
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So first let's go over the types of questions you might see that ask for an opinion.
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Now, it's very important to recognize that not all of you...
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Sorry, not all of the questions are going to be specifically mentioning the word: "opinion",
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or "think", or "believe", but you still have to recognize.
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So: "Do you agree or disagree with whatever has been mentioned before?" or whatever is
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written there.
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"Do you agree or disagree?"
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Take a side.
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"I agree with this because", reasons.
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"I disagree because", reasons.
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And similarly: "To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
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A quick word about "to what extent", I personally recommend completely, totally, fully agree
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with whatever you agree with because it's a much easier essay to write.
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If you say: "I somewhat agree", then you have to look at both sides and tell me what you
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agree with, what you disagree with.
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If you say: "I completely agree with this idea", then you only have to focus on that
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idea.
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It's much easier.
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"Do you think" something, so this is a very direct question about your opinion.
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"What do you think about this?" or "What do you think are the causes of", "What do you
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think are the main issues or problems?"
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Now: "Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks", or: "Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"
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As soon as you see, here, the word: "Do", it's a yes/no question, you have to say yes
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or no, and we're going to talk about yes/no questions.
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But this word: "outweigh"...
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"Are there more drawbacks or are there more benefits?"
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This is an opinion question.
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You decide if there are more drawbacks or opinions.
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"Which is better: This situation or this situation?"
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Okay?
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"Is it more important to do this or to do that?"
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So, again, these are all yes/no...
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This is a choice question because you have the "better", you have the comparative.
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And, again, you have this, plus the yes/no.
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So as soon as it's a yes/no question, it's an opinion question.
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Make sure that you answer very specifically yes or no, this side or this side, and say
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why you think so.
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Support your opinion.
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And yes/no, if a question begins with: "Should some...
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Should somebody do something?", "Should this be done?", "Do...
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Do people need to do this?" for example.
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Excuse me.
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Any yes/no question is asking for an opinion.
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Okay?
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Make sure that you give an opinion, make sure that you support that opinion.
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Okay, now, let's go on to the non-opinion questions.
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"Discuss", so they're going to give you two attitudes, or two views, or two approaches
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to something.
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They say: "Discuss both views.
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Discuss both attitudes."
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This is not asking for your opinion.
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So, one thing, it's a general rule of thumb, don't always apply it because some of you
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don't like to use the word "I", but if the question has a "you", the answer can, and
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in most cases should, have an "I".
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Okay?
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You don't have to use the personal pronoun.
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It's not wrong to.
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A lot of people are afraid, they think academic essays shouldn't use "I".
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Totally okay, recommended for a lot of people.
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If you can't make your views clear without using the "I", then use the "I".
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Here, don't use the "I".
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They're not asking for your opinion, don't give them your opinion.
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This is a descriptive essay: "Discuss both sides", so this is one side, this is the other
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side, end of story.
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I'm going to show you how to begin your essay in the introduction for these.
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"Compare and contrast these two things", that's it.
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Body paragraph one, this one; body paragraph two, this one.
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"What are the advantages and disadvantages?"
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Body paragraph one, advantages; body paragraph two, disadvantages.
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That's it.
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Problem/solution: "What are the causes" or "What are the problems", so you have cause
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and solution, you have problem and solution.
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"What might be some possible causes for this situation?", "What do you think are the problems
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with this approach?"
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That's it.
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What solutions might actually work to help it?
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They're not asking: What solution would you recommend?
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If they put a "you", you're going to put an "I", an opinion.
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If they don't put a "you", and they don't ask for an opinion, don't give one.
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Now: "Why", "What", "How", these are very direct questions.
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"Why are...?", "Why does this thing happen?", "How can the government help fix this problem?"
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etc.
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"What are some solutions to this situation?"
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Now, these are more commonly going to be found in the two-part question.
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All of these are very straightforward question, this is mostly in the two-part.
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So, some essays will give you two questions and you have to answer both questions within
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the essay.
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Okay?
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Now, you can also have a hybrid, which is basically taking the non-opinion and asking
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for an opinion.
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"Discuss both views and give your opinion."
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Make sure that you do both, but the approach is very different.
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"Discuss both without opinion" and "Discuss both with opinion", very different approach
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to the essay.
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Now, this is usually the one that's most difficult for people to do because they don't know how
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to break up their essays.
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But if you want to see how I work through both types of essays, go to my writing channel:
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www.writetotop.com or YouTube "Write To Top", the link is in the description and you can
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watch me work through both types of essays, hopefully help you out.
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Okay?
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Same thing with "compare".
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"Compare both sides and say which you agree with.", "What are the advantages and disadvantages,
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and which do you think is more?" for example.
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Problems and solutions: "What are some possible problems to this situation, and what do you
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think are ways to fix it?"
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So, all of these can be...
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Have the opinion part added to it.
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Okay?
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So be very careful.
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If you're asked for an opinion, give one; if you're not asked for one, don't give one.
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If you're asked for a descriptive essay and an opinion, make sure you do both.
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Okay?
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So we're going to look at a little bit...
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How to begin your essays, how to introduce...
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Introduce both sides in a very general set up of your ideas and how to organize.
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Okay?
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Okay, so we're going to look at basic things to keep in mind when you're writing these
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essays, but the main thing I want to make very clear to everybody: Don't look for a
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template for the essay.
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Every question will require its own approach, its own way of looking at the topic, at the
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question and the issue, debate, whatever it is, and you have to approach each essay on
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its own.
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Don't look for a template that you can try to apply to every question because you can't.
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Every type of question has its own approach, every type of...
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Every hybrid, for example, has different ways to do it.
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There's no one right way to write an essay.
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There's only one right way to express your ideas,
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that's what you try to figure out how to do. Right?
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But the more you practice, the better feel you get for these essays, and you're able
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to approach any question with the right things.
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But having said all of that, a few things to keep in mind.
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If you're asked for an opinion, make sure you give an opinion in the introduction: "I
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agree that" or "I agree with", "I believe that", "In my opinion this is the right way".
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Make sure you do this.
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Now, you don't have to use "I", again, I mentioned this before, but if you're not sure how to
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make your opinion very clear to the reader, just tell it to them very directly.
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"I agree", "I believe", "In my opinion", etc.
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Now, how are you going to build your argument basically in your body paragraphs?
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Start with your strong argument first in the body paragraph, try to focus only on the side
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you're arguing for.
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So if you agree with side A, spend the time and the words in body paragraph one to convince
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the reader that side A is a good side to choose.
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In side B, in body paragraph two when you're looking at side B, start with a concession.
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What this means...
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And talk about side B. What are some good points about the other side?
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But make sure it's short, and make sure you turn it right back around and continue to
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arguing...
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To argue for your side.
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By the end of it, by the time you get to the conclusion it should be very clear what your
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opinion is and why you had it.
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Right?
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Now, a lot of ways to play with this, but this is the general approach you're going
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to be taking: If they're not asking you for an opinion, don't give one.
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Again, you can say: "This essay will look at", "discuss" whatever topic you're looking
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at or discussing.
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"There are several ways to fix pollution, as this essay will demonstrate."
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So basically you're telling the reader: "What is the objective?
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What is the purpose of the essay?"
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It's to deliver information or to describe something, or to outline a process, etc.
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Now, you don't have to be very obvious either. Right?
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You don't have to say: "This essay will discuss".
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If you know how to write a sentence that makes it very clear to the reader that this is what
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the objective of the essay is, do that.
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Okay?
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"Though there are several reasons for the high-crime rate in the inner cities, the...
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This particular situation seems to be the most pertinent", or "the most obvious", or
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"the most common".
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As soon as you say that, I understand that this
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is what you're going to be talking about. Right?
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"There are several reasons, but this is the most important one."
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It doesn't mean I think so, it's obvious, it's clear.
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"Here, I'm going to give you some information or some reasons to support this observation."
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Not opinion, observation.
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Body paragraph one, reason one; body paragraph two, reason two.
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Body paragraph one, advantage one; body paragraph two, disadvantage one.
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Benefit, drawback, compare, contrast.
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Okay?
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All of these things are very straightforward.
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Paragraph one, one thing; paragraph two, the second thing; conclusion, therefore all of
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these things support the idea that this is the more important aspect, or reason, or whatever
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you're discussing.
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Now, these are not templates.
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Don't think of this as a template.
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Don't do this every time you have an essay about...
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That's not an opinion.
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Okay?
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Sometimes you'll have to do it in different ways.
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Okay?
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Compare, contrast.
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You can compare and contrast one aspect in body paragraph two, you can compare and contrast
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another aspect in body paragraph two.
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Paragraph one, paragraph two.
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You can do both and both, you can do one and one.
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Lots of ways to do it.
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The main thing is: Don't give an opinion, make sure the reader understands the objective
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of the essay, and then organize your ideas in a very clear way to support that.
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Give your opinion, make sure that the reader understands why you have this opinion, and
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that they believe...
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That you believe this opinion. Okay?
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We're going to look a little bit at the hybrid ones because they're a little bit different.
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Lots of ways to approach it.
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Let's look at some ideas.
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Okay, let's look at the last one, the hybrid.
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"Discuss both opinions" or "Discuss both things, and give your own opinion".
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Right?
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So, now, what you have to do, you have to...
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In your thesis, in your introduction you have to make it clear to me that there are two
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sides and that you choose one over the other.
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So, actually I'm going to...
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"There are pros and cons to wearing uniforms in school."
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If the essay is: "Should students wear uniforms in school?"
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So: "There are pros and cons to wearing a uniform, though I believe that students should
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wear them every day."
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Okay, just as an example.
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So as soon as you tell me there are pros and cons, remember you put it in the introduction.
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As a reader I'm expecting to see the pros and cons in the body.
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Right?
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That's why you put it here.
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So that is your discuss aspect: "Discuss both", because pros, cons, both sides.
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Now, as soon as you believe one over the other, then you're giving me your opinion.
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Okay?
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Very straightforward.
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Now, how are you going to split up your ideas?
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Body paragraph one, discuss both things.
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Discuss the pros, discuss the cons, obviously very briefly.
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These are short essays, you don't need to give me that much information.
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Give me one pro, give me one con, but right away start to lean to the one you're choosing.
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Right?
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If you're believing that there are more pros than cons, that students should wear uniforms,
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make sure that the last sentence or the last couple of sentences give me, as the reader,
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a hint that that's what you're choosing.
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And then in body paragraph two fully support that choice and make maybe one or two mentions
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to the other side.
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Don't spend too much time going back to the other side, just make a very short mention
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about the other side.
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So: "Students who are forced to wear uniforms don't have to make decisions every morning,
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although some people say that making decisions is good for a child's development.
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But not having to make the choices helps them spend more time concentrating on school."
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So, I mention the other side, and then quickly I come back to the side I'm choosing and I
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continue to support my choice.
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And then in the conclusion, again: "There are benefits and drawbacks, but I believe that..."
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Actually don't say: "I believe".
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"There are benefits and drawbacks, but it's clear that wearing uniforms help the students
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more."
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Okay?
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Again, very different ways to do this, very...
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A lot of different approaches to these types of questions, but keep in mind there's no template.
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Figure out exactly what you need to do and make sure that you do it.
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If you need to give an opinion, give it; if you need to not give one, don't give one;
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if you need to discuss and give one, do both. Okay?
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Especially be careful with the two-part questions.
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Sometimes it'll be two questions that don't ask for an opinion, sometimes it'll be one
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question for description, one question for an opinion.
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Is it non-opinion or is it a hybrid?
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Be very careful about that.
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There is a quiz on www.engvid.com where I make sure you guys understood all this stuff.
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Like the video if you liked it, please.
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And if you have any questions, please go to www.engvid.com, there's a forum there, you
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can ask any questions you like.
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And subscribe to my channel.
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And hopefully I'll come back soon with more good lessons to help you with your IELTS.
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See you then. Bye-bye.
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