Parts of a Paragraph - English Academic Writing Introduction

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Hi, my name is Alex, and welcome to this lesson on the parts of the paragraph.
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This lesson is largely intended to help those of you who are preparing to get into a North
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American university, or if you are preparing to write the TOEFL test.
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Now, the parts of a North American paragraph, or, you know, those of you who are looking
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to get into university, university professors are looking for a specific kind of structure.
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This is that structure.
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It is actually, can be considered much different than other cultures.
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For example, in Chinese culture, where an essay would largely be a long story, or sometimes
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just a long paragraph, there is much more of a formula in the North American style.
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So first of all, pretty basic, you start off with a topic sentence.
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What are you writing about?
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What is your subject?
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And a good formula for following, or for writing an effective topic sentence would be to come
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up with an interesting topic, give your opinion on it, say something interesting about it.
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Don't make it overly detailed, that's what the body is for.
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So in your body, this is the heart of your paragraph.
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So this is where you give all of the supporting details, the supporting arguments for your
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topic sentence.
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So there are two ways that you can order the details.
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First way is by order of importance.
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What you feel is going to make your, if you're writing an argumentative essay, what is going
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to make your arguments really, really stand out?
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What is the one part of your argument that is strongest?
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Secondly, chronology.
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Chronology refers to the ordering of events.
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So you might be writing an essay describing how to change the oil in your car.
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So you would write, obviously, in a specific order, that, how to change the oil in your
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car.
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Okay, finally, we have the closing sentence.
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Now the closing sentence has two functions.
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First of all, you're reminding the audience what you're writing about, so you're kind
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of restating your topic sentence, and you're also keeping them thinking, giving them a
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little extra.
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So you want to kind of restate the topic sentence, but in a different way, and keep your audience
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thinking.
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Okay, now let's look at an example.
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Okay, so now that we've talked about the parts of a paragraph, let's look at an example of
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a paragraph that would be very acceptable in North American universities, or even on
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your TOEFL test.
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So remember, the first thing that we talked about was starting off with your opening sentence,
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or your topic sentence.
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So today we want to talk about the city of Toronto.
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So my topic sentence is, "The city of Toronto has many wonderful attractions."
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So right away, the reader's attention is caught, they know we're going to be talking about
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Toronto, and we're going to be talking about its attractions.
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Now we have to get into the body, or the details of the paragraph.
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So let's look at our first sentence.
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I'm just going to walk off for a minute here so you can see better.
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Now it says, "The most notable site is the tall and majestic CN Tower.
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Secondly, Toronto has many restaurants because of its culturally diverse communities.
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Finally, Lake Ontario provides an incredible view for visitors."
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Okay, so as you can see from those sentences, we get more information about the topic.
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So we get very, very solid, concrete details, and we get it in a specific order.
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So I would say this is probably an order of importance.
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So first, I want to focus on the CN Tower as being a major part of Toronto's attractions.
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Secondly, I want to focus on its food, its restaurants, and thirdly, more on its views,
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so Lake Ontario.
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Finally, we have the closing paragraph.
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So remember, the goal of the closing paragraph is to keep readers thinking once they finish
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reading, and to also restate the topic.
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So let's look at the closing paragraph, or the closing sentence, I apologize here.
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So it says, "These qualities make Toronto a very attractive city for tourists."
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Okay, so basically, again, I'm restating the topic sentence, but in a different way, and
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I'm adding a little bit something to it.
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So while my topic sentence talks about Toronto having many wonderful attractions, my closing
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sentence keeps people thinking by saying, "These things make Toronto a wonderful city
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for tourists."
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Okay, so I hope this will help you out in your academic writing, as well as on your
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TOEFL test.
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Thanks again for listening.
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For a test on this, please check out engvid.com.
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My name is Alex McCart, I'll see you later, take care.
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