Your English Coach: 2 keys to ending your pitch right.

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Business English with Christina


์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hey, welcome back to part four of this very special series,
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๋งค์šฐ ํŠน๋ณ„ํ•œ ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ 4๋ถ€์— ๋‹ค์‹œ โ€‹โ€‹์˜ค์‹  ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ™˜์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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all about helping you to improve your English for work fast.
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And in the previous videos, parts one, two, and three,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด์ „ ๋น„๋””์˜ค, ํŒŒํŠธ 1, 2, 3์—์„œ
00:14
we worked on one specific business, English situation,
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ํŠน์ • ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค, ์˜์–ด ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ž‘์—…ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์•„์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”
00:18
very useful for so many different situations that you need
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๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ๋งค์šฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:23
to know how to do this,
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and that is introducing yourself or doing a short
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00:29
elevator pitch. Now, in those previous videos,
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์—˜๋ฆฌ๋ฒ ์ดํ„ฐ ํ”ผ์น˜. ์ด์ œ ์ด์ „ ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ
00:33
we created your pitch from start to finish,
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ
00:36
and today you learn one important tip to really
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์˜ค๋Š˜์€
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double the chances of hearing a yes.
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์„ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋‘ ๋ฐฐ๋กœ ๋Š˜๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ํŒ์„ ๋ฐฐ์›๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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After your pitch in English, let's go. Hi,
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ํ”ผ์น˜๋ฅผ ํ•œ ํ›„ ๊ฐ€์ž. ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”,
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I'm your English coach Christina,
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์ €๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ์ฝ”์น˜ Christina์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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and welcome to Business English with Christina,
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where we solve your business English problems fast.
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด ์ฃผ๋Š” Business English with Christina์— ์˜ค์‹  ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ™˜์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:55
This is the final video in this series,
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋น„๋””์˜ค
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but I'm following this series with a very special,
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์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐœํ‘œํ•œ ํ›„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋งค์šฐ ํŠน๋ณ„ํ•œ
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free interactive workshop on what you need to do after you
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๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ˜• ์›Œํฌ์ˆ์œผ๋กœ ์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด๊ฐˆ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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pitch your ideas. And you can get your invitation to that workshop by
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ 
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signing up for my newsletter. The link is down below.
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์ œ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ํ•ด๋‹น ์›Œํฌ์ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ดˆ๋Œ€์žฅ์„ ๋ฐ›์œผ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งํฌ๋Š” ์•„๋ž˜์— ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:15
And then that workshop is going to happen on November 18th.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ ์›Œํฌ์ˆ์€ 11์›” 18์ผ์— ์—ด๋ฆด ์˜ˆ์ •์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:19
And like I said, it's free and it's going to be very, very,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋งํ–ˆ๋“ฏ์ด, ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ์ด๊ณ 
01:23
very valuable for your English, your work, your job,
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์ผ, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์ง์—…,
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and all of that fun stuff. So in the last videos,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ ๋ชจ๋“  ์žฌ๋ฏธ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์— ๋งค์šฐ, ๋งค์šฐ, ๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ง€๋‚œ ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ
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you learned how to use your elevator pitch to show very quickly
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€ ์—˜๋ฆฌ๋ฒ ์ดํ„ฐ ํ”ผ์น˜๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ
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your competence, your strengths, your skills,
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์ž์‹ ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ, ๊ฐ•์ , ๊ธฐ์ˆ , ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด
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the value you bring,
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๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ค๋Š” ๊ฐ€์น˜๋ฅผ ๋งค์šฐ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์› ๊ณ ,
01:42
and you also learned how to ask specifically for something that
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๋˜ํ•œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด ์–ป๊ณ ์ž ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋„ ๋ฐฐ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:47
you would like to get from the other person.
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ.
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So now you're ready for this final part of the series.
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์ด์ œ ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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Let's imagine you're at any kind of business situation where you have
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด
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introduced yourself, you've made your pitch,
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์ž์‹ ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•˜๊ณ , ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ํ•˜๊ณ , ํŠน์ •ํ•œ
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you have asked for something specific, you, I mean,
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๊ฒƒ์„ ์š”๊ตฌํ•˜๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ์ฒ˜ํ•ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
02:04
you probably then continued the conversation with your business contact
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talking about business and maybe things not related to business because we
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋„ ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ์ด ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
02:15
also do that as well. But anyway,
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. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์–ด์จŒ๋“ 
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the conversation is coming to a close and maybe the other
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๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋ง‰๋ฐ”์ง€์— ๋‹ค๋‹ค๋ฅด๋ฉด
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person
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์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์€
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doesn't remember everything that you told them at the beginning in your pitch,
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ”ผ์น˜์—์„œ ์ฒ˜์Œ์— ๋งํ–ˆ๋˜ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„
02:30
and maybe they don't remember that thing that you asked for.
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์žˆ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์š”์ฒญํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:33
So when you close the conversation,
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋‹ซ์„ ๋•Œ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ
02:37
you just want to bring that back and
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๋‹ค์‹œ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ธฐ์‹œ์ผœ ์ฃผ๊ณ  ํ›„์† ์กฐ์น˜๋ฅผ
02:41
remind them, maybe offer to follow up or to contact them,
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์ œ์•ˆํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์„ ์ทจํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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something that really like anchors the
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02:51
action that should happen after your conversation.
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.
02:54
And this is going to double your chance of.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ๋‘ ๋ฐฐ๋กœ ๋Š˜๋ฆด ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:58
Success after that conversation ends.
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๊ทธ ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚œ ํ›„ ์„ฑ๊ณต.
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So at the end of that conversation, you might just say something like this,
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚  ๋•Œ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ
03:06
It was nice talking to you,
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๋‚˜๋ˆŒ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ์ข‹์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:07
and I'll send you a quick follow up email later today about a contact at Amazing
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์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋‚˜์ค‘์— Amazing Core์˜ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ํ›„์† ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:12
Core. Now,
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. ์ž,
03:13
maybe you were talking to this person about how your business could help theirs.
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์•„๋งˆ๋„ ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์‚ฌ์—…์ด ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ์‚ฌ์—…์— ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:18
In that case, you could end the conversation like this.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:21
It was nice talking to you.
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๋‹น์‹ ๊ณผ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋„์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ
03:23
I'd love to send you some details about how we could help your company,
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์„ธ๋ถ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
03:27
or if you shared a great idea about how you could help the company where you
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๋˜๋Š” ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฏธ ๊ทผ๋ฌดํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋„์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ข‹์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
03:31
already work, then say something like this,
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๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋ง์”€ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
03:35
Could we meet in the next few weeks to discuss how this new project could work
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์•ž์œผ๋กœ ๋ช‡ ์ฃผ ์•ˆ์— ๋งŒ๋‚  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”? ์ด ์ƒˆ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๊ฐ€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ž‘๋™ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•˜๊ณ 
03:39
for our company and maybe set up a timeline for our work?
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์ž‘์—… ์ผ์ •์„ ์„ค์ •ํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด?
03:43
But you see the idea is that you close the conversation by
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋Œ€ํ™” ํ›„์— ์ผ์–ด๋‚ 
03:48
setting up an expectation of something that's going to happen after the
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์ผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€์น˜๋ฅผ ์„ค์ •ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:53
conversation,
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03:54
basically to move forward on the things that you discussed
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03:59
together. Okay? And now we're here like to the exciting part,
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. ์ข‹์•„์š”? ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด์ œ ํฅ๋ฏธ์ง„์ง„ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋งˆ์น˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:02
because you've been through this entire series on how to improve your English
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์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€
04:07
fast by identifying one specific thing,
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ํŠน์ •ํ•œ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฅผ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐœ๋ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”
04:11
breaking it down into all of the little parts that you need to
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๋ชจ๋“  ์ž‘์€ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ์„ธ๋ถ„ํ™”ํ•˜์—ฌ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ „์ฒด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ดค๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:16
improve on individually,
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,
04:18
and then putting it all together so that you have something
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข…ํ•ฉํ•˜์—ฌ
04:23
very simple, but they can have a big impact on your work,
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๋งค์šฐ ๋‹จ์ˆœํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ž‘์—…,
04:27
on your confidence, on your English, on all of that. And as you saw,
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์ž์‹ ๊ฐ, ์˜์–ด ๋“ฑ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์— ํฐ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์น  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ณด์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ํ•œ
04:32
we did it just one step at a time. And that's what makes it feel,
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๋ฒˆ์— ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์”ฉ๋งŒ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ 
04:38
makes it feel possible, makes it feel easy.
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์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋Š๋ผ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:41
So what does that entire pitch sound like from start to finish?
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ „์ฒด ์Œ์กฐ๋Š” ์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์–ด๋–ค ์†Œ๋ฆฌ์ผ๊นŒ์š”?
04:46
Let's wrap it up with a full example. Hi,
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์ „์ฒด ์˜ˆ์ œ๋กœ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”,
04:50
I'm Christina Robe. It's such a pleasure to meet you.
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ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šคํ‹ฐ๋‚˜ ๋กœ๋ธŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŒ๋‚˜์„œ ์ •๋ง ๋ฐ˜๊ฐ‘์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:53
I'm a marketing consultant at PR Associates,
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์ €๋Š” ๊ธฐ์—… ํ™๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ „๋ฌธ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋Š” PR Associates์˜ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์ปจ์„คํ„ดํŠธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
04:56
which specializes in helping businesses with their public relations.
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.
05:01
We just finished helping Ecor create a community outreach program
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์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” Ecor๊ฐ€ ์ง€์—ญ ์‚ฌํšŒ ๋ด‰์‚ฌ ํ™œ๋™ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ
05:06
and a PR campaign to promote it. And now you ask for what you want.
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๊ณผ ์ด๋ฅผ ํ™๋ณดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ PR ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ง‰ ๋งˆ์ณค์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด์ œ ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์š”๊ตฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:11
I'm really inspired with the work Amazing Core does,
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์ €๋Š” Amazing Core๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ผ์— ์ •๋ง ์˜๊ฐ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๊ณ  ์ €
05:13
and my team and I would love to help you create the kind of public relations
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์™€ ์ œ ํŒ€์€ ๊ท€์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ์„ฑ์žฅ์‹œํ‚ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ์ข…์˜ ํ™๋ณด ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:18
campaign that will allow your business to grow. And then of course,
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ฌผ๋ก ,
05:23
you'll go away and you'll talk about lots and lots of things.
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋– ๋‚˜๊ณ  ์•„์ฃผ ๋งŽ์€ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:26
And then at the end of the conversation,
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚  ๋ฌด๋ ต
05:28
it was nice talking to you and I'd love to send you some more details about how
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๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋‚˜๋ˆŒ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ์ข‹์•˜๊ณ  ๊ท€์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋„์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž์„ธํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:32
we can help your company. And there you have it.
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. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ฑฐ๊ธฐ ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:35
That is your entire pitch from start to finish,
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์ „์ฒด ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์ด๋ฉฐ, ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ
05:37
plus a little call to action to conclude the
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๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ํ•œ
05:42
conversation and double your chances of moving forward after
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ํ›„ ์•ž์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐˆ ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ๋‘ ๋ฐฐ๋กœ ๋Š˜๋ฆฌ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„์˜ ํด๋ฆญ ์œ ๋„๋ฌธ์•ˆ์„ ๋”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
05:47
making that pitch.
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05:48
And if you go over to my blog,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚ด ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ๋กœ ์ด๋™ํ•˜๋ฉด
05:52
you can go back and review the other parts of this series. With all those.
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๋Œ์•„๊ฐ€์„œ ์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋“ค ๋ชจ๋‘์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜.
05:57
Resources,
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05:57
you'll have everything you need to create your perfect pitch so you can feel
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๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค, ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ํ”ผ์น˜๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š”
๋ฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ
06:02
confident and you can use it again and again in so many different
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์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์„ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•ด์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:07
situations. And now that that conversation is over,
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. ์ด์ œ ๊ทธ ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚ฌ์œผ๋‹ˆ
06:10
you're going to have to follow up with the person.
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๊ทธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ํ›„์† ์กฐ์น˜๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:13
And generally that's by email.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:16
So now that you know how to pitch yourself,
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์ด์ œ ์ž์‹ ์„ ํ™๋ณดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์•˜์œผ๋‹ˆ
06:19
go ahead and join me for my free interactive workshop on November 18th,
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11์›” 18์ผ์— ์ง„ํ–‰๋˜๋Š” ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ๋Œ€ํ™”์‹ ์›Œํฌ์ˆ์— ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
06:24
which is going to be all about emails in English and how to write the perfect
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์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๊ณผ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ํ›„์† ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ๋ฟ๋งŒ
06:29
follow up email,
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06:30
but also several other very common types of emails that you
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์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋งค์šฐ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๋‚ด์šฉ๋„ ๋‹ค๋ฃฐ ์˜ˆ์ •์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:35
write in English for your business.
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๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์œ ํ˜•.
06:37
And we're gonna do something really exciting that I've never done before
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ „์— ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ๋„ ํ•ด๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์—†๋Š” ์ •๋ง ์‹ ๋‚˜๋Š” ์ผ์„ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:43
but I'm seen it done and I love the idea.
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06:46
And it's basically taking actual emails from
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‹ค์ œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์œผ๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹ค์ œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ฐ›๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋ฌผ๋ก  ์ต๋ช…์œผ๋กœ
06:51
real clients keeping them anonymous of course but
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์œ ์ง€ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ
06:56
going through the email with you to analyze and correct it so that you can
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์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ถ„์„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜์—ฌ
07:01
see something typical from, let's say, a learner of English,
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์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์ž,
07:06
a business person learning English the emails they typically write.
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์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ์ „ํ˜•์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:11
I will go through those emails, correct them, analyze them, correct them,
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๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ณ , ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  , ๋ถ„์„ํ•˜๊ณ , ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๊ณ ,
07:15
and show you how to improve it so that you can improve your own
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:20
emails. It's gonna be really exciting.
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. ์ •๋ง ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กœ์šธ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:22
It's on November 18th but you do need to sign up for my
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11์›” 18์ผ์ด์ง€๋งŒ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์›Œํฌ์ƒต์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ดˆ๋Œ€์žฅ์„ ๋ฐ›์œผ๋ ค๋ฉด ๋‚ด ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์— ๋“ฑ๋กํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:27
newsletter so that you get your invitation to that free workshop.
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07:32
And of course,
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ฌผ๋ก 
07:33
the link to sign up is down below in the
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๊ฐ€์ž… ๋งํฌ๋Š”
07:37
description of this video. All right,
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์ด ์˜์ƒ์˜ ์„ค๋ช… ์•„๋ž˜์— ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:40
thank you so much for sticking with me for the entire
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07:45
four parts of this series, and I'm very, very,
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์ด ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ์˜ ์ „์ฒด 4๋ถ€์ž‘ ๋™์•ˆ ์ €์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ์ •๋ง ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:48
very excited to see you in that interactive workshop on November 18th.
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11์›” 18์ผ์— ์žˆ์„ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ˜• ์›Œํฌ์ˆ์—์„œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์„ ๋ต™๊ฒŒ ๋˜์–ด ๋งค์šฐ, ๋งค์šฐ, ๋งค์šฐ ๊ธฐ์ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:53
All right. See you there. Bye.
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€. ๊ฑฐ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋ณด์ž. ์•ˆ๋…•.
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

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