How to write a basic paragraph

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hello. Do you know how to write a basic paragraph? This is not only for ESL students. This is
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์•ˆ๋…•. ๋„Œ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ธ ์ค„ ์•„๋‹ˆ? ์–ด.. ์ด๊ฑด ๊ทธ์ € ์™ธ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ํ•™์ƒ(ESL)๋“ค๋งŒ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๊ฒŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ์•ผ.
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for everyone around the world, even if you speak English, even if you don't speak English.
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์ด๊ฑด ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ๋ชจ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๊ฑฐ์ง€. ๋„ˆ๊ฐ€ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๊ฑด ์•ˆ ์“ฐ๊ฑด ๊ฐ„์—,
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This is a very, very beautiful, basic lesson on how to write small, short, beautiful paragraphs.
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์ด๊ฑด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ž‘๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์šด ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์•„์ฃผ ์•„์ฃผ ์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์šด ๊ธฐ์ดˆ์ ์ธ ๊ฐ•์˜์•ผ.
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"How to Write a Basic Paragraph". Now, I also want you to be very careful. This is not how
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"๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•". ์ž, ๋‚œ ๋˜ํ•œ ๋„ค๊ฐ€ ์ฃผ์˜ํ•ด์ฃผ๊ธธ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋Š”๋ฐ,
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to write a 200-word essay for your university exam. We don't have enough time in the world
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์ด๊ฑด ๋Œ€ํ•™ ์‹œํ—˜์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ 200๋‹จ์–ด ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋ƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฑด ์•„๋‹ˆ์•ผ. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ๊ฑธ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์ณ์ค„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์—†๊ณ ,
00:43
for me to teach you that, and I probably forget. So this is, very simply, how to write a basic
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์•„๋งˆ ๊นŒ๋จน์„ ๊ฑฐ์•ผ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ์ด๊ฑด ์•„์ฃผ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ, ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š”๊ฐ€์•ผ.
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English paragraph. One, two, three, four rules. Rule No. 1 is:
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ํ•˜๋‚˜, ๋‘˜, ์…‹, ๋„ค๊ฐ€์ง€ ๊ทœ์น™์ด ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ฒซ์งธ๋Š”
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Indent, indent. What does "indent" mean? Indent, basically, means -- I learned this when I
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๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ(Indent)์•ผ. ๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ. "๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ"๊ฐ€ ๋ญ๋ƒ๊ณ ? ๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š”, ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ, ์ด๊ฑด ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋ฆด ๋•Œ ๋ฐฐ์› ๋Š”๋ฐ,
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was a child -- you take your finger. You can have a big finger, a small finger -- I don't
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์†๊ฐ€๋ฝ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ , ํฐ ์†๊ฐ€๋ฝ์ด๋“  ์ž‘์€ ์†๊ฐ€๋ฝ์ด๋“ , ๋‚œ ์‹ ๊ฒฝ ์•ˆ ์จ.
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care. You take your finger or two fingers, and you make a little space like so. This is called an "indentation" or
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ํ•œ ์†๊ฐ€๋ฝ์ด๋‚˜, ๋‘ ์†๊ฐ€๋ฝ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ , ์ž‘์€ ๊ณต๊ฐ„์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์‹์œผ๋กœ. ์ด๊ฑธ "๋“ค์—ฌ์“ด ์ž๋ฆฌ" ํ˜น์€
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"indent". So "indent" means you leave a space at the very first line of the paragraph. And
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"๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ "๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ"๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋‹จ ์ฒซ์ค„์— ๊ณต๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ๋†“๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜์ง€.
01:35
that's it. You do not leave a space at any other lines in the paragraph, only the first
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์•ผ. ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์–ด๋–ค ์ค„์—๋„ ๊ณต๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ์ง€ ์•Š์•„. ์˜ค์ง ์ฒซ ์ค„์—๋งŒ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ์ง€.
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line. So it's very important that you only indent the first line of your paragraph like
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ ์ฒซ ์ค„์—๋งŒ ๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์•„์ฃผ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ด.
01:56
so. Okay. The next thing that you have to do is you
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์ข‹์•„. ๋‹ค์Œ์œผ๋กœ ๋„ค๊ฐ€ ํ•ด์•ผํ•  ๊ฑด,
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have to use a capital letter at the beginning of every sentence. Now, the word that I've
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๋งค ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ์‹œ์ž‘๋งˆ๋‹ค ๋Œ€๋ฌธ์ž(Capital)๋ฅผ ์จ์•ผ ํ•ด. ์ž, ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์“ด ๊ธ€์€
02:10
written is "I". Another rule in English is that every single time you write "I", it must
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"I"๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด์•ผ. ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์˜์–ด์˜ ๊ทœ์น™์€ ๋งค ๋ฒˆ ์“ธ ๋•Œ๋งˆ๋‹ค "I"๋ฅผ ์จ๋ฒ„๋ ค. ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ๋Œ€๋ฌธ์ž์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•ด.
02:18
be a capital. So I'm going to write an example sentence for you to illustrate what I mean:
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ฌด์Šจ ๋ง์„ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์จ๋ณผ๊ฒŒ.
02:26
"I am a teacher." Okay? This is one sentence. So rule No. 3: At the end of my sentence,
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"๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ์ด๋‹ค." ๋์–ด? ์ด๊ฒŒ ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์•ผ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์…‹์งธ ๊ทœ์น™์€ ๋งค ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋๋งˆ๋‹ค,
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I must use a period. A "period" is a dot, if you'd like. So "I am a teacher." So what
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์จ์•ผ ํ•ด. "๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ"๋Š” ๋งํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์ ์ด์•ผ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ "๋‚˜๋Š” ์„ ์ƒ์ด๋‹ค."
02:53
I'm going to do is my next sentence... I'm going to begin it with a capital letter. "My"
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๊ฑด, ๋‚ด ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ๋Œ€๋ฌธ์ž๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์•ผ. "๋‚ด"
03:01
-- so I want to say, "My name -- My name is Ronnie." So what I've done: Rule No. 1, indent. Rule No. 2, you have to use
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚œ, "๋‚ด ์ด๋ฆ„์€ ๋กœ๋‹ˆ์•ผ"๋ผ๊ณ  ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•œ ๊ฑด, ๊ทœ์น™ 1, ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ, ๊ทœ์น™ 2,
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a capital letter at the beginning of every new sentence. Rule No. 3, you're going to
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์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ๋งˆ๋‹ค ๋Œ€๋ฌธ์ž๋ฅผ ์จ์•ผ ํ•ด. ๊ทœ์น™ 3, ๋งค ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋๋‚  ๋•Œ๋งˆ๋‹ค
03:28
use a period at the end of each sentence so that the person reading your beautiful paragraph
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๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ ๋„ˆ์˜ ์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์šด ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์ฝ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด
03:36
knows when to stop and take a break. For example, if I did not have a period here, I'd say,
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์–ธ์ œ ๋ฉˆ์ถฐ์„œ ์‰ด์ง€๋ฅผ ์•Œ๊ฒŒ๋” ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์•ผ. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์•ˆ ์ผ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ๋‚ด๊ฐ€
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"I'm a teacher my name is Ronnie." You need to break up your ideas. So one sentence has
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"๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ์ด์•ผ ๋‚ด ์ด๋ฆ„์€ ๋กœ๋‹ˆ์•ผ." ์ƒ๊ฐ(ํ•˜๊ณ ํ”ˆ ๋ง)์„ ์ชผ๊ฐœ์•ผ ํ•ด. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€
03:51
one thought and one period. "I am a teacher. My name is Ronnie."
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ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด. "๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ์ด์•ผ. ๋‚ด ์ด๋ฆ„์€ ๋กœ๋‹ˆ์•ผ."
03:58
Next one. No. 4. I see this in a lot of students' writing. The two basic things about a paragraph
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๋‹ค์Œ, ๊ทœ์น™ 4. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์€ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์˜ ๊ธ€์—์„œ ๋ณด๋Š”๋ฐ, ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๊ธฐ์ดˆ์  ์‚ฌํ•ญ์€
04:08
are the form and the content. The form is the most important. The form is the indentation.
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ํ˜•์‹๊ณผ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด์•ผ. ํ˜•์‹์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ด. ํ˜•์‹์€ ๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ์•ผ.
04:15
And don't use point form. Do you know what "point form" is? If you're typing something
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์  ํ˜•์‹์€ ์“ฐ์ง€๋งˆ. "์  ํ˜•์‹"์ด ๋ญ”์ง€ ์•Œ์•„? ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํƒ€์ž๋กœ ์น  ๋•Œ
04:23
on Word or on an email, "point form" is also called "bullets", which [makes shooting sounds].
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๋ฉ”๋ชจ์žฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—, "์  ํ˜•์‹"์€ "์ด์•Œ๋“ค"์ด๋ผ๊ณ ๋„ ๋ถˆ๋ฆฌ๋Š”๋ฐ, ํ‘ฑํ‘ฑ!
04:30
So "bullet" means you would put each new sentence on a new line. So if I was to write this:
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ "์ด์•Œ"์€ ๋งค ์ค„๋งˆ๋‹ค ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฑธ ๋งํ•ด. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ด๊ฑธ ์“ฐ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด,
04:37
"I'm a teacher", then I would put my next sentence here. This is not how to make a paragraph.
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"๋‚˜๋Š” ์„ ์ƒ์ด์•ผ", ๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ์“ฐ๊ฒ ์ง€. ์ด๊ฑด ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ์•ผ.
04:50
This is "point form". So this is a bad paragraph. What I'm going to do is I'm going to write
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์ด๊ฒŒ "์  ํ˜•์‹"์ด์•ผ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚˜์œ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์ง€. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๊ฑด,
05:01
until I almost reach the end of the page. Don't write past the end of the page because
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์ข…์ด๊ฐ€ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋๋‚˜๋Š” ์ง€์ ๊นŒ์ง€ ์จ๋‚ด๋ ค๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์•ผ. ์ข…์ด๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋„˜๊ฒจ์„œ ์“ฐ์ง€๋งˆ. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด
05:07
then you're writing on the desk and it gets messy. So "I am a teacher. My name is Ronnie.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ์ฑ…์ƒ์—๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ๋˜๊ฑฐ๋“ , ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ง€์ €๋ถ„ํ•ด์ง€๋‹ˆ๊นŒ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ "๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ์ด์•ผ. ๋‚ด ์ด๋ฆ„์€ ๋กœ๋‹ˆ์•ผ.
05:14
I live -- so I'm going to use up all of my line until the end -- I live in Canada." What
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๋‚œ ์‚ด์•„..." ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚  ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ค„๋“ค์—๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์“ธ ๊ฑฐ์•ผ. "๋‚œ ์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค์— ์‚ด์•„."
05:29
would you like to know about Canada? "Canada is very cold." In the winter. So as you can
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๋„Œ ์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋ญ˜ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ˆ? "์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค๋Š” ์•„์ฃผ ์ถ”์›Œ." ๊ฒจ์šธ์—๋Š”. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋„ˆ๋„
05:44
see by my example, I only stop my sentence at the end of my paper. I don't use each sentence
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๋‚ด ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ์—์„œ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋“ฏ์ด, ๋‚ด ์ข…์ด ๋์—์„œ๋งŒ ๋ฉˆ์ถฐ. ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๊ฐ๊ฐ ์ค„๋งˆ๋‹ค ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ณ  ๋ง์ด์ง€.
05:55
on each line. So four basic things to remember when you're
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋„ค๊ฐ€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ธ ์˜์–ด ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋„ค ๊ฐ€์ง€.
06:01
writing a basic English paragraph. The first one is: Indent the first line of your paragraph
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋Š”, ์˜ค์ง ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์˜ ์ฒซ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์—๋งŒ ๋“ค์—ฌ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๋ผ.
06:08
only. Use a capital letter at the beginning of each new line or each new sentence. And
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๊ฐ๊ฐ์˜ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์ค„์˜ ์‹œ์ž‘์—๋Š” ๋Œ€๋ฌธ์ž๋ฅผ ์จ๋ผ.
06:16
use a period at the end. Also, don't forget: Don't use point form. "I am a teacher. My
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๋งˆ์นจํ‘œ๋ฅผ ๋์— ์จ๋ผ. ๋˜ํ•œ, ์žŠ์ง€๋งˆ. ์  ํ˜•์‹์€ ์“ฐ์ง€๋งˆ. "๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ์ด์•ผ. ๋‚ด ์ด๋ฆ„์€
06:25
name is Ronnie. I live in Canada. Canada is very cold. Go to 'Subscribe' on YouTube so
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๋กœ๋‹ˆ์•ผ. ๋‚œ ์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค์— ์‚ด์•„. ์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค๋Š” ์•„์ฃผ ์ถ”์›Œ. ์œ ํŠœ๋ธŒ์— ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ˆŒ๋Ÿฌ. ๋„ˆ๊ฐ€
06:43
you can find more great lessons like this." Goodbye.
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๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๊ฐ•์˜๋ฅผ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ง์ด์•ผ." ์•ˆ๋…•.

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์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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