How to write a basic paragraph

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μ•„λž˜ μ˜λ¬Έμžλ§‰μ„ λ”λΈ”ν΄λ¦­ν•˜μ‹œλ©΄ μ˜μƒμ΄ μž¬μƒλ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

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Hello. Do you know how to write a basic paragraph? This is not only for ESL students. This is
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μ•ˆλ…•. λ„Œ 기본적인 문단을 μ“Έ 쀄 μ•„λ‹ˆ? μ–΄.. 이건 κ·Έμ € μ™Έκ΅­μ–΄λ‘œ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό λ°°μš°λŠ” 학생(ESL)λ“€λ§Œμ„ μœ„ν•œ 게 μ•„λ‹ˆμ•Ό.
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for everyone around the world, even if you speak English, even if you don't speak English.
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이건 μ „ 세계 λͺ¨λ“  μ‚¬λžŒμ„ μœ„ν•œ 거지. λ„ˆκ°€ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 쓰건 μ•ˆ 쓰건 간에,
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This is a very, very beautiful, basic lesson on how to write small, short, beautiful paragraphs.
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이건 μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ μž‘κ³  κ°„κ²°ν•˜κ³  μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ 문단을 μ“°λŠ”μ§€μ— λŒ€ν•œ μ•„μ£Ό μ•„μ£Ό μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ 기초적인 κ°•μ˜μ•Ό.
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"How to Write a Basic Paragraph". Now, I also want you to be very careful. This is not how
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"기본적인 문단을 μ“°λŠ” 방법". 자, λ‚œ λ˜ν•œ λ„€κ°€ μ£Όμ˜ν•΄μ£ΌκΈΈ λ°”λΌλŠ”λ°,
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to write a 200-word essay for your university exam. We don't have enough time in the world
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이건 λŒ€ν•™ μ‹œν—˜μ„ μœ„ν•΄ μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ 200단어 μžκΈ°μ†Œκ°œμ„œλ₯Ό 쓰냐에 λŒ€ν•œ 건 μ•„λ‹ˆμ•Ό. λ‚΄κ°€ κ·Έκ±Έ κ°€λ₯΄μ³μ€„ μ‹œκ°„μ€ μ—†κ³ ,
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for me to teach you that, and I probably forget. So this is, very simply, how to write a basic
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그리고 λ‚΄κ°€ μ•„λ§ˆ κΉŒλ¨Ήμ„ κ±°μ•Ό. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ, 이건 μ•„μ£Ό κ°„λ‹¨ν•œ, μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ 기본적인 문단을 μ“°λŠ”κ°€μ•Ό.
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English paragraph. One, two, three, four rules. Rule No. 1 is:
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ν•˜λ‚˜, λ‘˜, μ…‹, 넀가지 κ·œμΉ™μ΄ μžˆλŠ”λ°, μ²«μ§ΈλŠ”
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Indent, indent. What does "indent" mean? Indent, basically, means -- I learned this when I
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λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°(Indent)μ•Ό. λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°. "λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°"κ°€ 뭐냐고? λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°λŠ”, κ·Έλƒ₯, 이건 λ‚΄κ°€ 어릴 λ•Œ λ°°μ› λŠ”λ°,
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was a child -- you take your finger. You can have a big finger, a small finger -- I don't
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손가락을 가지고, 큰 손가락이든 μž‘μ€ 손가락이든, λ‚œ μ‹ κ²½ μ•ˆ 써.
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care. You take your finger or two fingers, and you make a little space like so. This is called an "indentation" or
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ν•œ μ†κ°€λ½μ΄λ‚˜, 두 손가락을 가지고, μž‘μ€ 곡간을 λ§Œλ“€μ–΄. 이런 μ‹μœΌλ‘œ. 이걸 "λ“€μ—¬μ“΄ 자리" ν˜Ήμ€
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"indent". So "indent" means you leave a space at the very first line of the paragraph. And
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"λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°"라고 뢈러. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°"λŠ” 문단 첫쀄에 곡간을 λ‚¨κ²¨λ†“λŠ” κ±Έ μ˜λ―Έν•˜μ§€.
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that's it. You do not leave a space at any other lines in the paragraph, only the first
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그리고 그게 λ‹€μ•Ό. λ¬Έλ‹¨μ˜ λ‹€λ₯Έ μ–΄λ–€ 쀄에도 곡간을 남기지 μ•Šμ•„. 였직 첫 μ€„μ—λ§Œ κ·ΈλŸ¬μ§€.
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line. So it's very important that you only indent the first line of your paragraph like
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이런 μ‹μœΌλ‘œ 문단 첫 μ€„μ—λ§Œ λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°λ₯Ό ν•˜λŠ” 게 μ•„μ£Ό μ€‘μš”ν•΄.
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so. Okay. The next thing that you have to do is you
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μ’‹μ•„. λ‹€μŒμœΌλ‘œ λ„€κ°€ ν•΄μ•Όν•  건,
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have to use a capital letter at the beginning of every sentence. Now, the word that I've
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맀 λ¬Έμž₯의 μ‹œμž‘λ§ˆλ‹€ λŒ€λ¬Έμž(Capital)λ₯Ό 써야 ν•΄. 자, λ‚΄κ°€ μ“΄ 글은
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written is "I". Another rule in English is that every single time you write "I", it must
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"I"λΌλŠ” 단어야. 또 λ‹€λ₯Έ μ˜μ–΄μ˜ κ·œμΉ™μ€ 맀 번 μ“Έ λ•Œλ§ˆλ‹€ "I"λ₯Ό 써버렀. λ°˜λ“œμ‹œ λŒ€λ¬Έμžμ—¬μ•Ό ν•΄.
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be a capital. So I'm going to write an example sentence for you to illustrate what I mean:
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚΄κ°€ 널 μœ„ν•΄ 무슨 말을 ν•˜λŠ”μ§€ 보여주기 μœ„ν•΄ μ˜ˆμ‹œλ¬Έμž₯을 써볼게.
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"I am a teacher." Okay? This is one sentence. So rule No. 3: At the end of my sentence,
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"λ‚œ 선생이닀." 됐어? 이게 ν•œ λ¬Έμž₯이야. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ μ…‹μ§Έ κ·œμΉ™μ€ 맀 λ¬Έμž₯ λλ§ˆλ‹€,
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I must use a period. A "period" is a dot, if you'd like. So "I am a teacher." So what
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λ‚΄κ°€ λ°˜λ“œμ‹œ λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ₯Ό 써야 ν•΄. "λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œ"λŠ” λ§ν•˜μžλ©΄ 점이야. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "λ‚˜λŠ” 선생이닀."
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I'm going to do is my next sentence... I'm going to begin it with a capital letter. "My"
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚΄κ°€ ν•˜λ €λŠ” 건, λ‚΄ λ‹€μŒ λ¬Έμž₯에 λŒ€λ¬Έμžλ‘œ μ‹œμž‘ν•˜λ €λŠ” κ±°μ•Ό. "λ‚΄"
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-- so I want to say, "My name -- My name is Ronnie." So what I've done: Rule No. 1, indent. Rule No. 2, you have to use
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚œ, "λ‚΄ 이름은 λ‘œλ‹ˆμ•Ό"라고 μ“°κ³  μ‹Άμ–΄. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚΄κ°€ ν•œ 건, κ·œμΉ™ 1, λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œ, κ·œμΉ™ 2,
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a capital letter at the beginning of every new sentence. Rule No. 3, you're going to
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μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ λ¬Έμž₯을 μ“Έ λ•Œλ§ˆλ‹€ λŒ€λ¬Έμžλ₯Ό 써야 ν•΄. κ·œμΉ™ 3, 맀 λ¬Έμž₯이 끝날 λ•Œλ§ˆλ‹€
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use a period at the end of each sentence so that the person reading your beautiful paragraph
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λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ₯Ό μ‚¬μš©ν•΄μ„œ λ„ˆμ˜ μ•„λ¦„λ‹€μš΄ 문단을 μ½λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ΄
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knows when to stop and take a break. For example, if I did not have a period here, I'd say,
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μ–Έμ œ λ©ˆμΆ°μ„œ 쉴지λ₯Ό μ•Œκ²Œλ” ν•˜λŠ” κ±°μ•Ό. 예λ₯Ό λ“€μ–΄, λ‚΄κ°€ λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ₯Ό μ—¬κΈ° μ•ˆ 썼닀면, λ‚΄κ°€
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"I'm a teacher my name is Ronnie." You need to break up your ideas. So one sentence has
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"λ‚œ 선생이야 λ‚΄ 이름은 λ‘œλ‹ˆμ•Ό." 생각(ν•˜κ³ ν”ˆ 말)을 μͺΌκ°œμ•Ό ν•΄. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ ν•œ λ¬Έμž₯은
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one thought and one period. "I am a teacher. My name is Ronnie."
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ν•œ κ°€μ§€μ˜ 생각과 λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ₯Ό κ°–κ³  μžˆμ–΄. "λ‚œ 선생이야. λ‚΄ 이름은 λ‘œλ‹ˆμ•Ό."
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Next one. No. 4. I see this in a lot of students' writing. The two basic things about a paragraph
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λ‹€μŒ, κ·œμΉ™ 4. λ‚΄κ°€ λ§Žμ€ ν•™μƒλ“€μ˜ κΈ€μ—μ„œ λ³΄λŠ”λ°, 문단에 λŒ€ν•œ 두 가지 기초적 사항은
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are the form and the content. The form is the most important. The form is the indentation.
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ν˜•μ‹κ³Ό λ‚΄μš©μ΄μ•Ό. ν˜•μ‹μ΄ κ°€μž₯ μ€‘μš”ν•΄. ν˜•μ‹μ€ λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°μ•Ό.
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And don't use point form. Do you know what "point form" is? If you're typing something
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그리고 점 ν˜•μ‹μ€ μ“°μ§€λ§ˆ. "점 ν˜•μ‹"이 뭔지 μ•Œμ•„? λ­”κ°€ νƒ€μžλ‘œ μΉ  λ•Œ
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on Word or on an email, "point form" is also called "bullets", which [makes shooting sounds].
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λ©”λͺ¨μž₯μ΄λ‚˜ 이메일에, "점 ν˜•μ‹"은 "μ΄μ•Œλ“€"이라고도 λΆˆλ¦¬λŠ”λ°, ν‘±ν‘±!
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So "bullet" means you would put each new sentence on a new line. So if I was to write this:
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "μ΄μ•Œ"은 맀 μ€„λ§ˆλ‹€ μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ λ¬Έμž₯을 μ“°λŠ” κ±Έ 말해. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚΄κ°€ 이걸 μ“°λ €κ³  ν•œλ‹€λ©΄,
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"I'm a teacher", then I would put my next sentence here. This is not how to make a paragraph.
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"λ‚˜λŠ” 선생이야", 그럼 λ‚΄κ°€ λ‹€μŒ λ¬Έμž₯을 여기에 쓰겠지. 이건 문단을 μ“°λŠ” 방법이 μ•„λ‹ˆμ•Ό.
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This is "point form". So this is a bad paragraph. What I'm going to do is I'm going to write
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이게 "점 ν˜•μ‹"이야. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚˜μœ 문단이 λ˜λŠ” 거지. λ‚΄κ°€ ν•˜λ €λŠ” 건,
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until I almost reach the end of the page. Don't write past the end of the page because
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쒅이가 거의 λλ‚˜λŠ” μ§€μ κΉŒμ§€ μ¨λ‚΄λ €κ°€λŠ” κ±°μ•Ό. 쒅이가 λλ‚˜λŠ” 뢀뢄을 λ„˜κ²¨μ„œ μ“°μ§€λ§ˆ. μ™œλƒν•˜λ©΄
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then you're writing on the desk and it gets messy. So "I am a teacher. My name is Ronnie.
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그러면 책상에닀가 μ“°λŠ” 게 λ˜κ±°λ“ , 그리고 μ§€μ €λΆ„ν•΄μ§€λ‹ˆκΉŒ. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ "λ‚œ 선생이야. λ‚΄ 이름은 λ‘œλ‹ˆμ•Ό.
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I live -- so I'm going to use up all of my line until the end -- I live in Canada." What
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λ‚œ μ‚΄μ•„..." κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ‚΄κ°€ 끝날 λ•ŒκΉŒμ§€ λͺ¨λ“  쀄듀에닀가 μ“Έ κ±°μ•Ό. "λ‚œ μΊλ‚˜λ‹€μ— μ‚΄μ•„."
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would you like to know about Canada? "Canada is very cold." In the winter. So as you can
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λ„Œ μΊλ‚˜λ‹€μ— λŒ€ν•΄ 뭘 μ•Œκ³  μ‹Άλ‹ˆ? "μΊλ‚˜λ‹€λŠ” μ•„μ£Ό μΆ”μ›Œ." κ²¨μšΈμ—λŠ”. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ„ˆλ„
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see by my example, I only stop my sentence at the end of my paper. I don't use each sentence
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λ‚΄ μ˜ˆλ¬Έμ—μ„œ λ³Ό 수 μžˆλ“―μ΄, λ‚΄ 쒅이 λμ—μ„œλ§Œ 멈좰. λ¬Έμž₯을 각각 μ€„λ§ˆλ‹€ μ“°λŠ” 게 μ•„λ‹ˆκ³  말이지.
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on each line. So four basic things to remember when you're
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κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λ„€κ°€ 기본적인 μ˜μ–΄ 문단을 μ“Έ λ•Œ κΈ°μ–΅ν•΄μ•Ό ν•  λ„€ 가지.
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writing a basic English paragraph. The first one is: Indent the first line of your paragraph
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첫 λ²ˆμ§ΈλŠ”, 였직 λ¬Έλ‹¨μ˜ 첫 λ¬Έμž₯μ—λ§Œ λ“€μ—¬μ“°κΈ°λ₯Ό 해라.
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only. Use a capital letter at the beginning of each new line or each new sentence. And
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각각의 μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ λ¬Έμž₯μ΄λ‚˜ μ€„μ˜ μ‹œμž‘μ—λŠ” λŒ€λ¬Έμžλ₯Ό 써라.
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use a period at the end. Also, don't forget: Don't use point form. "I am a teacher. My
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λ§ˆμΉ¨ν‘œλ₯Ό 끝에 써라. λ˜ν•œ, μžŠμ§€λ§ˆ. 점 ν˜•μ‹μ€ μ“°μ§€λ§ˆ. "λ‚œ 선생이야. λ‚΄ 이름은
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name is Ronnie. I live in Canada. Canada is very cold. Go to 'Subscribe' on YouTube so
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λ‘œλ‹ˆμ•Ό. λ‚œ μΊλ‚˜λ‹€μ— μ‚΄μ•„. μΊλ‚˜λ‹€λŠ” μ•„μ£Ό μΆ”μ›Œ. μœ νŠœλΈŒμ— κ΅¬λ…ν•˜κΈ° 눌러. λ„ˆκ°€
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you can find more great lessons like this." Goodbye.
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더 λ§Žμ€ κ°•μ˜λ₯Ό λ³Ό 수 있게 말이야." μ•ˆλ…•.

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