Improve ENGLISH Speaking Skills (How to Learn ENGLISH) English Conversation Practice

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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hello Roger we have alreadyย  finished the class what can I do for
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” Roger, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ด๋ฏธ ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋งˆ์ณค์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆด๊นŒ์š”?
00:07
you good morning Mr Smith wellย  I need to talk to you about
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” Smith ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜. ๊ธ€์Ž„์š”,
00:17
something I've been trying to improve myย  English writing skills but I find it so boring
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์ €๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ–ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์†”์งํžˆ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ง€๋ฃจํ•ด์„œ
00:31
honestly I don't like writing at allย  it feels like a chore to me I hate it
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์‹ซ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์ „ํ˜€ ์žฌ๋ฏธ์—†์–ด์š”. ๊ฐ€๋”์€ ์‹ซ์–ด์š”. ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ
00:37
sometimes I'm glad you broughtย  this up many students feel thatย ย 
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์ œ๊ธฐํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŽ์€ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด
00:44
way about writing but it's such anย  important skill don't worry thoughย ย 
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์ •๋ง ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด์—์š”. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
00:52
there are ways to make writing moreย  interesting and improve it quickly
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋” ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กญ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ  ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:00
let's start with some simple tips thatย  can make writing less of a burden for
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01:06
you that would be great Mr Smith I really wantย  to learn but I need to find a way to make it more
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์Šค๋ฏธ์Šค ์”จ, ์ €๋Š” ์ •๋ง ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋” ์ฆ๊ฒ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์ฐพ์•„์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:17
enjoyable absolutely first one of the fastestย  ways to improve your writing is to write aboutย ย 
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๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋น ๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์€
01:26
topics you enjoy if you're passionate aboutย  something whether it's sports music or even video
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๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์—ด์ •์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์Šคํฌ์ธ , ์Œ์•… ๋˜๋Š” ๋น„๋””์˜ค
01:36
games write short stories or blogย  posts about it this will help you stay
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๊ฒŒ์ž„์ด๋“  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋‹จํŽธ ์†Œ์„ค์ด๋‚˜ ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ์„ ์“ฐ์„ธ์š”. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด
01:46
motivated and practice without it feeling tooย ย 
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๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒŒ ๋Š๊ปด์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด์„œ๋„ ๋™๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:52
serious for example I likeย  writing about the future
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์ €๋Š” ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฏธ๋ž˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ
02:00
about the future um I never thoughtย  of that I guess writing about soccerย ย 
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๋ฏธ๋ž˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ ์Œ ๋‚˜๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์—†์–ด ์ถ•๊ตฌ
02:09
or my favorite music could be fun butย  what if I run out of ideas or get a
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๋‚˜ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋Š” ์Œ์•…์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์žฌ๋ฐŒ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์ง€๋งŒ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๊ณ ๊ฐˆ๋˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ฃผ์‹์ด ์ƒ๊ธฐ๋ฉด ์–ด๋–กํ•˜์ง€?
02:15
stock that's a great question well anotherย  tip is to keep a journal or a diary in
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์ข‹์€ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด๋„ค์š”. ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํŒ์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”.
02:25
English you know how have to write long entriesย  every day just a few sentences about what you
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๊ธด ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์•„์•ผ ํ•˜์ž–์•„์š”. ๋งค์ผ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด
02:35
did or how you felt that theyย  can make a big difference over
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ํ•œ ์ผ์ด๋‚˜ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋Š๋‚€ ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ช‡ ๋ฌธ์žฅ๋งŒ ์จ๋„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ง€๋‚˜๋ฉด์„œ ํฐ ๋ณ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:45
time this helps you practice expressingย  your thoughts naturally and the best thing
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์€ ์ ์€ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ
02:55
is you don't need to worry about makingย  everything perfect it's your personal space to
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๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑฑ์ •์ด ํ•„์š” ์—†๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹คํ—˜ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ณต๊ฐ„
03:04
experiment I like the idea of a journalย  but what if I keep making the same grammar
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์ €๋Š” ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์  ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๊ณ„์†ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋–กํ•˜์ฃ ?
03:14
mistakes I feel embarrassed when I read backย  what I wrote and see errors I feel bad whenย ย 
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์ œ๊ฐ€ ์“ด ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฝ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ผ์ด ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋ฉด ๊ธฐ๋ถ„์ด ๋‚˜์˜์ฃ .
03:25
that happens I understand and that's very commonย  to deal with that try reading aloud what you've
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์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ผ์ด ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ”ํ•œ ์ผ์ด์—์š”.์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์ž์‹ ์ด
03:34
written when you read your writing out loudย  you can hear if something sounds wrong or
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์“ด ๊ธ€์„ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋‚ด์–ด ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€ ์ž˜๋ชป๋˜์—ˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜
03:44
unnatural it's like being your own editorย  also don't be afraid to use tools like grammar
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์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ์ง€ ์•Š์€์ง€ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ํŽธ์ง‘์ž๊ฐ€ ๋œ ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ฒ€์‚ฌ๊ธฐ์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‘๋ ค์›Œํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
03:54
Checkers to help identify repeated mistakesย  they can be a great Learning Resource believe
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๋ฐ˜๋ณต๋˜๋Š” ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์‹๋ณ„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ •๋ง ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ์ž๋ฃŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:05
me that sounds helpful sometimes I don'tย  even notice my own mistakes when I just read
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๊ฐ€๋”์€ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์ง€๋งŒ ์•Œ์•„์ฐจ๋ฆฌ์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ๋•Œ๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์กฐ์šฉํžˆ ์ฝ์„ ๋•Œ์˜ ๋‚ด ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡
04:15
silently is there anything elseย  I can do to improve faster youย ย 
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์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋” ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
04:21
know I wouldn't like it to take too much
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์•Œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ์ €๋Š” ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ํ•„์š”๋กœ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:24
time yes try to imitate at good examplesย  of writing read short stories articles orย ย 
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์˜ˆ, ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋ชจ๋ฐฉํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ๋‹จํŽธ ์†Œ์„ค ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋‚˜
04:38
essays in English and pick out sentencesย  or phrases that you like they can be from
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์—์„ธ์ด๋ฅผ ์ฝ๊ณ  ์„ ํƒํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ์„ ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์—์„œ ์ฐพ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ , ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ง๋กœ
04:44
internet you can then practice rewritingย  them in your own words this helps you
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๋‹ค์‹œ ์“ฐ๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ด ๋Œ€ํ™”์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ
04:54
learn sentence structure andย  vocabulary in a natural way like this
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๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์กฐ์™€ ์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:03
conversation it's like learning from theย  experts by copying their style but in your own
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์˜ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์„ ๋”ฐ๋ผํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ง€๋งŒ, ์ž์‹ ์˜
05:13
voice so what I understand with thisย  is reading a lot is also important
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๋ชฉ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋กœ, ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ดํ•ดํ•œ ๋ฐ”์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ๋งŽ์ด ์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ฃ ?
05:23
right yes reading and writing go hand in handย  the more you read the better your writing will
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์ฝ๊ธฐ์™€ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์„œ๋กœ ๋ฐ€์ ‘ํžˆ ์—ฐ๊ด€๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŽ์ด ์ฝ์„์ˆ˜๋ก ๊ธ€์ด ๋” ์ข‹์•„์งˆ ๊ฒƒ
05:34
be pay attention to how sentencesย  are formed how ideas are
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์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ˜•์„ฑ๋˜๋Š”์ง€, ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ
05:42
organized and the types of words usedย  when you find interesting expressions or
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๊ตฌ์„ฑ๋˜๋Š”์ง€, ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ์œ ํ˜•์— ์ฃผ์˜ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กœ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์ด๋‚˜ ๊ด€์šฉ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
05:52
idioms make a note of them and tryย  using them in your own writing it's very
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๋ฉ”๋ชจํ•ด๋‘๊ณ  ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๋งค์šฐ
06:02
helpful I see that makes sense butย  sometimes I just don't know how to start
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๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ง์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์ง€๋งŒ ๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š”
06:12
writing even if I have an idea seriously Iย  sometimes feel lost about it what should I do
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด๋„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ธ€์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์„ ๋•Œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ํ˜ผ๋ž€์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›Œ์ง€๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ๊นŒ์š”?
06:22
then well a good technique for that isย  called rewriting let me explain it to you
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๊ธ€์Ž„์š”, ๊ทธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ข‹์€ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๊ธˆ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:32
now this means sending a time for five or 10ย  minutes and writing whatever comes to your
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5๋ถ„์ด๋‚˜ 10๋ถ„ ์ •๋„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚ด์–ด
06:42
mind without stopping don't worry aboutย  grammar spelling or making sense at
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๋– ์˜ค๋ฅด๋Š” ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋ฉˆ์ถ”์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ์ฒ ์ž, ์˜๋ฏธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
06:52
first the goal is to get your thoughts flowingย  later you can go back and organize your
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๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ๋‚˜์ค‘์— ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ํ˜๋Ÿฌ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ์•„๊ฐ€์„œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:02
ideas free writing is a powerful way toย  unlock creativity and make writing feel less
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์ž์œ ๋กœ์šด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์ฐฝ์˜์„ฑ์„ ๋ฐœํœ˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ
07:12
intimidating but once you have your ideas downย  the next step is just as important editing and
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๋‘๋ ค์›€์„ ๋œ ๋Š๋ผ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•œ ํ›„์—๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ธ ํŽธ์ง‘๊ณผ ์ˆ˜์ •์ด ๋˜‘๊ฐ™์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:22
revising this is where you take your Ro writingย  and polish it don't expect your first draft to be
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์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„์—์„œ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค๋“ฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋“ฌ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์ด ์™„๋ฒฝํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
07:32
perfect good writing often comes fromย  rewriting and improving what you started
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์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์€ ์ข…์ข… ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ์„œ ๋‚˜์˜ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:42
with h so the thing is I shouldย  spend more time editing my
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๋‚ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ํŽธ์ง‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ํ• ์• ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:51
work exactly but don't do it rightย  after you finish writing take a short
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์นœ ์งํ›„์— ํŽธ์ง‘ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์งง์€
08:01
break then come back with freshย  eyes this way you'll catch more
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ํœด์‹์„ ์ทจํ•œ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‹œ๊ฐ์œผ๋กœ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋Œ์•„์™€์„œ ํŽธ์ง‘ํ•  ๋•Œ ๋” ๋งŽ์€
08:11
mistakes and think of better ways to expressย  your ideas when editing focus on one thing atย ย 
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์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•  ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ์— ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
08:21
a time start by looking at sentence structureย  then move to grammar and and finally check your
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๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋จผ์ € ์‚ดํŽด๋ณธ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ๋„˜์–ด๊ฐ€๊ณ  ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ์ฒ ์ž๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
08:31
spelling and punctuation oh you canย  also try practicing with writing
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ตฌ๋‘์ ๋„ ์žˆ๊ณ , ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต๋„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
08:40
prompts these are short sentences orย  questions designed to inspire ideas for
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์ด๊ฑด ์งง์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ๋“ค์ด๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. ๋˜๋Š” ์˜ˆ ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ด‰๋ฐœํ•˜๋„๋ก ์„ค๊ณ„๋œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ.์ž์‹ ์„ ์ž๋ž‘์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์—ฌ๊ฒผ๋˜ ๋•Œ๋ฅผ
08:51
example a prompt might be describeย  a time when you felt proud of
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์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:00
yourself this is one of my favorite waysย  to practice writing I do it every day to be
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.์†”์งํžˆ ๋งํ•ด์„œ ์ €๋Š” ๋งค์ผ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:10
honest use the prompts to write shortย  paragraphs they help train your mind to think
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์งง์€ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์“ฐ๋ ค๋ฉด ํ”„๋กฌํ”„ํŠธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ›ˆ๋ จํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:20
creatively and express yourself inย  different ways it works very well believe
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์ฐฝ์˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ž์‹ ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋งค์šฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ฏฟ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š”
09:30
me I like that idea I think writingย  from prompts could make it more
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๊ทธ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ”„๋กฌํ”„ํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋”
09:39
fun is there a way to make sure myย  vocabulary improves as I practice
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์žฌ๋ฏธ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์–ดํœ˜๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
09:49
writing yes one great technique is toย  create a word Bank when you come across new
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๋„ค, ์ข‹์€ ๊ธฐ์ˆ  ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋Š” ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ ‘ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋‹จ์–ด ์€ํ–‰์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์„œ
09:59
words challenge yourself to useย  these new words in your writing this
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์ด๋Ÿฐ
10:09
practice not only improves your vocabularyย  but also makes your writing more varied and
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์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์–ดํœ˜๋ ฅ์ด ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋  ๋ฟ๋งŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•˜๊ณ 
10:19
interesting that's a great idea Mr Smith Iย  always see new words but I forget them quickly
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ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กœ์›Œ์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ •๋ง ์ข‹์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์Šค๋ฏธ์Šค ์”จ, ์ €๋Š” ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ณด์ง€๋งŒ ์žŠ์–ด๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณค ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
10:29
quickly and don't forget about feedbackย  share your writing with friends um
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๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ์นœ๊ตฌ,
10:38
classmates or even online languageย  communities constructive feedback helps you
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๋ฐ˜ ์นœ๊ตฌ ๋˜๋Š” ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์–ธ์–ด ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ์™€ ๊ธ€์„ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๊ฑด์„ค์ ์ธ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด
10:49
understand how you writing is perceivedย  by others and what areas you can work on
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ›์•„๋“ค์ด๋Š”์ง€ , ์–ด๋–ค ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„ํŒ
11:02
just remember don't be discouraged byย  criticism it's a tool for growth remember
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์— ๋‚™๋‹ดํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋„๊ตฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
11:09
that I guess that makes sense sometimesย  I'm nervous about what others might
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๋•Œ๋•Œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ง์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์„
11:18
say but you know it's important to learnย  from it and the more you share your work
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๋งํ• ์ง€ ๊ฑฑ์ •๋˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ž‘์—…์„ ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ๊ณต์œ ํ• ์ˆ˜๋ก
11:32
the more confident you'll become lastly tryย  to write consistently even if it's just forย ย 
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๋” ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ์ƒ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ
11:38
15 minutes a day consistency builds habit andย  habit leads to improvement over time that's the
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ํ•˜๋ฃจ 15๋ถ„๋งŒ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์ผ๊ด€๋˜๊ฒŒ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ผ๊ด€์„ฑ์€ ์Šต๊ด€์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ  ์Šต๊ด€์€ ๋‹ค์Œ์„ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ง€๋‚จ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€
11:48
truth writing regularly even short piecesย  will make a big difference in your skills
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์‚ฌ์‹ค์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์งง์€ ๊ธ€์ด๋ผ๋„ ์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋ฉด ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์— ํฐ ์ฐจ์ด๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
12:01
thanks Mr Smith I feel more motivatedย  now I'll try this tips and see how it
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๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์Šค๋ฏธ์Šค ์”จ. ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ๋” ๋™๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋ถ€์—ฌ๋œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ํŒ์„ ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด ๋ณด๊ณ  ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ
12:08
goes excellent what about youย  guys did you like these tips about
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๋˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€ ์–ด๋–ป์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํŒ์ด ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
12:17
writing would you like more or maybe you needย  help with any other topic just let me know
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๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์›ํ•˜์‹œ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”? ์‹œ์ฒญํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ
12:31
thanks for watching by the wayย  like and share this video take
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๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์ด ์˜์ƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„์š”ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณต์œ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ์ž˜ ์ง€๋‚ด์„ธ์š”.
12:36
care I hope you liked this conversationย  if you could improve your English a littleย ย 
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์ด ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“œ์…จ์œผ๋ฉด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋˜์…จ๋‹ค๋ฉด
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