Improve English Speaking Skills Everyday (Tips to speak in English) English Conversation Practice

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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morning teacher it was an excellentย  class I am learning a lot of things from
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์•„์นจ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜ ์ •๋ง ์ข‹์€ ์ˆ˜์—…์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋งŽ์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”
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you hello Ryan I am happy to hear that that'sย  the idea that you can learn English well yesย ย 
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ๋ผ์ด์–ธ ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ๋ฐฐ์šธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋ผ ๋‹คํ–‰์ด๋„ค์š” ๋„ค
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teacher well I am learning a lot of thingsย  but there is something I'm having trouble
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์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜ ๊ธ€์Ž„์š” ๋งŽ์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•œ ๊ฒŒ ์žˆ์–ด์š” ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊ฒผ์–ด
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with I'm doing well in everything except writingย  I need to learn to write in English I see well Iย ย 
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋นผ๊ณ ๋Š” ๋‹ค ์ž˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด ์˜์–ด ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ์•ผ ํ•ด ์ž˜ ์•Œ๊ฒ ์–ด
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noticed that you didn't do very well in your lastย  exam don't worry I will help you I will tell youย ย 
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์ง€๋‚œ ์‹œํ—˜์—์„œ ์„ฑ์ ์ด ์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฑธ ๋ดค์–ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋„์™€์ค„๊ฒŒ
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how to write in English very well learningย  to write in English is important for Globalย ย 
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๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„๊ฒŒ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž˜ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฒ• ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ธ€๋กœ๋ฒŒ
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Communication education career opportunitiesย  travel and using the internet it helps youย ย 
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์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜์— ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ต์œก ์ง์—… ๊ธฐํšŒ ์—ฌํ–‰๊ณผ ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค๊ณผ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ๋˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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connect with people worldwide access educationalย  resources improve job prospects navigate travelย ย 
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๊ต์œก ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค์— ์ ‘๊ทผํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ทจ์—… ์ „๋ง์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌํ–‰
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situations and participate in online communitiesย  so if you want to learn how to write in Englishย ย 
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์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ํƒ์ƒ‰ํ•˜๊ณ  ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ์— ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋จผ์ € ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ์„ธ์š”.
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first I will recommend to start with a clearย  idea before you begin writing know what youย ย 
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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want to say think about the main idea orย  message of your writing this is importantย ย 
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๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ๊ธ€์˜ ์ฃผ์š” ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋‚˜ ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ด๋Š”
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because it helps you stay focused andย  organized if you have a clear idea itย ย 
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์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด
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is easier to find the right words andย  sentences another thing I know you'reย ย 
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์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด์™€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์‰ฝ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด
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still learning English so use simple sentencesย  when you're learning to write in English it isย ย 
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์•„์ง ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์šธ ๋•Œ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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best to use simple sentences they usually haveย  one subject and one verb for example the cat
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๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์ฃผ์ œ์™€ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋™์‚ฌ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ๊ณ ์–‘์ด๊ฐ€
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sleeps as you get better you can start usingย  more complex sentences but at first keep itย ย 
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์ž ์„ ์ž˜ ๋•Œ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์•„์ง€๋ฉด ๋” ๋ณต์žกํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š”
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simple also be clear and direct good writing isย  clear and direct this means you should say whatย ย 
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๋‹จ์ˆœํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง์ ‘์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ข‹์€ ๊ธ€์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง์ ‘์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰,
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you mean in a simple and straight forwardย  way avoid using too many words or difficult
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์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ”๋ฅผ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง์„ค์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋งํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋‚˜ ์–ด๋ ค์šด
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words for example instead of saying the weatherย  was very inclement you can say the weather wasย ย 
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๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋‚ ์”จ๊ฐ€ ๋งค์šฐ ์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋Œ€์‹  ๋‚ ์”จ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜๋นด๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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bad oh it is important to practice grammarย  grammar is the set of rules for how words areย ย 
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๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ์–ธ์–ด์—์„œ ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ผ๋ จ์˜ ๊ทœ์น™์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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used in a language good grammar makes your writingย  easier to read and understand how can you practice
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์ข‹์€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฝ๊ณ  ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋” ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์—ฐ์Šต ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•
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grammar you can practice grammar by readingย  English books doing exercises and wrri writingย ย 
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์˜์–ด ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ์Œ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž์ฃผ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋ฉฐ
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often what else expand your vocabulary havingย  a good vocabulary helps you express your ideasย ย 
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๊ทธ ๋ฐ–์˜ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์–ดํœ˜๋ ฅ์„ ํ™•์žฅํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์€ ์–ดํœ˜๋ ฅ์„ ๊ฐ–๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋” ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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more clearly you can expand your vocabularyย  by reading a lot and learning new words every
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๋งŽ์ด ์ฝ๊ณ  ์–ดํœ˜๋ ฅ์„ ํ™•์žฅํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งค์ผ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ธฐ
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day when you learn a new word try to use it inย  a sentence this helps you remember it better
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์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šธ ๋•Œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ๋” ์ž˜ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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also edit and revise writing is a processย  that includes editing and revising afterย ย 
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ํŽธ์ง‘ ๋ฐ ์ˆ˜์ • ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ํ›„ ํŽธ์ง‘ ๋ฐ ์ˆ˜์ •์ด ํฌํ•จ๋˜๋Š” ๊ณผ์ •์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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you write your first draft take some timeย  to review it check for mistakes in grammarย ย 
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๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ฑธ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์ฒ ์ž์™€ ๊ตฌ๋‘์  ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋„
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spelling and punctuation also make sureย  your ideas are clear and well organized
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž˜ ์ •๋ฆฌ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
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revising your writing helps you make it better youย  can ask a friend or teacher to help you with this
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์ž‘๋ฌธ์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ธ€์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„์—์„œ ์นœ๊ตฌ๋‚˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜์—๊ฒŒ ๋„์›€์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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step and if you really want to improve yourย  writing then you have to read a lot seriouslyย ย 
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์ž‘๋ฌธ์„ ์ •๋ง๋กœ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‹ค์Œ์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๋งŽ์ด ์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ง„์ง€ํ•˜๊ฒŒ
04:49
reading helps you become a better writer whenย  you read you see how other people use words and
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์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ์ž‘๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ๋‹จ์–ด์™€
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sentences you can learn new words andย  phrases and see different ways to express
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๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋‹จ์–ด์™€ ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ 
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ideas try to read different types of writingย  like stories articles and essays it is
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์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋‚˜ ์—์„ธ์ด์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ๊ธ€์„ ์ฝ์œผ๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
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important write regularly because like anyย  other skill writing gets better with practiceย ย 
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์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š” ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค .
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try to write something every day it does notย  have to be long you can write a diary entry aย ย 
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๋งค์ผ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ๋ ค๊ณ  ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๊ธธ์ง€ ์•Š์•„๋„ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŽธ์ง€
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letter or a short story The more you write theย  better you will become it worked really wellย ย 
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๋‚˜ ์งง์€ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์“ธ์ˆ˜๋ก ๋” ์ข‹์•„์งˆ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ ๋ง์„ ๋ฏฟ์œผ ์„ธ์š”
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for me believe me and when you write don'tย  forget to use linking words they are very
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. ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
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important linking words also knownย  as transition words help connect yourย ย 
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์ „ํ™˜ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ผ๊ณ ๋„ ์•Œ๋ ค์ง„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š”
06:02
ideas and make your writing flow better someย  common linking words are and but so becauseย ย 
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋” ์ข‹๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
06:11
however and therefore for example you can sayย  I like to read books and I also enjoy watching
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. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋‚˜๋Š” ์ฑ… ์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๊ณ 
06:23
movies linking words make your writingย  more cohesive and help your reader
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์˜ํ™” ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ธ€์ด ๋”์šฑ ์‘์ง‘๋ ฅ์ด ์ƒ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ๋…์ž๊ฐ€
06:32
understand the relationship betweenย  your ideas oh something else pleaseย ย 
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์•„์ด๋””์–ด ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„, ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ
06:41
avoid repetition try not to use the same wordsย  or phrases over and over again it doesn't look
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๋ฐ˜๋ณต์„ ํ”ผํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋‚˜ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ
06:52
good repetition can make your writingย  boring use synonyms or different
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์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š์•„ ๋ณด์ธ๋‹ค ๋ฐ˜๋ณต์€ ๊ธ€์„ ์ง€๋ฃจํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋™์˜์–ด๋‚˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ
07:00
Expressions to say the same thing in a new wayย  for example instead of saying the movie was
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ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์˜ํ™”๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋Œ€์‹ 
07:11
good the book was good too you can sayย  the movie was good the book was also
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์ฑ…๋„ ์ข‹์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ํ™”๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฑ…๋„
07:21
enjoyable this makes your writingย  more varied and interesting what
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์ฆ๊ฑฐ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋”์šฑ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ํฅ๋ฏธ๋กœ์›Œ์กŒ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ
07:30
else oh pay attention to spellingย  correct spelling is important for Clear
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๋ฐ–์— ์ฒ ์ž๋ฒ•์— ์ฃผ์˜ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ •ํ™•ํ•œ ์ฒ ์ž๋ฒ•์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ
07:39
communication misspelled words can confuseย  your reader and make your writing look
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์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต์— ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒ ์ž๊ฐ€ ํ‹€๋ฆฐ ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š” ๋…์ž๋ฅผ ํ˜ผ๋ž€์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ธ€์„ ๋‹๋ณด์ด๊ฒŒ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:48
unprofessional always check your spelling beforeย  you finish writing you can use a dictionary
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๋น„์ „๋ฌธ์  ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์น˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ฒ ์ž๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์‚ฌ์ „
08:02
or a spell check tool toย  help you oh this is also very
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์ด๋‚˜ ์ฒ ์ž ๊ฒ€์‚ฌ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„ ์ด๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋งค์šฐ
08:09
important practice writing different typesย  of text for example stories essays reportsย ย 
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์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ, ์—์„ธ์ด ๋ณด๊ณ ์„œ
08:19
and letters each type of text has its own styleย  and structure for example a story usually has
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, ํŽธ์ง€์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ํ…์ŠคํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๊ฐ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ํ…์ŠคํŠธ์—๋Š” ๊ณ ์œ ํ•œ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด ์žˆ๊ณ  ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ์˜ ๊ตฌ์กฐ์—๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ
08:31
a beginning middle and end while Anessa has anย  introduction body partographs and a conclusionย ย 
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์‹œ์ž‘๊ณผ ๋์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด Anessa์—๋Š” ์„œ๋ฌธ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„ ๊ทธ๋ž˜ํ”„์™€ ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
08:41
practicing different types of writing helps youย  become more versatile and improves your writing
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๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋ฉด ๋”์šฑ ๋‹ค์žฌ๋‹ค๋Šฅํ•ด์ง€๊ณ  ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ
08:47
skills many of my students ask me if theyย  can use technology to write in English
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๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ํ–ฅ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŽ์€ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ฌป์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด๋กœ
09:01
of course use technology to help youย  that is an excellent tool in factย ย 
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๋ฌผ๋ก  ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•œ ๋„๊ตฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ
09:10
there are many tools available that canย  help you improve your writing the spell
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๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๋งŽ์€ ๋„๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งž์ถค๋ฒ•
09:16
Checkers and grammar checkers can help youย  find and correct mistakes online dictionariesย ย 
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๊ฒ€์‚ฌ๊ธฐ์™€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ฒ€์‚ฌ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์‚ฌ์ „์€
09:29
can help you find the right words writingย  apps can help you organize your ideas andย ย 
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์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์•ฑ์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ 
09:36
stay focused using technology can make theย  writing process easier and more efficient soย ย 
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์ง‘์ค‘๋ ฅ์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๊ณผ์ •์„ ๋” ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ํšจ์œจ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ
09:45
yeah use it oh look at the time I would likeย  to help you more but we don't have more time
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์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์•„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด์„ธ์š” ๋” ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€๋งŒ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋” ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
09:54
sorry but if you want to know more about how toย  improve your writing skills just comment I hopeย ย 
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์ฃ„์†กํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž‘๋ฌธ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋” ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์œผ์‹œ๋ฉด ๋Œ“๊ธ€์„ ๋‹ฌ์•„์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
10:07
you liked this conversation if you could improveย  your English a little more please subscribe toย ย 
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์ด ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“œ์…จ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ข€ ๋” ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด
10:13
the channel and share this video with a friendย  and if you want to support this channel youย ย 
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์ฑ„๋„์„ ๊ตฌ๋…ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ด ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์นœ๊ตฌ์™€ ๊ณต์œ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ์ด ์ฑ„๋„์„ ํ›„์›ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‹ค์Œ์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜์„ธ์š”
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can join us or click on the super thanks buttonย  thank you very much for your support take care
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. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์Šˆํผ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. ์ง€์›ํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฑด๊ฐ•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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