TOEFL Essay Types & Essay Patterns

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์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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Hi, I'm Rebecca, and in today's video we're going to be talking about TOEFL, once again,
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์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”, ์ €๋Š” Rebecca์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋น„๋””์˜ค์—์„œ๋Š” TOEFL์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ
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the TOEFL IBT, and we're talking about the writing section of that exam.
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TOEFL IBT์™€ ๊ทธ ์‹œํ—˜์˜ ์ž‘๋ฌธ ์„น์…˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:16
Specifically, we'll be talking about TOEFL essay topics.
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ํŠนํžˆ, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” TOEFL ์—์„ธ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:21
There are five different kinds, we'll be discussing those, and after that we'll look at two different
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5๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ข…๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ณ , ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผ์˜ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๊ณ , ๊ทธ ํ›„์—
00:27
essay patterns that you have to follow depending on the type of topic that you are given.
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์ฃผ์–ด์ง„ ์ฃผ์ œ์˜ ์œ ํ˜•์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋”ฐ๋ผ์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์—์„ธ์ด ํŒจํ„ด์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณผ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:34
As you know, in the TOEFL writing, in the independent writing, you have only one topic
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์•„์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ, TOEFL ์ž‘๋ฌธ, ๋…๋ฆฝ ์ž‘๋ฌธ์—์„œ
00:39
which is assigned to you.
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์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ํ• ๋‹น๋œ ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” ๋‹จ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฟ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:41
You have to be able to identify what type of topic that is, what exactly you're being
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์–ด๋–ค ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์ฃผ์ œ์ธ์ง€, ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ๋ฌด์—‡์„
00:46
asked to do, and then write a five-paragraph essay that responds to that question.
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ํ•˜๋„๋ก ์š”์ฒญ๋ฐ›์•˜๋Š”์ง€ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•œ ๋‹ค์Œ ํ•ด๋‹น ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ•˜๋Š” 5๋‹จ๋ฝ ์—์„ธ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:54
So let's start by examining the five different types of essay topics, OK?
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๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ์—์„ธ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์˜ ๋‹ค์„ฏ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์œ ํ˜•์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
00:59
The first one, as you can see, is agree or disagree.
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๋ณด์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋Š” ๋™์˜ ๋˜๋Š” ๋™์˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:05
Let me give you an example of an agree or disagree type of question.
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๋™์˜ ๋˜๋Š” ๋™์˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:10
They might give you a quotation such as, "Parents are the best teachers.
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ "๋ถ€๋ชจ๋‹˜์ด ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ๊ต์‚ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:15
Do you agree or disagree?
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋™์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ, ๋™์˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋‹น์‹ ์˜
01:18
Give reasons and examples to substantiate your answer, to explain your answer."
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๋Œ€๋‹ต์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋Œ€๋‹ต์„ ์ž…์ฆํ•  ์ด์œ ์™€ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ธ์šฉ๋ฌธ์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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So usually there's a quotation or a sentence, and you're asked whether you agree or disagree.
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์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์šฉ๋ฌธ์ด๋‚˜ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋™์˜ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋™์˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”์ง€ ๋ฌป์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:29
All right?
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€?
01:30
Well, we're having some motorcycles here today, so you might hear some motorcycles in the
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์Œ, ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์˜คํ† ๋ฐ”์ด๊ฐ€ ๋ช‡ ๋Œ€ ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ๋ฐฐ๊ฒฝ์—์„œ ์˜คํ† ๋ฐ”์ด ์†Œ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋“ค๋ฆด ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
01:36
background.
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01:37
We are filming this in Toronto, Canada.
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์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค ํ† ๋ก ํ† ์—์„œ ์ดฌ์˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:39
It's a beautiful summer's day, and so everybody's out on the street.
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์•„๋ฆ„๋‹ค์šด ์—ฌ๋ฆ„๋‚ ์ด๋ผ ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ๊ฑฐ๋ฆฌ๋กœ ๋‚˜์„ฐ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:43
You might hear some of them in the background, OK?
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๋ฐฑ๊ทธ๋ผ์šด๋“œ์—์„œ ๊ทธ ์ค‘ ์ผ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋“ค์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:46
All right.
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€.
01:47
Another example of agree or disagree is this one.
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๋™์˜ ๋˜๋Š” ๋™์˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์˜ˆ๋Š” ์ด๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
01:52
Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
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๋ˆ์„ ๋งŽ์ด ๋ฒ„๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋งŒ์ด ์„ฑ๊ณตํ•œ๋‹ค.
01:56
Again, this sentence would be given to you, and then you would be asked, "Do you agree
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๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ์ฃผ์–ด์งˆ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚˜์„œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€ "๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋™์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ, ๋™์˜
02:01
or disagree?
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ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
02:03
Give reasons and details to explain your answer."
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๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋Œ€๋‹ต์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ์ด์œ ์™€ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค."๋ผ๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:06
That's the first type.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์œ ํ˜•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:08
That's one type.
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๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์œ ํ˜•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:09
Sorry, not the first, but that's one type of essay question.
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์ฃ„์†กํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋Š” ์•„๋‹ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์—์„ธ์ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์˜ ํ•œ ์œ ํ˜•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:13
The second type of essay topic is a preference.
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๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์—์„ธ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” ์„ ํ˜ธ๋„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:17
So I'll give you an example of that.
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ทธ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ์ค„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:20
Some people prefer to study alone.
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์–ด๋–ค ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ํ˜ผ์ž ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:23
Others prefer to study with a group.
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๋ฃน๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:26
Which do you prefer?
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ์–ด๋Š ์ชฝ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
02:28
Give reasons and details to explain your answer.
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๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ์™€ ์„ธ๋ถ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
02:30
OK?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
02:31
So, in this case, you have two different situations.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์ด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:35
Some people prefer to study alone.
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์–ด๋–ค ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ํ˜ผ์ž ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:36
Some people prefer to study in a group.
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์–ด๋–ค ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๋ฃน์œผ๋กœ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:39
And which do you prefer?
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
02:40
You have to choose one and write about that one.
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ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•ด์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:44
Another example of that, some people prefer to spend their free time indoors.
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๋˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์˜ˆ๋กœ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ์‹ค๋‚ด์—์„œ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:50
Other people enjoy spending their leisure time outdoors.
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๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ์•ผ์™ธ์—์„œ ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฆ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
02:53
What do you prefer?
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๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
02:54
So, again, this is an example of a preference type of question.
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๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ์„ ํ˜ธ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์˜ ์˜ˆ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:00
The third type of essay question that you could get on the TOEFL iBT independent writing
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TOEFL iBT ๋…๋ฆฝ ์ž‘๋ฌธ์—์„œ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ธ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์—์„ธ์ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์€
03:05
is an "if" question or an imaginary question.
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"๋งŒ์•ฝ" ์งˆ๋ฌธ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์ƒ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:09
An example of this is, "If you could visit any country in the world, which country would
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์ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์˜ˆ๋Š” "์„ธ๊ณ„ ์–ด๋Š ๋‚˜๋ผ๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋Š ๋‚˜๋ผ๋ฅผ
03:15
you like to visit?"
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๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?"์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:17
Or "If you could meet a famous person, who would you like to meet?"
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๋˜๋Š” "์œ ๋ช…ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ๋งŒ๋‚  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋‚˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?"
03:22
So, again, this is sort of an imaginary question or an "if" hypothetical situation that they're
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๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌป๋Š” ๊ฐ€์ƒ์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ ๋˜๋Š” "๋งŒ์ผ" ๊ฐ€์ƒ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
03:28
asking you about.
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.
03:30
The fourth one is a description or explanation type of question.
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๋„ค ๋ฒˆ์งธ๋Š” ์„ค๋ช… ๋˜๋Š” ์„ค๋ช… ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:36
For example, "What are the characteristics of a good neighbor?"
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์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, "์ข‹์€ ์ด์›ƒ์˜ ํŠน์ง•์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?"
03:41
Or "What are the characteristics of a good boss?"
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๋˜๋Š” "์ข‹์€ ์ƒ์‚ฌ์˜ ํŠน์ง•์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?"
03:45
Or "What are the characteristics of a good parent?"
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๋˜๋Š” "์ข‹์€ ๋ถ€๋ชจ์˜ ํŠน์ง•์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?"
03:48
This is something where you're asked to describe or explain whatever is asked of you.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ์š”๊ตฌ๋˜๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋„๋ก ์š”์ฒญ๋ฐ›๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:54
Alright?
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€?
03:55
So, these are the first four type of questions.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฒ˜์Œ ๋„ค ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
03:58
The last one is quite different.
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์€ ์‚ฌ๋ญ‡ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:00
The last one is a comparison and contrast question.
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์€ ๋น„๊ต ๋ฐ โ€‹โ€‹๋Œ€์กฐ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:04
And it's different because you need to write a different type of essay to respond to this.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด๊ฒƒ์— ์‘๋‹ตํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์—์„ธ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:10
Let me give you an example of this one.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์˜ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:14
This one is, "Students at universities often have a choice of places to live.
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์ด๊ฒƒ์€ "๋Œ€ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์€ ์ข…์ข… ์‚ด ๊ณณ์„ ์„ ํƒํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:21
They may choose to live in university dormitories or they may choose to live in apartments in
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๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๋Œ€ํ•™ ๊ธฐ์ˆ™์‚ฌ์—์„œ ์‚ด๊ธฐ๋กœ ์„ ํƒํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ง€์—ญ ์‚ฌํšŒ์˜ ์•„ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ์‚ด๊ธฐ๋กœ ์„ ํƒํ•  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
04:27
the community.
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.
04:28
Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an
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๋Œ€ํ•™ ๊ธฐ์ˆ™์‚ฌ ์ƒํ™œ์˜ ์žฅ์ ๊ณผ ์ƒํ™œ์˜ ์žฅ์ ์„ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
04:35
apartment in the community.
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์ง€์—ญ ์‚ฌํšŒ์˜ ์•„ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ.
04:37
Where would you prefer to live?
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์–ด๋””์—์„œ ์‚ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๊นŒ?
04:40
Give reasons for your preference."
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์„ ํ˜ธํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋ง์”€ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค."
04:42
So, here you see this is a comparison and contrast question and the reason it's different
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์ž, ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋ณด์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ์ด๊ฒƒ์€ ๋น„๊ต ๋ฐ โ€‹โ€‹๋Œ€์กฐ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ด์œ ๋Š”
04:48
is because you have to write a different essay pattern in response to this answer.
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์ด ๋‹ต๋ณ€์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์‘๋‹ต์œผ๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์—์„ธ์ด ํŒจํ„ด์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
04:55
Only this last question will require a specific essay pattern.
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์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์—๋งŒ ํŠน์ • ์—์„ธ์ด ํŒจํ„ด์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:00
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”? ๋จผ์ €
05:01
Let's look at the essay pattern you need to follow for this last one first.
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์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ํŒจํ„ด์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋”ฐ๋ผ์•ผ ํ•  ์—์„ธ์ด ํŒจํ„ด์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:06
The last question, which is the comparison and contrast.
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๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์€ ๋น„๊ต์™€ ๋Œ€์กฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:10
So, as you can see, for the comparison and contrast type of question, you begin with
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ณด์‹œ๋‹ค์‹œํ”ผ ๋น„๊ต ๋ฐ โ€‹โ€‹๋Œ€์กฐ ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์€ ์„œ๋ก ์œผ๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜์—ฌ
05:16
an introduction and you end with a conclusion.
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๊ฒฐ๋ก ์œผ๋กœ โ€‹โ€‹๋๋‚ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:20
In the middle, however, in the three body paragraphs, you will be doing something different.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ธ ๊ฐœ์˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:26
In the first body paragraph, you'll be writing the advantages and disadvantages of position
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์—์„œ๋Š” ์œ„์น˜ A์˜ ์žฅ๋‹จ์ ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:31
A. Second body paragraph, advantages and disadvantages of position B. Third body paragraph will be
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๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์€ ์œ„์น˜ B์˜ ์žฅ์ ๊ณผ ๋‹จ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์„ธ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์€
05:40
your preference and your reasons for that preference.
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๊ท€ํ•˜์˜ ์„ ํ˜ธ๋„์™€ ์„ ํ˜ธ ์ด์œ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:44
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
05:45
And again, last one will be the conclusion.
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๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์‹œ, ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์€ ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:48
Ideally, your TOEFL essays will be five paragraphs long.
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์ด์ƒ์ ์œผ๋กœ๋Š” TOEFL ์—์„ธ์ด์˜ ๊ธธ์ด๊ฐ€ 5๋‹จ๋ฝ์ด์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
05:53
Sometimes it's possible to write four paragraphs, but in this case, it would be almost impossible
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๋•Œ๋กœ๋Š” 4๊ฐœ์˜ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์ด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
05:58
because you need to devote one paragraph to one of the choices, the second paragraph to
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ํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์„ ํƒ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ์—, ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ๋‘
06:03
the second choice, and the third paragraph to your own particular preference.
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๋ฒˆ์งธ ์„ ํƒ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ์—, ์„ธ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์„ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ํŠน์ • ์„ ํ˜ธ๋„์— ํ• ์• ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋ถˆ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:08
Okay?
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์ข‹์•„์š”?
06:09
So, the comparison and contrast question has this particular system to follow.
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋น„๊ต ๋ฐ โ€‹โ€‹๋Œ€์กฐ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์—๋Š” ๋”ฐ๋ผ์•ผ ํ•  ํŠน์ • ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:17
Now, let's look at the other four that we discussed, which are agree and disagree, preference,
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์ด์ œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋„ค ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋™์˜ ๋ฐ ๋™์˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Œ, ์„ ํ˜ธ๋„,
06:23
if and description or explanation.
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if ๋ฐ ์„ค๋ช… ๋˜๋Š” ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:27
Those four essay topics will follow a different pattern.
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์ด ๋„ค ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์—์„ธ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํŒจํ„ด์„ ๋”ฐ๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:31
Again, they are five paragraphs long, but they start with the introduction, they end
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๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์€ ๊ธธ์ด๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค์„ฏ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์„œ๋ก ์œผ๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์„œ
06:38
with the conclusion.
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๊ฒฐ๋ก ์œผ๋กœ โ€‹โ€‹๋๋‚ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:39
The three body paragraphs, however, are quite different.
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๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์„ธ ๊ฐœ์˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์€ ์ƒ๋‹นํžˆ ๋‹ค๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:43
The first body paragraph will tell you the reason, the first reason.
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์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์€ ์ด์œ , ์ฒซ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:50
Second body paragraph will give you a second reason.
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๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์€ ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:53
Third paragraph will give you a third reason.
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์„ธ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์€ ์„ธ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
06:55
So, in your body, you basically have three different main reasons for the opinion that
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๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์‹ ์ฒด์—๋Š” ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํŠน์ • ์—์„ธ์ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋กœ ์„ ํƒํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ฃผ์š” ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:02
you have chosen to write about on that particular essay.
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.
07:06
Alright?
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ์€?
07:07
So, please make sure that you can analyze what type of question is what on your TOEFL
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๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ TOEFL ์—์„ธ์ด ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์„น์…˜์—์„œ ์–ด๋–ค ์œ ํ˜•์˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ๋ถ„์„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ 
07:14
essay writing section, so that you can write after that, in response, the appropriate essay
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, ๊ทธ ํ›„์—
07:21
in the right essay pattern, following the correct essay pattern.
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์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์—์„ธ์ด ํŒจํ„ด์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์—์„ธ์ด ํŒจํ„ด์œผ๋กœ ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ์—์„ธ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.
07:26
By doing that, you'll make sure that you get the highest marks in terms of answering the
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๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฌป๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€๋‹ตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฉด์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋†’์€ ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
07:31
question that you are being asked.
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07:33
If you have any other questions about this, or about anything else to do with English,
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์ด๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์˜์–ด์™€ ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•œ ์ ์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด
07:38
you can go to our website, www.engvid.com, you can also write to me if you have any particular
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์ €ํฌ ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ www.engvid.com์„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํŠน์ • ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์ €์—๊ฒŒ ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‚ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด
07:45
questions, and I'll be happy to get back to you.
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๊ธฐ๊บผ์ด ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์—๊ฒŒ ๋Œ์•„ ๊ฐ€๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด.
07:48
Thanks very much.
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๋งค์šฐ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
07:49
Alright, for now, and good luck with your TOEFL.
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