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English with Veronika Mark


์•„๋ž˜ ์˜๋ฌธ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ”ํด๋ฆญํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋œ ์ž๋ง‰์€ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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you don't want your assignment to look likeย  this do you I know getting a bad grade inย ย 
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๋„Œ ๊ณผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์ง€? ๋„Œ ๋„ค ๊ณผ์ œ์—์„œ ๋‚˜์œ ์„ฑ์ ์„ ๋ฐ›๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์•Œ์•„.ย ย  ๋„ค ๊ณผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ํ˜•ํŽธ์—†๊ธฐ
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your assignment sucks that's why I wantย  to introduce you to coolbot before usingย ย 
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๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— Coolbot์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „์— ๋„ˆ์—๊ฒŒ Coolbot์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด.
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coolbot this is what one of the sentences inย  my homework look like some grammar mistakesย ย 
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some word choice mistakes and now I can justย  go to quilot choose their paraphraser toolย ย 
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๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ณ  ์ด์ œ quilot์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€์„œ ์˜์—ญ ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒ
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and pick the academic mode and here is whatย  a new version of the same sentence looks likeย ย 
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ํ•˜๊ณ  ํ•™์—… ๋ชจ๋“œ๋ฅผ ์„ ํƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋™์ผํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ์ƒˆ ๋ฒ„์ „์ด ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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sounds a lot better quilot improve my writingย  style enhance my vocabulary and word choice Iย ย 
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quilot์ด ๋‚ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์–ดํœ˜๋ ฅ๊ณผ ๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
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feel a lot confident when I have to write essaysย  and assignments and you should try too because
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๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์—์„ธ์ด์™€ ๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋•Œ ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ๋„˜์น˜๊ณ  ๋„ˆ๋„ ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด.
์ด ์›น์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ ์ •๋ณด

์ด ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ•™์Šต์— ์œ ์šฉํ•œ YouTube ๋™์˜์ƒ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์น˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋ณด๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋™์˜์ƒ ํŽ˜์ด์ง€์— ํ‘œ์‹œ๋˜๋Š” ์˜์–ด ์ž๋ง‰์„ ๋”๋ธ” ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ณณ์—์„œ ๋™์˜์ƒ์ด ์žฌ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„๋””์˜ค ์žฌ์ƒ์— ๋งž์ถฐ ์ž๋ง‰์ด ์Šคํฌ๋กค๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด๋‚˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ด ๋ฌธ์˜ ์–‘์‹์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ์˜ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค.

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