Test Your Writing Skills: Quiz 3

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English with Jennifer


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Can you improve a wordy  sentence? Let me read it to you.
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We need variety in our diet,  
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so our choices of foods should vary  and include various kinds of foods.
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Can you reduce repetition? Words from  the same word family like variety, vary,  
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and various can sound awkward in the same  sentence. Try to be clear and concise. Let me  
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show you the sentence again. Pause the video, make  your revision, and then share it in the comments.
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